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Posted: 18 years ago
alright i have 2 admit that i have not stopped lauging since i have read the last 2 parts.
i bet the meeting will b more hallrious.
funny part
countinue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part... cnt wait for da dinner!
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok we all know Angad is definitel gonna do something to piss off the gasbag- so what.... eagerly waiting 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti_6teen

alright i have 2 admit that i have not stopped lauging since i have read the last 2 parts.
i bet the meeting will b more hallrious.
funny part
countinue soon

hahaha at least i make some body laugh😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
ok looks like a lot of you all are waiting for dinner time...you will be suprised as to what angad and his stupid self does 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
i will be posting the next part really soon, so keep posted 😉 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
i hope really soon is really sooon.

love ya.
ishu.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Keep up the great work. Its very interesting. Though I am not so sure about the concept of Kripa promise.

P.s if you have time do update Art of Darkness to. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: LonelyHeart

Keep up the great work. Its very interesting. Though I am not so sure about the concept of Kripa promise.

P.s if you have time do update Art of Darkness to. 😊

i will update art of darkness tommrow becuase tonight i have a lot of work to do like paint a stupid picture for my parent's gameroom and then i have to give up the internet to my brother for him to use in his room and last i only have up till 10:20 to be on the comptuer and where i am living right now it is 10:16 in counting😆 dont worry i will continue art of darkness much faster after the next part of rejected

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 10

Kripa had to admit; Angad was putting in a lot of effort to make the dinner go perfect. Angad and his family arrived promptly at six pm and all were wearing proper attire, even the little five-year-old Karan.

For dinner Kripa had made Italian spaghetti with cream. No one head a problem with the food except little Karan.

"Aunty, this food is great!" Karan said with spaghetti cream all over his face. Angad gave an "omg" look by hitting his hands with his forehead.

"Karan you have cream all over your face, here come with me and I will help you get cleaned up" Angad said by getting up out of his seat, pulling Karan into his arms and taking him towards the guest washroom.

At the dinner table Chiron started a conversation with Mr. And Mrs. Khanna while Angad and Karan were away.

"Mr. Khanna where did Angad study?" Chiron asked thinking if, when Angad had said he had graduated from Harvard was true or not.

"He graduated from Harvard and then afterwards we all moved to London." Mr. Khanna replied, proud fully and why shouldn't he be. Harvard was one of the toughest law schools to get into.

"Oh I see" After Chiron, said this, the whole room became quite and awkward again.

A few minutes later Angad and Karan came back with Karan's face cleaned. The dinner passed by silently with Mr. And Mrs. Khanna asking a few questions to Kripa once in a while and other time Chiron would ask Angad questions. The only person in the whole dinner room that make the mood lighter and soothing was little five year old Karan always imitating his rude or mean kids from his kindergarten class. Soon it was time for the Khanna's to leave and Angad had been on his perfect behavior making sure NOT to call Chiron an old gasbag again!

After the Khanna's left Kripa let out a deep breath and then looked at her dad for his comments on the family. When he didn't say anything Kripa spoke up.

"So, what did you think of Angad?" Kripa asked with great hope

"You know Kripa, I have about a million reasons as to why you should not marry the man…" When Chiron said this, Kripa's face turned to a frown, expecting a rejection "…but I have one good reason why you should" Now Kripa's face turned happy and excited to know her father was going to except Angad!

"I saw that Angad cares about his family a lot because if he did not then he would not have helped Karan clean his face off he would have just told him to clean himself up" Chiron gave a regretful smile while Kripa gave an exciting and happy smile.

"You are free to marry Angad if you want" As soon as Chiron said this Kripa jumped in excitement and hugged her father like crazy.

"Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you" by, say that Kripa ran up to her room to tell Angad the good news from her balcony!

Three years later

Angad and Kripa have been married for the past two years now and Kripa is pregnant and every one is happy …except for one person!

Angad was driving his car talking to Kripa on his cell phone, talking to her about there coming child when Kripa screams on to the phone say it is time for her to get in to labor. Angad becomes so excited that he turns his car towards home in a hurry and he crashes in to a brand new BMW with the same person on the same intersection!

The End!

I know this was a short and last part but I had made this fan fic on pure entertanimen, nothing to do with a real story...Art of darkness was writen with a real story line while rejected was written to keep people laughing. well this is the end of rejected but now i will be able to update art of darkness a lot faster for 2 reasons. one, tommrow schools out. two, i dont have to worry about updateing rejected.

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