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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
RAJ (frst surprised nd then amused)- Its simple cadet. Apne ghutno par baito aur dance ke liye puncho.

HUDA- ghutno par……………??

NANDINI- Of course nt, phele usse jalao, phir hi who tumhare saath dance karne ke liye beechen hongi.

[HUDA SMILES, HE SEEMS 2 LIKE THE IDEA…….]
[HE THANKS RAJ ND NANDINI ND GOES AWAY. BY THIS TME NAINA COMES ND JOINS RAJ ND NANDINI. SHE IS SPEAKING 2 NANDINI WHEN SUDDENLY THE MUSIC STOPS PLAYING. EVERY1 IS CNFUSED ND IS LOOKING AROUND. NAINA TOO IS DOING THE SAME. SHE THEN SPOTS HUDA WITH A MIKE IN HIS HAND. THE SPOTLIGHT THEN COMES ON HUDA.]

HUDA- Ye ganna huda ki taraf se yaha ki sabse sundar ladki ke liye.

[ HE THEN STARTS SINGING. ]

HUDA- Dil ko tumse pyar hua,
Pehli bar hua…
Tumse pyar hua.

Main bhi, ashiq yaar hua…….
Pehli bar hua…
Tumse pyar hua.

Chahi hain betabi.
Meri jaa, kahoo main kya kaho?........
La la la……… la la la……… la la la
La la la……….la la la……….la la la

[WHILE SINGING THIS SONG HUDA MOVES AROUND NAINA, RAJ ND NANDINI. EVER1 IS LOOKING AT HIM ALL THE GIRLS AROUND R WISHING THAT HUDA IS SINGING THE SONG FOR THEM. THE SHOCKED AT FIRST NAINA IS NOW ALL SMILES AS SHE KNOWS THAT SHE IS THE GIRL IN QUESTION. HUDA ON COMPLETING THE SONG GOES TO NANDINI ND ASKS HER FOR A DANCE WHICH SHE AGREES 2. HUDA HOPES THAT THIS WILL MAKE NAINA JEALOUS. BT NAINA IS FULLY AWARE OF HIS INTENTIONS ND JUST SMILES KNOWINGLY. SOON EVERY1 IS BACK ON THE DANCE FLOOR.]

[SUDDENLY RAJ GOES ON HIS KNEES ND SAYS- "MAY I HAVE THE PLEASURE PLEASE?"]
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
hey awesome part...poor huda 😆 he is being trapped in his own game... 😉 continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
[ NAINA IS ABSOLUTELY SPEECHLESS BT FOR SM REASON UNKNOWN 2 HER, SHE ACCEPTS. SO THERE THEY WERE……..RAJ ND NAINA…….ON THE DANCE FLOOR……….LOST...........IN EACH OTHERS ARMS. THIS ANGERS HUDA 2 NO LIMIT BT KYA KARE........USNE KHUD KE HI PARE MAIN KULADI MARI. THE DANCE SOON GETS OVER DND THE DANCE FLOOR BECOMES EMPTY ONCE AGAIN. NAINA, RAJ ND NANDINI R STANDING TOGETHER. A PISSED OFF HUDA IS STANDING AWAY FRM THEM. SUDDENLY RAJ GOES 2 GET A DRINK ND COMES BACK. HUDA SEES THIS AS AN OPPORTUNITY 2 MAKE NAINA GET ANGRY AT RAJ. HE COMES NEAR RAJ ND TRIPS HIM. AND POOR POOR RAJ...........................ALL HIS DRINK FALLS ON NAINA. HE DOESN'T REALISE WHO TRIPPED HIM, SO APOLOGISES 2 NAINA WHOSE DRESS IS NOW IN A TOTAL MESS.]
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
RAJ- Oh no!! Cadet Singh i'm so srry.

NAINA- Oh .........its ok sir, main girls hostel jakar change kar lungi.

RAJ-Ok..ayiye, main lolitha ma'am ko dhundne me apki madad karta hoon.

NAINA- Thank u sir.

[ALL THIS IS MAKING HUDA MORE ND MORE ANGRY. HE THOUGHT NAINA WOULD GET ANGRY AT RAJ AND SCREAM AT HIM. PAR YAHA TO SHE WAS SPEAKING 2 HIM SOOOO SWEETLY.]

[NAINA ND RAJ GO TO FIND LOLITHA MA'AM. AFTER SOME TIME.................]

NAINA- Oh no!! Lolitha ma'am to kahi nahi mil rahi hain. Girls hostel ki chabi to unke pas hain. Ab main kya karu??

RAJ- Don't worry cadet, philhal to abhimanyu, nandini aur main eik hi kamre main re rahe hain. To aap nandini ke almari se kuch pehen sakti hain.

