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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
great update.. please!!! continue soon.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
great part! please continue soon. laksh is so sweet. 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys..before posting the next part...i though to give a lil summary of all the characters....so here it is.....



Eklavya;

He is nice, but can be mean to save an innocent person's life..he is concerned for all his friends..he is popular, and is an honor student..

Manthan;

He is mostly like Eklavya..but has a bad temper..if he is mad..he dosen't think of his friends, just beats the guy up..but is nice mostly..

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Laksh;

He is sweet, nice..popular! allergic to animals..mostly like Manthan, but not with a bad temper..and is friends with manthan, eklavya, bhoomi, archita, pari, and is getting to know kt..he dosen't have parents since they died when he was born due to an accident, he live with Eklavya in mumbai..he is nice, caring, dashing, hot, etc..

Abir;

well..not much to say about him..he is popular in his own way..he likes Bhoomi..he is nice..but has a temper like Manthan..

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Bhoomi;

She is nice..concering..sweet..honor student..popular, and is friends with archita, pari, and kt..

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Archita(left) and Pari(right);

She is nice..popular..like bhoomi..and is friends with kt..

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Kt;

New to university..has no parents..is friends with bhoomi, archita, pari, and is getting to know manthan, eklavya, and laksh..he is nice..caring..always complete's the task..etc..

IF THERE ARE NO PICTURES..THEY ARE UNAVAILIBLE..OR WILL BE ADDED LATER..
THANKS!! 😉
Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 4

THAT NIGHT..
Laksh is constantly sneezing..still..
Kt cleaned up the dissecting equipment and the frog..
Laksh goes to his bed..and makes it..He goes to his closet..grabs a pillow, and a blanket..and keeps it on the sofa..
L: kt..you can sleep on the bed..i'm sleeping on here..but if you wanna leave..don't hesitate..i'll manage my condition..(smiles)..
Kt: no laksh..you need someone..i mean, just look at your condition..and i'll sleep on the sofa..
Laksh: no kt..(sneezes)..you sleep there..i dont want you to sleep uncomfortably becoz of me..please sleep there...
K: laksh..n..
Laksh: please kt..for me...(sneezes)..
Kt: i don't know..
They hear a knock on the door..
K: I'll get it..
It's Manthan..
Manthan: hi kt..is laksh here..
Kt: yah..(points to the sofa)..
Manthan: (laughs)...hahaha..what happened to you laksh..animal allergy..
Laksh: yah..too bad you don't have it..
Manthan: sorry laksh i was just kidding..
Laksh: i know..me too..duh...
Manthan: ok..soo..u wanna come over to my room for a lil while..o by da way..are u done your dissection project yet..
Kt: we're excused from it..the principal saw laksh's condition towards animals..and he excused us..
Manthan: (shocked) LUCKY!! i wish i had that allergy..
Laksh: Manthan..trust me..you dont want it..I have it..and i'm suffering..(sneezes)..
Manthan: u wanna go to the hospital..
Laksh: no..im fine..unless it gets worse..and turns into fever..remember last time..
Manthan: YEAH!! u were like fainted for 5 whole days..i was worried for you..
Laksh: (smiles) thanks..
Manthan: any time..(smiles)..well u want company over..
Laksh: like i said..ill handle it unless it gets worse..
Manthan: ok..well i gotta start my project..
Laksh: wait..what?! you didnt even start it yet??
Manthan: No..
Laksh: oh ur in trouble..(points at the clock)..its past 11:00..lights out in 15 minutes..COUNT DOWN!!
Manthan: oh shoot..i gotta run..bye Laksh..take care..bye kt..(he leaves)..
Then they hear a knock on the door again..
It's Bhoomi..
Bhoomi: kt..are you coming??
Kt tells her what happened..
Bhoomi: (walks to laksh) awe..laksh..are you okay?? you need something..call me..well kt is here anywayz..but still u can call me..awe..i feel so bad..
Laksh: itz ok bhoomi..thanks for caring but..(AAACHOOOO)...you please take kt..ill handle my condition..
Bhoomi: sorry laksh..can't help you in that..if she says something..she completes it..sorry..
Laksh: itz ok..atleast tell her to sleep on my bed..
Bhoomi: (shouts) KT!! YOU BETTER SLEEP ON THE BED!!
Laksh: holy..she's standing right there..(laughs)..
Bhoomi: Oh..right..well oops..well take care laksh..bye..bye kt..(leaves)..
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LATER THAT NIGHT..
Kt finally agreed to sleep on the bed..Laksh is sleeping on the sofa..Kt is not asleep yet..and laksh is trying to..
K: (in her head)..i shouldn't have slept on the bed..(looks at laksh)..he's feeling so uncomfortable..i'm so bad =(..get well soon Laksh..
Laksh: (in his head)..OMG!! please allergy..go away! i just embarressed myself infront of kt..grr..this stupid science project..
Laksh's condition started to get worse..and he wouldn't stop coughing, and sneezing..it was hard for him to speak..Kt turned on the lights..and walked towards him..
K: LAKSH!! look at you..omg..you have to go to the hospital..
Laksh: kt..i...no...(he can't continue..it is hard for him to speak)..
Kt notices the garbage bin was right bedise him, and the frog was in it..thats why his condition got worse..
K: OMG LASKH..(she told him to get up, and she helped him walk to the bed..she made him sit down on the bed)
K: (felt laksh's forehead) Laksh..you're getting a fever..
Laksh: oh that happnes..
Kt runs to bhoomi's room, and then gathers archita, pari, eklavya, manthan, and bhoomi..she comes and see's laksh bleeding from his mouth, and he is panicking..
Laksh: omg omg omg..no..blood..omg omg omg..nooooo....(he runs to the washroom)..
Everyone is shocked..
Manthan and Eklavya go and call the principal..and come back..
Laksh comes out of the washroom..panicking..
the principle is horrified, and calls the ambulance..manthan, and eklavya go and catch laksh..as he fainted..
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IN THE HOSPITAL..

