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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ploye

Awwwwwwwwwww autumn that was soooooo sweeeeeeeeeeet n touching! Mindblowing as usual! 👏 For me Aman is not aman but I see him as DPS! I loved the way DK were present and aman being the mirror image of his dad! Actually I did you describe how Arya looked like ? I forgot! I am gonna go back to the previous parts and see her description again! do continue soon!!! 😉
You can't imagine how much I miss DK! 😭

😉 komal 😉

Dearie thanks for your reply...I appreciate it very much. Touched by your praises....😳

Ah Aman....yes he has to be everything Dev is, beta jo hain DPS ka.........😳 and also a lot of Kaajjal in Aman...yes...Aman Aaryaa...are going to give us DK back.....😳 Enjoy....😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

First of all I beg everybody's pardon for not continuing lately. Thanks for all those who pmed me and asked me to continue. Sweet of you bhootnis. Going to be a less active as busy with a new job and home. I am sure you all understand.

Well here is the continuation and is dedicated to "My sweet little friend" 😃 Enjoy!

Part 39 Aryaa Kapadia or.....

Aryaa limped on her sore foot, wincing with pain. But this pain was nothing compared to what she had been through her life. Nothing in comparison at all. She froze at the thought and tried to hurry past almost banging into someone. She mumbled an appology and left the building. She saw a telephone booth and rushed to make the call. Important was the word on her mind. She dialed and spoke into it. "Yes this is Aryaa K. Can I speak to Nurse Kulkarni?" After a short pause she continued "Kulkarni madam, sorry to have not reached there, but how much time do we have?" Her face brightened a little bit. But still sad and worried she mumbled "Please I need a week more? Is it okay? But I promise, I shall manage in that much time. Please you know my situation.." Then she hung up with a heavy heart. The day's happeneings took their toll. She came out of the booth and slumped down on a bench nearby and broke down. It was all too much for her.

Dev turned to Kaajjal and looked at the tears flowing down her cheeks. He slowly turned her with a soft look in his eyes and raised her face with one finger and sternly looked at her asking her to stop crying. She smiled through her tears and hugged him for solace, muttering "Not fair Dev sir, you are crying yourself and asking me to stop!" He shook his head and muttered, "Please Kaajjal Kuch mat kaho. Mujhse Aryaa ka dard bardaasht nahin hota." She then broke their hug and cupped his face and softly whispered "Sab theek hoga Dev..sab theek hoga." He sighs and murmurs something.

Aman sits at his desk in shock. 'why does he feel this for her. This anger and then a sudden endearance? What is wrong with him? He walks over to DK's picture and sighs and looks at them "miss you dad, ma... Hey beautiful do have any advise for me? Dad, aap ne kya kiya thaa? Kuch to ishaara kijiye please " and sighs and the phone rings. he picks up the phone to smile 'Kiran. Na na na na na main aa rahaa hoon baba! chachi ma se kehna kheer taiyaar rakhe. Main bas nikal hi rahaa tha" and hangs up. He looks at ma, he smiles and says "Thanks beautiful. Kiran se baat karni hogi..."

She cries for some time wallowing in her grief. She is mindless of the stares people passing by are giving her. She must harden up. This is nothing compared to the pains she has experienced in her life. But the tears flow. As today she had felt the softness of the care and concern for the first time in so many years... that gentle caring touch...and her tears double over. And he finds her that way.

He stares at her shocked to find her huddled and bent crying tears in a public place "Damn it." He curses himself. Was he too harsh on her? He gets out of the car and walks over to her. She senses soemones approach and feels the familiar electricity and looks up as suddenly to see the shock in his eyes. He smoothle covers that shock and mumbles "Aryaa are you okay?" He goes down on his hunches in fron t of her and she wipes her tears furtively trying to cover up muttering "Nothing, urrm I had something in my eye." She uses his handkerchief from earlier on and crumpled it trying to hide her pain and grief. He smiles and shakes his head "Tut tut, ab nikal gaya, jo aankhon mein tha?" He looks directly into her eyes. And is lost in their brown velvetty depths again. she is lost in his loving concerned looks and a blaring horn brings them both back to relaity.

