Faasle-ff based on KYPH pt46, 47 END

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#81

sorry, if i made u guys blush, but what can they do-itney dino baad mile hain and now they have confessed their love 4 each other 😉

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cheeselova

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Posted: 18 years ago

#82

awww bheegi ur superb. it was a faboulous part

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sweetmittal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#83

yay they love each other. please continue one more part today. if u can. 😳 😳 😳

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#84

PART 22:

Angad and Tehzeeb spent a few moments in each other's embrace, when Tehzeeb pulled away, "Angad….I am sorry maine yahan aane se pehle tumhey kuch nahin bataaya….yahan tumharey ghar jhooth bolkar rehney lagi…..you have full right to be upset with me…..you can punish me any way you want…." Tehzeeb was serious this time.

Angad lifted her chin with his finger, "Tehzeeb…jaanti ho mujhey Navy mein bahaduri ke liye kayi medal mil chuke hain…..par jo bahaduri tumney ki hai wo shayad main bhi nahin kar paata……cruise se aane ke baad main yeh tho jaan gaya tha ki main tumsey bahut pyaar karta hoon, par mujh mein itni himmat nahin thi ki main apna sab kuch chhod kar tumharey paas aa jaaoon…..I am very proud of you Tehzeeb….you are very brave….iss duniya mein pyaar tho bahut log karte hain, par pyaar nibhaana….bahut kam log kar paate hain…..aur tumney tho itna badha risk liya hai….ek ajnabee shahar mein ek ajnabi family ko apna bana liya…..you are very brave…..," he kissed her forehead.

Tehzeeb had tears in her eyes, "Angad….New York pahunch ne ke baad hi mujhey bhi yeh realize hua tha ki tumse milne ke baad meri zindagi mein aur koi khwaaish nahi thi…..bas apne dil ki awaaz sunte sunte main yahan tak aa pahunchi……"

Angad wiped her tears and kissed his moist finger, "yeh aansoo bahut keemti hain….don't waste them for a guy like me…."

Tehzeeb smiled through her tears, "baat tho theek kehte ho….sab fairy tales mein prince hi apni princess ke peech peeche aata hai…aur yahan dekho…saara kaam princess ko hi karna padh raha hai…."

Angad hugged her and rested his chin on her head, "Tehzeeb…..I am very lucky to have you in my life…shayad bhagwan ne mujhey cruise par issi liye bheja tha…..to meet my princess…"

Tehzeeb rested her face on his chest and punched it with her tiny fists, "yeh batao….tumney mujhey cruise par kyon nahin kaha ki you love me…."

Angad looked down and grinned mischievously "maine tho abhi bhi yeh nahin kaha ki I love you….I hope you are not under some wrong impression….."

Tehzeeb pinched his arm, "Captain aapka court martial kar doongi yadi I love you nahin bola……"

Angad laughed aloud and hugged her tightly, "I did not want you to feel that I was trying to taking advantage of a young, beautiful girl who had just runaway from home…..main nahin chahta tha ki tum mujhey galat samjho….."

Tehzeeb squeezed him tightly, almost suffocating him with her arms, "I wish you had taken advantage of me!"

"Ouch! Tehzeeb…kitni zor se dabaa diya…..now you are taking advantage of a seedha-saadha guy like me….." Angad pulled back.

"Yeh kaam bhi mujhey hi karna padhega…." Tehzeeb pinched his nose and ran to his room.

Angad followed her and saw her packing her bags, "kahan jaa rahi ho?"

Tehzeeb playfully glanced at him, "I could stay back in this room if you want…."

"HI GUYS! Kya ho raha hai?" Mishti was back.

Angad startled at the sudden intrusion by Mishti, "OH Mishti! Mama ka appointment kaisa gaya?"

"Bahut badhiya…Dr Pant is very happy with her progress…..she has responded very well to the chemotherapy so far…..ho sakta hai ki bone marrow transplant ki zaroorat hi na padhe…." Mishti's eyes were moist.

