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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

awesome part 👏 i'm sure wrking together will be alot of fun 😉 😛 😆cont soon 😊

Hmm........wait an watch if its fun or if its a disaster😆😉........thanx for commenting😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
HI GUYS,

HERE IS THE NEXT PART OF MY STORY……..HOPE U ALL LIKED THE LAST PART…….AND THANK YOU FOR POSTING UR REVIEWS ON THE LAST PART AND …….I FELT SOOOOOOO HAPPY READING THEM………SO PLEASE KEEP POSTING COMMENTS ON ALL THE PARTS ……..




JEEVANSH----- PART 5


So in the last part – Kashish, nandini, sujal n karan come to know that they were competing for the same contract and now the contract has been handed to them jointly in a partnership……..so now both their companies have to work on the project together…….……….

Ab kya hoga…….

All four come back home and go to their rooms…..…..

In their room they are all thinking about what happened in the office……


KASHISH: Wo kehte hai na, jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai , huh!!!! Galat kehte hain……..Oh god partnership with the malhotras……..mera to mann kar raha tha ki contract chod doon……..but papa ne iss project ke liye bahut mehnat ki hain…….aqur agar main yeh project karne se manaa kar deti to hamare company ki market me jo goodwill hai, wo kharab ho jaati…….


SUJAL: U know karan , used to scoff at mom's words whenever she said ki "jo hota hai, ache ke liye hota hai"……ab lagta hai that somewhere she was right……..kya mauka mila hai uss kashish jo mazaa chakhane ka….………

RANVEER( Comes into sujal's room): Arey bhai, what is this im hearing…….- u are gonna work with our enemies….????? How could u do this…..


KARAN(Also coming into sujal's room):Haan yaar , even I didn't understand this decision of yours…….till yesterday u wated to get back to them for that mean behaviour and now you are gonna w2ork with them in partnership……..wats wrong with u?????Why didn't u refuse this project……I was soo shocked when you agreed wid nandini to work on this project…….


SUJAL: Guys…..Guys!!!!! Take a chill pill ok……mera irada badla nahi hai…….i wont let them off soo easily……….eh..wats that saying in hindi……. "HAMESHA APNE DOSTON KE KAREEB REHNA CHAHIYE………LEKIN APNE DUSHMANO KE AUR BHI KAREEB REHNA CHAHIYE TAAKI HUMEIN UNKE BAARE MEIN SAB KUCH PATA HO………."

And this is an awesome opportunity to know as much as we can about them……….and during this project we'll get plenty of opportunities to get back at them………aur waise if I had turned down this project then mom-dad would have asked me a 1000 question……..why?? what??? How?? N all that crap…….so with one wise move I've tackled all the problems……..am I not great????……haha..

Ab all this while background me music bajj raha tha ek…..u wanna know which one????……..ok here goes….…..

"Wo kehte hain na, jo hota hai , ache ke liye hota hai , galat kehte hain…….(Song had started with this dialogue of Kashish )

Kismat ka khel hai saara

Phirta tha main awara

Ye kya se kya ho gayaaa,

Char din ki zindgani,

Harr pal ek nayi kahani,

Kya tha main kya bann gaya…..

Kya hua jo larri chutii,

Jeevan ki gaadi looti….

Khwaab hai to mujhko na bataa……

Suna tha admi yahan puri zindagi apni kismet ko slow track se fast track me lane me nikal deta hai…..

Par dhai ghante me meri kismet aise slow track se fast track me aajayegi, ye maina kabhi socha nahi tha…..

Sazza maza ban jayegi , ye bhi socha nahi tha…..(referring to flashes of the mr. Oberoi telling them that they'll have to work in partnership)

Kya bura hai - kya bhala hai,

Waqt hi shayad khuda hai,

Ho jane do phir, dekha jayega…..

Kya hua jo larri chooti, jeevan ki gaadi looti,

Khwaab hai tu mujhko na baata…..

Zindagi ek pal me saali , yun palat gayi hamari,

Jhoot hai tu mujhko na bata

"Wo kehte hain na, jo hota hai , ache ke liye hota hai , sahi kehte hain…….(And ends on Sujal's dialogue)




In Kashish's room ---------

KASHISH: Nandu , yeh ashi aur tia kahan hai????…..i havent seen them since morning????

