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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guyss i know i said i would continue daily... but my bro is really sick adn he really needs mee soo i am really inactive...soo i dont think i would be able to continue till monday....soo sorry guyss... but dont worry i will continue very soon...with an extra long part that will piss you... 😉 and you will request mee to write a lil les...and when i say something i do it!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hope he feels better!!! 😊 😊 continue when you can!!! 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry guyssi cant continue much..soo this wont be 'as long' aas i said it would bee... sorrry...

PART TWO

" oh no! i am NOT going anywhere!!!" kripa yelled as she and mishty walked out of the library to their other class... " last time i went with you... i almost broke my shoulder..." kripa said trailing off...

" but kripa... you HAVE to!! dont you want to meet 'HIM'??" mishty said... although kripa had told mishty about what happened that night she hadn't told her it was angad...

" well yess i do... but...(sighed)what if nisha catches mee this time??" kripa said wondering what iff she really catches her...

" she wont!!!" mishty exclaimed... " plss kripa... pls pls pls"

" but why do you want me to go with you...???" kripa asked confused.." you wont even b with mee!"

" yess... but i cae for you... and i am fed up of you always being alone... doing nothing to enoy life... sitting at home... while nisha does all those stupid things... its really annoying you know!" mishty pointed out...

" but..." kripa started but was cut off...

" plss kripa.. just this time!!!!!!! plssssssssss?" she made a puppy face and kripa sighed...

" fine... but only this time..." as she turned to go into teh room... she bumped into someone...

" sorry..." kripa instantly loked up into those gorgeus eyes she had fallen in love with at teh first sight...ANGAD's eyes... she felt herself go weak as she continued starng at him... she came back to her senses and looked away before angad could figure out it is his cinderella... she picked her stuff up... angad helped her... as their hands touch while picking one of the books... angad felt her hand tremble, relax and go lax... confused, he took his hand away... and kripa picked her book up... " umm... sorry kripa..."

" its okk..." she almost said i to herself... she lowered her gaze and walked int teh class... angad cae in as well.. and sat right behind her... he and ritu were sitting together... adn she could listen to their convo...

" god ritu... i just wish i can see her just once again... i hope se trusts mee soon enough to tell mee who she really iss..." angad said leaning against his chair...

" you're the most foolish person i ever saw angad... why dint you just take off her mask when you had teh chance.???" ritu asked getting annoyed... she was always teh one getting all teh attention and now listenng about someone else really pissed her... adn well also made her happy...

" because...... i dont like seeing tears in those beautiful eyes... when i saw the tears trickling down her cheeks... i felt something inside mee quickly rip... i just couldn't see a single tear in her eye...(sighed) and when she said she will tell mee who she is when she 'trusts' me enough... i felt bad bt i'll give her as much time as she wants..." angad said slowly... "...my whole life... i'll wait for her..."

kripa felt really bad for doing this... her heart ached as she listened to his words... maybe she shouldn't have cried... maybe she shouldn't have left like that without giving her the slightest clue of who she was... but he had her neckless... the neckless that was her biological dad's last gift to her... his only momentous... that was teh most precious thing of her life... she had gotten it on her sweet 16th birthday... she was interrupted when she heard ritu speak again...

" you are crazy angad... you're really crazy..." ritu said and hit herhead with her hand... angad laughed... and wrapped his hands around her shoulder....

" i just hope she comes tomorrow night's party..." he exhaled loudly...

ritu patted his cheeks and said... " and how are oyu gonna recognize her???"

" i just will ritu... i just will..." saying this he stood up... as he saw prerna... ritu's friend come to ritu... he looked around and saw an empty seat next to kripa..soo sat there next to her... " hey kripa..."

" hi.." she said slowly... opened her book adn pretended to read...

angad looked at her... he couldn't believe she was the same girl he had a crush since 5th grade... she was soo cheerful... got anythign she wanted... she was teh daddy's girl... she couldn't stop talking...soo ritu had namesd her 'ms quack quack'... and now she barely talked... forget about talking... she barely looked around her surrounding... she was always lost in her world... or rather in her book... and she barely talked to guyss... teh girl who used to change ehr boyfriends every week barely talked to guy....especially him..!!it was not her fault.. after all her fath--

he was inetrrupted by kripa nudging him... he looked at her...and she gestured him to lookk at the teacher as she was calling him... he loooked at the teacher and heard him saying " Mr.Khanna pls pay attention to teh class..." he looked at kripa again..and saw her staring at the board ahead... but he knew she was lost in her thought...

*******

" prem!!!" kripa yelled as she neared his car...

" oh kripaa... why are oyu still here?? aren't you supposed to be at home right now...???" prem(salman khan...ritu's husband)asked worriedly...

" yess i do... but...(her eyes well up) can you tell mom and dad that i was with you guyss.. plsssss??" she said trying to suppress her tears...

" hey hey hey... dont cry now...(he pulled her into his arms adn embraced her) is that i thing to ask?? cant i do this for my sister huh? now dont cry adn sit inside teh car... i'll go get ritu... okay?" prem asked unsure if she was going to be ok...

kripa just nodded... not being able to say anything... cursing his mom and dad, prem went inside the building to get ritu and also have a talk with angad...

********

few minutes later... kripa was leaning against teh car.. when seh saw angad came out of teh building sulking... and behind him ritu was gigling and prem was trying his best not to laugh... then angad walked past her and turn around... she looked at him... he smiled warmly and gave a friendly wave... kripa smiled back and nodded... as soon as prem adn ritu reached there... they both burst out laughing... kripa lost in her own thought.. and not having a good relation with her sister-in-law ritu... dint bother ask what happened...

ok thats pretty much all i can write today...

why did kripa change like that? why was she crying when she dint reach hoem on time? why doesn't she and ritu have a good relation? why was prem cursing his parents?

preview- her mom adn dad's reaction... why did kripa change suddenly? the party... angad and kripa meet again...( as cinderella )

sorry for tehs hort part!!! will update later again or tomorrow!!!
Edited by ritu_the_gr8 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ritu
u didnt even tell me that u wrote a ff..
not cooll
me mad now..
anyways..
loved ur ff..
it is so cute..
and i really like ritu ...
hehehe😆


continue soon
please


cheers
❤️Nir
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Posted: 18 years ago
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GREAT PART!!! 👏 👏 👏 CONTINUE SOON!!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing part
its really intresting
cant wait 2 read the next part
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cont soon.plz can't wait foe thier second meeting.hope he recognise kripa soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: usa30172

hey ritu heyy nir!
u didnt even tell me that u wrote a ff.. you never asked!!😳
not cooll
me mad now.. chollie😳
anyways..
loved ur ff.. thanku
it is so cute.. 😳just like mee😳
and i really like ritu ... i would kill you if you dint😡😆😆
hehehe😆


continue soon
please
will continue after about few weeks...lol... kidding.. will continue tomorrow..

cheers
❤️Nir

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg. ur fan fic is really like cinderella story. its so sweet. cont soon.

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