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CrazyNoori thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
babe babe plz plz cont soon hunibunz and hinna ur so pretty mashallah 😳

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_eijaz_anita

That part was awesome..
It so cool they confessed thier love alread

yep!! thanks!😃

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

great part.
cont soon.

awww thanks!

Originally posted by: anu-pre4eva

wow they sure did confess soon lolz, nice part, do continue soon hina, u make me wait soo much and it drives me crazyy 😡 😆 😆 lolz. 😳

awa awww thanks! well hardly anyone comments on my parts and that drives ME crazy*hint*hint*😆

Originally posted by: Naughty Noori

babe babe plz plz cont soon hunibunz and hinna ur so pretty mashallah 😳

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain

hailaaaa u really mean it or r u just saying it 2 make me happy?! THANKS SOOOOO MUCH!! im sure ur prettier though!😉

only 5 comments so far....i need 5 more or i wont continue!

xx hin xx😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
hinnaaa...nyc part dear!!!
kripa and angad, livingopposite each other lol dat wud b fun ;)
CrazyNoori thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
hinna i never lie kasam se ur very pretty, me naaaaaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww..........sooo atlast they confessed.....n they r gettin engaged.......kooolll......lol angad n kripa in opposite roomss...this is fun...lol....wonder whu r tha 2 new characters.....one might b prithvi...lol...just a guess!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
yay! anjali-kavya rock! wonder wat'll happen when angad and kripa meet! 😆 havoc!

two character? new? sound good, no evil please. me no like evil. 😕

cont soon darlin...

<3 kiran
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 hi just read the whole thing and itz very beaustifl!!!!!!!!IN the beggininng angad was such a jerk and now angad is gonna be the reason they become loverz how cute and anjali kavya confessed sooooooo cute!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
yay i got 11 comments!!! thanks everyone!!! i love u alllll 😳

Originally posted by: mitali_s

hinnaaa...nyc part dear!!!
kripa and angad, livingopposite each other lol dat wud b fun ;)


thanks!! oh it will it will 😛

Originally posted by: Naughty Noori

hinna i never lie kasam se ur very pretty, me naaaaaa


sweety i think u shud go look in d mirror ur d pretty 1 nt me 😉


wow long time!!! thank ya!!

Originally posted by: ana13

awwww..........sooo atlast they confessed.....n they r gettin engaged.......kooolll......lol angad n kripa in opposite roomss...this is fun...lol....wonder whu r tha 2 new characters.....one might b prithvi...lol...just a guess!!!


anamikaaaa thanks! just wait n see!!

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

yay! anjali-kavya rock! wonder wat'll happen when angad and kripa meet! havoc!

two character? new? sound good, no evil please. me no like evil.

cont soon darlin...

<3 kiran
E> GA <3



lol yeah! i dont like eveil people neither but im sorry the story has to go on! 😭 thankz!!

Originally posted by: imdudehead

hi just read the whole thing and itz very beaustifl!!!!!!!!IN the beggininng angad was such a jerk and now angad is gonna be the reason they become loverz how cute and anjali kavya confessed sooooooo cute!!!!!


wow i got a new reader!!! thankz sooo much!

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Posted: 18 years ago

thank u soooo much for comments! keep them coming...lvoe u all!

Part Twelve – Deal?

Kripa was in her hotel room, when there was a knock on her door.

She opened it and it was a waiter.

Waiter: Sorry for disturbing u ma'am, this is for you.

He handed her an envelope and left as she closed the door. Kripa sat down on her bed and began opening the envelope to see an invitation inside. She grinned and picked up her phone to dial a number.

Kripa: Hey Prithvi! Its been ages

Prithvi: KRIPA!!! Did you get my invitation?

Kripa: Haan duffer… ur getting engaged and telling me now? Main tumhe dekhloongi

Prithvi laughed: Sorry yaar….sab kuch itni jaldi hogaya mauka hi nahin mila…Anyways just wait til you meet her, im sure u will love her too

There was a knock on Angad's door, he opened and was shocked to see the person and hugged her.

Angad: Arey Mishty tum…what a pleasant surprise!

Mishty: Haan ab toh milna laga hi rahega

She handed him an invitation.

Mishty: Meri mangni ho rahi hai….plz tum zaroor aana

Angad smiled: Tumhari mangni ho aur main na aaon aisa kaise ho sakta hai Mishty? Main zaroor aaunga

Anjali was peacefully sleeping in her bedroom when her phone started ringing, she got up cursing the caller but soon she smiled when she saw the Caller ID.

Anjali: Hi Jaan. Kaise ho?

Kavya: Bahut bura?

Anjali asked worriedly: Kyun? Kya hua Kavya?

Kavya: Tumhare begair main acha kaise ho sakta hoon Anjali, tumhare begair ek pal bhi jeena ek sazaa lagti hai. Plz mujhse milo naa

Anjali smiled: Theek hai, main aarahi hoon bahir.

Anjali hung up and went outside in her pajamas and saw Kavya standing there waiting for, she went and hugged him.

Kavya: Anjali maine tumsey ek zaroori baat karni hai, meri gari main aao

Anjali went and sat in his car and was surprised to see a bouquet of flowers and a card.

Anjali: Yeh kya?

Kavya: Tumhaare liye hai Anjali

He kissed her forehead. She was about to leave when Kavya pulled her back.

Kavya: Hey baat suno…

Anjali: Kya?

Kavya: Tumhe pata hai na ke main Kripa se bahut pyaar karta tha, lekin ab main who sab bhool chukka hoon, ab mere dil, meri ankhon, meri zubaan main sirf tum hi ho Anjali, main nahi chaahta ke tum humare ateet ko sochke kabhi bhi pareshaan ho, main chaahta hoon ke tum who sab bhool jao, ab main sirf tumhara hoon Anju, aur main jaanta hoon ke tum bhi sirf mujhse pyaar karti ho haina?

