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sweetmittal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#91

awesome part and lovely. can't wait to see more lovely part. continue one more part pleaseeeeeeeeeeee. 😉 😉 😉

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#92

here is another part for u guys:
PART 24:

Tehzeeb was quiet on the way back from the mosque. She was overwhelmed with emotion- the shrine itself had evoked a lot of emotions within her, Angad's words still echoed inside her mind. She knew that both of them had accepted each other unconditionally, but how about their families?

"Angad….ek baat poonchu?"

"Hmm….main soch hi raha tha ki Ms baatooni Tehzeeb chup chaap kaise baithi huyi hain?" Angad scrunched up his nose and grinned.

"Angad…mazaak mat karo…...tum apni mama aur Mishti ko kab bataaogey hamare baare mein?" Tehzeeb asked seriously.

"Kya bataaoonga? Yahi ki tum mein aur mujh me kuch chakkar chal raha hai ….is that true? I was not aware of it!" Angad teased her.

Tehzeeb played along, "Kuch bhi tho nahin hai hamare beech…..main kal hi wapas New York chali jaaoongi….."

Angad held her hand and kissed it, "Tehzeeb phir kabhie wapas jaane ki baat mat karna….I will find the right opportunity and talk to them, in the meantime let's just play along," he was serious this time. "Actually Tehzeeb, waise tho meri mama bahut open minded hain par she is a very religious lady. Mere nana ek bahut bade religious leader the….he was a fanatic Hindu you know……unki death bhi Mumbai ke 90's ke hindu-muslim riots mein huyi thi. Mama mere nana ke bahut kareeb thi…..she still has not forgotten how brutally he was murdered. A lot of innocent people had died in those riots, both Hindu and Muslim. Unfortunately, a lot of people who lived through those riots still have not learnt to forgot or forgive……waise tum ne mama aur Mishti par accha khaasa impression jamaa liya hai…..let's give them some more time, then I will talk to them….don't worry!" Angad reassured her.

"Angad….what if I convert to Hinduism, do you think then things would be easier?" Tehzeeb asked

"NEVER!" Angad said firmly, "Kabhie nahin Tehzeeb! I would never want you to give up your identity…..maine Tehzeeb se pyaar kiya hai, Kripa se nahin……yadi kisi ko badal kar pyaar kiya tho wo saccha pyaar nahin hai Tehzeeb…..main jaanta hoon ki aage hamara raasta bahut mushkil hai, par naamumkin nahin…."

"Barriers hamare dimaag mein hote hain….dil mein nahin….am I right Captain?" Tehzeeb smiled at him as she repeated Angad's words of wisdom from that stormy day in the sea.

"samajhdaar ho gayi ho…." Angad smiled

"Angad yeh batao…hamare bacche Hindu honge ya Muslim?" Tehzeeb asked matter-of-factly

The car came to a screeching halt as Angad braked hard, "Tehzeeb saahiba….aap ko bacchon ki bahut jaldi hai kya? I can make sure your wish comes true soon….."

Tehzeeb glared at him, "Angad…..please I did not mean it that way…."

"So what did you mean then?" Angad came close to her and looked into her eyes.

"It was just a practical question Captain…." Tehzeeb caressed his cheek and smiled

"Well…Tehzeeb our kids have to be good human beings first…..aisa karenge ladki ko hindu banaa dengey aur ladke ko muslim….how about that?" he winked and started the car.

"Angad….you are incorrigible" Tehzeeb said

They reached home around sunset. Tehzeeb went upstairs to Mishti's room and saw she had 5 missed calls on her mobile, "Oh No! Yeh tho Ali chacha aur Abbu ke calls hain."

"Haan chachu….wo main ek friend ke saath shopping gayi thi…..haan school ki tho chutti hai par meri friend chahti hai ki main uske saath Diwali celebrate karoon…please chachu can I stay?" Tehzeeb pleaded on the phone. Hussain Ali was a businessman turned politician. He was used to mingling with people of all backgrounds and had himself attended various Hindu functions. He said, "theek hai Tehzeeb…I don't mind par apne Abbu se baat kar lo….he was very worried about you and was threatening to call you back to the US"

Tehzeeb hung up and called her dad, "Hello Abbu….haan main yahan ek saheli ke yahan hoon….unke saath diwali celebrate karna chahti hoon…please don't get upset…..haan Abbu yaad hai…ek hafte mein Ramadan hai….main fast zaroor karoongi….aaj tak kabhie miss nahin kiya hai……nahin don't worry Diwali ki puja nahin karoongi….I just want to observe how they celebrate….promise….waalekum-salaam Abbu!"

As soon as Tehzeeb hung up, she was shocked to see Mishti in the room, "Oh No! Kahin Mishti ne tho nahin sun lee meri baatein?"

Mishti turned around, but was herself engaged in a conversation with someone. She hung up and looked at Tehzeeb, 'Arre Kripa…kaisi rahi shopping? Bhai ne zyaada bore tho nahin kiya na? Angad ki aadat nahin hai zyaada bolne ki….ghar mein sabse zyaada main hi bolti hoon….arre tumhare chehre ka rang kyon utara hua hai?"

