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Posted: 20 years ago
nehhhaaaaaaaaaaaaa superbbbbb... gr888 parts..... poor angad .... 🤗 kripa .... hmmm kyu natak kar rahi hai.... 😆 😆 😆 please do continue... aur kya twist tha 😉 😉 😉 thank god he is cured hehe 😆 😆 do continue asap👍🏼oh yah and i lovedddddd the lyrics of the song 😳😳😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
tht was simply gr8...loved it...will angad n kripa ever reunite??
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was just too good
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A month passes by quickly and Angad and Kripa are back in New York, nothing has changed Kripa isn't ready to come back to Angad, and Angad has accepted this now.

Kripa and Angad enters Kripa's home, when they hear voices...

K: OMG PRITHVI?????

Prithvi turns around looking dashing! Kripa runs to him and they both share a long tight hug.

K: God, itna dino bad aachnak, aaisa? Wow, how are u??/

P: Breath Kripa, breath...

Angad is burning in jealousy and walks to his room and shuts the door slam, Kripa smiles to her self, and then turns back to Prithvi when Dadi comes out.

D: Kripa, maina decide kar liya hai ki main tumahari aur prithvi ki shaadi kardo gi...

Kripa is shocked.

K: Lakin dadi..

D: PLease beta, thats all i want from you..

K: Theek hai Dadi, main Prithvi sa shaadi karogi...

Angad hears everything as tears roll down his eyes. Kripa and Prithvi share a hug, Dadi is happy, but Angad isn't.

The next week Kripa and Angad are on break, Kripa and Prithvi get engaged.

A month passes by Angad compleatly ignores Kripa, and Kripa does the same. And finally the big day comes, Kripa gets ready in her room, and is brought down, she sits on the mandap with prithvi, Kripa's face is covered mid-way with gunghat, and Prithvi is wearing a shera, they go throught all the tridational ceromonies take place, and some laughing girls takes Kripa to her room and set her on the bed, kripa sits there nervously, as you see Prithvi's back enter the room and then lock it.

He sits down next to Kripa, and we see his hands being placed on top of Kripa's shiverinh hands...

K: Prithvi main...

Pritvhi holds her hand tighter.

His touch feels akward and very familar.

Slowly Kripa feels Prithvi pick her ghugant up, you can see Kripa's face all the way now, and she's looking down.

Prithvi gets up and walks to the window.

K: Prithvi, maina tumsa shaadi ki hai sirf Arjun ka liya, lakin tum bhi janta ho ka pyaar main Angad sa he karthi ho aur karthi rahogi.

: Tho yeh baat tum pelha nahie bol sakthi thi???

Kripa looks up and sees Angad standing in front of her with tears in his eyes. There's a knock on the door and Angad opens it, and walk in Dadi and Prithvi...

K: Dadi yeh sab

D: Humko yeh karna para, maina soocha tha ki jab main tumsa kaho gi prithvi sa shaadi karlo tum mana kardo gi aur Angad ka pass wapis chali jaogi, lakin tum mangyi, hum is umeed main bhetha reha ka shaadi sa pelha tumko eshaad ho jayga lakin nahie. Phir shaadi sa ek ghantha pelha humna Angad ko razi kiya , isna bhi bauth nakhra kiya lakin end main man gya.

P: I'm sorry Kripa, lakin jab dadi na mujhko sab kuch bataya mera pass aur koi rasta nahie tha.

Dadi and Prithvi leave the room as Angad once again locks it, Kripa is left numb.

A: Main janta ho ki tum aaj bhi mujhko aapna nahie chati, i'm ready to wait... Ab yaha sofa nahie hai isliya main bed par he sojao ga, and don't worry, i promis to be a good guy!

Angad walks into the bathroom and comes back changed and finds Kripa sitting on the dresser taking her jewelery off.

Kripa looks at her self, her hari down and smiling, the neckline on her blous is squared, with just her manglasutra, her hair flying with the sindoor in the center, and her duppata on her left sholder, she looks so simple and so angelic. Angad stands behind her and looks at her throught the mirror, he bends on his knees and places his head next to Kripa's.

A: Wispering- Can i fix something?

Kripa nods in a robitic fashion

Angad picks up her duppata and places it carefully on her head.

A: Tum bikul mera sapno ki Kripa lag rahi ho... Kripa looks down and blushes.

A: Good night Kripa...

Angad goes to bed, while Kripa chages and then goes off to bed herself.

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Posted: 19 years ago
awwww.....it was soooo sweet!! i loved it neha!! awsome twist you brought in i would have never thought of that!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
toooooooooooooo good 👏 and ple ple ple ple do cont. soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow Neha, those were excellent parts. I loved em. please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
tht was just too good...it was fabulous...pls continue soon.
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Kripa lays in bed as the picture of just what happend flashes in her mind, how perfect, how compleat, Kripa looked when Angad stood next to her, Kripa turns the other way and looks at Anagd who is sleeping peacefully, a beautiful smile spread on his face, and the moon light shining on his face. Kripa moves closer to him, so close that she can hear the pattern of his breathing. She gently puts her hand on his cheecks, as tears run down her eyes. Kripa can't controll her self, and hugs Angad tightly, Angad slowly opens his eyes as he feels Kripa's body against his, he smiles at him self, but doesn't move, becasue he doesnt want Kripa to know that he's awake, but at the same time he can't help hugging Kripa, he slowly puts his arms around Kripa, but doesn't hug her tightly, but lightly. But kripa just lays there hugging him tighter, and soon falls asleep in his arms...

