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Posted: 18 years ago
PART SIX(last part)

they didn't know for how long... they both were just standing in the terrace... in eachother's arms... they just stood there savouring the moment...making up for 6 years they missed being together...

" kripa..." angad siad... slowly pulling away...

" hmmmm..." she said... and looed ito his eyes... he slowly rubbed his knuckle over her cheeks...

" how did you...when did you...? i mean.. i thought you were mad at me..." he asked...

" i was... i am... (sigh) simone came to meet mee 3 years ago...adn she confessed everything..." kripa answered... and played iwth teh buttons of his shirt...

" 3 years ago?" he frowned at her... " why didn't you even try to ocntact mee... or meet me??" angad demanded...

" i was still mad at you... " kripa said softly.. " i have always been loved and pampered by everyone... and specially ou never yelled at me... you were always calm... even when i broke your nose you weren't mad at me... and that day you just yelled at mee before even knowing why i slapped her..." kripa said fiddling with the tie and staring at teh buttons of his shirt... " and i also wanted to see if you find another girl... in my absense..." kripa said sftly...

angad raised her head with his index finger... and kissed her forehead... " now you got your answer?" he asked... when kripa nodded... he sighed... " i am sorry fro yelling at you... i promise i will never yell at you again..."

" and if you do?" kripa asked...

" you can give mee nay punishment..." angad said...

" Okkie!!" kripa giggled...

they both just looked at eachother and hugged eachotehr tightly..." i love you...kripa"

" i love you tooo...angad"

they pulled away... and angad dug into his pocket... " i believe this belongs to you..." angad said... and slipped a ring through her finger... " i opened that box... adn found this ring and that note... i knew you would come back... so i kept it with mee soo i can give it to you... whenever o wherever i meet you next..." he said and catching her hand... he rubbbed his thumb over the ring and kissed it...

kripa was staring at him with teary eyes... she cupped his face and kissed him...

" if you guyss are done with teh kisses can we go down??" josh said irritated...

angad and kripa looked towards josh adn laughed... angad put his arm around kripa and both walked down with josh...

" soo everything okay?" yash asked...

when angad and kripa nodded... yash hugged both and grabbed teh phone... " hwta are you doing dad?" angad asked...

" oh just calling panditji... soo we can fix all three of you's wedding together..." he said... he patted angad's cheek...." secially you two... i need to get you two married as soon as possible... " he sighed when the phone was busy...

" dad its really late at night... lets call tomorrow...."angad said...

" yeah...okk..." everyone retired to their rooms...

" uhhh... mom...dad....uncle aunty... can i take kripa out?" angad asked unsure...

" at this time?" they asked...

" yea..." he said...

" sure beta..." dev laughed at his nervous face... he grnned broadly... and dragged her by her waist...

they both sit on his car... and drive offf...

EPILOGUE

2 years later

" tomorrows your first anniversaries..." ria, josh's wife shrieked...

" yea..." kripa answered...

" oh our first anniversary was long gone..." alliyah said... feeding little rahul...

" and second anniversary tooo..." kripa said... picked rahul form alliyah's lap and put him in her lap...

rahul clapped his hand and said... " kipa will give me chaukeyt(chocolate)..."

" sorry rahul... no chaukeyt(chocolate) today..." kripa said... when he made a sulking face... she sighed... got a chocolate out of her purse and hand it to him...

" YAY!!" and he ran to his dad's room... while alliyah sighed..

" you've spoiled him completely..." alliyah said...

kripa shrugged...

" soo when are you guyss plannign to start a family?" alliyah asked...

" i dont know..." kripa answered... plopping a candy in her mouth...

" i am not having a baby for another two three years... josh and i both agree on that..." ria answered...

*****

" hey..." angad said throwing his suit away... he looked at kripa who had teh slightest clue he was there... without changing he slid on the bed... with teh sudden vibration kripa came out of teh trance... she slowly leaned onto him...and put her head on his stomach... " whats teh matter?"

" nothing..." kripa siad...

" its out first anniversary tomorrow..." anagd said caressing her hair...

" yea.... cant believe i put up with you for a whole year..." kripa giggled...

" yea yea you put up with mee..." he rolled his eyes... " you were teh one to tolerate those tantrums...--"

" jokes apart... tell mee what do you want for gift?" kripa said...

" you... me... forever..." he said and kissed her head...