Tehzeeb was still fazed with Mishti's presence in the room. She consoled herself, "lagta hai Mishti ne meri baatein suni nahin…..ya Allah kahin usey pata chal jaata tho meri jaan hi nikal jaati…."

Mishti snapped her fingers, "Kripa……kya hua? Kahan kho gayi? Koi yaad aa raha hai kya?"

"Kuch nahin Mishti…..bas apney ghar se baat kar rahi thi….aur shopping theek ho gayi….everything went well," Tehzeeb said absentmindedly.

Mishti was a little puzzled. She went to Angad, 'Bhai! Tumney Kripa ko pareshaan tho nahin kiya na?"

"Maine? Main kyon kisi ko pareshaan karoonga….aur wo bhi tumhari khaas mehmaan ko…" Angad was going upstairs to the terrace to install the lights.

Mishti went downstairs a to Naina, "mama….ek baat poonchni thi aapsey…."

"bolo beta" Naina replied

"Kripa ko is ghar ki bahu banaa le tho kaisa rahega?"

Naina was delighted, "tuney tho mere mann ki baat keh di Mishti…..main bhi yahi soch rahi thi….lagta hai Angad usey pasand karta hai….jab Kripa gaana gaa rahi thi tho wo usey kaise pyaar se dekh raha tha…."

"haan mama…..mujhey bhi yahi lagta hai….bhai likes her, par kripa ke mann ki baat pataa lagaani padhegi….chalo Diwali ke baad jab bhai chalaa jaayega tab poonchugi kripa se…..aakhir wo America ki rehney waali hai…..bina jaane pahechaane wo shaadi ke liye haan thode hi karegi….after all she barely knows Angad…." Mishti commented.

Tehzeeb was in a fix; she wanted very much to be a part of Angad's life, his customs and traditions but also not offend her own identity and religion. She needed some fresh air; she decided to go up to the terrace.

Tehzeeb stood at the edge of the terrace and pondered. She felt something warm and moist on her neck. She turned around and saw Angad standing with some electric cords in his hand, "kyon meri kiss acchi nahin lagi?"

Tehzeeb smiled and teased him back, "bilkul nahin!"

"Oh really? Kahin aur kiss chahiye kya?" He bent over to kiss her lips. Tehzeeb just put her fingers on his lips and spoke softly, "Angad….abhi Abbu se baat huyi thi…..wo nahin chahte ki main tum logon ke saath yahan Diwali celebrate karoon…..what should I do?"

Angad lifted her chin with his finger, "itni bahadur ladki sirf itni baat se ghabraa gayi….abhi tho hamare aage aur bhi badhe challenges hain….Diwali celebrate karna koi paap nahin hai…..but feeling guilty about it is a sin…..chalo help me install these lights…." Angad kissed her forehead and turned around.

Tehzeeb pulled him back and smiled mischievously, "you make everything sound so simple….kuch bhool gaye shayad…."

Angad looked puzzled, "nahin tho…kuch nahin bhoola.."

Tehzeeb placed her finger on his lips, came closer and whispered, "kuch kar rahe the na tum?"

Angad nibbled on her finger gently, dropped all the cords from his hands and grabbed Tehzeeb by her waist. He picked her up, so that they were face to face, "Tehzeeb….tumney mujhey pagal kar diya hai….I am crazy about you…..main Andaman jaane se pehle tumhey apna banana chahta hoon…hamesha ke liye….."

Tehzeeb's lips were now inches away from his; she whispered softly, "main paraayi kab se ho gayi….."

Angad could not hold any longer and kissed her passionately. They were so aborbed in each other, that they did not notice Mishti standing behind them with her mouth open in shock. Mishti did not know how to react; she was thrilled but at the same time puzzled, "Americans sure do believe in fast-food….abhi tho ek hi din hua hai Kripa ko Angad se miley…..but if they like each other, I am the happiest person on this planet, but I don't want Kripa to hurt my brother…..Angad ne tho aaj tak kisi girl ko date bhi nahin kiya hoga….he would be very hurt if Kripa is just fooling around….," Mishti turned around and left.

Angad kept kissing Tehzeeb's lips, her face, neck and ears animatedly, "Tehzeeb…you are so beautiful…I can't control myself…."

Tehzeeb was out of breath, but equally aroused, "Angad….thoda sabr karo…..mujhey aisa laga ki koi humein dekh raha tha….." she freed herself.

Tehzeeb had never seen such passion in Angad's eyes, "aise kyon dekh rahe ho Angad?"

"Tehzeeb…..I need to do something before I leave…," he went downstairs to make a phone call.

