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Originally posted by: pal89711

nice ending........wonder y angad only crashes with chiron ........i mean com on ......well it is funny cause every time chiron had a new brand car...... 😊 i will be waiting 4 ur next ff and also art of darkness.....so continue soon with that ff....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😊 this ff was short n sweet i really enjoyed it.......👏

i will be updateing art of darkness today i just have to type it up lol (me so lazy) 😆 dont worry it will be sometime today😃

Originally posted by: prakriti

aww! its over?! it was a really good ff, always made me laugh! 😊 😆 You're soo lucky! Schools out 2morow?! 😭 wat grade are you in?! ughh mine ends june 25th! 😭 Anywho, loved the ff, ur a great writer, and PLZ PLZ PLZ cont Art of Darkness! I absoulutly adore that ff!

x3 Prakriti 😳

lol i am in the 8th grade...the reason my school ends so earl is becuase i live in the south and if our school ended in june then half my school would be death from the heat...and the other half would be dead because that is when our hurrican season starts😆 but then again our school ends up starting way before any one elses🤢

and i will continue art of darkness today 😃

Originally posted by: Numera*

AHAHAH! lol the crashing thing reminds me of muhjse shaadi karogi when salman keepts hurting priyanka's dad! lol funny ff! lol i just read all of it, it was really cute! cant wait for ur next one!

hahaha i know i remember watching muhjse shaadi karogi...now that you reminded me the crashing thing is kind of like that😆

i am gald you all like the ff rejected...keep posted on art of darkness becuase now i will be posting parts to it a lot faster 😛

Didn'r expect it to end so soon but it was an ice light read . I enjoyed it thoroughly. Good job. The ending was cute.

Awesome part... n aawesome endin!!! Lolll he still crashes with his car loll 😆

😆 dat was funny great fanfic it kept me 😆 l 😆 aughing!ROFL! 🤣
ur good at writing!

Awesome FF. 👏

Loved the ending. 😆

Aww i just read the whole story adn i want to comment on every part!
(SORRY FOR BORING YOU?)
REGECTED COMMENTS FROM PART 1
Lol i loved the first part where it says everyone who is accepted nd Angad who isn't accepted
Part 1
Aww that was soooo cute
AK IN LOVE AT FIRST Sight 😃
Lol Angad and Kripas dad already fought
ND AK ARE NEIGHBOURS :D
Part 2
Aww too cute
Part 3
Omggg angad crashed into Kripa's dad's car again 😕 😃
Part 4
Aww cute part AK Going on a date 😛
Part 5
Aww thats soo cute
POOR KRIPA 😭
Part 6
Lol great part
When Angad was telling Kripa to tell her dad bout em it reminded me of a girl asking a boy to tell her parents about em for marriage
Part7
LOL KRIPA Almost told her dad :D
AK ARE really cute
PART 8
Lol...i was laughing when i read the part OMG
New Son in law and father in law meet in jail LoL
PART 9
Cute part – hope Kripaz dad lyk Angad
Part 10
Lol
Loved it
Especially the 3 years later part
BEAUTIFUL STORY 😃

OMG...this fiction i sso funnie..i read the whole thing and was laughing soo hard..and my mum came up to my room and she looked at me wierdly and shes all like are u okay?? and im like..laugh..i..laugh..u m laugh..yea imokay..and some more laugh..my mom just i was cazy and went downstairs..lol!! god..ur too good!!