Second year at KMA(my first fic) - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
please continue as soon as possible.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great part..plz contiue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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NEXT SCENE- RAJVEER'S ROOM

NAINA- Oh no! Aaj to major nair ki class thi.

RAJ- Cadet Singh. Aacha hua aap thik hain. Phikar mat kijiye, maine Major Nair ko bata diya hain ki aap aaj drill mein nahi aayengi.

NAINA(looks relieved)- Oh! Thank u sir.

RAJ(smiles)- It's ok Cadet.

[JUST THEN THERE IS A KNOCK ON THE DOOR]

RAJ- Come in.

[HUDA WALKS IN]

HUDA- Woh sir, Phoolan........mera matlab Naina.

RAJ- Haan Cadet Huda, wo yahi hain.

RAJ(to naina)- Cadet Singh, aapke dusre class ka waqt ho chuka hain. Aap jaldi nahin karengi to late ho jayengi.

NAINA(smiles)- Yes sir.

[NAINA GOES OUT WITH HUDA. DR. SHALINI'S CLASS IS NEXT.]

ON THE WAY TO SHALINI'S CLASS......

HUDA- Tu Capt. Sir ke room mein kya kar rahi thi?

NAINA- Woh...kuch nahin.....kuch kaam tha. Chal jaldi kar warna class ke liye late ho jayenge.

[HUDA LOOKS KIND OF PISSED OFF BUT REFRAINS FROM SAYING NETHING. BOTH GO 2 DR.SHALINI'S CLASS. YUDI, AALEKH, POOJA AND ALI ARE ALREADY THERE. SEEING YUDI, HUDA SUDDENLY REMEMBERS SMTHING AND HIS FACE BRIGHTENS UP.]

HUDA- Oye Yudiye, yaad hain na aaj tujhe kya karna hain?

YUDI(with a scared bt innocent face)- Kya karna hain dude??
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
HUDA- Oye jyada ban math........dr. shalini..propose..........kuch yaad aaya??

YUDI- Ooh woh....woh main..........

HUDA- Woh main..woh main kya.......har gaya kya.

[tabhi ek orderly andar ata hain]

ORDERLY- Sare cadets ko assembly hall mein aana hain.

HUDA- Yeh tau bhi na, hamesha galat waqt pe bulata hain.

YUDI(heaving a sigh of relief)- Galat waqt.no ways dude.

(YUDI SMILES ND GOES AWAY. THE REST FOLLOW HIM)


NEXT SCENE- IN THE ASSEMBLY HALL

BC- Cadets aap apne naye teachers se to mile hi honge. unke swagat ke liye, faculty members eik party dena chahte. usike bare mein dr. shalini aap se bat karengi.

[ SAYING THIS BC LEAVES ND DR. SHALINI GOES 2 THE MIKE]

DR.SHALINI- Cadets hum apke naye teachers ke swagat mein eik dance ball organize karne wale hain. aap sabko partners ke sath aana honga. is ball ki sari jimedari aap par hain.
cadet huda nd cadet yudi, aap khana lane ke incharge hain aur cadet naina, aap decorations ke incharge hain.
cm on now jaldi jayiye aur tayariya shuru kijiye.

HUDA- Are wah ek dance ball.ab ayenga maza..........kya phoolan??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HUDA- Are wah eik dance ball, ab ayenga maaza.......kyo phoolan??

[NAINA SMILES IN A 'WATEVER' KIND OF WAY AND GOES AWAY. HUDA RUNS AFTER HER.]

HUDA- Oye phoolan iska matlab tu dance mein huda ke sath hi chalengi na??

NAINA(smiles in a amused sort of way)- Sochungi...........

HUDA- Sochungi matlab......are phoolan ruk......sochungi se tera kya matlab hain??

NAINA- Sochungi huda, aab chal dr.shalini ka class khatam hua nahi hain.

HUDA- Are haan.......dr. shalini...........yudi.....tu ja main ata hun

NAINA- Are par huda

HUDA- Tu ja mein ata hoon.

[NAINA GOES TOWARDS THE CLASS ND HUDA MOVES TOWARD YUDI. BUT HE STOPS WHEN HE SEES DR.SHALINI APPROACHING YUDI]

YUDI & DR. SHALINI SPEAK AT THE SAME TIME

YUDI- Woh ma'am main.......
DR.SHALINI- Woh cadet main.........

[YUDI SMILES INDICATING FOR DR. SHALINI 2 CONTINUE]

DR.SHALINI(speaks rapidly)- Woh cdet mein soch rahi thi ki kya tum mere saath dance par chalonge.

YUDI(unable 2 comprehend nething)- Ssry ma'am.....??

DR. SHALINI(takes a deep breath)- Yudi, kya tum mere saat dance mein chalonge?