Tehzeeb had never seen Angad like that. He was always so calm and composed; he was not even fazed by the storm in the Mediterranean sea….but falling in love had made him restless; the more he got closer to Tehzeeb, the more turbulent his life became….he had always been in control of his life and emotions, but his passion for Tehzeeb had finally broken that shield of self-control in him….and he did not want anyone to restore that shield………not even Tehzeeb could stop him now…

Song in background: "main teri mohabbat mein" from "Tridev"

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-1639.html

main teri mohabbat mein paagal ho jaaunga
mujhe aisa lagta hai tujhe kaisa lagta hai
ho o o main teri nigaahon se ghaayal ho jaaungi
mujhe aisa lagta hai tujhe kaisa lagta hai

kuchh din se main toota toota rahata hoon
apane dil se se rootha rootha rahata hoon
kuchh din se main khoyi khoyi rahati hoon
kuchh din se main toota toota rahata hoon
jaagu bhi to soyi soyi rahati hoon
deewani aaj nahi to kal ho jaaungi
main teri nigaahon se ...

ji chaahe teri aankhon mein kho jaaun
aaj abhi is waqt main teri ho jaaun
kab tak aakhir ham milne ko tarsenge
kab saavan aayega kab baadal barsenge
tu mast pavan ban jaa main baadal ban jaaunga
main teri mohabbat mein ...

tujh bin lab par koi naam nahi aata
dil ko tadpe bina aaraam nahi aata
donon taraf lagi hai aag baraabar ye
rakh degi bas hamko raakh banaakar ye
tu bhi jal jaayegi main bhi jal jaaunga
main teri mohabbat mein ...

….to e continued

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Madiha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#93

Amazing ff!!i just caught up!! the part was fantabulous!! im loving your concept hon!! i love angad's family, and mishty's protectiveness of our bro!! continue soon!!

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#94

PART 25:

Angad ran to his room and dialed a number, "Hello! Shabbir? Hi yaar….I need some urgent help….."

BACK ON TERRACE:

Tehzeeb was still gasping from the passionate encounter with Angad. She ran to her room and shut the door, "humein thoda sabr se kaam lena chahiye…..kahin Mishti aur auntie ko shaq ho gaya tho wo mujhey yahan rehney nahin dengey…."

Mishti knocked and came inside. She gave Tehzeeb a strange look. Tehzeeb's forehead was covered with little sweat beads and she was still panting; Mishti looked at her from head to toe and smiled, "lagta hai jaise koi race lagaa kar aa rahi ho."

Tehzeeb stuttered, "N…Nahin…aisa kuch nahin hai…..wo ek chooha dikh gaya tha….I got scared…."

Mishti had come to get some books from her room; she picked them up and glanced sideways, "pata nahin pehle tho kabhie choohey dekhey nahin yahan….zaroor koi choohiya hogi….they can be sneaky you know?" she winked at Tehzeeb and went downstairs. Tehzeeb had a puzzled look on her face, "kya kehna chah rahi thi Mishti?"

That night, Angad and Tehzeeb tossed and turned around in bed. After the terrace session, they had avoided each other all evening, as they knew that any little touch or eye contact would add fuel to the brewing fire.

Mishti sensed Tehzeeb's restlessness, "lagta hai neend nahin aa rahi.."

Tehzeeb was startled, "Oh! Aisi koi baat nahin hai…. aaj pehli baar ek naye room mein so rahi hoon na…."

Mishti smiled, "Kripa, I am sure bhai ko bhi neend nahin aa rahi hogi….itney dino baad ghar aaya hai na?"

Tehzeeb blushed and hid her face in the pillow, "Mishti…you know your brother better than I do…how would I know?"

Mishti rolled her eyes and said to herself, "Kripa….you are not as innocent as I thought you were….well I hope you genuinely like Angad…..don't break his heart….," and fell asleep.

After an hour or so of tossing in bed, Tehzeeb got up and went up to the terrace to get some fresh air. It was strange to not hear the familiar road noise, which Tehzeeb had gotten used to in Mumbai. She stood at the edge and admired the quiet surroundings; the night sky was clear with no dust or pollution. She looked up at the stars and sighed.

Angad got up and looked out the window. He knew it would be a long night; he had half a mind to wake Tehzeeb, but he knew after his conversation with Shabbir, that he had to wait for just another 2 days…..

Song in background: "karvatein badalte rahe" from "aap ki kasam"

http://www.dishant.com/album/yaaden_-_vol_33.html

Karvatein Badalte Rahe Saari Raat Hum
Aap Ki Kasam ...

Gham Na Karo Din Judaai Ke Bahut Hain Kum
Aap Ki Kasam ...

Yaad Tum Aate Rahe Ek Hook Si Uthti Rahi
Neend Mujhse Neend Se Maein Bhaagti Chhupti Rahi
Raat Bhar Bairan Nigodi Chandni Chubhti Rahi
Aag Si Jalti Rahi Girti Rahi Shabnam
Aap Ki Kasam ...

Jheel Si Aankhon Mein Aashiq Doobke Kho Jayega
Zulf Ke Saaye Mein Dil Armaan Bhara So Jayega
Tum Chale Jaao Nahin To Kuchh Na Kuchh Ho Jayega
Dagmaga Jayenge Aise Haal Mein Kadam
Aap Ki Kasam ...