She turns and stuffs the hanky in her bag and make a motion to get up. He too swiftly foolows suit thus they both bang into each other and she accidently puts weight on her injured foot wincing loudly as pain shoots up her entire foot. He grabs her arm breaking her fall and she hangs on to his shoulders for support. His nearness brings out the tingles afresh and she recovers and hides behind her displeasure and anger. remembering the one ultimate truth that she has been hiding ever since she knows his name "Aman Dev Pratap Singh. No, he must never know...never know, not for her pain, but for that pain which he will have. No NEVER. So deciding she limps away from him leaving him confused and shocked by her uncaring dismissive attitude. He pulls her arm and turns her "You sure are a hard nut to crack aren't you? Here you are limping in pain and you refuse to be assissted! Just what do you think of yourself Aryaa K.?" She is breathing hard as he is. Both puffing fiery looks and she them mumbles "Pain! Pain, you don't even know the meaning of the word pain Mr. Aman Dev Pratap Singh! So lets not talk about that. As for me, I have lived with pain my whole life! So don't you preach me about pain. And thank your stars you don't have to come in contact with pain so lets leave it at that! Good-bye Mr. Aman Dev Pratap Singh!" Stressing on the word Dev. she turns and limps over to the bus-stop.

He is left standing there with a strange lost look in his eyes. His cell rings and he answers absently and mumbles something as its chachima. He turns and finds she has disappeared. Her words ring in his head all the way on his drive back home. "Pain...meaning...aal my life....." But most of all her deep velvetty brown eyes haunt him.

Dev and Kaajjal hug each other with sad teas in their eyes, but also a new soft hope shining in them "Yes all will be fine" Dev mutters. He knows ans Kaajjal does that Aryaa will not let their Aman be hurt and in pain. Beautiful Aryaa, one could never have had a better daughter-in-law................. She sighs happily and snuggles closer to her Dev reminescing their fights and then the making up after. Especially the time when she jumped off the ledge and how he proposed his love to her. Yes her Dev sir... her love her life her Akdu. He smiles as he knows whats going on in her mind and he gently lifts her face with his finger Devstyle and looks into her eyes with passion shining in them and knows there will be a replying passion in her eyes with an assent in them........

Preview : Aryaa cries and breaks down again........

Thats it my dear bhootni friends. Enjoy the mystery.

Edited by autumnleaf - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwwwww Autumn ji! I'm the first to reply! Cool! Well I'm really happy you're back with this one too!!!! That was really good! Loved it! But you're gonna kill me with the mystery! What is it that Aryaa is hiding! 😕 I really hope you end the suspense in the next part! 😆
continue soon!

😳 Komal
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Posted: 17 years ago
Autumn once again thanks for this continuation 😳 😳 ....Aww looks like Aryaa had a very tragic life 😭 😭 ...but Kaajjal and Dev r right 😛 ..their son Aman will take good care of Aryaa and vice-versa 😉 😳 ....The same intensity and fire is evident in Aman's character especially when he just grabs her hand 😳 😳 ...Now it will b fun to watch both getting hooked up slowly 😛 ..and mayb Kiran can play a cupid between them 😉 😃 ....and of course the DK running commentry is always there as the Aashirwad on Aman and Aryaa 😳

Fabulous Narration Autumn 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Autumn once again thanks for this continuation 😳 😳 ....Aww looks like Aryaa had a very tragic life 😭 😭 ...but Kaajjal and Dev r right 😛 ..their son Aman will take good care of Aryaa and vice-versa 😉 😳 ....The same intensity and fire is evident in Aman's character especially when he just grabs her hand 😳 😳 ...Now it will b fun to watch both getting hooked up slowly 😛 ..and mayb Kiran can play a cupid between them 😉 😃 ....and of course the DK running commentry is always there as the Aashirwad on Aman and Aryaa 😳

