Some 1 Some where is Made 4 U..(fan fic) - Page 12

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Posted: 20 years ago
that waz gr8 continue soon😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
eshika, continue soon. waiting eagerly 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
ESHIKA!!!!!! excellent and plzz do continue soon!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

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Angad is left all furious n mad in anger!!!!!!!!!!!!! All the Angadein gang stand beside him… while all the others just get back 2 their own business…..

Classroom:

There is a group of ppl sitting n chatting about what just happened in the cafeteria…..when they see kripa entering the class room….

Every 1 of them give a cold look at kripa……… there was a gal who was sitting right in the front chair….. Kripa gives a slight smile 2 da gal n sits next 2 her…… But da gal gives an annoyed look at kripa N rudely gets up 4rm there leaving a sad kripa behind……..

Kripa is left all alone in the class room…… nobody wants 2 B friendly with her coz she messed up with Angad!!!!! They just stare at her pass cheap comments on her……

On the other hand the Angadeins r just getting mad at kripa's attitude…..

Aaliyah: Brother uss ladki ka toh kuch karna padega……..usse sabak sikhana hoga ki Angadeins se ulazneka kyaaa anjam kyaaaa hota hai??????

Anagd is quite N kripa's words keeps repeating in his mind…….

"mere nazar main tum ek neeech batamiz aaur bahot hi ghatiya kisism k insaan ho…… jisse nah toh kisis ki izaat karna aati hai aaur na hi…. Kisi k izzat k layak hai……"

Aaliyah: brother kyaa huwa kuch toh bolo……..

A( annoyed): aaliyah plzzz mujhe aakela chod do…. Just leave me alone…….

Kripa's home

Kripa is really sad 4 what all happened in the academy…… But she doesn't wants 2 discuss all these things with her mom…… so she has a fake smile on her face n hugs her mom….

G: kyaaa huwa mera bachha???? Aaj toh bahot khush lagrahi ho…..

Lagta hai bohot saare nayee dost banaye hai……

Then she remembers how every1 passed cheap comments on her…….. She has tears in her eyes…. But she controls herself with that fake smile….

K: mumma aap yakken nahi karengi ek hi deen main mere kitne saare dost banayee….. woh sare log bahot aache hai….. aaj academy main humne bahot masti ki…..

Now kripa just can't do it anymore n tears roll down her eyes…. 😭 But she quickly wipes it off……

K: mumma I gotta tell u sooo many things but I am soo tried….. I just wana sleep…

G: it's okay beta….. hum baaki k baatein baad main karenge okay?

As kripa is about 2 go upstairs 2 her room….. gayetri stops her n has tears in her eyes…

G: kripa mera baccha…..!!!! main janti hoon tu mujhse jhoot bolrahi hai….. tum chahe kitna bhi muskuralo kripa tumhari mumma se tumhare aasu nahi chupte……

Then kripa just can't control herself n bursts into tears…..

K( cryin): mumma !!!! waha koi mujhe pasand nahi karta….. sab mujhse nafrat karte hai…… koi mujhse dosti nahi karna chahata…….. main bahot aakeli hoon mumma… bahot aakeli….😭😭

Then gayerti hugs her n says:

Koi baat nahi beta… main hoon nah… tumhari mumma ….tumahri best fren…. Aaur mujhe yeakeen hai ki…. Aaj nahi toh kal sab tumhe pasand karenge…. Bas nayee jaga hai…. Toh pehele thodi problems toh aayenge hi…. U don worry …. Bas tumhare pehechane ki der hai…. Aaur tumhara dost tumhare aakhon k samne hoga……😳

Then they show a plane landing……. Now we see a guy getting out of the plane…… they show his legs….. arms n eyes….. They show him getting inside his car…… he then stretches his arms n says Finally I am back…… back again 2 Mumbai…… … but they still don't show da guy…….

Okay guyz 2 B continued….

Love u all

Eshika 😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
offcourse the one and only prithvi what say eshika hmmmm i like ur story plz do keep writing
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Posted: 20 years ago
YAH PLEASE CONTINUE IT'S SO GOOD
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome part. I loved it. The dost sure is Prithvi. Waiting to read more. Continue soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
Arrey wah... voh jaroor Prithvi hoga ..... Kripa ka BF..am I rite...
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Posted: 20 years ago
awww poor kripa. and that guy. it has to be prithvi. i think he'll be the only 1 who befriends kripa and then evry1 starts liking her. maybe this could happen, but we wont know until to continue so post the nxt part soon plsssssssssssssssssss😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
Are you planning to continue tonite Eshika...

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