Rooth Jaayen Hum To Tum Humko Mana Lena Sanam
Door Hon To Paas Humko Tum Bula Lena Sanam
Kuchh Gila Ho To Gale Humko Laga Lena Sanam
Toot Na Jaye Kabhi Yeh Pyar Ki Kasam
Aap Ki Kasam ..

Tehzeeb saw a shooting star in the sky. She was about to shut her eyes and make a wish when someone blindfolded her with his hands and whispered, "your wish is about to come true princess….."

Tehzeeb turned around and hugged Angad, "tumhey kaise pata ki main yahan hoon?"

"Tumhey kya lagta hai ki sirf tumhari neend hi bhaag gayi hai? Well, in that case tum theek sochti ho, kyonki main tho bahut aaram se so raha tha….bas wo toot te huye taare ki awaaz se jaag gaya…." He teased her and hugged her tightly.

"tumney kab se jhooth bolna shuru kar diya?." tehzeeb punched his chest

"Tumhari company ka kuch tho asar hoga….after all you are an expert at lying….." Angad said playfully.

Tehzeeb pushed him away and whined, "yadi mere jhooth bolne se tumhey itni problem hoti hai, tho jao kisi seedhi saadhi sach bolne waali ko dhoondh lo…."

Angad grabbed her waist and pulled her closer, "dhoondh leta yadi yeh jhoothi ladki mera peecha chhod de tho…."

Tehzeeb whispered, "tab tho bhool jao Captain….yeh jhoothi ladki ab tumhara peecha kabhie nahin chhodegi…."

They could not help bringing their lips closer and melting in each other's arms. Angad's fingers caressed her bare waist under her nightshirt; they gradually traced their way up to her upper back. Tehzeeb moaned in pleasure and unwillingly pulled back, "Angad….abhi nahin….mujhey lagta hai Mishti ko kuch shaq ho gaya hai….Good night…." She started to walk back, but Angad grabbed her wrist, "aise chhod kar mat jao…I promise I will behave…..can we just sit and talk? Neend tho hum dono ko hi nahin aayegi….." he pleaded.

Tehzeeb looked into his eyes, "I promise I will fall asleep, if you promise to come in my dreams…."

Angad came closer and kissed her lips gently, "Mere bas mein ab kuch nahin hai Tehzeeb…..I can't make any promises…..Good night!"

The next day was "choti Diwali"-the day before Diwali. Angad and Tehzeeb kept their distance and helped Naina and Mishti get the house ready for the big festival. Angad and Mishti went around the neighborhood and to some of their relative's who lived in town. They distributed sweets and exchanged wishes with everyone. As a tradition, they went to a nearby temple to donate food and blankets to the poor.

On their way, Mishti could not helping asking, "Tho bhai!….kal raat kaisi gayi?"

Angad was taken aback, "What do you mean?"

"Matlab ki itney dino baad ghar par soye the…neend aayi ya nahin?"

"You know I have no problems falling asleep…..I can fall asleep while standing for all you know…..'" Angad smiled

"Oh ya? Unless Kripa is around…." Mishti teased him

"W..What do you mean? Kripa se mera kya lena dena?"

"Bano mat! Maine sab dekh liya hai….chhut par aaja goriye…" Mishti started singing

Angad blushed, "Mishti! Aisa kuch nahin hai….your imagination runs wild as always…"

Mishti saw the blush on Angad's face and she knew that her brother had fallen hard for the pretty Kripa…..now she had to make sure that they were both serious……

Tehzeeb stayed home with Naina and remembered how they did something similar around Eid. Her father had always been a very charitable man, especially around Eid. They would go to various homeless shelters in New York and donate clothes, food and other essentials. They would then visit their muslim friends and distribute sweets among them. She remembered visiting the mosque regularly around Eid. That was one time in the year when she said her namaaz at least 5 times and observed fast like all good muslims.

She wondered how she would pull it off this year. Naina and Mishti would get suspicious,and with Angad gone, she did not want to take any chances. She thought, "main Ramzan mein Hussain chacha ke yahan reh loongi….din mein Naina aunty se milne aa jaaya karoongi…."

DIWALI DAY:

The day started with the traditional "hanuman puja" in the morning. The various rituals the family observed intrigued Tehzeeb. She tried to participate as much as she could. Angad helped her learn some of the prayers and he would keep folding her hands during the prayers, as Tehzeeb would instinctively shut her eyes and hold her hands up in the air, the way she was used to praying.

In the evening, everyone got dressed in his or her best. Misti wore a beautiful green sari, Angad wore a black kurta-pajama suit. Tehzeeb had a beautiful orange sari, but she had never worn one before. Mishti helped her tie it properly. She tucked it well with pins everywhere. She was curious to see her brother's reaction; Kripa indeed looked like a princess in the sari. She left her hair loose, wore beautiful gold earrings and the matching bangles Angad had helped her select.