Fabulous Narration Autumn 👏
jyoti06 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Autumn once again thanks for this continuation 😳 😳 ....Aww looks like Aryaa had a very tragic life 😭 😭 ...but Kaajjal and Dev r right 😛 ..their son Aman will take good care of Aryaa and vice-versa 😉 😳 ....The same intensity and fire is evident in Aman's character especially when he just grabs her hand 😳 😳 ...Now it will b fun to watch both getting hooked up slowly 😛 ..and mayb Kiran can play a cupid between them 😉 😃 ....and of course the DK running commentry is always there as the Aashirwad on Aman and Aryaa 😳

Fabulous Narration Autumn 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ploye

Awwwwww Autumn ji! I'm the first to reply! Cool! Well I'm really happy you're back with this one too!!!! That was really good! Loved it! But you're gonna kill me with the mystery! What is it that Aryaa is hiding! 😕 I really hope you end the suspense in the next part! 😆
continue soon!

😳 Komal

Thanks Komal for sticking around. Sigh, lets see what is in store. But rest assured nothing drastic. Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hain! 😛😃😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hai whats wrong with the site 😡 ...sorry for triple posting 😕 😕 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Hai whats wrong with the site 😡 ...sorry for triple posting 😕 😕 😳

Grrrr, told you something was wrong with the site. woudn't open!

But no probs, mishti, felt good your triple booster!!! 😳😳😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Okay here you go "My little friend" the next instalment..

Part 40 - Aryaa breaks down again.........

Aryaa sits in the corner of the bus and dwells on the days happenings. so much had happened and she didn't even dream for agony to strike all in a day's time. First news from the hospital, then finding out that the job was offered by none other than Aman Dev Pratap Singh and then her injury not to mention this strange pull towards him..... Too much. She sighs as the pain in her foot eases a bit but it all comes forward as she worries. Hoe will I managa to raise 50,000/- I have to somehow, I will. I managed to get 40,000, Now I have to get the balance 10,000/- This is my promise to you... and again the tears overwhelm her and unknowingly she removes his crumpled hanky and furtively wiped her tears brimming and threatening to fall down. then she smeeled his aftershave on the hanky and again was lost haunted by his hazel eyes and that dimpled smile. She sighed thinking 'no he will get only pain if ther is anything between us. No destiny can't have played any worse game than this. No I am not for him.. This has to stop. with a promise she gets up as her stop comes and she alights to enter the hospital.

As soon as she disembarks, the break of squealing tires stops her and she falls down on her side. she is winded by the hard push of the car and she mutters. Thankfully the push was not so hard. She is winded though as she hears the familiar swearing words "Damn, are you okay?" and she stares into those hazel eyes which refuse to stop haunting her. His eyes change expressions as quickly from apology to concern and then to shock on recognition. He whispers "Aryaa " with more concern now. His damn does it and she breaks down crying all over again. Why is she so timid today. This is not the first time she is experiencing so much agony. then why? Why does this man have so much power to bring her to tears? She knows the answer, but refuses to admit it. For the time being he swiftly checks her leg for injuries, asking her if that hurts. Though his gestures are mechanical, his hands affect her and she again hides behind anger using it as a strong weapon.

"My my My, the rich man after all has a heart. Why the concern? After all, all you rich men know how to trample every person on the road, then why do you feel bad about it I wonder! You almost killed me! Don't you know that people still have a right to walk towards the footpath when they get off a bus. Or don't tell me you didn't see the big red bus in front of you. Ah let me guess, you must be talking on your cell right. I knew it..." By now all he could do was stare in awe at her fiery eyes spitting out venom and he could see that she was using the anger as a weapon. A small group had gathered around them and all he did was smiled amusedly. He simply winked at her stopping her tirade mid-way and then he sighed and lifted her swiftly in his arms. For a moment she was gaping as if a tornedo had just spun her around in its swirl. His arms felt more like the tornedo and her heart thudded yet again from being so close to him. His chest brushing so close she feared and hoped he didn't hear her heart racing. She looked away then realising where he was taking her, immediately began her tirade again "Put me down you big oaf! Put me down, I can walk by myself! " and then he looked at her silencing her with one look. "I know Aryaa you are strong, but please, please let the doctor make sure you are fine. I will leave you after that. I promise." His gentle pleading and cajoling tone was her undoing. The tears flowed and he looked helplessly at her pained by her tears, for long moments before carrying her into the hospital in the emergency department.

