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Episode 20

Dhruv comes out of the bathroom. He is in a towel.He looks around only to notice that there is one bed.😳

Vedika: (to herself) Hai mein satke jaawa..towel me tum kuch zyaada hi sexy lagte hoo😉

Vedika: Kuch dhond rahe ho kya?

Dhruv: Ah..nahi woh....(walk towards her) Woh mein soch raha tha ke bed to sirf ek hain....fir hum dono....

Vedika: ( to herself...looking at him) Saaf saaf kyu nahi keh dete ke tum mere saath bed par sona chahte ho😉

Dhruv: Nayi matlab....yaha to coach bhi nahi hain...warna mein to sofe pe soo jaata...

Vedika: (sharmaate hue) Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hain ( nazre jhuki hui) Tum chaho to.....

Dhruv: (excited) Kya! Mein yaha soo sakta hu....isse acchi baat to hi nahi sakti?

Ved..smiling raises her eyebrows...

Dhruc: Ah woh...mera matlab tha ke...ammm...mein...(who can't think of any other excuse) mujhe neend aa rahi hain ..good night...

Saying this he pounces on the bed...with his towel...

vedika: (smiles) Tum sirf tolya behenke soo jao ge?😉

dhruv realises taht he is only in a towel..embarresed...he runs to teh bathroom...and gets changed into his PJs..

Dhruv comes out in Pjs and gets into bed....vedika is at teh dresser...removing her earings...(sorry for peopel who have already read something like this in my tumhari disha movie😆..kya karo..ab aur ideas bhi to anhi milte😭)

Dhruv is hiding under his blanket ..pretending to sleep..but is secretly looking at vedika...

After a while..vedika is doen with her business

Vedika; (from the dresser) Dhruv...

No response from dhruv...he is pretending to be alseep😆

Vedika; (to herslef) Lagta hain soo gaya....

She looks at dhruv who looks reaaaly cute while sleepy...like a teddy bear😳...vedika gets into bed...rite next to him

Vedika: (sleeping with her back against him) (to herself) Idiot! Soo gaya...😆...

Just then Dhruv, pretending to be asleeep ..gets closer to vedika...and puts his left arm on vedika's waist..😉

At frist vedika is sharam se pani pani...😳😳 ..but then she blushes

Dhruv: ( eyes closed...to himself) wow..thsi si working...ek aur baar try maarna chahiyeh😉

Dhruv gets closer...he completely cuddles up to vedika...

Alrighte I should stop rite here..be4 i get more carried away😆😆

Tumhari Bomby!😃

Writer: Bombgirl4eva (Vyoma/Bomby)


Edited by srk_rulz - 20 years ago
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Episode 21

Dhruv is all cuddled yp...his left arm around her waist..holding her TIGHT...his head under her hair..smelling/feeling it...Vedika gets more shy😳..she doenst know what to say...she doenst protest...she just blends in with the environment😉...she puts her hand on top of his ...and goes to sleep...

Dhruv: (under her hair) ( to hismelf) haaaaaaaaaaiiiiii.....chalo soone ka natak karne ke bahane ....vedika ke kareeb aane ka mooka to mila😉

Vedika: (to herself) chalo neend mein hi sahi ....tum mere kareeb to aaye.😉..warna tumhari to aadat hain mujhe ignore karne ki....tumhe kya pata...meine itni sexy nighty kyun pehni hain😉...sirf tumhare liye 😳...auur tum ho ki door ke darshan suhaane😡.

After 5 minutes...vedika...prtending to be asleep...turns around and cuddles up to him....her left palm is under her cheek...and her other palm resting on his chest...dhruv is still holding her tight...

Dhruv: (to himself..eyes closed excited) Soo gayi...ab to cipakne me aur maza aayega😉

Vedika: (to herself..eyes closed) Haaai..what a killing chest....god musles hain ya..doole shole😉..ek baar tum mujhe apni bahoo me lelo...haai meri to death hi ho jaaye😉

Next morning they wake up...only to realise that they are cuddled up...

Writer: Bombgirl4eva (Vyoma/Bomby)
Edited by srk_rulz - 20 years ago
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Episode 22

Dhruv and vedika are cuddled up together, dhruv wakes up first and notices how close they were last nite.

