With Love from DK to AA P53 Part - 2 Pg70 - Page 16

Soooooo sorrry bhootnis for making you all wait for so long, but had a verrrry busy time with family and as i keep saying they are the wrold to me. But now finally for this very special bhootni family too here is the next part.......

Part 12.......................................................... .....

Dev and Kaajjal reach the clinic but Kaajjal can't seem to lift her feet. she prefers to wait outside the room so that she can give Dev a few private moments with his wi..... She can't even bring herself to think of anybody other than her to be his wife, but with a very heavy heart she holds Dev's outstretched hand and goes in with him. she is shocked to a standstill.

Right there on the bed she sees her. Dev too realises that he should have warned her but its too late. He aqueezes her hand, but Kaajjal is too shocked to recover. There on the bed is Paayal, now dead to the world. Inspite of her condition she is beautiful. Even more beautiful than herself. How can Dev not love her. But Dev has eyes only for her, even now. But more shocking is the girl sitting next to Paayal. What is she doing here? Kaajjal does not realise that she spoke the words out loud and she turns her head but with tears in her eyes. she runs to Dev and hugs him. Dev consoles her saying "Please don't cry Chameli, please. She has gone we can't bring her back but please don't hurt her soul by crying. After all she was your only sister and your only family.

All the time Kaajjal is listening to all these new revelations and her mind is spinning from it all. Chameli Paayal's sister? But earlier on chameli tied a rakhi to her own brother-in-law, why? She is so confused that she remains silent and quiet. Then Chameli raises her head from Dev's shoulder and faces kaajjal. "I am very sorry for all the pain you have had to go through all this time. We owe you an explanation, " Kaajjal stops her by putting a comforting hand on her shoulder. "No Chameli, all the explanations can come later. Now is the time to take Paayal to her final destination. We must hurry before those two evil persons know about this all." Dev too agrees and he goes near Paayal and for one last time pays his final respect to her by simply standing near her feet and asking for forgiveness. "I know you have loved me and only me, but today I am your culprit, please forgive me as I could not fulfill my wedding vows and give my love to you completely. I am not ashamed in anyway to admit to you that I love Kaajjal more than anything or anybody in my life but I am sorry to have put you through all this pain. I hope you will forgive me."

Kaajjal gets tears in her eyes for Dev and his sorrow and pain but is very happy in her hearts to realise that Dev is hers and hers alone. She goes near him and she too folds her hands asking for forgiveness on behalf of Dev. chameli sees this and smiles at their selfless and undying love for each other. She puts a hand on Dev's shoulder and they all leave from there. Chameli and Kaajjal wait while Dev arranges for Paayal's funeral and with the help of the clinic wardboys manages to set it all up and in the early day break they send Paayal to the final leg of her journey.

Dev breaks down then as if cleansing away his mind of all the memories he had with Paayal. But when he closes his eyes he cna see only Kaajjal. He realises that Paayal has forgiven him and all ties with her have been severed. chameli too breaks down crying and Kaajjal hugs her consoling her with comforting words. finally all is done and the pandit gives Dev the Asthi kalash. Chameli takes it from him and thanks Dev for everything and leaves. Dev lets her do that and bows his head asking her to forgive him but she stops him saying "No, you have suffered enough. All this time you have endured more than your share of sorrow, now its their turn." she leaves with a vengeance.

Kaajjal puts a loving comforting hand on his shoulder. He turns and takes her in his arms and cries "I love you very much Kaajjal, please promise never to leave me!!!!" and he breaks down crying and sobbing on her shoulder. she comforts him and they leave from there.

On reaching home, Dev tells Kaajjal that please don't let anybody know about anything, as nobody but K-A and us know about Paayal. Sha nods her head and they both silently enter the house and go into their rooms.

Preview...................................

NT mom is shocked and is hosptalised................

yaayy.. u finally continued... 😛 😛 amazing part!!! 👏 👏 oh how beautifully u expressed each and every persons feelings is just mind blowing!!
cont soon!!
lol i just kind of get confused between ur other ff and this 1.. so i just wanna make sure.. ameesha and karan are not caught yet right? i think that was in the other ff.. 😕 😳 oh and payal was long dead or did she recently die? so was she kidnapped my k-A? sry.. im just really confused in ur 2 ffs.. 😆 😆 😆
amazing job tho!!! cont soon 😉

Wow, autumn, again, i have nothing more to say to compliment you with on your outstanding masterpiece! You are an amazing writer, and i can picture every scene!!! Just love it! Please continue soon

Thanks a lot Simi and sharna. Now lets see what those superheads have in store for us on Monday!!!!

Simi yes you are confusing my two FF's. No K-A have not been exposed as yet and the previous FF had Dhruv and Ameesha as villains. That reminds me I have to build that story further too. Uffff, it is hard work, but anything for you bhootnis!!!!

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Thanks a lot Simi and sharna. Now lets see what those superheads have in store for us on Monday!!!!

Simi yes you are confusing my two FF's. No K-A have not been exposed as yet and the previous FF had Dhruv and Ameesha as villains. That reminds me I have to build that story further too. Uffff, it is hard work, but anything for you bhootnis!!!!