Next Morning

Kripa and Angad sleep next to each other, still holding each other, you see the door open and you see someone drop Arjun on the bed, who crawls bwt Angad and Kripa. and sits there for a while. (he's 1 year and 8 months now) He looks at Kripa and then Anagd... he stands up on the bed now, and jumps on Angad's stomach. Angad wakes up with a shock, jumping slightly on his back, he opens his eyes and sees Arjun sitting on his stomach with a cute smile on his face... Angad picks Arjun up, and makes him lie down on top of him, and puts his arms around him, Arjun moves his head left to right, while Angad plays with him quitely, finally he notices Kripa sleeping peacefully, he pikcs up Arjun and makes him sit bwt both of them... Arjun looks at Kripa sleeping and just keeps looking at her, and then tries to lay down on top of her like he was with Angad a while ago, but he keeps slipping, Angad sits there and enjoys the show, Arjun is playing with Kripa's hand's, her arms, her hair, throwing them every where, taking her maglasutra and putting it in his mouth while Angad takes it out for him, but he does it again, and he takes it out Again... they play a little game with this now, and feeling so much movement Kripa starts to wake up, she feels Arjun sitting on her stomach, and then opens her eyes to find Angad and Arjun playing with her manglasutra, she's totally lost and confused.

The cycle cons for a few minutes of Arjun taking the manglasutra pulling on it or putting it in his mouth while Angad takes it away from him, finally Arjun is abt to pick it back up when Kripa moves it to the other side. Arjun looks at Kripa, with those shatan eyes- just like Angad's, Kripa smiles back at him and sits up taking Arjun in her arms.

K: Kissing Arjun's cheek- Good morning bacha. What's going on?

Kripa looks at Arjun and then at Angad, Arjun conts to play with Kripa's fingures while Angad's and Kripa's eyes are locked.

Finally Kripa looks away, she hands Arjun to Angad while she goes to the bathroom to brush her theeth. She comes back out, only to find Arjun and Angad both laying both, Arjun's toe in his mouth, while Angad watchs him ammused how could he lay down and put his toe in his mouth...

Kripa sits down beside Arjun and looks at a lost Angad...

K: Angad???

A: Hmm....

K: Angad....

A: Sitting up- oh- haan?

K: Kya hua?

A: Kuch nahie- main sirf dekh raha tha ki Arjun leta leta aapna anghuta aapna mo main kisa dalta hai?

Kripa laughs at Angad as she picks up Arjun in her arms, and just walks out.

She goes down stairs and gives Arjun to Prithvi and helps Dadi in the kitchen, and then goes back to her room, she walks in and finds Angad sleeping again.

K: Phir sa so gya??

She walks to him and shakes up. Angad utho..

Angad opens his eyes and sits up rubbing them like a kid.

K: Ab phir sa maat sona.

Anagd stands up now.

A: Kripa...

K: Looking through her closet.

hmmm....

A: Tumna Arjun ko kitna pyaar sa good morning bola tha...

Kripa pauses and turns and looks at Angad while a innocent smile on his face, while Kripa's face crosses as ur smart smile.

Angad walks closer to Kripa, he puts his hands on Kripa's waist and pulls her closer, Kripa is shocked that Angad could act so normally with her.

Angad looks into Kripa's eyes deeply, Kripa gently places her hands on his chest, and looks back him.

K: Tum kya chata ho Angad?

A: Main tumko chatha ho....

Kripa looks at him shyly. Angad moves foward to kiss her but Kripa pushes him away and into the bathroom...

A: Ek mint Kripa...

K: Kya hai?

A: Mera kapra nichla do please....

K: Theek hai baba, ab jao.

A: Kripa

K: Ab kya hai?

A: Tell me u love me?

K: Phir kabhie...

A: Abhi.

K: Phir kabhi.

A: Ok, atleast tumna kaha phir kabhi.

Kripa pushes him into the bathroom.

K: Aapna kapra kudh nichal lena...

She turns around and Finds Dadi standing there.

K: dADI aap yaha?

D: Hai main yaha, aur ab main chalthi ho.

Kripa smiles and they both walk down stairs.

Abt 30 mins later Angad comes down fixing his shirt...

Kripa looks at him shocked.

Angad is dressed in a light shirt with jeans, while everyone eles is coated.

Kripa hits her hand on her head, grabs Angad's hand and takes him back to the room.

K: Your mad Angad

A: Kyun?

K: Tum bahar aaisa jaoga?

A: Kyun?

K: It's below 10 degress out side, its snowing for heveans sake

Angad looks out- Ya it is snowing!!

K: Madly- ANGAD??? Please wear something warm, thand tumko lagi gi...

A: Tho kya hua, tum ho na meri deekh bhal karna ka liya.

K: Very funny, aur aagar mujhko kuch ho gya tho...

Angad holds Kripa and pulls her closer- Jab tak main ho tumko kuch nahie ho saktha...

They both look at each other, a few second later Kripa looks away and takes out something warm for Angad, and she leaves. Angad changes thinking when Kripa will forgive him, and accept him back into his life.

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Posted: 19 years ago
Awsome job i loved it!! Arjun is soooo cute!!

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