Dhruv: Va! ( he whispers to himself) Kal ki rat mein to kabhie nahi bholeonga !!!!!

Just as dhruv is about to get up vedika grabs his hand, stopping him to go away.

Vedika: Dhuv the mujhe nahi utao ho gay? hmmm?

D; haan, mein utan wala th, paar.....

v paar kya, ab chodo in batho ko. Aaj hum khan jahran hai hum?

d; put his arms around her wasit (vedika is enjoying the moment and smiling secretly) jahan tum jhana jathio ho.

v: acha, fir hum phele thiar hotha haan, fir soch tha haan, teek ha?

d; smiles and obeys her like a dog would to his owner

v; starts getting her clothes out, while d goes in the bathroom to shower

v is humming the tune of k3g ---- bole chodyia, while she gets her chodiya out. then she heads for the bathroom, ( which wasnt locked when dhruv went in) and notices dhruv was in the shower

v; opps, but boy is he HOT!!!!

d: mujhe patha tha, ki woh mujhe andar dekni aieygi!! Hahahahahah

when dhruv comes out, they both are shy, but smiling deep inside. ( lol)

Writer: Akalra

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Episode 23

Vedika quickly turns around, as she is getting all shy😳

Dhruv changes his tune...

Dhruv: Vedika, what are you doing in here?? Mujhe pata hai ke meri bahut achi hai....lekin kuch to sharam karo

Vedika: [laughs] Please don't be under the wrong misunderstanding that I've come to see you....

Dhruv: Acha....then why did you?

Vedika: Uh...i was checking if the bathroom's nice or not😆

Dhruv: Dekhliya?

Vedika: Yes

Dhruv: Kya?

Vedika: Tumko...😳

Dhruv doesn't hear properly as he has shampoo over his eyes and body

Dhruv: Kya kaha tumne??

Vedika: Kuch Nahi.....anyway hurry up i want to go out!

Dhruv comes out in a towel and a banyan on...[looking very sexy, may i say]. His hair is wet!

Vedika: Sit down

Dhruv sits down on the bed, wondering what she's upto

Vedika gets a towel and starts drying his hair, like a loving wife 😳

Dhruv: Arre...why are you doing this?

Vedika: Because I want to

Dhruv: Really?

Vedika: Yes, because i will dry your hair quicker, you are so slow that we'll end up staying indoors 😆

Dhruv: Oh, so thats reason!

Vedika: Yes

Dhruv gets ready in faded jeans and a black shirt, with a jumper over his shoulder!! Vedika is wearing a blue saree, looking very pretty!

Both go out, its extremely cold...Vedika starts to shiver.

Dhruv: Are you doing this so like in films when the hero gives his coat or jumper to the heroine in the freezing weather....i give you my jumper

Vedika: Haan...that would be nice!! 😆

Dhruv: Arre, agar mujhe kuch hogaya to....no, im gonna keep my jumper on. 😆

Vedika thought he is joking around, but he actually carries on walking, She's shocked! 😆

Dhruv: It is actually getting too cold to walk, lets sit here for a while.

So the couple sit down on the bench, rubbing their shoulders. Vedika notices that Dhruv is feeling a bit too cold....So she takes the end of her sari....and wraps it round Dhruv 😳😳 [How cute]

Dhruv looks at Vedika....

Dhruv: But I didn't give you my jumper when you wanted it.

Vedika: Yeh but i'm not like you, am I....My heart doesn't freeze in the cold unlike yours 😆😆

Dhruv: Whatever....thanks [He smiles]

Vedika: Well you can make it upto me

Dhruv: Kaise?

Vedika: [She looks into his eyes, and very sweetly asks] Can I put my head on your shoulder? 😳 I'm feeling quite sleepy

Dhruv smiles and just nods his head

Vedika closes her eyes, and both of them are sitting on a small bench far away from anyone. Just them two....awwww😳

Is Vedika actually asleep? Or is something actually wrong with her because of the cold weather [hint to the next writer 😆]. God bless y'all. Ciao!!