When Tehzeeb came down, Angad felt his heart had stopped beating for a moment. Mishti noticed that her brother was totally mesmerized by Kripa.

Mishti snapped her fingers, "Bhai! Kya baat hai….mujhey pehle sari mein nahin dekha kya?" she teased him, very well knowing that his eyes were fixated on someone else.

Angad was startled, "Nahin main wo stairs par lights lagi hai na….unhey check kar raha tha…." He tried to compose himself. Tehzeeb giggled a little, as she had noticed how Angad was devouring her when she was coming down the stairs.

Mishti winked, "lagta hai iss saal lights kuch zyaada hi chamak rahi hain….kyon bhai?"

Naina came out of her room and admired her children. She kissed Angad and Mishti, "Diwali ki shubh kaamnaye……aao Kripa tum bhi yahan aa jao…..yeh Diwali mujhey hamesha yaad rahegi…..jab se tum aayi ho hamare ghar mein kitni khushi aa gayi hai….," Naina hugged Tehzeeb and kissed her forehead.

They all went out and lit the diyas and fireworks. Angad was a popular "bhaiyya" among the neighborhood kids, as he always had the widest selection of fireworks. Tehzeeb watched all the kids surround Angad with their fireworks and she was pleasantly surprised to see how comfortable he was with them.

"Yeh lo Kripa….phooljhadi…." Angad handed her a sparkler.

Tehzeeb was scared, as she had never handled a live firework. She had always seen them on display on July 4th in the US, but never been so close to them.

Tehzeeb screamed as the sparkler came closer to her, "Ouch! Angad…please take it back!"

Angad giggled and came close to her, "phooljhadi khud phooljhadi se darr rahi hai….," and took it from her.

Tehzeeb shook her head, "I don't like these Angad…..please keep them away…."

Angad shook his head too, "You NRIs…..bhagwan bacchaye tum logon se…."

"Kripa! Zara andar se candles le aaogi…" Mishti asked her politely.

Tehzeeb glared at Angad and said, "Of course Mishti….after all NRIs candles se thode hi darr te hain…."

Tehzeeb went to the kitchen and looked for candles. She opened the pantry and saw that they were on the top shelf. She tried to reach for them, but suddenly she found herself being grabbed at her waist and being raised higher. Angad said, "now you can reach it Ms chutki…."

As Tehzeeb pulled out the candles from the bag, Angad kissed her exposed waist, "naraaz ho gayi mujhsey?"

Tehzeeb slid down with the candles in her hand and looked at Angad, "naraaz ho kar jaaoongi kahan?" she smiled and kissed his cheek.

"KRIPA! Candles mili ya nahin?" it was Mishti

Angad pushed Tehzeeb and himself into the pantry and shut the door. There was hardly any room in the dark pantry. They stood there like tightly packed sardines with Angad's hand on Tehzeeb's mouth.

Mishti did not see anyone in the kitchen, but heard some squeaking noises from the pantry, "Ahh! Lagta hai Kripa theek hi keh rahi thi….sach mein chuhey aa gaye hain is ghar mein…" she ran to look for Angad.

Tehzeeb and Angad heard Mishti; they tried to suppress their laughter. Before Tehzeeb could open the pantry door, Angad grabbed her closer and kissed her, "aaj tumhara bachnaa naamumkin hai Tehzeeb saahiba…." He caressed her back over the low cut blouse and showered her with his kisses. Tehzeeb cried out in pleasure, but they heard Naina, "bacchon aa jao…Lakshni puja ka time ho gaya hai!"

Tehzeeb and Angad tiptoed out of the closet. Angad fixed his hair and kurta. Tehzeeb did not realize that her sari had come loose.

When Tehzeeb stepped out of the kitchen, Mishti noticed that Tehzeeb's sari was coming off at various places. She saw Angad following her after a few moments, pretending that he was eating some mithai in the kitchen. Mishti understood and said, "Kripa tum sahi keh rahi thi….lagta hai choohey kuch zyaada hi ho gaye hain ghar mein….tumhari sari mein thodi pins aur lagaa deti hoon….abhi laayi…." Mishti went to the room to pick some pins.

Tehzeeb glared at Angad, "kya karte ho Angad? Meri sari kharaab kar di…." She muttered with clenched teeth.

Angad whispered in her ear, "Tum kitni bhi pins lagaa lo, they are not enough for me!"

Tehzeeb took out a pin from her sari and poked Angad's arm with it, "Tumharey liye tho ek hi pin kaafi hai!"

"OUCH!" Angad shouted.

Tehzeeb laughed and ran to join Naina in the puja ghar.

"Kya hua?" Mishti asked Angad.

"Kuch nahin!" Angad gave a dirty look, "bas ek choohiyah ne kaat liya…"

Mishti smiled and they both joined Naina and Tehzeeb for the puja.

