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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

whoa...im lost. in the drama, prithvi and mishty are bro-sis...dis is weird tho...but i think they both got a thing for a-k and R jealous...

i wonder wen anjali-kavya r gonna reveal their relationship...oooh.

juicy juicy... wonder wen the next part will be up. gurl u kno im waitin.

great part, cont soon

<3 kiran
E> GA <3


well i dont know coz ive never watched the drama lol but definately in this ff they are not bro-sis! that wud b groos! LMAO! thanks! 😃


thanks tiya hun!

Originally posted by: Sujalthegreat

continue soon. another good part and your poems are mind blowing and I also agree you are pretty.


thanks!

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

awesum prts!!! just luv it..hope either angad or kripa realises luv for one another!!!


thanks! and u just gotta wait for that...so keep reading and commenting! 😉

Originally posted by: armaghan0

interesting but yr mishti and prithvi jealous arent they getting engaged with each other


they r engaged! u will find out the truth in the next part! 😃

Originally posted by: Naughty Noori

plz plz plz cont soon babe

luvz ya

Luv Noori hussain


thanks nooriiiii! u know when i hear ur name it reminds me of the song "Doorie" by atif aslam coz it rhymes with ur name! lmao! sorry im just random!

Originally posted by: anu-pre4eva

wow, that was a fabulous part, hmm why is mishti and prithvi jealous?? I hope they don't do something stupid with AK, anyways do continue soon


thanks! u will find out soon!

Originally posted by: ana13

heeeeey awesum part hinna.......mee 2 confused tht y prithvi n mishty r jelous......awww kavya anjali r shooo cute....n ur poem roked yaar....u've got soo much talent!!!!!!!i envy u...lol joking!!! fabulous as always....hmmm kripa on angad's bed....sound pretty intersting...hehe!!!!continue soon dear
luv ya
Anamika


thanks anuu! 😃
CrazyNoori thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
hahahahahaha all ma friends say same thing don worry 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry guys been really busy! bear with me and ill get the next part done by saturdya or monday! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
i dnt get it..if pritivi n misty getting married y r they jealous of angad n kripa??? 😕
btw nice poem 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

thanks ash!

Part Thirteen – A Night To Regret

Angad and Kripa were still holding hands after the dance, while looking into each others eyes. Since Kripa had drank too much, she couldn't think right and her vision was blurred.

Kripa(thinking loudly):Iss larke ko kahin dekha hai…

Angad had drank too, but not as much as Kripa so he was still in his senses. There was something about Kripa that made Angad restless, maybe it was her smell? Or her smile? Or her eyes? Or her curvaceous body? Well, whatever it was, it arose the passion within him, and he felt like holding her forever.

Kripa's eyes suddenly opened wide as well as her mouth.

Kripa: Tum Angad ho!

After she suddenly realized who he was, she felt dizzy, she put her hand on her head before collapsing to the floor.

Kripa(still unconscious):Angad….Angad…

She was still holding his hand and wouldn't let go. Prithvi angrily came towards them.

Prithvi: Main isse ghar chodh aata hoon…She needs rest

Angad:Nahi Prithvi…Tum kaise jaa sakte ho? Its ur engagement party…Main isse le jata hoon

Mishty:Nahi Angad, u don't know where she lives…u don't worry Prithvi will take care of her

Prithvi nodded his head in agreement.

Angad:Oh come on guys…enjoy ur engagement…Mishty main toh tumhara dost hoon trust me ill take care of her…ill take her to my place ok?

Prithvi and Mishty tried their best to stop him, but he didn't listen to a word they said.

Kavya and Anjali were snuggled up together in the backseat of the car, while the driver drove them to the cinema. They were shyly whispering in each others ear.

Anjali: What are we gonna watch?

Kavya: Shrek

Anjali: Noooo kavya I wanna watch cash plz plz plz

Kavya: No!

Anjali: Kavya plzzzz u love me

Kavya:So?

Anjali:So lets watch cash

Kavya: Grrr fine u win happy?

Anjali kissed Kavya on the cheek.

Anjali: Yayyyyy Kavya thanks I love u…omg I cant wait to see my jaanu ritesh deshmukh

Kavya:WHATTTT? That's it now we are gonna watch shrek

Anjali:Why kavya tum jealous ho rahe ho….(pinched his cheek)awww how cute don't worry I love u more then him

Kavya pinched her cheek back:and u don't worry either if ur ritesh is in it then my esha deol is in it too

Anjali:What kavya that's not very nice im ur girlfriend u should be staring at me not her

They both started laughing and cuddled up close till they got to the cinema and watched Cash.