Laksh has been taken to the emergency room..everyone is worried..the doctor comes out of the emergency room..
Doctor: um..the patient's condition is running critical..i assume there was an animal in the room, and he is allergic..
Manthan: yes doctor..but he's going to be alright though right..
Doctor: oh yes..he definitly will..
Everyone is sort of happy..
Doctor: you can discharge him maybe at the end of the week..
Manthan: why so late?
Doctor: well..you see..there was blood coming out of his mouth..that's a reaction of the animal..he will be consious, in 5 minutes..but you need to get him into a clean room..becoz he cannot live in a room where an animal has been sensed before..
Principal: i'll arrange that..
Doctor: good..um..you guys can go see him if you want..he should he concious now..
Manthan: ok..thanks doctor..
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IN HIS ROOM..

Laksh is consious..
Everyone is happy seeing him gonna be fine..
Principal: (to laksh) laksh..im going to move you to the room beside kt's and bhoomi's ok..?? im sorry..that's the only place left..ill go arrange it..(he leaves)..
Laksh: why another room..
Bhoomi: becoz you can't stay in a roon where an animal has been before..
Laksh: grr..i loved that room..o well..not my fault..
Eklavya: laksh you hungry??
Laksh: pfft.. no..you think im gonna be hungry at night..
Manthan: but laksh..u havent had anything since the whole day..
Laksh: i know..but still..im not hungry..
Pari: ong laksh..i didnt know you celebrated karvachauth..that too..VERY EARLY!!
Laksh: what?? i don't celebrate karvachuth..duh..plus..i wasnt feeling well..or hingry..thats why i didnt eat..
Doctor comes in..
Doctor: ok..lets check your fever...
Laksh: wait..what?! i have a fever...
Everyone: YEAH!!
Laksh: oh no..(whines)..i miss my mommy..(sarcastically)...
Kt thought he wasnt joking..
Kt: well..we could call her here can't we??
Laksh got sad..
Eklavya: no kt..he dosen't have parents..he lives with me in my house back in mumbai..
A tear drops down laksh's cheek..and he closes his eyes..
Kt: omg..(walks to laksh) laksh..im so sorry..i didn't know..im very sorry laksh..please forgive me..
Laksh: kt its not your fault..everyone asks that..and i have the same sanswer as eklavya explained..
Everyone feels bad..
Doctor: ok laksh..your fever seems to be gone..just stay away from animals, and rest for this week ok..
Laksh: yeah..
Doctor: and keep having your medicines..(she leaves)..
Laksh: ok..
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AFTER ONE WEEK...
Laksh comes back to the university..

