Fan Fic: Pyaar Main Kabhi Kabhi - Page 192

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Posted: 19 years ago
that was awesome man neha u r too........ gud
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Posted: 19 years ago

Attn.

Neha will be writing her last part for this fan fiction today, its gonna be a loooonnng part! She Will start her New fan fiction on OCt 27th!... 😃

Mallika 😛

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: cutest_angel

hey neha!! i got an idea....y not neha fall in love with Zeb!!!!! 😳 😳 n they both marry....he could be Angad's cousin from US! He's sooooo cute!!!! what say????

ahhhhhhhhhh thats a good idea! 😉 i would love to do that! ok that it i'm going to fall in love w/ Zeb, now u guys just have to imagine that Zeb and Angad dones look alike! yep! i love u for this idea!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

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cutest_angel nice idea but leave zeb/angad or iqbal for me 😳 and we will find someone else for neha 😉 anyways neha cont. soon 😊

ya rite, Angad is Kripa's, Zeb is mine, and Iqbal we'll see who he belongs to! 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
ok guys, just tell me how u guys like the idea! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
sounds good....now plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: neha9

ahhhhhhhhhh thats a good idea! 😉 i would love to do that! ok that it i'm going to fall in love w/ Zeb, now u guys just have to imagine that Zeb and Angad dones look alike! yep! i love u for this idea!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

cool!!! n this will all happen in the last part????? but i do want to see how do Neha n Zeb fall in love!!! 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
sounds good...neha...put ur part soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

LAST PART!!!!

K: Different yeh hai ki tum mera saath ho..

A: Aww, my jaan- how sweet...

K: Very, ab chala??

A: Ya.

They purchase the dress and head home!

Neha says sorry to Aaliya and everything is cool now.

They all sit to have a small snack when Angad's cell rings.

A: Hello... Oh really.. um ok, main nahie aa saktha lakin someone will.... ok bye.

K: Kya hua Angad

A: Kripa remember Zeb??

K: Ya why?

A: Vo India aa raha hai

K: So...

A: Kal

K: So

A: Some1 has to pick him up.

K: So

A: Kripa... i do

K: WHAT?

A: Haan

K: Angad you can't do this to me, kal karva chauth hai.

A: I know...

K: So?

A: Kisi Aur ko jaan para ga..

K: Kisko?

A: Um... Hey, Neha can go.

K: Haan

N: I heard my name.

K: Neha we need a favor from you

N: Kya

K: Kal Angad ka cousin New York sa aa raha hai, Zeb...

N: Haan

K: Can u pick him up from the air port?

N: Um.... sure

K: Theek hai, thanks.

N: Anytime

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Next Day...

Everyone is waiting for Zeb and Neha when the doorbell rings.

Aaliya opens the door and stands in front of her a dashing Zeb...

Aa: Hey bro!

Z: Hi Moti!

Aa: Zeb....

Zeb comes in and everyone greets him.

A: Zeb, Neha kaha hai?

Zeb: Neha???

A: Haan, Neha

Zeb: I dont know

K: WHAT? Zeb ur too much.

Right then Neha storms in...

N: Bahi what is this....

A: Kya hua?

N: Aapka vo stupid sa cousin kaha hai, main poora 3 ghanta sa uss idiot ka wait kar rahi ho...

A: Really...

Angad looks at Zeb who isn't facing Neha.

N: Ek baar vo mujhko mil jay i'll kill him.. that monkey....

Zeb: Turning- Then kill me Neha...

Neha looks at zeb with cold eyes.

Z: What?

N: TUM ZEB HO???

Zeb nods like a devil.

K: Tum ek doosra ko jantha ho?

Zeb: College buddies! Isliya jab maina isko air port par dekha mera name ka board ka saath main waha sa baagh aaya.

Neha walks to him like a brat and punches him right into his stomach....

A: Ouch!

K: Wow!

Aa: WOOOOOOOOOOOOW

Zeb: I'll kill you...

N: Try darling!

Zeb stands there with one hand on his stomach while Kripa walks to Neha and puts one arm around her.

K: Neha, tumna kabhi baatya nahie ur a Black Belt....

N: Actually we both are lakin!

K: Kal sa tum bhi mujhko bhi training dena.