YUDI(filled with extreme happiness, he breaks into a cute smile)- Of course ma'am.........main bhi wahi...mera matlab...oh god..main zaroor chalunga ma'am.

[AT FIRST DR.SHALINI IS CNFUSED DUE 2 YUDI'S BLABBERING. BT FINALLY SHE DOES UNDRSTAND HIM.]

DR. SHAILINI- To chale cadet??....class abhi tak khatam nahi hui hain......

YUDI- After you.

[DR. SHALINI LEAVES FOR THE CLASS. YUDI IS ABOUT 2 LEAVE WHEN HE SPOTS HUDA. HE WALKS OVER 2 HIM FULL OF PRIDE ND CONFIDENCE]

YUDI- So, mein dr. shalini ke saath date pe ja hi raha hoon.............ssry dude bt is bar u've lost.

HUDA- Oye yudiye, huda kabhi bhi nahi harta..............aur aaj bhi nahi hara hain

YUDI(kinda cnfused)- Matlab...??

HUDA(gives a killer smile)- Matlab ye yudiye ki shart ke mutabik tujhe dr. shalini ko date par punchna tha, na ki use.................samjha??..........to shart to tu hi hara na.............chal de 100 ka note
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
YUDI(looks crestfallen)- Are yaar, ............

[ yudi hands huda a 100 rupee note]

YUDI- Yein le...

HUDA- Oye yudiye udas mat ho, shart nahi to dr. shailini ko to jeet gaya na??................chal ab

[BOTH LEAVE FOR CLASS]

CLASS GETS OVER FAST.........ND EVER1 GETS BUSY WITH THE DANCE BALL PREPARATIONS.

NAINA 2 GETS INTO THE MOOD UNAWARE OF WHAT LIES AHEAD OF HER IN THE COMING TIME..................
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
jus read all of it, its awesome cnt wait for u to cont
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
YUDI- Dude humme khanna kaha se lana chahiye??

HUDA- Oye yudiye tu uski phikar na kar, uska intazam to meri mummyji karengi.

YUDI- Oh cool. Par hamare drink ka kya honga? Uske bare min kuch socha bhi hain ki puri raat coke se kam chalana padenga

HUDA- Oye main bhi ussi ke bare mein soch raha tha. Shayad kaidi ke pas stock ho, chal puchte hain.

[HUDA, YUDI ND AALEKH R STANDING TOGGETHER.....TALKING ABOUT SMTHING SEEMINGLY IMPORTANT]

HUDA- Oye Kaidi tere pas party ke liye stock hai kya?

AALEKH- Hain to. Lekin us party mein wo bc bhi ane wala hain.Uske samne piyega kya??

HUDA- Are tau to bas kuch hi der ke liye rahenga, phir wo chala jayenga. Uske jane ke bad hum mal nikal sakte hai.

AALEKH- Thik hain...........ruk main leke ake room me raktahu. Party ke din chupke se udar sehi nikalenge

YUDI- Cool, ab ayenga mazza.

AALEHK(hits him on the head)-Abe nautanki, akhe kma ko plan bataneka hain kya??

YUDI- Oops ssry!!

[AALEKH GOES AWAY ND EVEN YUDI GOES AWAY 2 CHECK OUT A FEW DETAILS. HUDA IS JUST ABOUT 2 GO AWAY WHEN HE SPOTS NAINA.
NAINA IS STANDING ON A STOOL PUTTING DECORATIONS UP ON A PILLAR. HUDA KEEPS STARING AT HER]

HUDA(to himself)- Kitni pyari lag rahi hain meri phoolan. Wah huda, kya sahi choice kiya hain.

[THINKING BOUT NAINA, HUDA SWELLS WITH PRIDE. HIS FACE IS SOON PLASTERED WITH A BROAD SMILEAS HE REMEMBERS ALL HIS PAST MOMENTS WITH NAINA.
BUT THIS SMILE IS SOON HARSHLY REMOVED FRM HIS FACE AS HE SEES NAINA LOSING BALANCE OF HERSELF ON THE STOOL. SHE SCREAMS FOR HELP. HUDA RUSHES TOWARDS HER BT BEFORE HE COULD REACH HER, SM1 RUNS UP 2 HER ND SHE FALLS DOWN........................................................ ............................................................ ...........SAFELY IN THE ARMS OF CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT.

HUDA SEES HIS PHOOLAN IN RAJVEER'S ARMS ND CURSES UNDER HIS BREADTH. HE WONDERS WHERE RAJ WAS ALL THIS TIME ND WHEN DID HE SEE NAINA FALLING DOWN
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HUDA IS IRRITATED BECAUSE RAJ RAN FASTER THAN HIM 2 CATCH NAINA. HE SLIGHTLY SUSPECTS RAJ WAS WATCHING NAINA ALL THE TIME.
(POOR HUDA ,HE'LL BE SO HEARTBROKEN WHEN HE COMES TO KNOW THAT RAJ WAS LOOKING AT NAINA ALL THE TIME.)