Angad became a little tearful himself and hugged Mishti, "I am so happy Mishti….tumney mama ka kitna khayal rakha hai…main tho kabhie raha hi nahin yahan….."

"Bhai…tumhey itna emotional hote kabhie nahin dekha…..kya baat hai? You know bhai a lot of credit goes to Kripa, "Mishti looked at Tehzeeb, who was collecting all her stuff from Angad's room, "Dr Pant keh rahe the ki jab insaan andar se khush hota hai tho uski body treatment ko zyada respond karti hai….Kripa you have really made our mother very happy…..thanks…." Mishti went up to Tehzeeb and gave her a big hug. Tehzeeb and Angad looked at each other and silently thanked each other for their respective happiness.

Tehzeeb moved her stuff to Mishti's room. Mishti went dowstairs to her mother. Angad just stood there with his arms folded, watching Tehzeeb go back and forth between his and Mishti's room.

"Aise kya dekh rahe ho?" Tehzeeb asked, as she hauled her books and Cds.

"Yahi ki tum apna kaam ab khud apne aap karne lagi ho…" Angad grinned

Tehzeeb took offence to that comment and dumped all her books and CDs in Angad's hands, "here Captain….ek ladki se itna kaam karwa rahe hain….cruise par tho mujhe ek tinka bhi nahin uthaane dete the….."

"Tab main duty par tha….." Angad grinned and carried her stuff.

"Yaad rahe captain ki aap Navy ki duty par ho na ho….meri duty par 24/7 rahengey…. all your life…..get it?" Tehzeeb snapped her fingers and followed him.

"Yes ma'am!" Angad laughed and helped her with the rest of her stuff.

When she was taking her clothes out from his closet, he grabbed her from behind. His hands gradually stroked her arms; he kissed her neck and whispered into her ears, "inhey yahin rehney do please….."

Tehzeeb could feel blood rushing in her veins; her heart was beating faster- his touch sent a tingle all over her body. She moaned softly, "kyon?"

"inka haq hai….yahan rahenge tho tum mere kamrey mein aati jaati rahogi….." Angad nibbled at her ear.

"Mujhey tumharey paas aane ke liye bahaana nahin chahiye hota……" Tehzeeb moaned again.

Angad gently slid her dupatta and caressed her neck and chest, "promise me ….bina knock kiye aaogi hamesha….…."

"KRIPA! KRIPA! Kahan ho tum?" it was Naina this time, 'arre Angad kripa ko dekha hai….mere saath gaane ki practice karni thi usey….kahan gayi wo?"

Angad pressed Tehzeeb with his body, deep into the closet, so that she was not visible to Naina. He stood with his back to his mother, shielding and smothering Tehzeeb with his body, "Nahin mama….wo thodi der pehle shayad aapko dhoondney neeche gayi thi…..mujhey nahin pata wo kahan hai….."

"Tu kya kar raha hai? Aise kyon khada hai? Kuch closet mein dhoond raha hai kya…..laa main dhoond doon?" Naina acted concerned.

"N..N..Nahin mama…..main theek hoon…bas ek puraani shirt dhoond raha tha…aap neeche jaaiye…main abhi aata hoon…aapke haath ki chai bahut dinon se nahin pee…." Angad tried to distract Naina.

"Theek hai beta….masala chai ya saadi?" Naina asked as she left.

"MASALA CHAI!" he shouted back and then released Tehzeeb from his hold.

Tehzeeb was almost out of breath when she came out of the closet. She took a deep breath and laughed, "Captain…you have a lot of skeletons in your closet!" Her face was flushed from being so close to Angad. She could still feel his hard body pressing against hers; she blushed at the very thought and ran downstairs after re placing her dupatta back on her neck.
Tehzeeb was delirious; she thought she was in heaven-Angad loved her as much as she loved him, they both craved for each other equally, they were now inseparable……she was ready to fight the world now……ab mujhey aur Angad ko koi judaa nahin kar sakta…..