NAINA- Par sir unhe phir meri wajah se party chod ke ana padenga.......

RAJ- Don't worry cadet, kamre ki eik chabi mere pas bhi hain. Hum bas nandini se uske almari ki chabi lenge.

NAINA- Par sir phir aap ko kuch der ke liye party chodni padengi.......

RAJ(gives a sad shrug)- Ab galti ki hain to bhukatni to padengi..............(smiles on seeing naina's face).............are main to mazzak kar raha hoon. Mujhe party kuch der chodne main koi problem nahi . Chale.............??

[NAINA ND RAJ GO 2 NANDINI ND EXPLAIN THE SITUATION 2 HER]

RAJ- .................To tum hame apne almari ki chabi de do, hum khud koi dress dhund lenge.

[NANDINI SEEMS RELUCTANT 2 GIVE THEM THE KEY.]

NANDINI(fumbling with her words)- Are nahi, main khud hi ati hoon. waise bhi mere pas abhi to sirf sariya hain....aur main bhi to dekhu...ki Cadet Singh sari main kase lagti hain.

[NAINA WASN'T EXPECTING NANDINI 2 HAVE ONLI SARIS....]

NAINA- Sari..........??

NANDINI- Haan, kyu koi problem hain...........??

NAINA- Nahi ma'am woh bas maine aaj tak kabhi sari nahi pehni hain na to...............

RAJ- Don't worry i'm sure aap sari main bhi bahut khoobsurat lagengi.

[BOTH NANDINI ND NAINA TURN AROUND IN ASTONISHMENT ON HEARING THE WORDS-"SARI MAIN BHI ]
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
[RAJ REALISES THAT BOTH THE LADIES R LOOKING AT HIM. HE SUDDENLY CHANGES THE TOPIC]

RAJ- Sari to har kisi ko suit karti hain. I'm sure apko bhi suit karengi. um..........chale?

[ALL 3 OF THEM LEAVE]

IN THE ROOM.

[NANDINI OPENS THE CPBOARD ND ASKS NAINA 2 CHOOSE A SARI. NAINA CHOOSES A GORGEOUS BLACK SARI.]

NANDINI- Arre wah naina, kya choice hain. Kyu raj..............??

[RAJ IS MEANWHILE LOST IN HIS OWN THOUGHTS ND HASN'T EVEN LOOKED AT THE SARI. ]

RAJ- Oh haan......

[NANDINI IS ABOUT 2 POINT OUT 2 RAJ HIS INDIFFERENCE REGARDING THE CHOICE OF THE SARI, WHEN ABHIMANYU ENTERS.]

ABHIMANYU- To aap, yaha hain. Hum apko kab se dhund rahe the. Nandini hum party mein kisi ko nahi jante hain.Hum bore ho rahe hain. Aur aap bhi yaha chali ayi. Please party main chaliye.

NANDINI- Sssry par mujhe naina ke bahar ane ke bad, room ka darwaza band kara hain. Tum jaao, main thodi der ain ati hoon.

[ABHIMANYU LOOKS CRESTFALLEN ON HEARING THIS. RAJ NOTICES THIS ND WITH A SLY SMILE SAYS......]

RAJ- Don't wrry nandini, tum jao. Main darwaza band kar lunga.

NANDINI(reluctantly)- Par............

RAJ- Don't woory tum jao.

[NANDINI LOCKS HER CPBOARD, TAKES HER KEYS ND GOES OUT OF THE ROOM. ABHIMANYU FOLLOWS HER BT NT BEFORE GIVING RAJ A THANK-U SMILE]

[NAINA GOES IN 2 CHANGE ND RAJ GETS PREOCCUPIED WITH SM THOUGHTS IN HIS HEAD. SUDDENLY HE HEARS A VOICE SAY- "kya soch rahe ho raj?" ]

[HE TURNS ND SEES THAT HE IS STANDING FACE-TO-FACE WITH HIS INNER SELF(ATHMA)]

ATHMA- Kya soch rahe ho raj. Yahi na ki naina ko dekh kar hi tum bechain kyu ho jate ho? kya tumhe wajah nahi pata raj??

RAJ- Wajah...koi wajah nahi hain. Tum kya bat kar rahe ho??

ATHMA- Logo se tum lakh chupa lo raj, khod se kaise chupaoonge??

[A VERY FRUSTRATED RAJ TURNS AROUND ND CLOSES HIS EYES. AFTER A FRACTION OF A SECOND HE OPENS THEM, TURNS AROUND ND SCREAMS OUT-" ye bakwas hain!!" ]
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
[AS RAJ TURNS AROUND, HE SEES THAT THE ATHMA IS NO LONGER THERE. ND THAT THE ONLI PRSN THERE IS NAINA, LOOKING RAVISHING IN THE BLACK SARI]

NAINA- Kya meri sari itni kharab lag rahi hain??

