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Posted: 20 years ago
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Kripa is still cryin in her room when her mom gayetri comes in…

Seeing kripa cryin….gayertri gets worried……

G: kripa!!!!! Mera bachha !!!! kyaaa huwa?????

K( cryin like a little kid): mumma main usss academy nahi jaaongi….main aab waha wapas nahi jaoongi….

G( takin her in arms) par kripa huwa kyaaa yeh toh batao?????

K: kuch nahi huwa mumma….. main bas itna janti hoo ki main waha wapas nahi jana chahati…..( still cryin)

G: aacha tum nahi batana chahati toh mat batao…. Lekin main sirf itna kehena chahati hoon ki…… tum kisis aaur k waje se aapne aap ko hurt mat karo beta……kisi aaur k bato ka aapne aap par aasar hone nah do…..

Tumne woh academy apna sapna pura karne k liye join kiya tha……. N that's wat all matters beta…….

Aaur plzzz aab roo mat…. Aagar tum roogee toh main bhi roo dungii..

Then kripa hugs her mom cryin ….

In da morning:

Gayetri is bg in with the breakfast table when she sees a well dressed Kripa coming downstairs... ready 2 go 2 academy…

Gayetri is shocked but then she has a smile on her face…..

K: mumma aap thik keheti hai… mujh par kisi aaur k bato ka assar nahi panda chahiye….. I gotta B strong…. Hai nah mumma???????

Then she takes blessing 4rm her mom n leaves 4 da academy…

Academy:

Angad is playing with the basket ball still getting flashes of the slap scene……when josh comes in snatches the ball 4rm him……

Angad really gets annoyed

A: Josh I'm not in a mood…. Ball wapas doo……

J( taunting angad): oops I'm sooo sorry….. main toh bhool hi gaya tha ki kuch dino se tumhara mood off hai……

Angad looks angrily at Josh but is quite….

J: lekin mere samaj main yeh nahi aaraha ki tumhara mood off kuyn hai????? Kahi usss ladki ki wajhe se toh………………………………

A: JOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad ( pointing his finger at josh): Stay within ur limits!!!!!!!!!!! Haad se jyaada bolne ki koshish mat karna… samjhe!!!!!!!!

Josh revolving the basket ball in his hand…..

J: ooooo angad!!!!!! Just chill man…. Naraz kyun hote ho????? tum toh jante ho nah mujhko…… main tumhe humiliate karne ka koi chance nai chodta……….. u know nah!!!! I love 2 see ur angry humiliated face…..

Then angad snatches the ball frm his hand…….

A: din main khawb dekhna chod do Josh!!!!!! Yeh toh waqt hi batyega ki kaun kisko humiliate karta hai……. U just wait n watch……

Then angad just walks away 4rm there…..

Now misty who has been listening 2 da conversation says 2 herself:

Tumhari yehi aada pet toh main fida hoon Angad…..i love ur confidence…. Tum dono main se jeet chaye jiski bhi ho…. dono taraf se haar sirf meri hai……… kuyn ki ek tarf mera pyaar hai aaur dusri taraf mera bhai……..

Okay guyzz 2 B continued…..

Well nezt part is gona B up in few mins

Love

Eshika 😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
#92
kewl part. I loved it. waiting to read more.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#93

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The Angadiens r in da cafeteria………every 1 is enjoin except Angad…. He looks disturbed …His eyes r seachin 4 some 1( n u all know who is that some 1)😉

A guy: aarey aaj woh chasmis behenji dekhayee nahi di?????

G 2: ofcourse academy chod diya hoga….. Itna sab kuch hone baad Angad k samne aane k liye ussko himmat chahiye jo uske pas nahi…… Kuyn angad?????

Angad feels proud n is about 2 smile when Kripa enters the cafeteria…..

His smile fades ways n gives 1 angry look at kripa……😡

Kripa just ignores Angad n makes herself comfortable at a corner with her book n a sip of coffee……..

Then angad goes up 2 her with that angry kind of look in his face…..

A: soo finally u r back huh???????? Pata hai… I was soo worried 4 u… (taunting kripa) .mere dosto ko laga tha ki tum wapas nahi aaogeee But tum toh mere samne khadi ho….. tumne toh mera kaam aaur bhi aasan kardiya ……Well well I must say tumme himmat toh bahot hai ... warna itna sab kuch hone k baad tum jaisi third grade behenjiii type ladki ko toh kisi .....

Angad is about 2 complete his sentence when kripa cuts him off…….

K: ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bahot sunliya maine…….aab ek aur laabz nahi!!!!!!

Kyaa kaha tha tumne????? Main kissi third class local train ki third class Behenji jaise dikhti hoon……???? mujhe koi ladka chune se pehele Dus bar sochega?????

Toh let me make 1 thing very clear……. Mujhe koi farak nahi padta k koi bhi ladka mere bare main kyaaa sochata hai……. Aaur woh ladka chahe tum ho ya koi aaur ……. I just don give a DamN ……

Aaur kyaaa kaha tha tumne……mujhe tumhe thanks kehena chahiye kyunki tumne mujhe kiss kiya….. But get this thing very clear Mr Angad Khanna…..Bhale yaha k sari ladkiya tumhe kiss karne k liye betaab hongiii but I am not interested…..

Mujhe tum jaise aamir maa baap k bigde huwe aaulad main koi interst nahi hai……….tumhe kyaa lagta hai???? Yeh sari ladkiya tumhe kiss karna chahti hai….. huh!!!!!! Woh sab tumhe nahi tumhare paiso ko kiss karna chahati hai……

Aagr tumhari jaaga ish academy ka sab se badsoorat ladka aake mujhe kiss karta nah toh bhi main usse thappad marti …. Kyun ki mere liye uss main aaur tum main koi farak nahi hai……….

Sooo ish galat femi main maat raho kit um ish college k sab se hot handsome guy ho!!!!!!!! kuyn ki mere nazar main tum ek neeech batamiz aaur bahot hi ghatiya kisism k insaan ho…… jisse nah toh kisis ki izaat karna aati hai aaur na hi…. Kisi k izzat k layak hai…… Samjhe?????????

The kripa just walks leaving angad n all other ppl shocked……angad is really mad n red with anger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

On the other hand Josh just can't believe his ears……. He is the most happy guy among every 1…

J: I just don belive this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Main jo itne saalo main nahi kar paya woh aaj ish ladki ne kardiya…..

Kuch toh baat hai ish ladki main…….

I'm really impressed with this gal……

The he gets an idea n has a evil smile in his face…..

Okay guyzzz 2 B continued

I know I know…. There was toooooooooooo much of Kripa's dialogue 2 day…..

But I still hope u all enjoyed reading it…

Love

eshika😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
#94
wow i just love it plz do continue asap 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
#95
omg.. please continue.. this is soo interesting.. i really wanna know what happens..

please make it longer ..

thanks

GREAT JOB!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#96
awesome. luved how she showed him his place. i mean the rude angad b/c agar rude angad side par nahin hua to phir nice and caring angad kaise ayega samne 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#97
Thanks u soooo mcuh guyzzzz.... ur replies inspires me 2 write more.... 😳 i'm gona continue soon...... n also thank u sooooo much 4 wishing me luck 4 my presentaion...... it was gud though.... i got an "A" yeppi..... 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#98

wow amazin part!! plz continue soon!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Congrats on your A grade. You shine everywhere be it in ur fan fiction or presentation. Hats off to you..👏
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: phoenixsuns

Congrats on your A grade. You shine everywhere be it in ur fan fiction or presentation. Hats off to you..👏

awwwwwwwwwww choo chweet of u.. thankuuuuu😛

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