City of Devils - Chapter 7, page 18; 6/21 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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good first part 👏

hmmmmmmmm.........? Wonder who bailed on kripa 😕
awwwww iz it angad

poor baby😔

nwayz neha sounds chooooooo adorable 😛

continue soon 👏

kanwer 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg great partt!!!!!! i love all three shows. cant believe kyph and oc is over.. lukily there r reruns of kyph but its not the same.. so mouth and rachel....... wow.lolz.. i would say the same thing if rachel didn't ditch him... oth is one of my FAVORITE showz.. glad u made a fanfic of all three of them...

im thinkin it was angads child.. piya created misunderstandings.. she told angad ahe's pregnant.. he didn't believe her.. she moved to ny..

rite??????? & nbsp; fine dont tell me.. 😛

continue soooooooooooooonnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aw thanksss guys!! 😳 😳 😳 i MAY or may not continue tomorroww - it'll be soon though.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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City of Devils

A walk down memory lane

"Kripa, is there a reason why my credit card bill has children items in it?" a pissed off voice, that belonged to Ben Davidson yelled yell into the phone.

"About that, uh" Kripa stuttered into the phone, when she heard his voice boom into the phone piece again.

"I hope to God you don't say the words 'I'm pregnant.'"

"I'm sorry dad." Kripa cried weakly into the phone.

"Do you have any idea how much this would've hurt your mom if she was still with us? How devastated she would have been to hear that the girl we brought up with such care became pregnant at nineteen?" He asked.

However, he had gotten her from weak, to ferociously angry within all of two seconds. All she felt vanished away. "You brought me up? No dad. It was those nanny's and child takers that brought me up. Yes, mom looked after me at times when you guys were actually home, but you had never even touched me. You never played a dad's role, you were too damn busy taking your business trips all around the world. I lived on my own dad. What did I get from my birthdays? I got a damn wad of cash. I never ever got the hugs or kisses I dissevered. So don't go acting like my father now. You lost that right when you handed me to my first nanny." She said, satisfied with the speech she had delivered.

Ben seemed to think about what she said, "Kripa, I'm cutting you off. You and your child are not going to live off of me." And all he heard was the dial tone.

He said child with such disgust – she didn't care if she didn't talk to him ever again. It's not like they did before this. Only, now she had no money. She was going to have to get a job.

***

Kevin and Kripa sat outside the bathroom, on two completely different sides of the bed, awaiting the answer that was to come from the little tube in nineteen minutes.

If only Angad was here. She missed him, a lot. But him and Piya had screwed up their relationship that built over the two years. The trust had gone, and betrayal had set in. However, she knew that he would've held her at a time like this, when she really needed it. He would've kissed her temples and told her that no matter what happened, he'd be there for her. Kevin? He sat on the other side – and she had a gut feeling that he wasn't about to stick around if she were pregnant. Fifteen minutes left.

She mindlessly thought back to the time when she had caught Angad and Piya red handed. She couldn't believe it. It was her eighteenth birthday, and it wasn't her best one. Only Mouth and Rachel had called. To see what was up, she jumped in her red Beemer, and drove to Angads house. The backdoor led to his room, so she decided to go from there. Only, now she wished she hadn't. What she saw had scarred her for life. The love of her life, the man she was suppose to marry and have children with and the girl who was suppose to be her Maid of Honor at their wedding, were lying in bed, bodies tangled, looking guilty. Tears sprang to her eyes, as she turned around and headed towards the door. Angad slid his boxers on, and ran after her.

"Kripa! Kripa listen." She cut him off.

"So this is what you do on my birthday. Piya you were my best friend, how could you. And Angad did the last two years even matter to you?" She said, trying hard not to break down in front of the two.

Angad hated seeing tears in her eyes and knowing he was the cause of them almost killed him. "Kripa, that's not it – we were just. I don't what we were doing but" He paused; she was now on the floor, her head in her hands. He bent down to cup her face with his hands, but to his surprise she moved away. He took a step closer, and she took another the opposite way. "Will you stop trying to back away from me? Kripa I lo – "

"Don't, don't you dare say you love me. It's too late. And now, I couldn't care less if I never saw both of you again." She said, gaining her composure back.

"Kripa, I'm sorry. I love you, you know that. You're my best friend. I cried with you when your mom died, and remember how we use to go on camping trips with my brother just to annoy him and you burnt your finger trying to impress him because you always had a crush on him?"

"Piya, don't talk to me ever again." The look in Kripa's eyes almost made Piya want to beg her to stay.

Just then, Kripa walked out of their life, forever.

No minutes left – she was indeed pregnant.

okay so this chapter was another filler. Now you know what happened with the guy who bailed, Piya and Angad, and her parents. I didn't proofread so theyre maybe a bunch of mistakes! and i hope you guys like this part. tell me what i could do better ! 😃


Edited by pakigal34 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i forgot to add that all these are memories. none of this is happening now. :]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i love the part 👏

glad that angad never bailed on her but i wish the kid is was his


kanwer 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hello64

i love the part 👏

glad that angad never bailed on her but i wish the kid is was his


kanwer 😳



aw thankss kanwer 😳
Edited by pakigal34 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. i loved it.

i wonder is angad ever going to come back.

kripa's father is stupid. ugh.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!!how could angad can sleep with that piya 😡 ANGAD 🤢 you disgusted me so bad eewwww its too creepy to think like that 😡 😡 😡 poor kripa 😭 continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ur fan fic is totally aweosme. cont soon.
i really want 2 read more.

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