With Love from DK to AA P53 Part - 2 Pg70 - Page 18

Wow Autumn, just wow! Yuor FF is just so amazing! You have brilliant creativity, and skils! Its just too fantastic! I'm crazy about your FF, and so crazy that I'm up till almost 1 in the morning reading your FF when i have to get up early for classes. ut really, its just fabulous. You have added all our giris in here, jyothis tabelagiri, my suicidegiri and now also kajs sindoorgiri~!!! Love it ... Do continue soon 😛

lovely...autumn...the part about kaju...adn..DEv....sharing that tender moment of undertsanding was so powerful...you have done it again..girl....wooww...such beautiful lines...kya likha hai...sachi biook likni chahiye 😊 😊


keep goin 😳 😳

Thanks so much fafi, Kaj, sharna and sammy!!!😳

After today's episode I feel romantic. So lets dedicate this episode to DK themselves and I shall give you something so that you can wait for tomorrow's trillenium showdown!!!!!

Part 14..............................................

Dev brings Kaajjal in and NT asks her whether Dev is troubling her or making her cry. Kaajjal has tears in her eyes seeing the motherly love shining in NT's eyes and she hugs her saying "No, mom, no. We love each other very much. Now you get well soon and come back. Nobody or anything can come in between Dev-Kaajjal, not even God!" Hearing this NT is pacified and asks them to go enjoy. Kaajjal's words have woven their usual magic and she already feels better. She tells Dev she wants to rest at home so that once again she can enjoy being taken care of by her daughter. Dev promises her that just for one day more and then he shall take her home. The nurse comes back in saying that the patient needs rest. They take their leave and NT asks them to go out and enjoy. Dev promises her and they leave. Chachi agrees that she alongwith Ameesha shall remain at the hospital and orders DK to follow NT's order and go out.

Kaajjal stops Dev in the car and asks him where they were going. He sees Karan close by and tells her in a considerably loud voice, "The same place Kaajjal, where we admitted our love for each other." Karan has a very evil look thinking okay they are going to Radiocity, where Kaajjal had forced Dev to admit that he loved her. And he smiles at them evilly and leaves making some plans.

Here Dev notices Karan's every move and knows that Karan will go to radiocity and plan something evil for him. He then takes kaajjal to the same mandir. She says "But you said we shall go to Radiocity?" He looks lovingly at her sweet innocent and lovable face and smiles "Meri bholi si Kaajjal. You are so innocent. I said that to mislead Karan. I didn't want him to follow us and find out the I am really Dev. I want them to believe that he is Raju so that we can expose them and I want to find out why they kept Paayal's exixtence from me and why they want me dead. It is more than property. There is something else. But first things first.....

They pray again and this time Dev takes sinddor from the pooja thaali and fills Kaajjal's maang. He says "Along with these choodis your maang filled with sindoor makes you look like a beautiful glowing bride. I love you Kaajjal and promise to be with you forever." Kaajjal is almost sobbing with joy and Dev hugs her close. They take the blessings of gannubhaiya and leave form there. they stop at the same dhaba where the sardarji asks if bhabhiji is okay today? Kaajjal is confused then Dev replies "Yes sardarji, today iI have my love back, could you please get spicy pakoras and very sweet chai?" all the time staring deeply and passionately at Kaajjal. After the sardarji leaves he explains how he had brought her here when she had gone into shock to reassure her that he was her Dev. Kaajjal smiles and says "Tumhe mirchi pasand nahin hain na, then why do you want to eat it? He replies "For you even poison is like a sweet amrit for me, to mirchi kuch bhi nahin hain" They enjoy and remember those golden momets again and at every passing moment their passion increases and they get restless. They leave and by this time it is evening. They visit NT mom again and are told she is fine and shall be discharged the following day. Chachi shoos them away saying go and enjoy themselves. Treat Kaajjal to a wonderful night out. (By the way chudail has left to go out with Veer somewhere)

Dev looks instensely at Kaajjal and says "Chale?" Kaajjal smiles they go to the car. Then Dev is driving and he suddenly aks Kaajjal to close her eyes and not to open them till he asks her to do so. so she blindly trusting him does as he wishes. He drives for some time and all the while she holds his hand. then the car comes to a stop, and Dev gets out and opens her door and says "Wait till I tell you to open your eyes. I have a surprise for you." So saying he lifts her into his ng warm arms as she weighed no more than a feather. She is miffed but she smiles and waits. He carries her and then gently puts her down on the ground. He the says softly into her ears "Now open your eyes." When she opens her eyes she sees that they are in his beach house in the bed room and it is completely decorated with beautiful blood red rose petals on the bed. The whole bed is decorated with white lilies and rajnigandha flowers. The whole room is lit with fragrant candles and a table has been set close by with a beautiful heart-shaped chocolate cake on it. On which is written "To my loving wife, my love- Kaajjal" There is a beautifully wrapped present next to the cake with a red rose on it. Kaajjal takes in all this and is touched. She turns to him and simply hugs him. "I love you Dev, and can't live without you. Now if anything happens I shall...." Dev stops her tirade with his lips. For minutes they are lost in each other. The candles are flickering with the gentle breeze and casting a magical shadow on the walls. There is a soft whisteling of the wind and the crashing sounds of the waves coming from the sea. But they are oblivious to the sounds surrounding them. Dev exists only for Kaajjal and Kaajjal only for Dev.