MEANWHILE NAINA IS STILL IN RAJ'S ARMS. BOTH OF THEM R JUST LOOKING AT EACH OTHER UNAWARE OF THE STARES THEY R GETTING. BETWEEN THEM, NTHING ELSE SEEMS 2 MATTER. ITS JUST THEM. IN EACH OTHERS EYES, THEY SEE THEMSELVES ND SO CLOSE 2 EACH OTHER THEY DON'T CARE FOR NE1 ELSE.

RAJ HAD BEEN STARING AT NAINA ALL THE WHILE UNAWARE OF WHY HE WAS DOING SO. MEANWHILE EVEN NAINA'S THOUGHTS SEEMED 2 REVOLVE AROUND JUST 1 PRSN- RAJ .
SUDDENLY NAINA FEELS A HAND ON HER SHOULDERS ND SHE HEARS SM1 SAY "NAINA, TU THIK TO HAIN?" SHE TURNS AROUND 2 SEE HUDA LOOKING AT HER WITH EYES FULL OF CONCERN. HER DREAM WORLD CONSITING HER ND RAJ IS SHATTERED. RAJ 2 CMES BACK 2 HIS SENSES, PUTS HER DOWN, ASKS HER IF SHE IS FINE ND LEAVES.
NAINA'S MIND IS STILL FULL OF RAJ. SHE DOESN'T SEEM 2 UNDERSTAND WHY SHE FEELS JITTERY WHENEVER RAJ IS AROUND.( POOR HONEY, DON'T WORRY, U'LL SOON KNOW)

RAJ MEANWHILE IS IN HIS ROOM. HE SMILES AT HIMSELF ND HITS HIMSELF ON THE HEAD FOR HIS STUPID BEHAVIOUR AROUND NAINA. AFTER ALL, SHE'S JUST HIS BEST FRND'S SISTER. RIGHT??]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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FOR RAJ ND NAINA, DIN KAB KHATAM HUA AUR SHAAM KAB AYI, PATA HI NA CHALA. SOON IT WAS TIME FOR THE DANCE BALL.
LOOKING PRETTY IN A PINK EVENING GOWN WAS NAINA ND SEXY IN A BLACK TUX WAS RAJ. IF LOOKS COULD KILL THEN EVERYONE AROUND WOULD DROP DEAD.
BC GAVE THE INTRODUCTORY SPEECH ND THEN THE REAL PARTY KICK STARTED. NO 1 WAS REALLY DANCING………..THEY WERE JUST HANGING AROUND. AS EXPECTED BY THE CADETS, BC SOON LEFT THE PARTY ND AALEKH WENT 2 GET HIS "STOCK." UNFORTUNATELY FOR HIM, DR.RITU CAUGHT HIM AT THIS ND ASKED HIM 2 GO ND KEEP AWAY THE BOOZE AS THIS WAS 2 BE A "SOBER" PARTY.
SO POOR CADETS…………THE WHOLE EVENING WAS 2 CARRY N WITHOUT ALCOHOL.
NANDINI WAS STANDING WITH RAJ WHILE HUDA, POOJA, ND NAINA WERE STANDING NEARBY.
THE BALL DANCE SOON STARTED BT VERY FEW COUPLES TOOK 2 THE DANCE FLOOR.]

HUDA (2 naina, while pointing 2 the dance floor) - chale ?

[NAINA LOOKS FRM HUDA 2 HIS HUGE GRIN ND 2 HUDA AGAIN. SHE THEN TURNS HER FACE AWAY IMPLYING THAT SHE WILL NOT DANCE.]

HUDA- Oye phoolan par…………….

[BEFORE HE CAN COMPLETE HIS SENTENCE NAINA TURNS ND STARTS TALKING 2 DR.SHALINI.]

HUDA (2 pooja)- Ab isse kya hua??

POOJA- Oye huda ek ladki ko dance ke liye punchneka eik tareka hota hai.

HUDA (looks confused)- Tareka………..kaisa tareka??

[UNFORTUNATELY FOR HIM, RIGHT AT THIS MOMENT POOJA SPOTS ALI ND BOTH OF THEM GO TO THE DANCE FLOOR.]
[ HUDA LOOKS AROUND ND SPOTS RAJ.]

HUDA(2 himself)- KMA ki har jalani CAPT.RAJVEER par marti hai. Ussi se punchna padenga ki jalaniyo ko dance ke liye kaise punchna chahiye.

[HUDA WALKS OVER 2 RAJ ND NANDINI]

HUDA(2 raj)- Sir, eik jalani ko dance ke liye punchne ka sabse romantic tarekha kya hain?

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