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Awww!!! dipti..how do u maintain ur stories every time?..this was as good as the first part 👏 👏 👏 or even more....amd Simran she impressed me at the last portion specially when she said.."think before u leap" 😆 ..and Aashka i love her chit chats with Preethi 😆 and i wud rate "A" for the post ..as i know u can do even better 😉 and will be eagerly waiting for the next post 😛

Amazing dipti 👏 👏 👏 ..i loved the best today ..Aashka..preethi n Simran 😆 they were smart n funny. 😆 ..n who is this priya?...i cant wait to see her..and how she looks..and i will rate A+ for this episode even though i know u can do much much better 😛 plz post the next part soon..jus cant wait to read 😛

Hey dipti 😛 ur just too good man 👏 👏 i loved this part 👏 👏 👏 i will give u "A"..u can do far better 😉 n post the next part soon ok 😛

loved this part!!so cute with prethi and aryan.. god i love that name.lolz..

love how simrin is with aryan.. their relationship is soo cuteeeeee

continue soooonnnn

WOW! 👏 👏 👏 awesome! 👏 lovely! 👏 and what all hungama is going on in the airport 😆
I like the photo of Barkha [Simran] which u posted in the intro..its sooo cute and she looks so sweet 😛 ...and i'll give "A" for todays part 👏 keep it up 👍🏼

Hey..Im LOVING it! 👏 👏 👏 ..the characters are lovely dipti 👏 👏 👏 and the names they're jus too good 👏 .........the story is amazing 👏 👏 👏 and god im getting to excited 😛 😆 Simran..god i just love her character 👏 👏 and Preethi too 😛 i will give A+ today 👏 ..post the next part as soon as possible 😛 and look at my avi 😉. how cute simran and Nikhil look😉.i hope simran and nikhil hug each other the same way as they are doing in my avi😉

hey 😛 the intro the first part the second they were all. awesome 👏 👏 👏 .i've jus got no words.. 😳 .thank got i came here b4 its too late and i cud read everything 😛 ..plz do continue dipti 😛 the best i liked was simran n aryan's relationship 😛 its funny when both pull each others leg 😆 😆 😆 ..no ...i cant say who was the best..the characters are so beautifully potrayed😛..everyone aashka..Preethi..Simran Nikhil..they're all rocking👍🏼.and i wud give A+ for everything and everyone..n specially for the name n characters😛

Awwwww !!!...thank u all sooooooo much for ur lovely responses 🤗 🤗 🤗 i get sooo much encouragement im so ..thanks all of u 🤗 im sooo happy u all r enjoying it..its really encouraging 😛 well atleast mehnat ka fal..meeta tho hai 😆 i'll surely keep up with my efforts and if possible keep it as interesting everytime 😛 and thats a promise 😊 n GOSH!..never expected the ratings to be sooo high that to for my first fan-fic 😲 😆

Heyyyy... jus read all of ur ff, i love da concept n i absolutely love preethis character its soooo sweet n cute n her bro lookin after her... how sweet!!!!!!! U r an amazin writer all da parts were excellent, pls cont soon...

plz continue soon! It was an amazing part to read. 👏