" that..." kripa said... "...i dont have to give you... we'll alwyas be together...but i have a surprise fro you..."

angad raised an eyebrow... before he could open his mouth... kripa said... " if you pressurize me to spill it out today... you're not getting it at alll!!" she said... angad frowned...

" fine..."he said... " nw get up and let me change..."

kripa frowned... " you dont ahve to be mad just cuz i didn't tell you teh surprise..." she left him.. sulking she got to her side of teh bed and dropped... she turned teh other way... and closed her eyes...

" kripa..." angad turned to her... he still hadn't changed... he put his arm around her and turned her to her back... he put his one arm around her and kissed her slowly... " sorry..." he said...

kripa sighed... how can someon resist that kiss...? that sorry...? " its okk..." she said...she put her hand around his neck and pulled him down to meet her lisp with his again... then slowly parting... she looked into his eyes... she took his tie off and threw it on teh floor... she brought him down on top of her....completely... " how about you make love with me tonight...?" she asked in a whispered...

" not a bad idea... " angad said... he unbuttoned his shirt... and leaned onto her... kissing softly...his hands peeling off her nighty nad pulling it off her head...


kripa adn angad were lying in eachothers arms...breathing unevenly... they both just couldn't go back to sleep... they both watched the second-hand move... 1 minute to 12... slowly it touch 12... angad rolled and had kripa on top of him... the sheet wrap against their waist... " HAPPY FIRST WEDDING ANIVERSARY!!" angad said...

" HAPPY FIRST WEDDING ANNIVERSARY TO YOU TOOO....!!" kripa said... she elaned and kissed him... slow adn soft... then kripa put her head on his chest and close her eyes... letting angad pamper her, love her again...


" can i have my surprise now?" angad asked... kissing her throat...

kripa sighed... she sat up... when anagd tried to sit up too... kripa just took his hand onad pressed it to her stomach... he looked at her confused... she rolled her eyes... and with her both hands... she brought his head to her stomach and pressed his ears to her stomach... first he was confused... but then suddenly he got it... " you... i... baby?" he asked...

kripa laughed..he looked soo shocked...soo pleased....soo excited... kripa nodded... he looked at her stomach again... and hugged her aorund teh stomach burrying his face in there... while kripa caressed his hair...

suddenly he jerked his head up and captured her lips... he let go adn cupped her face... " WE'RE HAIVNG A BABY!!!" he screamed all of a sudden... he started kissing her all around her face... while kripa just laghed... " this is teh best gift ever...." he gave her a big kiss on the lips..." i am going to be a father!!!!...we...we...we are going to be parents...." and hugged her... " i am sooo happy!!!! thankyou kripa..." he kissed teh sideof ehr head... her neck...

kripa just smilefd through her tears.... this was probably teh happiest day of her life...teh happiest thing ever happened in her life... besides her marriage with angad...😉

okk thats teh end... i hope you guyss like it!!! hey guyss comeon its reached pg 18... plss help me reach pg 20... pls p ls pls

Edited by MUNNIBABA2007 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hun,

i loved it, i hope you write another ff, u always write very interesting and cute ff's, do write more, my love them, and for this ff, it rocked, i loved it.....i read it twice...but i hadnt been able to comment...for some reasons..but u did a lovely job...do write more ff's...lots of love and best wishes to future ff's...sukhi 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
btw lovely update once again, and can you believe it, i was FIRST....muahhaha....sorry but im very kiddish..... 😳

you deserve a round of applause for all your hard work.... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWESOMEE ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

great work... oh i really need to yell at you...soo i am coming on msn to scaream at you for not helping mee!!!!!

meet you in a while...

anywayss great story... do write more
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part.angad was going crazy wen he heard he was having a child 😆


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sana
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg....it was sooo gooood!!!!!!! im so mad its over tho. 😭 if u can get on msn i need 2 talk 2 ya but b4 dat check ur inbox, kay? thanx....

but besides dat, i loved da ending to dis.

it was sooooooooooooo cute....! 😃

im lookin forward to ur next...

<3 kiran
E> GA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 today read all missed parts dear its miondblowing ending 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Excellent Job!! Are you gonna ryte some new FF just like this one?? I'll be waiting!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey dear u finish this ff soon but its ok as u r going to start the new one. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee start soon. by the way this story was really good. and romantic parts.

mittal
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome endinggg munni!! it was fab!! angad goes you i baby!! lmao!!! so cutee!!! lookin forward to your new story!!

&& I havent done these claps in a long while, consider yourself lucky 😉

👏


<3 Madiha

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