Kripa suddenly opened her eyes to find herself in an unfamiliar place, she looked around.

Kripa:Hmmmm my sofa used to be there, how did it get on that side? And my bathroom used to be there….and…..this aint my bed!!

Angad came out of the bathroom, laughing, with a towel around his shoulder.

Angad:Relaz yaar ur in my bed!

Kripa:Whattttt??? What am I doing in YOUR room?.....ARGHHHHH IM KIDNAPPED….U FREAK, U IDIOT, U MORON

Angad laughed even louder, he came and sat next to her on the bed and calmly explained everything that happened last night.

Kripa:Kyaa?? Tumhara matlab hai ke humne….we…..we….WE DONE IT?

Angad shamefully looked down.

Angad: Im sorry kripa, tum apne hosh kho baithi thi….main kya karta…I don't know why I couldn't control myself…look im really sorry, plz don't cry, ill do whatever u ask me to, ill even marry u, im really sorry kripa!

Kripa(shouting):NO ANGAD…ITS NOT THAT U CUDNT CONTROL URSELF, ITS THAT U DIDN'T WANT TO! TUM HAMESHA AISE HI THE…AUR TUM HAMESHA AISE HI RAHOGE…MUJHE LAGA KE ISS EK SAAL MAIN TUM BADAL GAYE HOGE, AUR HAAN MAIN SAHI THI…TUM BADAL GAYE HO…TUM AUR ZYADA GIR GAYE HO…U ARE DISGUSTING ANGAD KHANNA! I REGRET EVERY MOMENT THAT I SPENT WITH YOU…

She picked up her clothes from the floor and went into the bathroom sobbing, and slammed the door. After she came out in her clothes Angad was still sitting still where she had left him, she just gave him a dirty look and left while Angad stared at the closing door infront of him with a tear rolling down his cheek.

Angad:Im sorry Kripa…I hope one day ull forgive me…

After everyone had left, Prithvi and Mishty were alone in the hall. Mishty was furious, she threw all the glasses, plates, tables around everywhere while Prithvi was trying to calm her down.

Mishty:Those ******** …Prithvi I already told u I aint gonna marry u…. Have u forgotten that we are doing this so I can get angad and u can get ur love kripa? Tum bhool gaye ho kya?

Prithvi: Nahi mishty…im trying my best! Main toh sirf tumhaare saath maangni karke Kripa ko jealous karwana chahta tha….but that fool…mujhe kya pata tumhare angad ne usse pehle hi apne jaal main phansaya hua hai!

Mishty:Hey don't u dare say anything about my angad ok! Tumhari kripa ne mere angad ko phansaya hai! Now we have to come up with another plan.

Prithvi: Haan job hi ho…main kripa ko haasil karke hi rahoonga! Her and Angad can never be one!

Prithvi and Mishty smiled evilly.

Coming up:PMs second plan…A tries to apologize….K is upset and is avoiding him! What will happen???

Im soooooo sorryyyy for the delay….those of u who know me will know how busy I am! My bros getting married so im busy with dholkis and guests and everything, so I don't get much time to write the part! Its really hard! And now its gonna be even more hard till September…and then ill b starting college so I dunno when ill post the next part! Im really sorry!

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Posted: 18 years ago
fantastic part

oh snap
they slept together
i have a feeling dat nothing happened and dat angad planned all this

omg !! mishti and pritvi are soo 😡 🤢
disgusting !!they are faking

awesome part hinna

ctn soon

dammy

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey hinna, enjoyed this part. uff prithvi n mishti r so stupid lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanx baaaaaaaaabe u cont it was wicked u gotta cont

luvz ya

luv noori hussain
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Posted: 18 years ago
Nice part, argg, that prithvi and Mishti... 😡 😡 🤢 they are such as*es... AK slept together???? whoa... I think Angad probably made this up to bug Kripa... hmm... Plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
i reckon this is a plan by Angad, but either nothing actually happened or something did happen and eventually Angad will realise that he did wrong and he starts falling for Kripa, but she will hate him for what he's done.

Great part by the way. Keep up the good work. 👏
Edited by Sujalthegreat - 18 years ago

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