Angad came back to his senses after Tehzeeb went downstairs; he rubbed his hands through his hair and thought, "I am so happy….Tehzeeb tum meri zindagi mein bilkul bahar ban kar aayi ho….mauka miltey hi main tumhare Abbu aur apni mama se baat karoonga…..now no one can separate us…….

Angad walked downstairs when he heard someone singing. He saw his mother and Tehzeeb sitting in the patio. Tehzeeb had just started singing this beautiful song:

"betaab dil ki tamanna" from "hanste zakhm"

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-39785.html

betaab dil kee, tamannaa yahee hain
tumhe chaahenge, tumhe poojenge
tumhe apanaa khudaa banaayenge

sune sune khwaabo mein, jab tak tum naa aaye the
khushiyaan thee sab aauron kee, gam bhee saare paraaye the
apane se bhee chhupaayee thee, dhadakan apane seene kee
hum ko jeenaa padataa thaa, khwaayeesh kab thee jeene kee
ab jo aa ke tum ne, humei jeenaa seekhaa diyaa hain
chalo duniyaan nayee basaayenge

bheegee bheegee palakon par, sapane kitane sajaaye hain
dil mein jitanaa andheraa thaa, utane ujaale aaye hain
tum bhee hum ko jagaanaa naa ,baaho mein jo so jaaye
jaise khushaboo fulon me, tum mein yoo hee kho jaaye
pal bhar kisee janam me, kabhee chhoote naa saath apanaa
tumhe ayese gale lagaayenge

waade bhee hai, kasmei bhee, beetaa wakt ishaaronkaa
kaise kaise aramaan hai, melaa jaise bahaaron kaa
saaraa gulashan de daalaa, kaliyaa aaur khilaao naa
hasate hasate ro de hum itanaa bhee to hasaao naa
dil mein tum hee base ho, saaraa aanchal wo bhar chukaa hain
kahaa itanee khushee chhupaayenge

Angad joined them outside on the patio. He sipped his masala chai and admired Tehzeeb's song. Tehzeeb and Angad stole glances from each other during the song.

Mishti also came and sat outside. She was quick to observe the non-verbal communication between Tehzeeb and Angad. She was pleased to see Angad and Kripa paying extra attention to each other. She really wanted Kripa to become her "bhabhi" and she would do anything to make that happen!

…to be continued…..

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sweetmittal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#85

thank you soooooooooooooo much for this part. its so romantic and lovely. continue soon. 😳

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Mani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#86

hey i just started reading ur ff its so cool

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aMbEr

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Posted: 18 years ago

#87

You are a great writer... 👏 👏 ..aayeee haayyeee, I wish I was in the place of Tehzeeb!!! oyeeee...loll.....well continue soonnn

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#88

Thanks Sana, SRK1, Indian cutie and amber. 😊

We would all like to be in Tehzeeb's shoes (women only!!)

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#89

PART 23:

After Tehzeeb finished singing, Mishti came up to her and teased her, "kyon Kripa….yeh dil kis ke liye betaab hai? Wo hi well wisher ke liye? Aakhir uska naam tho bataao…."

Tehzeeb blushed and turned pink. She lowered her head and just shook her head, "Mishti tum bhi na….yeh tho bas ek gaana hai…" Tehzeeb got up and took the empty cups inside.

Angad's gaze followed her, but was interrupted by Mishti, "Bhai! Diwali ki shopping kab hogi? Main ab bahar nahin jaa rahi….yeh rahi list….please le aao sab saaman….."

Angad startled as he was caught staring at Tehzeeb, 'Oh..Oh..haan…sure….laao…I will go…."

"Actually jaa rahe ho tho ek kaam karna….tailor se mere aur Kripa ke blouses le aana…" Mishti purposely threw that in.

Angad was mortified, "K…kya kaha? Blouses…K..Kripa jee ke?"

