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Awesome part....i absolutely adored their reactions lollll 😆 Awwwwwwww im gunna miss this ff, but i know ur nxt 1 s gunna be gr8 as well, so cnt wait to read dat 1!!!!!!! N cnt wait for da nxt part to this 1!!!

OHH MY HOLY COW.... 🤣 OH MY GOD...THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO GOOD!!! POOR KRIPA..HAHAHAHA..LOLZ

I LOVE YOU FOR THIS YAAR!!!
CONT SOON... 👏

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part....i absolutely adored their reactions lollll 😆 Awwwwwwww im gunna miss this ff, but i know ur nxt 1 s gunna be gr8 as well, so cnt wait to read dat 1!!!!!!! N cnt wait for da nxt part to this 1!!!

gald you liked the part. ya and i am looking foward to writing my next ff as much as you are willing to read it😛

"What the hell, gas bag. Do you sit around in this same intersection waiting for me to crash into you or something?" Angad snapped in anger. He had just repaired his car with his own money because his stupid insurance company wouldn't pay for the dam thing.



"This man is making my life a living hell, all he does is wait for me to come around to crash into me or something." Angad said angrily and as soon as he said this he felt a fist punch into his stomach.



The police officers came running by Kripa wondering what was wrong between the two men. "Excuse me miss, but do you know why these men are screaming like mad men. First they crash their car into each other three times in a row, then get into a fist fight and now both are yelling a crying" Kripa just gave an awkward and unpleasing smile. "Officer, my father just met his new son in law" As soon as Kripa said this the officer just laughed his head off.

"You are joking aren't you?" the officer said and Kripa just replied, "I wish I was"




these 3 parts were enough to keep me rolling on the floor….lolz……..actually the 1st one ws the most effective one……..gosh it was truly funny……………..and plz continue soon and I'm looking so forward to your next ff…..and art of darkness…I had read the concept but then got lost and when I returned to it I noticed there are many parts I haven't read so I'll start that again some time later on……………I hope you continue this soon…and yah one more thing….I noticed that in that ff-art of darkness- and this ff……..there's a kind of distant connection…I mean here the dad and the guy hate each other and in that one the guy and killed her dad………………I mean it's like the guy and the dad, their relationship put the girl in the middle……and think of who to choose, what to do and so on…hope it doesn't sound confusing what I said and plz plz plz continue soon an dit's true that you write good.

Man it is really superb. 👏 I fell of the chair. It was damn funny. 😆 Hilarious. 🤣 My stomach is paining bcoz i was cracking up reading the last part. God, My family was thinking i have gone mad. 🤪 Even my cousin was cracking up like crazy. Really love it. Cont soon.

Originally posted by: srk1

OHH MY HOLY COW.... 🤣 OH MY GOD...THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO GOOD!!! POOR KRIPA..HAHAHAHA..LOLZ

I LOVE YOU FOR THIS YAAR!!!
CONT SOON... 👏

well at least now i know that a lot of my readers like funny and messed up parts 😆

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

"What the hell, gas bag. Do you sit around in this same intersection waiting for me to crash into you or something?" Angad snapped in anger. He had just repaired his car with his own money because his stupid insurance company wouldn't pay for the dam thing.



"This man is making my life a living hell, all he does is wait for me to come around to crash into me or something." Angad said angrily and as soon as he said this he felt a fist punch into his stomach.



The police officers came running by Kripa wondering what was wrong between the two men. "Excuse me miss, but do you know why these men are screaming like mad men. First they crash their car into each other three times in a row, then get into a fist fight and now both are yelling a crying" Kripa just gave an awkward and unpleasing smile. "Officer, my father just met his new son in law" As soon as Kripa said this the officer just laughed his head off.

"You are joking aren't you?" the officer said and Kripa just replied, "I wish I was"




these 3 parts were enough to keep me rolling on the floor….lolz……..actually the 1st one ws the most effective one……..gosh it was truly funny……………..and plz continue soon and I'm looking so forward to your next ff…..and art of darkness…I had read the concept but then got lost and when I returned to it I noticed there are many parts I haven't read so I'll start that again some time later on……………I hope you continue this soon…and yah one more thing….I noticed that in that ff-art of darkness- and this ff……..there's a kind of distant connection…I mean here the dad and the guy hate each other and in that one the guy and killed her dad………………I mean it's like the guy and the dad, their relationship put the girl in the middle……and think of who to choose, what to do and so on…hope it doesn't sound confusing what I said and plz plz plz continue soon an dit's true that you write good.

well, i am glad that you like my fan fic rejected and art of darkness, i will be continue art of darkness hopfully today and about the whole father thing, i didnt intenshionly write the fan fic with the thought of connecting the two togeather, i guess it just happened....now that i think about it my next fan fic that i am about to start soon also has the whole father and Kripa being stuck in the middle thing also.

Originally posted by: aksksara

Man it is really superb. 👏 I fell of the chair. It was damn funny. 😆 Hilarious. 🤣 My stomach is paining bcoz i was cracking up reading the last part. God, My family was thinking i have gone mad. 🤪 Even my cousin was cracking up like crazy. Really love it. Cont soon.

you know i find it funny as to how many other people find it funny becuase i really didnt expcet this part to be all that funny...i really am in shock😲

haha.. my father just met his new son-in-law!!

i cant stop laughing.. great part!!! wonder how chiron accepts angad... if he tries fixing her iwht anyone.lolz

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Originally posted by: brainychild92

haha.. my father just met his new son-in-law!!

i cant stop laughing.. great part!!! wonder how chiron accepts angad... if he tries fixing her iwht anyone.lolz

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lets just say Chiron will have a very strong talk with Kripa about Angad 😛😉