Some 1 Some where is Made 4 U..(fan fic) - Page 9

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Now angad just walks aways 4rm there with that gal…… leaving a shocked….. humiliated…. Kripa behind…

One by one everyone stats 2 leave……. Staring at kripa……

Tears roll down kripa's eyes……

She keeps remembering angad's words…

Tumhe kyaaa lagta hai???? Tum ish academy ki sab se khoosurat… sab se attractive ladki ho???? jisse kiss karne k liye main mara jaa raha tha?????

Now josh who has been watchin all that scene talks 2 himself…

J: Yeh matter toh kuch jyaada hi serious hogaya….

interesting very interesting….!!!!!!!!

Then he gives an evil look 2 kripa who just leaves 4rm there cryin……

Now angad n aaliyah r driving back home….

A: samjti kyaa hai aapne aap ko….???? Mujhe!!!!! Angad Khanna ko thappad mara!!!!!

Aa: brother aab bhool jao nah jo kuch bhi huwa hai….. aapne ne bhi uss thappad ka jabwab diya nah!!!!! Aab uss third grade ladki k bare main sooch kar aapna mood kyun kharab karte hai….. the game is over borther….. hisaab barabar!!!!!!!!!!!!

A( still not convinced): no aaliyah!!!!!! The game is not over!!!!! The game has just begun!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uss ladki ka toh main jeena muskil kardoonga…… She'll have 2 pay 4 what she has Done!!!!!!! Pachtayegee woh bahot pachtayegee!!!! Yeh thappad usko bahot mehenga padne wala hai!!!!!!!!

Pure college k samne uske mu se sorry nah bolwaya toh mera naam bhi Angad Khanna nahi!!!!!

Kripa's Home

Kripa is back home…….she straight away goes 2 her room n cries……..

Now she is in front of the mirror………. She deeply looks at herself…..

She sees the flashes of Angad kissing her n again kissing the other gal…..

Then she remembers Angad's words….

"Shakal dekhi hai aapni ..???? kissi third class local train ki third class Behenji jaise dikhti ho…… aarey sukar karo ki Angad Khanna ne tumhe kiss kiya….. warna tumhe toh koi ladka chune se pehele Dus baar sochega……"

Then kripa throws the flower vase at the mirror n breaks it…….

Kripa who is angry n all in tears…..

Main doobara soul academy nahi jaoongi….. Main waha wapas nahi jaaongi…. Kabhi nahi jaoongi……

Okay 2 B continued

Sorry guyzz this was a short 1 but gona continue tomorrow……

Love

eshika😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
#82
Thanks Eshika, aur ek episode post karo, please. 👏👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: babygurl244

that waz gr8😊 but how abt making kripa a bit more stronger & standing upto 2 angad in the next part (if u wish). PLZ CONTINUE SOON!!!!!!!!!

yeah!!!!! thanks 4 that !!!!!! 😃but i am not soo sure wat i'm gona do with kripa!!!!!!! lots of ideas comming in my mind 😆😆😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: phoenixsuns

Thanks Eshika, aur ek episode post karo, please. 👏👏

sooo sorry yar!!!!! 😭 i have my stupid class presentaion tomorrow so gotta do a lot of resarch work.... so gona continue only tomorrow.... sorry 4 that N thanks 4 liking it 😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
#85
👏👏👏 now lets see the makeover soon 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#86
awwww I loved it. continue fast when u get time.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hope u do well on ur presentation!!! tat was really good n plz cont wen u get chance!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: eshika

sooo sorry yar!!!!! 😭 i have my stupid class presentaion tomorrow so gotta do a lot of resarch work.... so gona continue only tomorrow.... sorry 4 that N thanks 4 liking it 😛



Good Luck on your presentation. That is more impt.. than this fan fiction...Take care
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Wow, that was too good yaar!!! Good Luck on ur presentation and plz continue when u get the time!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#90
eshika, please continue soon. I am waiting to read more.

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