IN LAKSH'S NEW ROOM..AT NIGHT..

Laksh: omg..these girls next door..(bhoomi and kt)..they're like screaming..URGH!!..plz be quiet..i wanna sleep....URGH!!..(keeps a pillow on his head)...
After a little while..
Laksh: ah..they stopped..(smiles)..finally..yes!!..
He hears a knock on the door..
It's all of his friends including the girls..
Laksh: oh hi guys..wat's up..
Manthan: nuttin much..
Eklavya: same..
Bhoomi: same..
Everyone said "same"..
Laksh: ook.....
Laksh sits on the sofa..while everyone sits around the room..
Manthan: man..this room is wicked..you even got a fridge..omg..
Laksh: i know..i need a key for it..which im gonna get tomorrow..
Eklavya: so how r u doing..
Laksh: good..i guess.....
Kt: so how are you feeling laksh..
Laksh: better..thanks..(smiles)..
Laksh: hey guys..do i have lots of homework..
Bhoomi: no laksh..all the teacher's excued you for this week..and also monday..but u gotta start back from tuesday..
Laksh: ok..thanks Bhoomi...
Bhoomi: No prob..hey guys..tomorrow's the weekend, and so next week is the last week till summer vications..
Manthan: So....
Bhoomi: so..we can all go back to our homes =D..
Archita: oh yeah...awesome!!
Laksh: yeah..its gonna be fun..i guess..
Kt: well im staying here..
Pari: but why kt..
Kt: i don't wanna go anywhere..
Bhoomi: why?? it'll be fun..
Laksh feel's suspicious..
Laksh: you guys don't force her to answer..if she dosen't wanna go..its her choice..
Bhoomi: true..but still..i wish you could..it would be so much fin hanging out together..
Kt: sorry guys..
Bhoomi: its ok..laksh is right..its your choice..(smiles)..
Manthan: well im sleepy..im leaving..pick u guys up tomorrow..we're going to cyper cafe to write mails to our parents..and then the mall...later..bye..take care laksh..bye..
Everyone agree's and leaves..
Bhoomi: hey kt..im guna go to abir's room for a lil while..u can handle right..
Kt: yah..
Bhoomi: great! bye laksh..take care..
Kt: bye laksh..take care..
Laksh: bye bhoomi..bye kt..
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SO GUYS..TELL ME HOW IT WAS..SHOULD I CONTINUE??..PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!!
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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u guys..my next one is a video..so it might take a lil long srry 😆 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That part was soo long. I wasn't following, but I just started reading it today,and it rocks! Why didn't kt want to go with them back home is summer holidays. Does laksh know her past or something. 😕
Well anyways good job on you LONG part. 😆 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: uru_hershey

That part was soo long. I wasn't following, but I just started reading it today,and it rocks! Why didn't kt want to go with them back home is summer holidays. Does laksh know her past or something. 😕
Well anyways good job on you LONG part. 😆 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

lol thanks. im guna continue tomorrow..since i have to make a video on it😆😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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When I read your part, I just start laughing becaise of that animal allergy topic with laksh. 😆
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yah lol..it was meant to be funny 😆 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 5

here it is guyz..wnjoy! and please reply! hey that rhymes 😃 lol..ok enjoy.. 😆 😉

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2FKG4GrNW58

Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago

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