N-Aa: Angad tum tho gya!

Angad just looks at Kripa...

A: Biwi ho tho aaisa!

Zeb- Vo wait up... Biwi, who Biwi- Neha??? Neha tumna Angad sa kab shadi ki... Great i have a chance with Kripa...

Zeb puts one arm around Kripa who's giggling...

This time Angad punches poor Zeb into his stomach...

A: Kripa.. pulling her by the arm and putting a protective arm around her- Meri biwi hai, tumahri Bhabhi Ji...

Z: What? Wow hold on... Kripa aur Angad na shaadi karli, kab kaisa aur mujhko kyun nahie pata??

A: Kykuni tum idiot ko jaisa Neha na kaha...

Aaliya sneeks away becasue Josh calls, Kripa and Angad go to there room while Neha takes Zeb to his room...

N: And this is your room... Zeb puts his stuff down and looks at Neha.

Z: Neha vo

N: Kya hua?

Z: I came to know about Prithvi

Neha's eyes turn watery, and she turns around...

Z: Hey.. don't cry. This is not the Neha i know... Tum mujhse sirf ladtha hua aachi lagthi ho.

Neha turns around and wipes her tears.

N: Aur main vo he karna wali ho- tumahara wajha sa maina aaj subha sa kuch khaya bhi nahie hai, infact kuch piya bhi nahie hai, saara din airport par, gosh...

Z: So tumna abhi tak kuch bhi nahie khaya

N: No

Z: Kuch nahie piya

N: NO

Z: It's 2 P.M.

N: So?

Z: If i'm not wronge ajj Karva Chauth hai?

N: Haan

Z: Ab itni der mera wajha sa bookhi rahi ho, tho saara din mera liya kyun nahie?

Saying this Zeb leaves Neha alone, Neha thinks back to what Zeb just said and smiles to her-self.

Kripa feeds Kshitij and then puts him in the crib and he plays with his toys and then he falls asleep... Kripa makes him warm and then goes into the garden where Angad is standing looking into the Ssky.

K: Angad

A: Haan

K: Kya hua?

A: Main kuch dhoond raha ho

K: Kya?

A: Chand ko

K: Kyun, aur abhi tho sirf 2 baja hai

A: Mujhko bhook lagi hai

K: Tho ja ka kuch khalo, vart mera hai tumahara nahie

A: Haan, theek hai main kuch kha kar aata ho...

Anagd goes inside, but doesn't eat anything, Kripa just nods her head at him and conts to do the house chores.

Its 8 o'clock and all the ladies are getting ready in the house, while all the men are with there wives.

Lets start off with the mighty Aaliya and Josh...

Aaliya has keep the fast but she's wondering if she should get ready or not, she's fiddling with a neckless when someone knocks on the door.

Aaliya opens it and comes in Josh...

Aa: JOSH, tum yaha kya kar raha ho?

J: Crikit khelna ka liya aaya ho, khelo gi?

Aa: Oh just shut up

J: Anyways, tumna vart rakha?

Aa: Haan

J: Aacha kiya, u needed to loose weight!

AA: I hate u josh...

She throws a pillow at him and pushes him out the room.

Neha sits in her room standing near the window thinking about what Zeb told her earlier when her cell rings.

N: Hello

Aa: Neha

N: Ya

Aa: Tum aa rahi hona?

N: Haan... i'll be there in 30 mins,

Aa: Ok.

Neha walks to her closet and looks throught her closet and picks out something not to dressy nor to simlple. And changes.

Kripa is dressed into her beautiful pink lengha standing next to the window. Her dupatta in sitting on the bed, and all her jewelry is on the bed, she looks into the sky trying to find the moon, but is unsucessful. Her fly everywhere and she hugs herself... And then picks up a pretty dimond set and sits in front of the mirror and puts it on when she finds Angad enter the room, he closes the door and walks to Kripa who stands up and and turns around to look at Angad...

K: So Mr. Khanna, how do i look?

A: Putting his arms around her waist and pulling her closer- Well Mrs. Khanna, u look beautiful like always!

K: Thank You.

Angad picks up her Mangalsutra and slips it into her neck and then Kripa walks to the bed and picks up her churiyaan and puts them on, and Angad helps her put them on her other hand. And then he looks at her hands full of mendhi, and kisses them.

