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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
laksh is so nice with every1 how cute 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Loved it. This laksh is having misunderstandings every time. So this time i hope kt and laksh will be friends soon. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya!!! such a huge suspense ur making me get addicted zinu 😆 😆 😆 continue soon.it's gr8 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 3

NEXT MORNING..
Everyone woke up by themselves, Laksh was already up. Everyone was ready.
Laksh was really tensed, from what happened with him, last night.
Manthan and Bhoomi walked in the room to get him.
Manthan: Laksh..lets go..we're getting late for class.
He didn't respond.
Manthan and Bhoomi walked up to him.
Manthan kept his hand on Laksh's shoulder.
Laksh: huh?!..(he notices the hand on his shoulder)..
Manthan: You okay?! you look really tensed. what's the problem??
Laksh: Nothing!! im fine.
Bhoomi: Laksh, we know you're tensed. something is bugging you. tell us..maybe we can help you.
Laksh: we're getting late, better tell you in the evening. not during college.
Bhoomi: okay, but you promise to.
Laksh: Yeah!!
Everyone leaves for their classes.
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IN THE CLASS..
The teacher had collected everyone's homework long time ago. She was telling them what was for homework, when someone walked in the class.
Teacher: (to the person) Yes??
Person: Um..Elections for School President.
Teacher: Okay.
Person: Like all these years. We're nominating for School President. Any one want to Nonimate anyone from this class??
Bhoomi: (yells) I NOMINATE LAKSH!!
Person: Okay. Anyone second Nominate Laksh?!
Manthan: I DO..
Person: Okay..Laksh is on the list.
Person: Any questions??
Eklavya: Yeah!! Who's competing against our Laksh?!
Person: (looks at his list) so far only a girl named KT..
Laksh: WHAT?!
Bhoomi: why what happened??
Person: Any other questions??
No one replied.
The person leaves.
Bhoomi: Laksh..what's wrong?? you alright??
Laksh: Bhoomi. I don't wanna be in the elections. Im dropping out.
Bhoomi: what?! you can't please don't.
Laksh: i need to think over this.
Bhoomi: okay.
The Teacher assigns the work, and the class ends.
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That Night..After college was over.
Laksh was in his room, thinking about the Elections.
Meanwhile Bhoomi and Manthan came in the room.
Manthan: Hey Laksh!!
Laksh: (in a lost voice) Hey..
Bhoomi: what's wrong..you sound weird..diffrent..
Laksh: I don't wanna be in the elections.
Manthan: Why not?!
Laksh: You don't understand..
Bhoomi: Well..tell us!!
Laksh starts to explain everything..
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THE SCENE SWITHES TO KT [the real one]
Kt made some friends..they are..
Abinaya. Hira. Preet. and Urvashi.😆..
IN KT'S ROOM..
Kt and all of her friends were talking.
Same situation as Laksh.
Kt: I don't wanna run for the elections.
Urvashi: why not?? whats the problem??
Kt: i don't wanna run against that idotic Laksh. Ugh!! I hate him!!
Hira: Well..just ignore him..
Kt: Ignore that monkey?! no way!! ew..he won't even leave me alone. He always bugs me. ugh!! and yesterday he said he's gonna kiss me. I felt like puking. Ew..
Preet: EWW!!! he said that?! who is he anyways??
Kt: this guy who keeps smoking and drinking..its so gross!!
Kt: i don't wanna run in the elections..im droppng out. Are you guys with me??
Urvashi: School President. If You are in there. You get to boss around anyone. Think!! Then you can get rid of that Laksh.
Kt: Very true. I'll think about it!!
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THE SCENE SWITHES TO LAKSH'S ROOM..
Laksh: So that's my problem, you see??
Manthan: ignore her.
Laksh: no way. she said she's gonna marry me. you think she'll leave me alone?! Ew...
Bhoomi: Well, if you win, you get to boss around anyone. you can get rid of that Kt.
Laksh: Thats true. Fine I'll Stay..
Manthan: Awesome. You're so winning.
He give him a HI-5..
Laksh: sure..whatever..i still don't wanna go..o well..ill just run..since bhoomi nominated me..
Bhoomi: well..you helped me adn all of us. you deserve to be the school president.
Everyone smiled.
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THE SCENE SWITCHES TO KT'S ROOM..
Kt: fine guys..i'll run against that monkey..i still don't want to, but whatever. i will.
Urvashi, Preet, Abhinaya, and Hira: YAYY!!!
Abhinaya: You're definitely going to win!!
Everyone Smiles.
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Laksh and Kt are both wokring on their Speech. Their friends are helping them make posters, and flyers of it.
Laksh has flashbacks of "Kt" telling him, that she's going to marry him. He got grossed out.
Kt was having flashbacks of "Laksh" telling him, that he's going to kiss her. She got grossed out.