…to be continued……

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amna

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Posted: 18 years ago

#95

😆 WHAT A COUPLE OF CHOOHA AND CHIHIYA 😆

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cheeselova

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Posted: 18 years ago

#96

hahahah chuha chuhiya that's funny
anyways awesome part

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Sanya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#97

Bheegi,

This Fan Faction is fantastic and wonderful and I am loving it from the start to the end! your ceoncept reminds me of Soldier which is paused rite now! 😆 😳 Wonderful story line and I am loving it till now!tehzeeb has indeed changed and the story felt like so true, the way your described her inner feelings! Once again Good Job and the best thing is I didn't have to skip pages or go through a lot to get another update! You have been so good punctual writer!!

My fears that tehzeeb's Chachoo might seem them together sometime and will get insecure of Thezeeb not being with Amir? They'll somehow threaten Angad about his mother and to leave her alone!
Misty on the other hand might get the wrong idea abt Kripa if she learns from her chachoo somehow that she'll be getting engaged to Aamir soon and will think She's playing with Angad. Hence will try to through her out when Angad is out!!

Love the way how it's coming along but PLEASE Don't create any problem and Let Misty be aware of whole truth so she can support them two. Not sure abt Naina but she seems positive!

once again Continue this Good FF and I'll read your other one soon... This FF is so romantic 😳 and m loving it!! Angad seems such a gentleman! 😳

love
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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: *Izzy*

Bheegi,

This Fan Faction is fantastic and wonderful and I am loving it from the start to the end! your ceoncept reminds me of Soldier which is paused rite now! 😆 😳 Wonderful story line and I am loving it till now!tehzeeb has indeed changed and the story felt like so true, the way your described her inner feelings! Once again Good Job and the best thing is I didn't have to skip pages or go through a lot to get another update! You have been so good punctual writer!!

My fears that tehzeeb's Chachoo might seem them together sometime and will get insecure of Thezeeb not being with Amir? They'll somehow threaten Angad about his mother and to leave her alone!Misty on the other hand might get the wrong idea abt Kripa if she learns from her chachoo somehow that she'll be getting engaged to Aamir soon and will think She's playing with Angad. Hence will try to through her out when Angad is out!!

Love the way how it's coming along but PLEASE Don't create any problem and Let Misty be aware of whole truth so she can support them two. Not sure abt Naina but she seems positive!

once again Continue this Good FF and I'll read your other one soon... This FF is so romantic 😳 and m loving it!! Angad seems such a gentleman! 😳

lovesanya

Thanks Izzy. I love ur comments. I am not aware of Soldier. This ff is an original story as far as i know. Let's see what happens next

Thanks again

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: *Izzy*

Bheegi,

This Fan Faction is fantastic and wonderful and I am loving it from the start to the end! your ceoncept reminds me of Soldier which is paused rite now! 😆 😳 Wonderful story line and I am loving it till now!tehzeeb has indeed changed and the story felt like so true, the way your described her inner feelings! Once again Good Job and the best thing is I didn't have to skip pages or go through a lot to get another update! You have been so good punctual writer!!

My fears that tehzeeb's Chachoo might seem them together sometime and will get insecure of Thezeeb not being with Amir? They'll somehow threaten Angad about his mother and to leave her alone!Misty on the other hand might get the wrong idea abt Kripa if she learns from her chachoo somehow that she'll be getting engaged to Aamir soon and will think She's playing with Angad. Hence will try to through her out when Angad is out!!

Love the way how it's coming along but PLEASE Don't create any problem and Let Misty be aware of whole truth so she can support them two. Not sure abt Naina but she seems positive!

once again Continue this Good FF and I'll read your other one soon... This FF is so romantic 😳 and m loving it!! Angad seems such a gentleman! 😳

lovesanya

Thanks for ur comments Izzy. I am not aware of Soldier. As far as i know this story is original.

Thanks again

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#100

PART 26:

After the diwali puja, Angad and Mishti touched Naina's feet to receive her blseeings. Angad knew that Tehzeeb was probably not used to that custom; he did not want her to feel uncomfortable, but he was pleasantly surprised to see Tehzeeb bend down and touch Naina's feet. Angad smiled and nodded at Tehzeeb. His eyes spoke to Tehzeeb, "I am proud of you Tehzeeb."

"Kripa…jeeti raho beti….main apne mann ki baat sab ke saamney kehna chahti hoon…." Naina looked at Angad and Mishti.

Angad looked at her mom quizzically, "kya baat hai mama?"

Naina held Tehzeeb's hand and put it in Angad's hand, "main nahin jaanti main kitne din aur jeeoongi, par chahti hoon ki marne se pehle tum dono shaadi ke bandhan mein bandh jao….."

Angad and Tehzeeb were stunned. Mishti smiled at both of them affectionately

"Mama! Lekin….lekin…." Angad fumbled for words

Naina twisted Angad's ear lobe, "Badmaash apni maa se apne mann ki baat chupaa ta hai….main sab dekh rahi hoon…..Kripa beti….tujhey bhi Angad pasand hai na?" she looked at Tehzeeb

Tehzeeb lowered her eyes and hugged Naina. Her silence and flushed cheeks gave Naina her answer.