Kripa takes Angad's face in her hands full of mendhi and kisses his forehead. Angad and Kripa look into each others eyes for the longest time and then slowly Angad moves closer to Kripa and kisses her cheeks.

A: Wipsper- I love you...

Kripa rests her head on Angad's sholder and puts her arms around him,waiting to feel Angad's arms around her. They hug each other for the longest time until Naina calls Kripa from down stairs.

Kripa and Angad part and share a quick kiss, Kripa takes her dupatta and stands in front of the mirror and fixes it on her sholder, and turn to Angad.

K: Chala?

Kripa walks to the door when Angad holds her hand.

A: Kripa..

K: Haan?

A: I'm very lucky to have you, thanks...

Kripa takes his face in her hands again- Yeh tumko aaj kya ho gya hai, and thanks for what?

Angad turns and they both look into the mirror- Jab main kudh ko dektha ho, and ur not by my side, i feel incompleat. Main chaha kitna logo ka saath ho, tumahara bina aakle ho, aur aagar sirf tum mera saath ho tho mujhko lagtha hai ki yeh saari dunkiya mera saath hai...

Kripa's eyes well up with tears and so do Angad's, Kripa turns around and berries her face in his arms when the door slowly opens and stands there Aaliya with Neha...

Angad and Kripa don't notice them and they part wiping there tears, Neha and Aaliya are very confused and Neha clears her throath.

Angad turns and looks at the lovely ladies while Kripa hides her face to wipe her tears.

Aaliya walks to Kripa while Neha walks to Angad.

Aa: Aapna Kripa ko kya kaha bahi?

A: Kuch nahie, my wife is just a little to emotional... aur isliya isna mujhko bhi rula diya...

Kripa laughs alittle with tears still in her eyes.

N: Come on ab roona band karo, lets go, the moon's out!

K: Finally!

Aaliya and Neha run out the door while Angad and Kripa look at each other, share a quick hug and then head outside.

Everyone is in the garden while Angad takes Kripa to the terrace, Kripa stands in front of Angad and picks up the "Pooja" ki plate, and goes throught all the traditions, and Angad feeds her a small peice of sweet and gives her water. Kripa puts the plate away and bends down to touch Angad's feet, but Angad picks her up before she can...

A: Hey Kripa don't ever do that again, tumko haar saal batana partha hai!

K: Ok sorry baba... Ab chala?

A: Kaha?

K: Disco!

A: Kripa... ab kuch baaki hai

K: Kya?

A: Tumna tho meri pooja karli, ab meri baari hai!

K: Confused- Matlab...

Angad just looks at her- Oh my god Angad, kahie tumna tho bhi...

A: Ya!

K: Mujhko laga ki tum us din maazak kar raha tha.

A: No i wasn't jaan...

K: With loving eyes- Tum mera liya saara din bookha raha.

Angad nods his head up and down like a small obediant kid.

K: I love you...

A: Me too...

Kripa feeds Angad and makes him drink some water, and then turns to leave.

A: Kripa

K: Ab kya hai?

A: I have to give you something

K: Kya?

A: Aactually baad main doga...

Aaliya stands in her room looking at the moon waiting for Josh, who finally arrives, they fight a little and then Josh breaks Aaliya Fast, and gifts her a ring...

Neha stands watching all the ladies preform the traditions, and looks around to see Zeb somewhere but he's no where to be found...

She takes her pooja ki plate and goes to put it away and decides to break her fast, when suddenly A stronge pair of arms pulls her into the dark covering her mouth.

Neha looks at the man and sees Zeb there.

N: Zeb... tum, god...

Z: I know tumahari bhook ka maara jaan nichal rahi hai, so hurry up...

Neha grins at Zeb, and does the pooja stuff...

Now everyone sits to have dinner now. When Angad stands up.

A: We have an announcement to make

Naina: Kya beta

A: We have 2 wedings to preform

Everyone: What?

A: Josh and Aaliya... they are not all that surprised and nor is anyone else, and then our second pair... Neha and Zeb. Neha and Zeb cough like crazy and everyone is shocked.

A: Haan, maina aur Kripa na sab kuch deek liya tha!