Writer: Dkdish (Reema)

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Episode 24

{RECAP}

Vedika closes her eyes, and both of them are sitting on a small bench far away from anyone. Just them two....awwww😳

Dhruv: Vedika...hello? wake up!

Vedika: *shivers* Im feeling too cold

Dhruv: But why? u r so hot 😆

Vedika: Im not joking..i want to go bak inside

Dhruv: Acha baba, ao mere saath

Vedika tries to get up but feels to weak, she stand up but falls back down again..wen this happens Dhruv immediately grabs her by the waist..😳

..Dhruv: Vedika..u ok? He checks if she has a high temperature and like suspected she does. Oh god, Vedika..ur burning..come on lets take you to a doctor fast

Because Vedika cant walk properly, Dhruv lifts her up and carries her all the way to a taxi (Just imagine the veer-zaara scene on the bridge with srk preity..but this time its dhruv and vedika 😳)

They finally get a taxi, and Dhruv is tensed until they dont go to the hospital.

At the hospital...

Doctor: Dont worry, ur wife is absoulety fine.

Dhruv: Thank god (at this point Vedika is lying on a bed)

Doctor: Just take extra care of her.

Dhruv and Vedika go bak to their hotel..

Dhruv: Im sorry Vedika, i feel responsible for this, if i had given you my jumper..i

Vedika: Interrupts...awww..its not ur fault...it just happened

Dhruv: Well if u say so, but to make up for my guilt, from now on ill take xtra care of u. Acha, Vedika u lie in bed and ill go get ready.

Vedika is feeling drowsy and sleepy but she thinks to herself "I thought he wud take xtra care of me because he wanted to..not to get rid of his guilt 😆😡"

Dhruv comes out of the bathroom..and pours her a glass of water and orders her to take her medicine, Vedika takes them obdiently

Dhruv pats her on the head..."good girl" 👏

Vedika: okay..aab mujhe sona hai..and dhruv will u do me a favour..

Dhruv: Kya?

Vedika: Keep hold of me like u did last night 😳

Dhruv: My pleasure 😆

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Writer: Srk_rulz (khushi)

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#26
Episode 25

Recap- Vedika: Keep hold of me like u did last night 😳

Dhruv: My pleasure 😆

Dhruv grabs a blanket which is on teh bed...and puts it on vedika

Vedika: (smiles) Its OK dhruv..tum soo jao...waise bhi aaj tumne meri bahit sewa ki hain..😳

Dhruv: Ek pati apni patni ka khayal nahi rakhega to aur kaun rakhega? (smiles) hainna?😉

Dhruv: (to himself...stating at vedika naughtily) Mera bus chale tumhe ek second ke liyeh bhi mujhse door na hone du...

Dhruv keeps staring at her...getting more and more lost in her beauty....

Vedika: ( embarassed) Aaaa...ab soo jaaye?😳

Dhruv: (comes out of his dream world) Oh ya...ofcourse..

Dhruv gets into bed next to her...He puts his palm on her forhead....and makes her go to sleep...

Vedika: (smiling...looking at dhruv...to herself) Bus aise hi mere paas bethe raho...

Dhruv: ( to himself) Tum aise hi bemaar hoti raho...kab se kam...isse bahane mujhe tumhe udhane ka mooka milega..jaise aaj mila tha..😉

After a whiel..

Vedika; Dhruv, tumhe neend nahi aa rahi...mein theek hu..tum soo jao..

Dhruv: No no its's ok...mein theek hu...tum soo jao...

Dhruv: ( to himself) Waise bhi..agar mein soo gaya..to tumhare itne paas thodi na reh sakta hu...

Vedika: theek hain....as u wish...

Vedika goes to sleep...whiel dhruv is still moving his palm on her forhead...

Dhruv:( looking at her...to himself) Soote hue tum to aur bhi zyada khoobsurat lagti ho....aur kal waali nighty me tooo....oye hoi.....too sexy....just too (when vedika moves her body to teh left side..his side😉)

Vedika: ( to herself..eyes clsoed) Aise hi dekhte rahoge...kuch karo naaaaa...kuch to😉

Dhruv: Yaar mere bhi naseeb bhotele hain..itni aachi biwi mili hain..fir bhi ek chumma bhi nahi de sakta....(upset and whining) Shey man!

