Love At First Sight - PART 13 - PAGE 14** - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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no repliez 😭
Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its really good zinu di. Do keep up your good work and effort in ur FF. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow..nice..v.impressive..pleasse please please continue soon 😊
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wow! i looved it!!!
plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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YOU YOR PLEASE WRITE THE FANFICS INSTEAD OF GIVING VIDEOS COZ M YOUTUBE THING HAS SOME PROBLEM WITH THE FLASH THING OR SOMETHING ITS NOT WORKING>>>> PLEASE CAN DO THE WRITEN FANFIC !! PLEASE
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: maHa.

YOU YOR PLEASE WRITE THE FANFICS INSTEAD OF GIVING VIDEOS COZ M YOUTUBE THING HAS SOME PROBLEM WITH THE FLASH THING OR SOMETHING ITS NOT WORKING>>>> PLEASE CAN DO THE WRITEN FANFIC !! PLEASE

yah ill write it for you..ill just need some time😆😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow i love ur video updates there great and they fit togeather so perfectly!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks maesha..and all u guys..next part will be up after im done posting my 41st part of Laksh and kt FanFic.. 😆 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part but do continue soon..

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************************************************************ ************************************************************ ***
PART 6

ITS FINALLY SUMMER VICATIONS....YYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!

Laksh and Kt leave with Eklavya..Manthan leaves alone..and so does Bhoomi..
Before Leaving..
Bhoomi: hey u guys..im coming to eklavya's place tomorrow..we'll go sumwhere to hangout..you guys be ready and come by 10:00 A.M. ok?
Everyone: OK!!!!
All of them leave..
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IN EKLAVYA'S HOUSE..

Tulsi: Oh!..you two have arrived..(laksh and eklavya)..(she notices kt)..this girl..
Laksh: daadi..yeh kt hai....she's staying here with us for summer vications..its ok na?
Tulsi: yah..its fine..come kt..and you two also..come in...
Kt: wow! beautiful home..
Eklavya: Thanks..Laksh show her to her room..
Laksh: ok..(he guides her to her room)..
Laksh: so this is your room..(smiles)..and if you need anything..in your left os me..and on your right is eklavya..ok..(smiles)..
Kt: yah..thanks Laksh..(smiles)..
Laksh: now what did i say?? no sorry's and thanks in friendship..(smiles)..ok kt u can unpack..ill go unpack also..
Kt: ok..(smiles)..
Laksh: after you're done, just come down to the living room, ok..we'll get you to meet everyone in the house..
Kt: ok..
Laksh: ok..(he smiles and leaves)..
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IN THE LIVING ROOM...
Eklavya introduces everyone to kt..and kt to everyone..while laksh is still unpacking😆...

Laksh: Ok..im done..uh..so i guess u met everyone huh..
Kt: (laughs) yah..(smiles)..
Eklavya: Common laskh..kt..lets go hang out sumwhere..
Tanya: yah everyone go..(smiles)..
Laksh: yeah..but we just got back..
Tanya: Oh! laksh..you are just like your dad..he also said this everytime he came back from--
A tear dripped down from Laksh's cheek..
Laksh: (puts a hand on his eye) (in a shakey voice) eklavya..kt..you guys carry on..there's something stuck in my eye..you guys go on..(he runs up to his room crying)..
Laksh was seen sitting in his room, sitting on his bed, crying and thinking of his parents..
Laksh: (crying) kaash ki main jaan paata ki aap kaise the papa..maine to aapki taswir hi dekhi hai sirf..
Kt listens to all this..
Kt walks in and keeps a hand on his shoulder..
Kt: (sad) abhi tak aankh mein kuch hai..(starts crying)..
Laksh: nahi kt..shayad chala gaya..tum gayi nahi..
Kt: (sits down infront of him) laksh..jhoot kyun bolte ho..dekho jab mere saath aisa hua tha..to..tumne hi mujhe manaya tha..(she wipes off his tears)..laksh dekho..zindagi mein pyar sabko chahiye hota hai..yeh main maanti hoon..par tumhara parivaar neeche tumhare liye intzaar kar raha hai..tum usko toh nahi thukrao ge naa..(she gets up, and sits beside him)..
Laksh: thank you kt..(he looks at her sweetly)..
Laksh gets up..and walks to his closet..takes out a special necklace..and walks back to kt..
Kt: yeh kya hai laksh??
Laksh: meri maa-baap ki aakhri nishaani..yeh hi mujhe unse jodti hai..
He tells him everything..
Laksh talks about the flashback..
Laksh: mujhe tanya chaachi ne ek baar bataya tha ki..mere dad is parivaar ke saath bahut ache dost the..aur ek din jab main bahut chota tha..main yaha aaya tha aur dad mom ko lene gaye the..aur woh waha se kabhi wapas nahi aaye..(tears fall out of his eyes, rolling down his cheek)..
Kt higs laksh and is also crying..
Laksh hugs her back..thinking he is not the only one who has been through all this..
Kt: sach kahu to..tumne to apne parents ko sirf is tawir se dekha hai..maine to unko 5 saal ki umr mein khoya..main jaanti hoon ki woh kaise the..
Laksh is speechless, and just smiles..
Everyone entered his room..
Tanya: im sorry laksh..i didnt mean to--
Laksh: (he gets up,a nd walks towards tanya) its ok chaachi..you dont need to be sorry..this is how god wrote my life..and i can't change it so..ill have to live with it..it not your fault..
Eklavya: (puts his hand on laksh's shoulder) laksh..if you want..you wanna hang out..get some fresh air..
Laksh nods..
Eklavya: ok lets go..come kt..
Laksh, Kt, and Eklavya go somewhere outside..
Tanya feels very bad..and wishes Laksh's parents were here..and that accident would have never happened..
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NEXT MORNING..

Downstairs..in the living room...

Bhoomi: everyone ready..ok lets go..wait!! where's laksh??
Manthan: yah..where is laksh??
Kt: i'll go get him..
She goes up to his room, and finds him sleeping in his bed holding his dad's photo against his chest..with soaked up tears in his eyes..Kt runs her hand through laksh's soft hair..he mummer's "maa.." and holds her hand..
He opens his eyes to expect his mom sitting next to him, but instead finds kt..
Laksh: kt?? tum yaha..
Kt: haan woh--
Eklavya: (from door) kya tum..abhi tak teyaar nahi hue laksh?? jaana hai chalo..
Laksh: (turns and looks at eklavya) ji bhaiyaa..
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After a couple of minutes he came down..

Laksh: ok guys..lets go..
Manthan: oh! finally..lets go..
Everyone goes to the mall..
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Hi guys..i know this is short..but i didn't update for a little while..so i'm writing a short part..but i'll make the other one longer..please reply.. 😆
Thanks!! 😳 👏
Love,
Zinu
😉
Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago

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