Mishti twisted Angad's ear, " zyaada bano mat bhai…..main sab dekh rahi hoon….yeh Kripa jee par kuch zyaada hi meherbaani ho rahi hai…."

"Mishti! I don't know what you are saying…..Ok..OK….I will bring whatever you say….." Angad freed himself and picked the car keys.

Just then Tehzeeb walked out of the kitchen, "Aap kahin jaa rahe hain? Mujhey lift de dengey…music school mein kuch kaam tha…."

Angad did not know how to respond, he understood Tehzeeb's intentions, "sure Kripa jee…aapko drop kar doonga…."

Mishti smiled and said, 'jao Kripa…chaho tho bhai ke saath shopping bhi kar lena….uska bharosa nahin hai kuch galat saaman na le aaye…."

Angad waited for Tehzeeb in the car, "Tehzeeb sahiba…aapko bilkul sharam hayaa nahin aati….ek gair mard ke saath khullam khulla bahar ghoomney jaa rahi hain….," he said playfully.

"Gair mard ko soch na chahiye ki ek shareef aurat ka blouse akele lene kaise chal diya…" Tehzeeb hit him playfully as they took off.

Angad and Tehzeeb went to the local shopping area. The whole market was hustling and bustling with festivity. Tehzeeb was thrilled to see all the decorations, lights and fireworks displayed everywhere. People were hauling baskets of fruits, dried fruits, mithai and other sweets. There were idols of different Hindu gods everywhere. She could tell that people spent extravagantly for this festival. The whole atmosphere was so uplifting-it reminded her of the Christmas festivities in New York. She became a little nostalgic, as she thought about her home, her family. She had not called home in the last few days. The excitement around Angad's arrival and Diwali had faded everything else from Tehzeeb's priority list., "main aaj hi Abbu aur aapi ko phone karoongi….kahin unhey fikr na ho rahi ho…"

Angad purchased mithai, fireworks, diyas, candles and idols of goddess Lakshmi, Saraswati and Ganesh.

Tehzeeb had always learnt through Islam that God is everywhere and there was no need to worship an idol. She looked at the earthen idols, but decided to stay quiet as she did not want to offend Angad's religion.

Angad could tell Tehzeeb was lost in her thoughts, "Tehzeeb…yeh Lakshmi hain…Goddess of wealth and prosperity, this is Ganesh….inke bina sab puja adhoori hoti hai….aur yeh hai Saraswati….goddess of wisdom…Diwali par in sabki khaas puja hoti hai…."

Tehzeeb looked at the idols and then looked up at Angad curiously, "and goddess of love? Aap log pyaar ko kyon peeche chhod dete ho?"

Angad had no answer to her question. He looked into her eyes and spoke softly, "Tehzeeb….you are my goddess of love…..I will worship this goddess all my life…," he caressed her cheek and smiled. Tehzeeb touched his hand on her cheek and smiled back with tears in her eyes.

After they picked the blouses from the tailor, Angad said, "blouse dikhao…."

Tehzeeb was aghast, "Angad! Kuch tho sharam karo…bhare bazaar mein kaise dekho ge?"

Angad held his hand out and said mischievously, 'dikhao na….zidd mat karo….let me see what access points I would have tomorrow…."

Tehzeeb blushed at his comment and slapped his hand, "bahut besharam ho gaye ho….cruise mein kitne seedhe saadhe the…."

Angad snatched the bag from her and took out the blouse. He checked it out and gave it back, "Nice color…..chalo I will take you somewhere….."

Tehzeeb was puzzled, but when they reached a bangles store, she knew why he was fooling around.

Angad helped her pick matching bangles. He helped her try them out and caressed her hands and arm as he slipped them on and off. Tehzeeb enjoyed his hands brushing against her skin. Angad savored her soft and slender wrists as he took his time putting the bangles on and taking them off. They were both lost in each other's eyes when the shopkeeper asked, "yeh pack kar doon?"

After a couple of hours of shopping in the market, Angad decided to take Tehzeeb to a place he knew she would revere.