[Ok you guys. you didn't read the part where "Laksh" said to kt he's going to kiss her, so i'll put it on]

Kt's Flashback

Kt was walking down the hallway..going to Abinaya and Urvashi's room.
Meanwhile "Laksh" walked towards her. [Remember guys, this is not the real Laksh]..
Laksh held her by her waist.
Kt: Leave me!! Now!!
Laksh: what if i don't, huh?? what will you do?? call your mommy..
Kt: (had tears in her eyes) you think you're tough?? why don't you go play with barbie's that where you're meant to be.
Laksh: (in a angry voice) What did you say, huh?? (pulls her hair)..
Kt: ow!!!
Laksh: Play with Barbies?? Ugh!! Well..wait for the day you'll love me.
Kt: that'll never happen.
Laksh: Oh yes it will. Right after i kiss you. but not now..wait for that day.
He leaves smirking..
Kt got really grossed out🤢, and ran back to her room.
We are out of Flashback

Laksh and Kt[real one's] keep on working on their speech's while their friends, work on poster's and flyer's for them.
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So guys..tell me how it was. Do you like it?? Please reply.. 😆
Thanks!! 😊
Love,
Zinu 👏
Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
great fanfic zinu!!!!!!! keep it up. eagerly waiting :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow!!! I have no idea who is going to win. And i am sorry, for leaving you without telling you, but my 30 minutes of my library card was gettign over so i had to log out. Hope you understand. 😭

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Sorry if that was annoying. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow!!! I have no idea who is going to win. And i am sorry, for leaving you without telling you, but my 30 minutes of my library card was gettign over so i had to log out. Hope you understand. 😭

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Sorry if that was annoying. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its okay Uru. Hehe lol. i loved those smilies. lots of them 😆 Thank U 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was a gr8 job zinu....do count.

❤️Love Ya❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 4

NEXT MORNING..IT ACTUALLY SWITICHES TO NOON..SO IT'S THE SECOND LAST PERIOD OF THE DAY..
Everyone was in class..

Meanwhile..An announcement is heard..
Announcement [from the principle]..

Bad News, and Good News!!

Bad News is that, we are having summer vications for a week..starting tomorrow, when the elections are going on.
Good News is that we are giving our Election Members more time to work on their speech's..so when they come back from vications, they will run for the elections.
Thank-You!! That's All..
End of Announcement

Laksh: Oh! Great!! im happy, but annoyed..
Bhoomi: Why?!
Laksh: Im happy to go back. but im not heppy that they extended the elections. I mean just get it over with. O well. atleast we're going back. getting rid of Kt, at last. Thank-You God!!
Bhoomi: Okay..well im happy after this is gym, and then packing time, yayy..
Laksh: Yep!!
The teacher assigns no homework for the vications..The class ends.
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THE SCENE SWITCHES TO EVERYONE PACKING..
Everyone starts packing..
IN LAKSH'S ROOM..
He was packing his stuff. He was happy to go home. He couldn't wait to meet his parents.
Meanwhile someone knocked on the door.
He went and opened it..it was "KT" [he hated]
Laksh: YOU?! HERE?! WHY ARE YOU HERE?? GO AWAY!! UGH!!
He closes the door, but she opens it.
Kt: Not so fast.
She walks in.
Laksh starts walking backwards, while she walks towards him.
Laksh: Okay. You need to leave.
Kt: NO!! i won't..
Laksh bumps into the wall..she comes right infront of him..
She gets closer and closer to him, and gets a hold of his collar..Laksh is trying to make her fall on the floor or something, since he was feeling uncomfortable.
She drags him by his collar and pushes him to the bed. He falls on the bed. She tried to jump on top of him, but he moved, so she fell on the bed.
Laksh started walking out the door, but she grabbed him, closed the door, and pulled him closer.
She was about to kiss him, but they heard a knock on the door.
Laksh bumped his head on the door. he was relieved.
Kt: (in a angry voice) you're saved this time, but during the summer vications, you're only mine.
She opened the door, she saw bhoomi, and manthan..she gave them a dirty look, and walked out..
Laksh sat behind the door, he was sweating..
Manthan and Bhoomi entered the room..and were looking for Laksh..
Bhoomi: Laksh?? where are you??
Manthan: Laksh come out..where is he gone??
Meanwhile eklavya comes in and opens the door even more..so that made laksh hit the wall..
Laksh: OW!!!!
Manthan: where did that come from??
Bhoomi: I think behind the door.
Everyone looks at each other: LAKSH!!!
All three walk to the door, and close it..
They find laksh bashed into the wall..
Manthan: Laksh, are you okay??
Laksh: mmm...
Bhoomi: Laksh..say something..you're scaring us..
Laksh: mmm...
Eklavya runs and gets 2 glasses of water..
He comes back..Meanwhile Manthan and Bhoomi make laksh sit up against the wall..
Eklavya splashes some water at laksh, with one glass of water..and gives him the other one, so he can drink some.
Laksh drinks some water and begins to speak..
Laksh: Thanks!! Phew!! You saved my life..
Bhoomi: why what happened??
Manthan: Yeah!! You look like you were gonna be murdered or something..holy look at you red face..you're sweating..
Eklavya: You Okay?!
Laksh: (in a low voice) Manthan, Bhoomi..you remember me telling you about KT yesterday??
Manthan, Bhoomi: Yeah!! what about it!!
Laksh explains everything that happened to him.
Laksh: Thanks for coming, and saving my life!! I was scared to death!!
Manthan: I would be too. I mean, look at the guts of that girl. uhhh!! she scares me.
Laksh: exactly!!
Eklavya: HOLY!! id be scared too..by the way who are you talking about??
Laksh: Long story!!
Manthan: Here you need help getting up, here i'll guide you to your bed.
Laksh: NO WAY!! she was on my bed. im not going on there. ugh!!
Laksh tries to get up..
Laksh: OW OW OW!!!
Manthan: You okay??
Laksh: Nothing, it just my back..ow!! it hurts!!
Eklavya and Manthan take him to their room. Bhoomi follows.
Laksh: Thanks Guys!!
Eklavya: No problem..
Laksh: Phew!!
Manthan: so laksh..are you done packing??
Laksh: Yep!! you??
Eklavya: yeah. i am.
Manthan: me too.
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THE SCENE SWITCHES TO TOMORROW MORNING..