After long moments they pull apart. He brings her lovingly near the table and asks her to cut the cake. But she insists that he hold her hand. He smiles passionately down at her and goes behind her and leans over her shoulder ever so suggestively that she blushes. He softly laughs at her blushing after all this but he holds her hand and they cut the cake. They are hardly looking down at the cake, they have eyes only for each other.

Then Kaajjal puts a small piece of cake to his mouth. He bites it and at the same time pulls her close so that she can bite it at the same time from the other end. Their lips brush again and Dev almost tastes the cream on her lips when she shyly pulls back whispering "Dev...."

Dev laughs that reverberating laugh again and softly speaks her name "Kaajjal... " and brings her close into the warm cirlce of his arms. He then takes the present and hands it to her "Please wear this for me." so she takes it in her hands and leaves to change. He drags his hands through his hair as if gain some control of himself. His whole being is burning with a strange desire.

A soft noise behind him indicates her return and he closes his eyes and turns ever so slowly to see her. Then slowly he opens them to find her standing there, an epitome of beauty personified. There she is standing for him and him only dressed in a blood red chiffon saree. the sindoor and the bangles add a very pretty look to her attire as if complimenting her ethereal beauty. He slowly moves near her and she shyly but with a promise takes herself towards this man who means the world to her. then he slowly takes the saree pallu and places it on her head to make a ghunghat. He walks her towards the bed and then slowly raises her ghunghat as if it were their suhaag raat. she is shy and a bit scared. Her lips tremble with the love and passion mirrored in his eyes.

He then lowers his lips towards her eyes. 'i can drwon in your eyes Kaajjal. I am lost and never want to be found again." she breathes faster at every word he speaks and draws a long breath to steady her racing heart. But then again his lips play their magic and her heart races even more faster than before. His lips are on her cheeks and near her ears. They slide down to the sweet curve of her neck and he breathes in the essence of her. She brings her hands around his hard broad back and digs her nails in them. As she feels his kiss she quickly brings her hands around his neck to pull him a bit away as she has to breathe. She has stopped breathing and is gasping for breath from his passionate gestures. He is fast losing his sanity and control. He wants to ravish her as if there was no tomorrow. he hugs her hard as is to gaincontrol back. But she looks at him beggingly mirroring his passion and hunger and the last shreds of sanity are in tatters and he lovingly looks at her unvoiced plea with a promise.

He then lifts her and ever so slowly lowers her on the bed looking deeply into her eyes and asking a silent question. He knows that the reply is going to be there waiting for him and he finds it in her eyes equally filled with the drugging and intense feeling of their love for each other.

The wind as if being an element of help to Kaajjal's shyness blows out all the candles and they are lost in each other united for ever once again as one, with not even air in between them............................

Oh Wowww looks like the entire forum is in romantic mould today 😛 ..wonderful part Autumn 👏 enjoyed reading it 😳 😳 ..so finally u introduced sindoorgiri in your part..great 😛 😛 ...and really loved the cute dialogues between DK and also the cake scene 😳 😳 ..and the DK dialogues r just sooo passionate ..uff i can feel the heat in my A.C room 😆 😳 😳 ..need to go for a cold shower i guess 😉 😛

Do continue soon Autumn 😳

It just cant get mpore romantic..sexy..passionate..shivering than this..autum..you have given me a high high fever..uffff..You are superbh..is all I cna say..I am tired of finding you a befitting word..!!
Love-hema

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Oh Wowww looks like the entire forum is in romantic mould today 😛 ..wonderful part Autumn 👏 enjoyed reading it 😳 😳 ..so finally u introduced sindoorgiri in your part..great 😛 😛 ...and really loved the cute dialogues between DK and also the cake scene 😳 😳 ..and the DK dialogues r just sooo passionate ..uff i can feel the heat in my A.C room 😆 😳 😳 ..need to go for a cold shower i guess 😉 😛

Do continue soon Autumn 😳

Very true jyoti, today the whole of Kaajjal forum is drowned in pasiion waiting for all the fireworks that will come tomorrow. 😉

thanks so much as ever!!!😳

Originally posted by: LOVE_APURVA

It just cant get mpore romantic..sexy..passionate..shivering than this..autum..you have given me a high high fever..uffff..You are superbh..is all I cna say..I am tired of finding you a befitting word..!!
Love-hema

Oh its nothing Hemadi. Thanks for your appreciation. your simple words are more than any flowery thing really!!!! 😳

Originally posted by: haseeb18oct

it is really amazing!!!!!!!!!! i was trying to picture dev and kajjal in their passionate moments; i think u should take over writing the scripts for the serial because seriously that's what we want to see....way to go!!!!!!!1

I am touched, thanks.

WOW!!!!!! Omg, Hot hot hot hotttt!!! My cheeks and ear is just burning red from the passionate scene! WOw, So incredible ... The mandir scene, the sindoorgiri, the beachhouse, the cake .. the present ... everything. SO passionate and steamy! Just mindblowing. Please continue soooooon! 👏