Vedika: (to herself)..Kuch to karooooo....kaho to nighty pehen kar aajao

Dhruv: (to himself) Ab to soo hi gayi hoogi...ab do do teen spicy chumme de sakta hoon...

Vedika: ( ti herself..eyes closed) Tum me to aathe inch ki bhi akal nahi....ladki ke saath kya karte hain..yeh to tumhe pata hi nahi😡!😆😆

Dhruv: (to hismelf) Man to hota hain...do teen de hi do..lekin yeh maharani udth gayi...to meri to pungi baja degi! Fie bhi try maarne mein kya jaata hain😉

Dhruv gets closer to ved...while...vediak is pretending to be fast asleep

Vedika: Kuch karo naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..intezaar ke maare..meri to death hi ho jaayegI!

Writer:Bombgirl4eva (Vyoma/Bomby)
Edited by srk_rulz - 20 years ago
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Episode 26

Dhruv is still sleeping and Vedika is looking at him w/ Awwww😳😳

Vedika: Good Morning Dhruv!!!!

Dhruv just sleeping...

Vedika: Dhruv.. i said Good Morning!!

Dhruv opens his eyes and smiles!!!

Vedika: What are you smiling at??

Dhruv: I am smiling because it feels good that when i wake up you are the 1st person i see!!

Vedika blushes!!

Vedika: Okay okay!!! Not get up!!!

Dhruv: 5 more mins!!!

Vedika: Dhruv!!!!😡

Dhruv: Okay okay!!!

So he gets ready and they both go out!!!

They are walking side by side

They are just talking and smiling....

While walking....Dhruv sees an old friend... (female)

Dhruv gets excited and so the chick!!!

Dhruv: OH my god!!!!!

He gives her a hug!!

Vedika feels uncomfortable....

Dhruv: This is my wife Vedika!!

Girl: Hi!!!!! Nice to meet you!!

Vedika: Same here!! (Not really😡😡😡)

Dhruv and the Women are talking and talking and Vedika feels like the 3rd wheel........

She makes an excuse...

V: Dhruv.. i will be right back!!!

Dhruv notices that she feels uncomfortable....

Vedika goes sits on the bench....

Dhruv are the women are still talking and Vedika is sad😕😕😕

Finally... she leaves... and Dhruv comes to Ved

D: What happened Ved??

Ved: Nothing!!

D: Come on.. i know you felt uncomfortable..

Ved: WHo me??? Yeah right!!

D: Sure you werent!!

Ved: Really i wasnt..

D: Okay if you say so!!

Dhruv gets up and Ved holds his arm.. and he sits back down

D: What happened??

Ved: Huh???

D: Why did you hold my arm??

Ved: Oh sorry!!!

D: Are you okay??

Ved: Yes.. lets go!!

At night they both go to their hotel.... Dhruv opens the doors and Ved goes in 1st... before D goes in.. he sees the woman... (his friend)

And they are surprised to see each other..

Ved notices where's Dhruv.... and she comes back out and sees the two of them are talking...

Ved gets sad and angry

Ved changes her clothes and sits on the bed...... and she is day dreaming and tears are rolling down her cheeks...

Dhruv comes back inside and sees Ved...

Dhruv: ved what happened?

She doesnt response...

Dhruv goes and changes....and sits next to her..

D: Ved.. where are you lost???

Ved quickly wipes her tears!!!!!!

Ved: Nothing... just thinking of someone....

D: Who me???

Ved is shocked

D: I am kidding!!!!

But Ved is really thinking about him!!

D: By the way.. what do u think of my friend???

Dhruv just babbles on and on... about her...

Ved: (She yells) Oh will you stop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dhruv is shocked!!!

D: Ved.. what happened?

Ved: Whats so good about that girl.....??? HUh?? answer me...

Dhruv is speechless.....

Dhruv: Whats gotten into you??

Ved: All day.... you have been talking to her!!! From the 1st time you saw her and now....

Dhruv: Are you jealous????

Ved: Me jealous????? Ha!! Why would i be jealous???

Dhruv: Yes... you are jealous!!!