NANDINI: Arey yaar, subah-subah ……..wo apne college admission ke liye nikal gaye……already college shuru ho chuka hai…….toh aj unhe saari admission ka kaam pura karna hoga and only then they can join college from tomorrow!!!!

KASHISH: Oh yaa………is contract ke chakkar me to ye sab bhool hi gayi thi main……..pata nahi unka kaam pura ho gaya hoga ya nahi

NANDINI: Ya, even im worried about tia….……

KASHISH : Arey worry yaar……apni ashi the gr8 hai na uske saath…….kuch nahi hoga usse………

NANDINI : Arey issi baatr ka to darr hai ki meri gr8 sister anvesha kapoor uske saath hai……..bechari tia, pata nahi uska kya hoga 😆

(Both of them start laughing) 😆😆

Ab Nandini goes out of the room and unka room sujal ke room ke samne ka hota hai………jahan ki karan, sujal aur ranveer kuch plan kar rahe hote hain………

Ranveer: Tab tak hum unn logon ko ghar me ache se welcome karr lete hain na…….

Sujal n Karan: Wat???? Welcome????? Huh they are the most unwelcome to stay here…..and u wanna welcome them????

Ranveer : Arey bhai, u didn't get me………bachpan me jab mom-dad ne humare liye wo hitler guardian rakhti thi to usse bhagane ke liye humne kya kiya tha remember????? Bhoot!!!!

Karan: Oh yeah!!!! Bade jhatke se pehle chota jhataka would be good na, taki they get used to such shocks!!!!!

Sujal: Very good……..but yaar do u think wo iss ghost ke chakkar me phasengi……….i mean wo dono to khud hi kaafi hain , asli bhoot ko bhi darane ke liye………..unhe bhoot kya darayega……..

Ab yahan ekta mayi ki tradition follow karte hue………nandini ne sabkuch sun liya hai……..sorry mai but kya karoon app hi ke serials me logon ko buri aadat hai dusron ke room ke bahar khade hoke baatein sunne ka……..hehe…..so I'll borrow your idea…..!!!!!

Nandini hears all this and says……..acha bacchu……..tum sabka bhoot to mai utarti hoon aj………….she goes into the room to tell kashish about this…….tab tak tia n ashi bhi aajate hain college se wapis……

Raat ko bahut late…….after 1 am at night…….bell bajti hai


The servant opens the door and gets very surprised and shocked!!!! And screams…..aap????

Sujal , Karan and ranveer are sitting in the drawing room watching exorcist……..and servant ki scream sunke they all start screaming in unison……..hehe…..coz servant ne ekdum mauke pe scream kiya tha jab movie me bhi ek bahut darawna scene aya tha……hehe!!!!! ….

SUJAL: Wat nonsense!!!!!Ramu kaka……..kya kar rahe hain aap?????itni raat ko kyun cheekh rahe hain banshee ki tarah…….haha!!!! ramu banshee!!!!hehe 😆😆

SERVANT: Wo main……Wo bahar…..Wo 😕

RANVEER: Lo ab ye bakri bann gaye……ye mainmain kyun kar rahe ho aap?????Boliye na kaun aya hai???? ….

PERSON: Main khud hi bataa deti hoon…….hello guys!!!!

Sujal , Karan & Ranveer : App????Yahaan????Kaise?????Matlab kyun????

Meet the gorgeous actress SONIA KAPOOR

Actually yeh sab sonia ke fans hain….. 😆😳

SUJAL😳: Hi maam……..aap yahan kaise???? Err……I mean please come in……wo???? 😆

SONIA: Kyun ????Main apni betiyon se milne ayi hoon…..Ghar gayi to pata chala they're staying here with u til bhai n bhabhi come back …….actually I had an outdoor shoot…….so im just back from there…….that's why I didn't know about all this!!!!

KARAN: Betiyan ???? Bhaiya-Bhabhi????? Aur yahan pe??(He is totally confused)

SUJAL(Sonia ki baatein sunke he understands the whole thing): Arey karan……..tu rehne de……..(Then sujal turns to sonia ) Haan mam, apki betiyaan yahin hai…….U can go and meet them……..(to ramu kaka)……kaka please inhe nandini ji ka room dikha dijiye)

SERVANT: Theek hai sujal beta……aap mere saath chaliye madam ji……


KARAN : Yeh kya tha???? Am I dreaming…….ya sonia kapoor sach me yahaan apne ghar pe hain…….aur ye unke bacche????