"Ab Angad…..tu apni Andaman posting se wapas aa ja…phir Kripa ki family se baat karke jaldi hi shaadi ka muhurat nikaal dengey….." Naina said

Mishti hugged Angad, "congrats bhai! Choohon ki baraat mein main bhi naachoongi!"

Everyone laughed and celebrated the rest of the evening. Naina gave Tehzeeb a set of gold kadhas, "beti…yeh maine Angad ki bahu ke liye rakhe the….ab yeh tumhare hain….inhey sambhaal kar rakhna…."

Tehzeeb put the kadhas on and said, "aapka hukum sar aankhon par Ammi!"

Naina, Mishti and Angad were startled at what Tehzeeb just said. Tehzeeb had not realized what she had addressed Naina as.

"AMMI?" Naina was puzzled.

Angad defended Tehzeeb, "Kripa…yeh Amy kaun hai?" he winked at her to make her realize her faux pas.

Tehzeeb came to her senses, 'Oh….auntie…wo Amy is my nanny back in the US…..she has been like my mother all my life…..bas aapke pyaar se mujhey uski yaad aa gayi…..sorry auntie…."

Naina smiled, "koi baat nahin beti….kabhie kabhie emotions mein aakar hum un logon ko yaad kar lete hain jo hamari zindagi mein bahut important hote hain…..I understand….ab jao….raat ho gayi hai…..sab soney jao…."

Angad and Tehzeeb sighed in relief and went back upstairs. Mishti stayed back to help Naina clear the puja area.

When they landed upstairs, Angad pulled Tehzeeb aside, "bahurani…..dhyaan se rehna…..main wapas aakar mama ko sab bataa doonga…..aur phir koi confusion nahin rahega…"

"sorry Angad…I just got carried away….main bhi apne Abbu se baat karoongi…..Eid aane waali hai aur Abbu Eid ke din meri har khwaish poori karte hain…..phir sab theek ho jaayega….." Tehzeeb buried her face in Angad's chest.

Angad stroked her silky hair and whispered in her ear, "kal 3 baje mujhey is jagah par milna…."

Tehzeeb saw a piece of paper in Angad's hand, "kya hai yeh?"

Angad pulled her to his room and gave her a bag, "yeh pahen kar is address par aa jaana…..aur tumhari koi friend ho tho usey bhi le aana…..bahut zaroori kaam hai…..yadi kal nahin kiya tho aur intezaar nahin hoga mujhsey……"

Tehzeeb looked at him quizzically, "yeh kya hai Angad?"

Angad said, "zyaada sawaal mat karo….jaisa main kehta hoon waisa hi karo….bas yeh pahen kar aa jaana…"

Tehzeeb teased him, "shaadi huyi nahin aur aapke hukum abhi se shuru ho gaye…..," and turned to leave.

Angad pulled her back, "absolutely…..ab ek aur hukum maan na padhega…."

"Nahin maanti!" Tehzeeb teased back

"Ok…then I will look for someone else to give my goodnight kiss…" Angad rolled his tongue in his mouth.

Before Angad could complete his sentence, Tehzeeb stood on her toes and kissed Angad's lips, "don't even dare to!" and ran back to her room.

NEXT DAY:

Tehzeeb left early in the morning and went to Harshini's house. She changed into the red sari, which Angad had given her in the bag. Harshini helped her dress up like a bride.

Angad dressed up in a suit after lunch and said, 'mama…main ek Navy ki party mein jaa raha hoon…I may not be back till late…..."

"Kripa aaj kahan chali gayi subah subah?" Naina asked

"wo aaj apni school ki friend ke yahan gayi hai," Mishti answered

Angad and Shabbir waited outside the Registrar of Marriage's office. Shabbir was a lawyer and a childhood friend of Angad's. Shabbir had pulled strings and arranged for Angad to marry his sweetheart legally.

Tehzeeb and Harshini got off a taxi and walked towards the Registrar's office.

Angad admired Tehzeeb in her bridal get up. He whispered in her ear, "welcome my bride!"

"Hello bhabhi…I am Shabbir….now I know why Angad is so desperate to marry you on this holiday….kya kya nahin karna padha mujhey to convince the Registrar to come in specially for your marriage…." Shabbir introduced himself and admired Angad's choice.

Harshini and Angad also exchanged pleasantries.

They did not waste any further time and went inside the office. Soon they were legally married, Shabbir and Harshini being their witnesses.

Angad thanked the registrar, "thanks sir…..aap ne bahut badha ehsaan kiya hai hum par…I know this was officially a holiday for you…."

"Anything for our defense forces, Mr Khanna!" the registrar said as he shut the door to his office.

"Congratulations to the newly weds!" Harshini and Shabbir congratulated them

The four of them celebrated at a local restaurant. Shabbir and Harshini left soon after dinner and left the newly weds with each other.