Ved: I am not!!!

Dhruv: Then why did you explode like this??

Ved: (calms down) I dont know why!!!

Dhruv: What has gotten into you??

Ved: Nothing.. i am really tired!!!

Dhruv: No... talk to me!!! What has happened to you??

Ved: Nothing!!

Dhruv: Please tell me!!! I wont sleep until you tell me!!

D keeps asking her and asking her

Ved: (Explodes) Becuase i cant see you talking to another woman!!!!!!!!!!!!!

D: Why????

Ved: I Dont know!!!

D: Why?????

Ved is quiet

D: Why Ved????????

Ved: (YELLS)😡😡😡 BECAUSE I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dhruv is shocked and happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Writer: guli444

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Episode 27

Dhruv is shocked!!!

Dhruv: What did you say?

Ved looks down and cant believe what she said!!!

Dhruv: Ved... You love me?

Ved gets all teary and looks at him

Ved: Yes!! I love you!!!

Dhruv: I dont know what to say!!!!!!!!

Ved: Say what i want to hear!!!!!!!

Dhruv looks at her amazed!!!!

Dhruv: I love you too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved smiles and she is so happy!!!!!

Ved: You dont realize... how long i have been waiting to hear those words from your mouth!!!!!!!

Dhruv: Me???? I was waiting for you!!!!

They both hug!!! An official hug!!!!!😳

Dhruv touches her cheeks... and Ved just looks at him

Dhruv: If this was bothering you so much why didnt you tell me??

Ved: Because i was scared!!!

Dhruv: I have loved you since the day i married you!!!!! and today you have made me the most happiest person!!!!

Ved: Now i know that there cannot be anyone else in my life but you!!!!

They give each other another and hug and the lights dim.. and you guys know what happens next!!!

Next Morning: (Man i feel like i am writing in Tumhari Disha)

Ved and Dhruv are cuddled up........ Ved opens her eyes and she sits up and streches.... she looks at Dhruv and smiles!!!!

She touches his face.... Dhruv feels her hands and he holds her hands and opens his eyes slowly!!!

Dhruv: Good Morning!!!

Ved smiles😃😃😃

Ved: Good Morning!!

Ved gets up but Dhruv pulls her down and she lands on top of him...

Dhruv: Stay!! It feels nice!!!!

Ved: Dhruv.. i have to get ready!!

Dhruv: Whats the rush??

Ved: Come on Dhruv... we only have three more days before we have to leave..... and lets make the most of it....

Dhruv: I already have!!!! 😳

Ved: Dhruv??!!!!

Dhruv just stares at her!!

Ved: Will you please let go?

Dhruv: No!!

Ved: Please???

Dhruv: Okay.. since you said please!!!!

Ved gets up and takes her shower!!

Dhruv looks up and says "Thank you God"

Ved comes out and Dhruv goes in...

Ved is fixing her sari a little bit.. cuz she didnt want to hog the bathroom..

Dhruv comes out and sees Ved putting on her mangalsutra and he helps her!!!!

After putting it on.... he puts his arms around her!!!!

Ved: What are you thinking about?

Dhruv: I want to stay a little longer!!!

Ved: I want to also... but we have get back home!!

Dhruv: I know i know!!!

Ved: Besides what will everyone else think?

Dhruv: That we are enjoying ourselves very much!!!! And we love each other!!😳😳😳

Ved gets comfy w/ Dhruv putting his arms around her!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Episode 28 😆 (We r zooming ahead)

3 days into the Honeymoon. Vedika is fast asleep in the bed, because they had been out all day and she was still a bit weak from her fever. She is in a sexy pink Nighty, on her back, her head facing right, left arm on her tummy and right arm next to her head. Her hair is spread out on the pillow. The Quilt (bedcover) is just up to her waist.

Dhruv walks out of the bathroom in his PJ's, and his gaze falls on the sleeping Vedika straight away.

Dhruv: [smiling to himself] sogayi meri sleeping beauty...

Dhruv is just standing there gazing at her, when a sudden gust off wind blows in from the open window and blows Vedika's hair over her face.