Anjali blushed.

Kavya: Main nahi chaahta ke humare beech koi bhi museebat ya misunderstanding aaye, iss liye main chaahti hoon ke hum yeh baat Angad aur Kripa se chupaake rakhe. Plz Anjali sab sahi waqt aayega toh hum unnko bataadeinge ke hum ek doosre se pyaar karte hain, main nahi chaahta ke unnki wajah se humko alag hona pare. Bolo tumhe manzoor hai?

Anjali smiled: Deal

Kavya: Good. Aur haan ghar jaake mera card zaroor parna, especially tumhare liye sochke likha tha

Anjali mouthed thanks while blushing, she kissed him on his cheek and went back inside.

Now it was the engagement party and if you haven't figured it out yet, Prithvi and Mishty were getting engaged to each other which meant that Angad and Kripa were unknowingly both at the same engagement party.

Everyone was having a lot of fun and getting drunk, including Angad and Kripa, ofcourse they would it was their best friend getting engaged after all.

After Prithvi and Mishty exchanged rings everyone clapped. They were all called to the dance floor. The drunkenness added to the fun. Angad jumped on the dance floor and bumped into a drunken girl, they both fell on the floor, Angad on top of her.

Angad: I'm sorry

Girl:You blind….

She stopped when she looked at him, for one moment their hearts stopped beating. Prithvi and Mishty were watching this from one side and looking furious.

Mishty whispered something into Prithvi's ear, he nodded, they then walked to Angad and Kripa and helped them up.

Mishty started happily dancing with Angad, while Prithvi danced with Kripa. Soon the song finished and they had to exchange partners. Coincidently Angad landed up with Kripa.

They swayed to the music and sang in their drunken state.

Angad: aise na ja tu rooth ke jaaneja, abb maan jaa o sanam, abb maan jaa
mana huyi hai khata lekin ye dil hai tera, ab tu ise aur na aise sata
(i wanna wanna wanna take u home with me, right now, right now
i wanna gonna gonna take u home with me, somehow, somehow) – 2

Kripa: aise na tum bhi tamaashaayi bano, kuch jara sharm bhi toh karo
log saare humpe hasenge jaan lo, soch lo waqt hai soch lo

Angad: tumse

Kripa: kuch na kaho

Angad: tumse

Kripa: durr hi rakho

Angad: tumse

Kripa: bas hogaya ab chalo

Angad: hey tumse hasin raat hai, taaron bhari raat hai
dulhan bani raat hai, abb maan ja
(i wanna wanna wanna take u home with me, right now, right now
i wanna gonna gonna take u home with me, somehow, somehow)

Kripa: kaise main baatein teri yeh maan lu, sach hai kya jhut kya, kya pata
chaand taaare teri gawaahi de magar, phir bhi yeh dil nahi maanata

Angad: dil ko

Kripa: kuch na kaho

Angad: dil ko

Kripa durr hi rakho

Angad: dil ko

Kripa: bas hogaya abb chalo

Saying this she walked away, Angad walked behind her and grabbed her arm.

Angad: dil ko tere hai yakin, hoothon par hai kyun nahi
tu hai jahaan main wahin, o meri jaan
(i wanna wanna wanna take u home with me, right now, right now
i wanna gonna gonna take u home with me, somehow, somehow) – 2

Angad: aise na ja tu rooth ke jaaneja, abb maan jaa o sanam, abb maan jaa
mana huyi hai khata lekin ye dil hai tera, ab tu ise aur na aise sata
(i wanna wanna wanna take u home with me, right now, right now
i wanna gonna gonna take u home with me, somehow, somehow) – 2

At the end they were lost in each other, oblivious to the surroundings around them. What they didn't know was that everyone was clapping at their performance except for Prithvi and Mishty who were boiling with jealousy.

Anjali sat in her bedroom and opened the card that Kavya gave her, she was blushing at Kavya's sweet words for her.

Zindagi main har kisi ne kissi se pyaar kiya hai,
Iss zindagi main kayi pyaar hain,
Maa kya pyaar, Bhai kya pyaar,
Doston ka pyaar…
Lekin kayi rishteh aise hote hain jinnka koi naam nahi hota, sirf ehsaas…
Ek aisa ehsaas jo humari poori zindagi ko badal deta hai,
Humein duniya ki saari khushiyaan deta hai,
Humein jeene ka matlab sikhaata hai,
Uss ek insaan ko dekh ke na jaane kyun
Dil main ek ajeeb sa dard hota hai
Ek aisa dard jo dil karta hai hamesha dil main rahe
Taaqey usska ehsaas dil se kabhi na jaaye
Wo humse jitna bhi door ho, lekin hum hamesha ussko apne paas paate hain,
Wo humein jitna bhi sataaye, jitna bhi rulaaye likin humara pyaar usske liye kabhi nahi badalta
Yeh pyaar ek hi baar hota hai, aur job hi ho, hamesha zinda rehta hai…

Kavya And Anjali Together Forever

Anjali blushed and hid her face on her pillow.

Coming up: What is Kripa doing in Angad's bed? What's the secret behind Prithvi and Mishty's behaviour? Some more love,happiness,hate,regret,jealousy… stay tuned!

NOTE: The poem was written by me and I'd appreciate it if you didn't take it! Thanks!😃

ok i hopeee this part was long enough lol....wow this part took me the most effort! Usually as u can probably c im very lazy with writing lol but for some reason i really enjoyed writing this part lol! hmmm! well i think this story is getting insteresting now, well i hope it is! lol do leave comments if u want me to continue!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
good part. but i dont get it- if prithvi n mishti r getting married then y r they jealous? newayz, cont soon.

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