SUJAL: Arey duffer,…….Nandini aur Ashi ………sonia kapoor ki betiyan hai.l……

KARAN: Kya??? Unhe dekh ke aisa nahi lagta ki unke itne bade bache hain………

( Ab u'll ask me ki aj kal ki itni bhayankar media hone ke bawajood, logon ko ye kyun nahi pata ki nandini n ashi are sonia 's kids……….sonia never talks about her personal life in press and her daughter's just hate all this media attention………..so everyone knows about her kids but they have not seen them on camera……….its very possible ok……….even a big film-maker like aditya chopra is very media shy n reclusive n not too many people have seen him……….one of them is me…….i've not seen adi chopra till now……hehe……….ok I rest my defense here……hehe……)

RANVEER: Actually she got married at the age of 17 years itself and phir kuch saloon me unka divorce ho gaya…..

SUJAL& KARAN: Tumhe kaise pata????? 😕

RANVEER😳: Interview dekha tha maine unka…….wo iss month ki mtv – " MOVIE STAR OF THE MONTH" hai…….😳 😛

(lolzz……..hehehe….im sorry guyz…….i know main bahut pakka rahi hoon tum sab logon ko…..)

SUJAL😳: Oh WOW!!……..aise superb actress ko to harr month hi "MTV MOVIE STAR" declare kar dena chahiye…….she is simply the best,………😆 😆

KARAN: Absolutely ……..I still cant believe ki wo hamare ghar me aayi hai……….wow!!!!!


That's all for now folks!!!!!! I know it was really boring ………main likhne kuch aur baithi thi but ye kuch aur hi ho gaya…………..sorry……..i'll be back with a better part next time around!!!!! Waiting for your comments!!!!! Chao till them



LUV,❤️

VANDANA 😉😛😳





Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
vandu rani wwow jeee awesome part yaar bilkul bi boring nahin thaaa it was msth 👏 wah wah yeh ladke toh barreh kacchhe nikle woh bi stupid unneh pata nahin chala nandu neh nki batein sunni.. aur sonia ko dekh karh toh haaaaeeee hogae hehe gooood one continue sooon can't wait more 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 sach mein di guddddddddd......i agree wid sujal ki aise star ko toh har month bnana chahiye,,,par sonia ko nai rajeev ko... 😳 😳 😳 😳 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 he he he he n ab apki story ke liye pehle 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 apko pta hai kike liye.....

n ab apki story...👏i hope ab app jaldi post karoge agla part...xcab't w8 to know ki humara sujal bhi humari tarah kisi ke peeche pagal hai..😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

vandu rani wwow jeee awesome part yaar bilkul bi boring nahin thaaa it was msth 👏 wah wah yeh ladke toh barreh kacchhe nikle woh bi stupid unneh pata nahin chala nandu neh nki batein sunni.. aur sonia ko dekh karh toh haaaaeeee hogae hehe gooood one continue sooon can't wait more 👏 👏 👏

arey thanx yaar........and yah the boys are really stupid😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 sach mein di guddddddddd......i agree wid sujal ki aise star ko toh har month bnana chahiye,,,par sonia ko nai rajeev ko... 😳 😳 😳 😳 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 he he he he n ab apki story ke liye pehle 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 apko pta hai kike liye.....

n ab apki story...👏i hope ab app jaldi post karoge agla part...xcab't w8 to know ki humara sujal bhi humari tarah kisi ke peeche pagal hai..😆

aww......thanx nehu..........sorry 4 posting it late...........will try to post the next part soon😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice part 😆
I was laughing a lot....it's so funny....thanks for updating....I was waiting u know 😛

Luv,
Akanksha 😉


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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey great intro...........

oh thanx pal😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aaakkii

very nice part 😆
I was laughing a lot....it's so funny....thanks for updating....I was waiting u know 😛

Luv,
Akanksha 😉


ya i know u were waiting.......hehe u pmd me................hehe....glad u8 liked the part!!!!!!!!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
haha.. i didnt know who soniya kappor but when i said it my bro is like whoottt that sounds like a gorgus name.. is so i googled it.. then my bro is like ... eww thats angad's step mother.. hhahaa!!!! i no its not an ak fanfic but im sure u no what im talking about.. lolz

great part!! continue soooooooooonn

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