Dhruv: [Walks hurriedly towards window] Arrey..the window is open abhi tak! She'll get more sick...[He pushes the window shut with his strong strong arms 😉..and closes the curtains]

Then he walks towards the bed, and gentlyy removes the hair on Vedika's face, so that he can see her face clearly again. He pulls the quilt up around her, tucking her in warm and snug..and gives her a small kiss on her forehead

Dhruv: [whispers after giving her a kiss] Sweet dreams meri jaan..

Dhruv is about to get into bed too. Its exactly midnight. Suddenly his mobile rings. It disturbs the silence

Brrring Brrring

Dhruv: [jumps at phone ring 😆] Arrey itni raat hogayi aur phone..[He glances at Vedika to see if she's awoke..He sees her stirring and so takes his phone and goes into the bathroom] Kaun hoga...disturb kardiya! [Looks at phone and sees 'Home calling'] Ghar se?

Dhruv: [accepts call and speaks softly so as not to disturb his sleeping beauty] Hello?

Titli Maami 😆: [Excited] Haa Hello Puttar! Mein bolrahi hu..Tumhari Titili Maami!

Dhruv: [suprised, but still talking softly] Titile Maami aap? ...Sab..sab theek hein na?

Titli Maami: [Still very excited 😆..practically shouting down the phone] Haan..kya bola? Puttar...lagta hein mere kaan mein kuch hein..kuch nahi sunaydeta..zor se bolo!

Dhruv: [in a loud whisper] Maami..Vedika so rahi hein..isliye..

Titli Maami: [suddenly sounds very down]: So rahi hein bahu? Haii..meine socha uski Titli Maami usse sabse pehle wish karengi..

Dhruv: [confused] Wish? Wish kisliye?

Titili Maami: [shocked] Hai meri to death hi hojayengi! Puttar, tenu nahi pata kya? Aaj hamari Bahu ka ..woh kya kehte hein angrezi mein..bird day hein! 😆

Dhruv: [still confused] Bird Day?...[it suddenly clicks and he's sooo shocked] Aap ka matlab Birthday?!

Titli Maami: [Getting excited again] Haan haan wohi..Bird day! Hai agar mein usse sabse pehle mubaraki nahi di na..to sach much meri death hi hojayengi!

Dhruv: [to himself, shocked] Vedika ka birthday hein aaj (since its gone midnight) ..aur usne mujhe bataya tak nahi! [to Titili Maami] Nahi Maami..Aapki death nahi hogi..Aap subah hi phone kardena firse..

Titli Maami: [Hesitates]..Umm..Acha Puttar..tu kehta he to phir....mein rakhti hu phone

Dhruv: [in a hurry to get off the phone] Jee okay..ghar pe sabko mera pyaar dena..

Titli Maami: Fikar not puttar..Goood-bye [she puts the phone down]

Dhruv: [walks out of the bathroom and looks at Vedika who is still in the same position, fast asleep.] [to himself] Meri queen ka janam din hein..and I don't even have a gift for her! [he is upset bechara]

Dhruv sits on the bed and thinks..thinks..thinks...He looks at the time..its nearly 1 am!

Dhruv: [to himself, looking at Vedika] Sojao beta! subhe jaldi jaldi uthna hein..bahot saare kaam karne hein na 😉

Dhruv's inner self: [in a you-are-useless tone] Kya karega tu!? Kaisa pati hein tu 😡 Itna bhi nahi jaanta ke tumhari patni ka birthday kab hein

Dhruv: [trying to console himself] Nahi yaar..It's not my fault..abhi abhi to shaadi huwi hein..upar se saara problems..

Dhruv's inner self: [angry] Excuses excuses! 😡 Nalayak...kuch bhi nahi kar sakta apne biwi ke liye! kuch..bhi..nahi 😡

Dhruv: [desperate] It's not my fault!! Woh bhi mujhe hint desakhti thi na..mein kya uska mind par sakta hu ke saara uska details jaan lu ..

Dhruv's Inner self: [in a you-are-useless tone] Khair tum sajao bachu..tumse kuch bhi ummeed karna faltu hein

Dhruv: [defiant] Nahi! Tum dekhna..I'll suprise Vedika and give her a birthday suprise she'll NEVER forget!