the moment they entered the hospital she tunred white as a sheet. No not here, I hope we don't meet her. God, I hope the doctor doesn't dilly dally for long. She grabs him more hardly around his shoulders and he feels her tension transmitted through to him. He glances at her below half-closed lids and saunters with her towards the bed indicated by a ward-boy. He effortlessly puts her down and while about to straighten, her hair lock gets entangled in the Gold chan around his neck. She winces as her hair are pulled at the roots and he too jerks back low bending towards her trying to dislodge the hairlock. Their fingers touch inthe processs and her head is bent but can feel his electric hazel gaze on her. Boring into her head and trying to see through like an x-ray. He smoothly disentangles it and while she is doing it sees the picture in the chain and all her misery comes back twofold.

Dev and Kaajjal smile at each other when aman gets so close to aryaa. They know it will lead to love only. They know the pain is there too, but they are happy, they trust Aryaa. they touch their heads to each other and smile happy that love finally met love.

He follows her eyes and looks at the picture of his ma and dad in his ma's chain. He knows the story behind this chain, but then gets distracted by her scared and fearful look in her eyes. He is about to ask when the doctor comes and breaks the moment. He clinically checks her and pronouces her to be fine. her wound on the foot, he asks if she gort it from this accident and she assures him and he re-bandages it but not before commenting on the previous opne being a perfect dressing. he prescribes a few antibiotics for better and quick healing and Aryaa murmurs a suitable reply. In her mind dhe thinks, 'i'll be damned if I am going to spend a paisa on medicines for myself. ha, antibiotics can go to hell' aman follows her eyes closely and wathces her closely with narrowed eyes asif reading her thoughts. Out aloud he says to the doctor, "I was responsible for the wound on her foot so I shall bring the medicines" she cuts him "Thank you for your time Mr. Aman Dev Pratap Singh. I will manage, thank you very much." Sjhe grabs the prescription and just then she walks in. Aryaa is terrified. 'No, please let her not see me. Please... God please not now. Go Aman, please leave now.' Aman follows Aryaa's gaze and just then someone else from outside the ward calls her and she leaves and Aryaa heaves a big sigh of relief outwardly showing it. aman doesn't miss anything. He then looks at her and she drops her gaze again hiding. He promises to find out the mystery and with a nod leaves.

Aryaa tries to get up. The doctor asks her to be careful as the wound is still raw and fresh. the cut is pretty deep and will take a few days to heal. he passes her instructions and she nods promising to take care and leaves. She goes out tentatively, scared to find Aman standing somewhere round the corner when she catches her again. 'Aryaa, what happened to your foot." she looks around to make sure and sighing with relief as she dopesn't see him anywhere she turns and says "Ah kulkarni madam, nothing. Just dropped a vase on it. I am fine. I was just about to come and see you." Nurse clicks her tongue in a motherly fashion and acosts Aryaa into her cabin. "Come lets discuss that over some tea. Looks like you need some..." aman comes out of hiding. Hmmm now why does aryaa want to keep this "Madam Kulkarni" a secret? he shakes his head and then gets distracted by his cell ringing. sighing he sees its Kiran and then smiles again. Okay Aryaa two can play the same game. Okay, lady you asked for it and then you know me, Aman Dev Pratap Singh. I am DK's sone for nothing. Okay Kiran here comes your brother. need you to do something love. Here I come ...... and he answers her phone walking towards the car........................

And Dev and Kaajjal simply smile down their love showering their blessings. Both looking into each other's eyes, feeling proud of Aman today. "Bilkul apne papa par gayaa hain, mere akdu jaisa hi hain' And dev smirks again replying "Yes Jaan, yes like me living for his love and life only..."

Preview : Aman is suspicious of Aryaa's behaviour........

Love comes closer to love, But the mystery still continues....... 😃

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