RAJ(shocked)- Kya................nahi, yeh tumse kisne kaha.

[NAINA LOOKS AT RAJ AS THOUGH HE HAS LOST HIS MIND.]

NAINA- Sir abhi abhi jab maine puncha ki main kaisi lag rahi hoo, tab apne hi kaha ki yeh bakwas hain. Aur ab...........

[THE TRUTH DAWNS ON RAJ. HE REALISES THAT HE WAS SO LOST IN HIS THOUGHTS THAT HE DIN'T EVEN RALISE THAT NAINA HAD ALREADY CHANGED ND WAS ASKING HIM SMTHING ]

RAJ- Nahi wo main kisi aur bare main soch raha tha....

[WHILE SAYING THIS RAJ GOES ALL RED. HOW EVER COULD HE TELL NAINA THAT IT WAS INFACT HER HE WAS THINKING ABOUT? HOW COULD HE TELL HER THAT HE WAS FIGHTING WITH HIMSELF 2 TRY ND FORGET HER? HOW COULD HE TELL HER HOW CAPTIVATED HE WAS BY HER, WHN HE WASN'T READY 2 ACCEPT IT HIMSELF? HOW COULD HE??]

[HE LOOKED AT NAINA ONCE MORE- THOSE CAPTIVATING EYES, THAT PRETTY SMILE ND THAT INNOCENCE. THEN HE SUDDENLY STOPPED........THINKING-"oh no what's happening 2 me?"]

RAJ- Aap is sari main bahut sundar lag rahi hain. Chale........??

[NAINA SMILES, SHE HOPES WHAT RAJ JUZ SAID WAS TRUE. BT WHAT SHE DOESN'T KNOW IS THAT SHE CAN'T GET NE CLOSER THAN THIS 2 THE TRUTH. HE DID REALLY THINK THAT SHE WAS LOOKING PRETTY.]

[RAJ CLOSES THE DOOR ND BOTH OF THEM WALK BACK 2 THE PARTY. BOTH OF THEM R TRYING 2 FIND OUT THEIR TRUE FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER. IS IT JUST A CADET-TEACHER RELATIONSHIP OR SMTHING MORE?? THEY DON'T KNOW AS YET.]

BUT DEEP DOWN, THEIR HEART KNOWS. THEIR REALATIONSHIP IS MEANT 2 BE "SOMETHING MORE." NOW ITS UPTO THEM 2 REALISE THIS.

WILL THEY EVER????????
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
hey just read ur FF

it is great
pl continue

WOW 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
👏 tooo good yaar jiv....ossome fic...... 😃 😳 😛
just loveddd all d parts....... 😛 😉 😊 continue rocking..... 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
thnks for the cmments ......glad u gys liked it.....keep posting..........

cheers
shravya.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
[RAJ ND NAINA WALK BACK 2 THE PARTY............SEEING NAINA A POOR DISTRACTED CADET DJ STOPS PLAYING THE MUSIC. EVER1 IS SPRISED ND TURNS IN THE DIRECTION 2 WICH HIS EYES R POINTING. NOW ALL EYES R ON RAJ ND NAINA. EVERY1 IS TOTALLY SPEECHLESS. YUDI IS THE FRST 1 2 CM 2 HIS TRUE FORM.]

YUDI(2 huda)- Wow, dude ye donno sath me kitne acche lagte hain na??

[THIS QUESTION PRICKS AN ALREADY DISTURBED HUDA LIKE A PIN.
RAJ ND NAINA R FEELING ALL AKWARD, AWARE OF THE GLANCES ND HOOTCALLS THEY R GENERATING. THEY TRY 2 WALK DOWN THE STAIRS AS FAST AS POSSIBLE BT WHEN 2 OFTHE BST LOOKING PPL CM TOGETHER GETTING AWAY WITHOU MUCH ATTENTION IS OUT OF QUESTION. THOUGH THE PARTY STARTED AGAIN EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE PPL KEPT STARING AT RAJ ND NAINA ND GAVE THEM THOSE "u-look-cute-together-smiles"]

[HUDA IS JST DYING WID JEALOUSY ND WANTS 2 JUZ GO ND PUNCH RAJ BT EVEN HE HAD 2 ADMIT RAJ WAS LOOKING DASHING ND SO WAS NAINA IN THE SARI........ND THEY DID AFTER ALL LOOK LIKE A NICE COUPLE.......A AMAZING CPL............BT HEY JUZ LOOKED LIKE THAT.....THEY COULDN'T BE A COUPLE ..............AFTER ALL, HUDA FELT, NAINA COULDN'T LIKE NE1 BT HIM.....................COULD SHE??............NA................NEVER.................................................................................................NEVER??]

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