Summer Vications..Yayy!!
Everyone left the school.
Archita, Pari, Eklavya, Manthan, and Laksh..went together in Eklavya's Car.
It took them about 8 hours to get there.
Eklavya dropped off Manthan and Bhoomi first. Then Archita and Pari. And last Laksh, since he lived closer to his house.
Laksh thanked him for the ride, and went inside.
He entered the house, and went into the Living Room.
IN THE LIVING ROOM..
He saw Tripti and Sahil talking to some people with some people, and a girl.
Laksh: Mom, Dad..
Sahil: Oh! Laksh, you're back..come sit!! We're talking about your marrige.
Laksh: What?! Dad, im not ready for marrige yet.
Tripti: Common Laksh. You're old enough. Meet the girl. She's very sweet. Come meet her.
The girl gets up and walks towards Laksh. Laksh was horrified. It was Kt..[not the real one, the one he hates]..
She is about to hug him, but he leaves to go to his room.
He starts going up the stairs.
Sahil: Laksh?! Where are you going?? come back down and meet everyone.
Laksh: No dad!! Not this time. I'm not ready to marry yet. And i will marry the girl I Love. I'm Sorry.
Tripti: Don't Argue Laksh. Come Down Here, Right Now!!
Laksh just walks away with his luggage..straight up to his room, and slams his door.
The parents: He must be tired after a long trip. We'll come back later. After all, our Saniya really likes him.
[Lol guys, i couldn't think of any other name for "kt" so i put on Saniya]..
The parents leave.
Laksh never came out of his room for the whole day, even thought he was starving. But, he never came out.
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NEXT MORNING..

He came down, and was leaving to go to Eklavya's house..when Sahil stopped him.
Sahil: where are you going Laksh??
Laksh: to eklavya's house.
Sahil: well you can go later. you're getting engaged today.
Laksh: What?!
Tripti: that's right. you're finally going to be a groom soon.
Laksh: Dad, i told you im not ready to be married yet. and also i will only marry the girl I Love.
Tripti: Shut Up Laksh. You are getting engaged today, and thats final.
Laksh: You can't decide who my life partner is.
Sahil: She has a right to Laksh.
Tripti Smirks.
Laksh: Fine. If you want it this way. then have it. But on the weddin day, you will find me dead. not as a groom. Make your choice.
He leaves and goes up to his room, and once again slams his door.
What will happen next?! 😕
Will he marry Saniya?! 😕
Will he ever know she's not kt?! 😕
Will he be found dead on the wedding day?! 😕
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So Guys..That was my Part 4..Hope you like it!! Please reply..Thanks!! 😊
Love,
Zinu 👏
Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago

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