Neha and Zeb are really embarresed. And with that dinner ends and everyone heads to there rooms.

Kripa is sitting on the bed, still in her lengha when Angad comes in.

A: Ok Kripa...

He sits down in front of her and takes out a small box...

K: Yeh kya hai

A: Tumahara gift...

K: Oh!

Anagd opens the box and takes out a beautiful neckless that has a "A" with a heart around it...

K: Its geourgues!

A: Just like you...

Angad helps her put it on...

A: Ab mera gift...

K: Tumahra gift??

A: Haan...

Kripa leans over and takes out a small box.

A: U actually got me something?

K: Haan

A: Kyun?

K: Aaisa he...

A: Maina soocha tha ki i would get a kiss from you kykuni tumahra pass mujhko kuch dena ka liya nahie hoga...

K: Very smart...

Kripa gives him a very similar neckless.

A: Thanks Kripa...

K: Your welcome...

Kripa leans foward and kisses Angad- And here's ur awaited kiss!

Angad smiles at Kripa, who walks to her dresser and takes her jewelery off. And then heads into the bathroom to change.

She comes out and finds Angad waiting for Kripa already in his nite suit... Kripa slips on a transparent nite robe on top of her beautiful silk nighty and sat beside Anagd, wrapping her arm around his and her head resting on her sholder.

And then she lays down slowly closing her eyes.

Angad looks at Kripa and bends down to kiss her soft lips, after the peck is over Kirpa opens her eyes and finds Angad looking at her with a seductive pair of eyes. The atmospheire is just perfect for the romantic moment, the lights are dim, its quite, with soothing sound of the the wind blowing in the back ground.

Angad moves down kissing her forehead anc both her cheecks and then her lips agian, and Kirpa doesn't stop him once.

Lays on top of Angad caressing his forehead, and just hugging him passinately, while Angad plays with Kripa's hair.

Angad rolls once and starts to kiss Kripa with full passion as if they have met after years. The lights turn off and we foucus on the moon.

6 YEARS LATER

We see the khanna house, a picture of Angad kissing Kripa is on the top, and on the bottom one picture of Zeb kissing Neha and one of Josh kissing Aaliya.

Angad and Kripa have 4 kids 2 boys and 2 girls. Kshitij, Krish, Anju, Anjali.

Neha and Zeb are happy parents of two kids, Karen and Sanjana

Josh and Aaliya are happy parents of 3 kids Mehak, Rahil, Pooja

Neha and Zeb own a fashion house togeather while Josh is still the rock start and Aaliya helps him manage dates. And as for Angad he doesn't do anything just helps his father in work every once in a while and spends all his time with his four adroable kids and his lovely wife, who is very pissed off At Angad at this very moment.

K: Angad tum baacho ki bigaarna ka siva kuch kartha bhi ho ya nahie?

A: Ofcourse not

K: Very funny, aaj sa tum Kshtij and Krish ko har rooz homework kar vaoga, aur no messing around.

A: Kripa tho main tumahra saath time ka betaoga.

K: Vo sab mujhko nahie pata...

Kripa pulls the sheets on her face and shuts her eyes.

A: Kripa, gussa maat ho, sorry kaha na.

K: Shut up Angad

A: Kirpa please...

K: No...

A: Theek hai tho tum naaraz raho main yaha sa ja raha ho.

K: Kaha?

A: On a driver alone.

K: Have a nice one...

Angad sits on his knees and pulls the covers off- of Kripa's face.

A: Come with me na

K: No

A: Kyun?

K: Kya kyun? Main tumsa naraz ho, is liya.

A: Oh come on Kripa... PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Kripa sighs- Cholo.

A: Kaha?

K: Drive pa....

A: Yes!

Angad and Kripa head outside, While Kripa yawns Angad kicks the tire.

K: Kya hua?

A: Tire flat hai!

K: YES!

A: I hate you!

K: I know, ab wapis chala.

A: Wahie karna paraga.

Angad and Kripa head back in side, and Kripa also know Angad well enought that he wont sleep unless gives a kiss and that happens fairly quickly. Kripa gives him a kiss and they share a hug, as the screen prints the words "The End!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwww that was amazing last part
and very cute, and shweet, and emotional, and touching, and overall cuddly fan-fic.
thanx neha
love ya

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