Determining this, he puts his alarm to 6 am, he switches off the lights..and gets in next to Vedika..puts his left arm around her..and falls asleep 😆

6 am! Alarm Clock goes off...Dhruv moans and turns around from his verrry comfortable position to switch off the alarm

Dhruv: [half asleep] mmmhmm..kya..mmmmm...6 o clock..already....[he's about to turn around and go back to sleep 😆 when he remembers] Birthday! [he sits up and rubs his eyes] (hes looking verry sexy half asleep 😉)...[he looks at Vedika who is now on her right side, curled up in a ball] Happy Birthday sweetheart!

Dhruv jumps out of the bed and has a quick shower. By 6.15, he's washed and ready..looking HOT in a pair of black trousers and cream shirt. Slowly, he opens the door and leaves the room, closing the door softly behind.

He goes down in the elevators and goes to the reception.

Manager: [politely] Good morning Sir..aaj bare jaldi uth gaye aap? Wife bhi nahi hein aap ke saath

Dhruv: Good Morning. Woh kya hein..I wanted to ask you a favour..agar aap ko koi aitraaz nahi hein to..

Manager: Sure..What can we do for you?

Dhruv and the Manager talk 😉 (their voices are muted cause its gonna be a suprise for the viewers too)

Finally, they shake hands

Manager: [with a smile] Don't worry Mr Raizada..hum sab tayyari kardenge..It will be perfect!

Dhruv: [satisfied smile] Thank you sir...thanks alot!

Dhruv then walks out of the hotel. He checks the time

Dhruv: [shocked] 6.30 hogaya! Jaldi karo yaar..warna maharani uth jayengi aur samajlegi ke daal me kuch kaala hein 😆

Dhruv grabs a taxi and goes to the 'Cake Bake' Shop 😆

In the shop, there are rows and rows of meethai jalebi cakes off all shapes and sizes

Dhruv: [looking around] Yummm..meine breakfast bhi nahi ki! Bahot bhook lagi hein...

An old man standing at the counter interrupts his thoughts.

Old Man: [loudly] Welcome welcome saab...kuch khane ka dil mangta? [he walks to the stalls pointing at the delicious foods] Gajar ka halva?..ya baklava...? shayad ye gharam gharam jalebi? kai bolte? 😆

Dhruv: [stomach grumbles loudly..to himself] Yaar jis kaam ke liye aaye ho, karlo..warna ye saara dukhan karidh na parenga

Dhruv: [to the old man] Saab, meri patni...

Old man: [cuts him off] Kya? Chutney?! 😆 Tumhe meethai ke saath chutney khana hein? kamaal hein.[shurgs].Hum sab to chutney gharam gharam pakore ke saath khaate hein..

Dhruv: [amused] Nahi saab..meine kahan PATNI

Old Man: [shakes his head vigorously] Ohooo..saaf saaf bolo phir! To tum apni patni ke liye kuch chahte ho kya?

Dhruv: [to himself] Hay Bhagwaan! Ye aadmi to aadha bera lagta hein..[To old man] Jee...nahi..woh kya hein...Meri patni ka aaj birthday hein..

Old Man: [looking confused again] parde? mein bhala kyu parde vaghera bechunga..ye to sirf or sirf meethai or cake ki dukaan hein

Dhruv: [to himself] Parde? abhey saale..kahan fas gaya tu! [to old man, loudly] MERI PATNI KA JANAM DIN HEIN..AUR MUJHE EK SHANDAAR CAKE CHAHIYE...

Old Man: [makes a face] Tum chilla kyu rahe ho saab! [shakes his head] Mein kya bera lag ta hu?!

Dhruv makes a God-help-me face 😆

Old Man: Tum fikar mat karo..shandaar cake banana sirf mera kaam hein..[practically waves Dhruv outta the shop 😆] Kahan bheju mein or kitne baje..aur patni ka naam kya hein?