He drove towards Worli, till they came face to face with a beautiful building in front of them.

"Yeh kaun si jagah hai Angad?"

"Yeh Mumbai ki ek bahut pak jagah hai….yeh Haji-Ali ka dargah hai…500 years old, but still standing intact in the middle of the sea…" Angad helped Tehzeeb out of the car.

Tehzeeb was awe-struck with the beautiful mosque. She covered her head with her dupatta and raised her arms in prayer. She closed her eyes and said a silent prayer.

Angad put a scarf on his head and walked along with Tehzeeb, "Tehzeeb we are lucky, we can walk over to the dargah as it is low-tide…..jaanti ho high tide mein yeh raasta paani mein doob jaata hai, tho koi andar nahin jaa sakta….aao wahan chalte hain…"

Tehzeeb looked at Angad curiously, "Angad…yadi tum nahin jaana chaho tho gaadi mein meri wait kar lo, main thodi der mein aati hoon…."

Angad looked into Tehzeeb's eyes, "Tehzeeb….jo tumhara hai wo ab mera bhi hai….maine Tehzeeb se pyaar kiya hai….uski identity se pyaar kiya hai…..tho kya hua yadi hamare dharam alag hain….waise bhi kehte hain ki yadi Haji-Ali mein koi bhi dua maangi jaaye, wo poori hoti hai….I don't want to lose out on such an opportunity….," Angad winked and put his arm around Tehzeeb as they walked towards the holy shrine.

Song in background: "piya haji-ali" from "fiza"

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-2534.html

piya haji ali

khuda apne valiyon se hota hai raazi
milegi ye dar se hamein sarfaraazi
yahaan dil se maango ye haaji ali hain
khuda ke vali hain

shaah-e-samandar ibn-e-haidar
shah-e-samandar ik nazar
piya haaji ali, piya haaji ali, piya haaji ali, piya ho -2
tum samandar ke dhani
baaba haaji ali baaba haaji ali baaba haaji ali
tum samandar ke dhani
baba haaji ali, baba haaji ali,
hai tumhara dar dar mustafa dar murtaza marhaba
piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya ho -2

noor vaale noor vaale
bhole-bhaale bhole-bhaale
noor vaale noor vaale
saaya sab pe daal de
piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya ho -2
piya haaji ali piya haaji ali -2

yahaan hindu muslim sikh isaai faiz paate hain -2
ye samandar roz dar pe deta hai pehra
hai saraapa noor vaala aapka chehra
piya haaji ali, piya haaji ali, piya haaji ali, piya ho -2

do mohammad mustafa ke naam ka sadka
de do naam ka sadka
do mohammad mustafa ke naam ka sadka
de do naam ka sadka

koi bhi maayoos is dar se nahin lauta
baaba koi nahin lauta
kiske dil mein kya chhupa hai sab tumhein maaloom hai -2
aapke faiz-o-karam bhi arsh par bhi dhoom hai
baaba haaji ali baaba haaji ali

suno ham gareebon ki iltija ham par karam keeje
piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya ho -2
aap par saari khudaai naaz karti hai
baaba naaz karati hai
bigadi kismat aapke dar par sanvarati hai
are qismat sanvarati hai
jab talak ummeed meri bar na aayegi -2
zindagi dehleez par aansu bahaayegi
baaba haaji ali baaba haaji ali
baaba jo bhi aapka ho chuka use kya gumaan hoga

piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya ho -2
haaji ali
piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya ho
piya
piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya ho
haaji ali
piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya ho -2
haaji ali
piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya ho
ali
piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya haaji ali piya ho

Angad and Tehzeeb entered the separate chambers for men and women. They both tied a wish thread in the dargah and offered flowers and a chaadar at the shrine. They both felt a sense of inner peace as they came out of the mosque. They looked at each other and smiled; they both knew that their wishes were the same…..their wish threads back at the dargah said the same story………

…to be continued….