"Ek baat poonchu Angad?" Tehzeeb asked as they left the restaurant

"Yes, wifey….haq se pooncho…" Angad squeezed her shoulders

"Jab tumhari mama ne hamari shaadi ke liye haan keh di thi, tho yeh court marriage kyon?" Tehzeeb asked

"Tehzeeb….mama ne meri shaadi Kripa se pakki ki hai….par tum tho jaanti ho main Kripa se nahin, Tehzeeb ko pyaar karta hoon…..main apni mama ko jaanta hoon….she will not accept Tehzeeb right away…..I will have to work on her….but in the mean time I would like to work on something else…" he buried his face in Tehzeeb's hair.

"I don't understand Captain…" Tehzeeb blushed

"Chalo…gaadi mein baitho…I will explain everything…..I am going to take you somewhere…." Angad helped her into the car.

Tehzeeb sat quietly and closed her eyes. This was the happiest day of her life; she could not have asked for anything else from her khuda, she was ready to go with Angad wherever he would take her.

Song from "rang de basanti" "tu bin bataye, mujhey le chal kahin"

tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kaheen
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin

tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kaheen
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin

meethi lagi, chakh ke dekhi abhi
mishri ki dali, zindagi ho chali
jahan hain teri baahein mera sahil wahin
tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kaheen
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin

mann ki gali tu phuharoon si aa
bheeg jaye mere khwabon ka kafila
jise tu gungunaye meri dhun hai wahin
tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kaheen
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin

Soon they arrived at what looked like a pier.

Angad helped Tehzeeb out of the car and carried her in his arms, "welcome to your wedding suite princess!"

Tehzeeb held on to Angad's neck and looked around, "paani mein?"

"Yup! Paani mein….waise hi jaise hum pehli pehli baar miley the….." Angad carried her to the edge of the pier, where a private boat was waiting for them.

Angad carried her inside the boat and placed her down on the deck. Angad turned the motor on and stirred the boat into the open waters. Tehzeeb went inside the covered area of the boat and saw a beautiful room. There was a bed in the center, decorated with flowers and rose petals everywhere. There was soft music playing in the background. The incense of the burning candles gave the room a sweet aroma.

Tehzeeb came out and circled her arms around Angad. She kissed his cheek from behind, "I love my wedding suite Captain! I had no idea you were so romantic…" she ran her finger on his face and came and sat on his lap.

Angad spun around on his revolving seat with Tehzeeb still on his lap, "yeh sab tumhari galti hai…..tumney mujhey pyaar jaisi buri aadat jo daal di hai…..I am addicted to it now….mera koi ilaaj nahin hai ab" he whispered softly

"Ilaaj karna bhi mat kabhie" Tehzeeb touched her forehead to his forehead.
The boat sailed on autopilot deep into the sea. There was darkness everywhere except for the moonlit sky.

"Jaanti ho Tehzeeb….is andhere mein sirf tumhari aankhein roshni de rahi hain…." Angad said in a husky voice.

"yeh aankhein sirf tumharey sapne dekhti hain….aur kuch nahin…" Tehzeeb said in a raspy voice. Their lips were glued to each other in no time as their tongues tantalized their inner most feelings.

Angad pulled out the clips from Tehzeeb's hair and let it fall on his shoulders. His fingers unsnapped her blouse from behind as his other hand explored her legs and thighs. Tehzeeb loosened his tie and threw it in the water.

He carried her inside their 'wedding suite' and laid her on the bed. He took off his jacket and shirt and lay beside her. He kissed her face, neck and moved down slowly.

Song in the background as Angad and Tehzeeb became and man and wife that night. The boat gently sailed into the calm sea, as they floated and drowned with the waves of passion all night.

"roshni se bhare bhare" from "Asoka"

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-4780.html

--MALE--
(Roshni se bhare bhare
Bhare bhare naina tere) - 2
Chhooke bole na chhoona mujhe - 2
--FEMALE--
(Sapnon se bhare bhare
Bhare bhare naina tere) - 2
Chhooke bole na chhoona mujhe - 2
--MALE--
Dhoonda hai dhoonda hai tujhe
Aakaash upar tale
Shaayad kisi badri mein
Lipti hui tu mile
--FEMALE--
Aah, dhoonda hai dhoonda hai tujhe
Aakaash upar tale
Shaayad kisi nadiya pe
Chalta hua tu mile
--MALE--
Roshni se bhare bhare
Bhare bhare naina tere
--FEMALE--
Chhooke bole na chhoona mujhe
--MALE--
Chhooke bole na chhoona mujhe
Maine samay rok ke
Tera pataa poochha hai
Mili nadi se kehke
Saagar tale dhoonda hai
--FEMALE--
Haan, lehron pe chalte hue
Paani ke phan chhoote hai
Jaise tere haath ho
Mera yeh tan chhoote hai
--MALE--
Roshni se bhare bhare
Bhare bhare naina tere
--FEMALE--
Chhooke bole na chhoona mujhe
Sapnon se bhare bhare
Bhare bhare naina tere
--MALE--
Chhooke bole na chhoona mujhe
--FEMALE--
Chhooke bole na chhoona mujhe

…to be continued….[/B]

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