Dhruv: [loudly to avoid any mistakes] Hotel...... (I forgot hotel name 😳)..shaam ko saat baje! Patni ka naam hein VEDIKA'

Old Man: [pleased with himself] Bara changa naam..bara changa naam! [he takes a bag of jalebi and gives it to Dhruv] ye lo..bahu ko dena..meri taraf se...aur ten-zon nai lene ka...ye cake ka kaam pura ka pura mein karunga

Dhruv: [to himself] Yahi baat ki to tension hein 😆 [takes jalebi bag and leaves shop] shukriya saab

Dhruv then heads to the jewellery store eating the jalebi.

Dhruv: wah! kya jalebi hein ye [then guiltily] Sorry Vedika..ye tha tumhare liye..lekin agar mein tumhe deta..to phir tumhara 1000 savaalo ka jawaab dena parega..and the whole suprise will be spoilt! 😆 Waisey...tum kaho ya mein..baat to ek hi hein na

He checks the time.

Dhruv: [shocked] 7! Jaldi jaldi karo..

He walks into the jewellery store, which has just opened....

He buys something from there 😉 (suprise for us too)..and heads back to the hotel...entering his room at exactly 7.30...Vedika is not in the bed!!

Writer: Sumayya

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Episode 29

Vedika is not in her bed..

Dhruv is looking for her....

Dhruv: Ved????

Ved is outside on the balcony!!! (yes they have one)

Dhruv: Good Morning!!!

Ved is angry😡

Ved: I am not talking to you!!!!

Dhruv: Why???

Ved: WHere were you???

D: Meaning??

Ved: When i woke up.. i didnt see you.... and i checked all over!!!!!

D: And....

Ved: And??? I was worried sick when i didnt see you!!!!!!!

Dhruv puts his arms around her

D: I am really sorry Jaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved: Well sorry is not going to cut it today!!!!!

D: Yes.... i agree sorry is not going to cut it today!!!!

Ved (Herself): At least you can wish me a happy birthday today!!!😕

D: (Himself) I know you're still mad because i didnt wish you!!!

Ved: (herself): Wait does he even know its my bday????? He should!! He's my husband!!!

Titli Mami calls and Ved picks up

T: Hello Ved beta.... Happy Bird Day!!!!

Ved: 😕 You mean Birthday!!!

T: Thats what i said Bird Day!!!!!

Ved: (Just laughing)

She just talks to her.. but doesnt mention that she talked to Dhruv!!!

Later around noon

The someone knocks on the door......

Ved opens it and someone sends a beautiful bouquet of flowers.. which reads...

Happy Birthday to my most precious angel!!!

But there is no name......

Ved: Someone has sent me flowers!!!!

Dhruv: WHo??? And why???

Ved: Becuase its my bday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dhruv doesnt read the card at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (so hint)

D: Oh my god!!! today is your birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Acts like he didnt know)

Ved is sad

Ved: (herself): So this means that he really didnt know its my bday!😭😭😭

After a couple of mins....

There is a special delivery..... and the cake and the jewelry arrive....

Dhruv: (Himself): Oh my god... it came already... i didnt want it now!!!! Oh damn!!!

Ved is surprised and is happy!!!

Ved: Oh my god!!! This is so nice!!!!!!! (herself) It would have been better if Dhruv sent me somehting like this!!!

She is thinking the family sent her this!! Cuz Titli mami called and wished her... and she tells that to Dhruv....... and Dhruv is upset!!!!!!

Later on....

Dhruv and Ved go out for dinner.... they enjoy but both of the are bitter!!!

Ved is bitter cuz of the gifts... she wanted them from Dhruv....

Dhruv is bitter cuz Ved thought it was from the family!!!

But they enjoy themselves!!!!

Afterwards.....

They are in a place where there is beautiful scenary....... and the stars are shining!!!

After a couple of mins... There are fireworks......

Ved is surprised and is smiling

And the fireworks.... are in words which reads.....

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MY MOST PRECIOUS ANGEL!!!!!!! FROM YOUR LOVING HUSBAND... DHRUV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved is shocked.....

Ved; Dhruv...

Dhruv: Yes... Happy Birthda!!! everything that you got today.. was from me!!!! that is why i wasnt there in the morning!! because i was planning all of this!!!!!!

Ved is so happy and she is crying and she gives him a big hug!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They hug for a long time!!!

Writer: guli444

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