Hahaha, Autmn, simi isnt the only one getting confused between your FFs i am too! Vaise, when are you gonna continue that FF too? I loved that one also 😃

Hey Autumn just superb part 👏 so finally payal had her funeral and is away from dev's life forever 😃 but chameli is payal's sister 😕 thats a very interesting twist 😉 😛 ..but anyways as long as DK r together and we get to see lots of romantic stuffs in your FF,i won't complain 😳 ..i really loved the understanding that both dev and kajal showed over the paayal issue 😊 ...very well written Autumn 👏 👏 👏 now continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Hey Autumn just superb part 👏 so finally payal had her funeral and is away from dev's life forever 😃 but chameli is payal's sister 😕 thats a very interesting twist 😉 😛 ..but anyways as long as DK r together and we get to see lots of romantic stuffs in your FF,i won't complain 😳 ..i really loved the understanding that both dev and kajal showed over the paayal issue 😊 ...very well written Autumn 👏 👏 👏 now continue soon 😳

Sure thanks Jyoti. I will soon tomorrow!!!!

Thanx!
I loved it!
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Originally posted by: cool_rashi

Thanx!
I loved it!
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Welcome rashi..........😊

Okay, here's more romance!!!!! Lucky for some unlucky for others....... but lucky for me - Part 13 ......................................................

Kaajjal is still thinking all about Paayal and Chameli being sisters and has a million questions unanswered, but the very fact that Dev loves only her puts a skip in every step and happiness surrounds her even in the time of such profound sadness. She looks at life and Dev's love with a renewed outlook. She promises herself that she will always remain with Dev as his shadow. She prays to Gannubhaiya for the longitivity of their love.

Dev gets dressed and comes down with a big weight lifted off his shoulders. At last Paayal is free and he is free from all those entangling emotions. He can now express his love without feeling guilty to Kaajjal and he also owes her an explaination.When he joins them all at the breakfast table, he is stunned to see Kaajjal looking pretty in the same dress that he had bought for her when her dress had got muddy from the splash of his car. He can't seem to get his eyes off her nor she from him. NT mom stares at the two of them and says "Ahem, ahem. I know that the two of you are in love but we too are there on the face of this earth." She laughs when Dev gets a bit awkward and Kaajjal smiles looking down blushing.

All laugh and Veer whispers to Dev "laga raho dev, you are going the right way!!!" Dev smiles but then on seeing Veerbhai so happy is once again saddened thinking of the fact that so much sadness is in store for this very nice hearted loving brother of his. His own elder brother and his very own wife are .......😡😡😡 Kaajjal sees this and prays to Ganubhaiya asking him to bless Dev and give him the strength to fight evil for the sake of good. Let truth prevail.

She is praying in the prayer room and has tears in her eyes when she remembers her past and the trauma when Dev walks in and sees it. He gently takes her in his arms and says "I have to tell you else I will lose my mind and not have any peace. Please Kaajjal we have to talk. So much there is that I have to tell you and ........." Kaajjal stops him "Not here. Someone might hear." But he goes on. "Kaajjal you know that I love you and not Paayal. Chameli is Paayal's sister. She left her house as she fell in love with Sonu and he was not as well off as her family. She broke ties with her family. Her father died as he could not bear the fact that she left. Paayal and I got married soon after that as we were already engaged, but after Paayal's so-called death her mother too passed away. I didn't meet Chameli at all. But Paayal did mention that she had a sister and her name was Kangana. She changed her name. But anyways after that day when I admitted my love for you I was coming back after dropping you, I heard Ameeshabhabhi talking with someone about Paayal. I was shocked. Then when she mentioned me being killed, I was very curious and took the oppurtunity of my accident to find out everything. But believe me Kaajjal I didn't know then that Paayal was alive, and had I even known then too you would always be there for me first and foremost. Paayal being alive would......" Dev stops as he suddenly hears NT mom's shocked "What?!?!? Paayal is alive?" They both turn and are shocked to see NT mom standing there touching her head as if it were spinning. Dev rushes to her and catches hold of her before she can fall down. "Mom are you okay? Please mom say something. " NT mom asks him "Dev is it true that Paayal is alive? I heard you say something to Kaajjal about Paayal being alive? Answer me Dev!!" Dev shuts his eys and says "No, mom, Paayal is not alive but she was and ..." NT mom is shcoked and faints. "Mom, mom, Dev shakes her but Kaajjal then rushes to the phone and calls an ambulance and she is hospitalized. Dev is frantic.

In the hosapital Dev and Kaajjal alongwith chachi, Veer and K-A all are worried. K-A are worried for another reason altogether. They has found no traces of Paayal. They have no clue as to how she could disappear into thin air overnight. The clinic people are not co-operating and they can't do anything officially as Paayal is supposed to be dead.

And Dev is worried for NT mom. The doctor then comes out and says "She is stable now, but no stress or else........" Dev asks if he could see her and the doctor allows him alone. Kaajjal puts a reaasuring hand on is shoulder and he looks deeply into her eyes drawing strength from them and he goes to meet his mom.

"Mom" he looks down at her and takes her hand in his. "Please mom get well soon. Paayal is no more mom. Please I need you to be there in my life for me. Please mom, please don't leave me." He bursts out crying sobbing on her hand. She then speaks "Please Dev, don't cry. I can't bear to see you crying and sad. Be happy always. And don't hurt my Kaajjal ever. She is more like my daughter. Don't ever bring Paayal in between you and Kaajjal no matter what happens. Promise me Dev, Promise me." So Dev albeit with tears in his eyes smiles at his mom and promises "I promise you mom. I love Kaajjal very much. I shall never bring tears in her eyes. But I love you too mom and need you. You too must promise me that you shall always be there for me." NT mom smiles at Dev and runs her hand lovingly over his hair and head. And Dev puts his head down on her stomach and hugs her. NT mom lovingly consoles him and closes her eyes satisfied. She then asks Dev to bring Kaajjal in.

Preview : Dev fills her maang with sindoor....................................