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Hello friends...this is Dipti bringing out to you a story of four youngsters...Nikhil [Indraneil sengupta].. Simran [Barkha bisht]...Preethi [Neha bamb]..and Aryan [Iqbal khan]....irrespective of their family background...these four youngsters go off track...and unconsciously happen to fall in love with their biggest enemies...and ultimately ... when these four come to know the truth what would happen???....kya pyaar ko milagi aapni manzil???....

MANZIL PYAAR KI

KHANNA FAMILY:-

Nikhil khanna a very responsible son of aniket and aashka khanna and a very loving n caring brother of preethi khanna. Nikhil has always lived on the expectations of his parents. He has been a very good student and a very protective brother..He is an example of a complete genteman and respects every woman. For him , his sister is his only responsibity..he loves her and can do anything for her.He has been always protective when it comes to his sister.

Preethi khanna..the only daughter of aniket and aashka khanna and the youngest in the family. She is the apple of everyone's eye and is a complete brat!..she is known for her pranks.She is always successful in getting her mother irritated of her and laughs and runs away. For her , her brother is everything..she knows that she can be the most horrible person on earth till her brother is there b'coz he will always protect her from anything n everything.she feels completely protected with him.

Aashka khanna..the responsible and dutiful wife of aniket khanna and dutiful daughter-in law of anju khanna..she is a very proud mother when it comes to nikhil and a very tensed mother when it comes to preethi. She has the power n capacity of managing a whole family. She is the strength of the family. She often loses her temper with preethi b'coz of her pranks and gets teased by her husband and her favourite dialogue is. "Hey bhagvan!..yeh ladki kab sudhreygi!"😆

Aniket khanna… who is now the head of khanna family after his father died. He is basically a very jovial type of person..very fun-loving and enjoys teasing his wife when he sees her running behind preethi….He is more of a friend than a father to his children….He always is proud of his son and takes himself to be blessed to have a son like Nikhil.

…b'coz he knows if anything happens to him nikhil will b there take care of his mother and sister.

The khannas have a family enemity with the kapoors. Long time ago before Nikhil and Preethi were born the khannas and kapoors were very close family friends..but due to some mis-understandings they had to part their ways.He has never told any of these things to his children..and has always kept them away from all this.

Anju khanna the mother of Aniket khanna and the grand mother of Nikhil and Preethi khanna…She has always given Aniket the freedom to live his life and tells Aniket to do the same with his children….She has always been an independent person by nature and so manages herself even after her husband's death.

KAPOOR FAMILY:-

Aryan kapoor the very chilled out but successful son of priyanka and raj kapoor.He has a passion for music as well as dotes on his sister.He loves to tease her but at the same times loves her very much. He is no different from Nikhil khanna when it comes to his sister. For him music and his sister were his main priority. He loves to scare his mom and sister and his chilled-out attitude often makes his mother tensed. He is basically a flirt but has never hurt any girl or played with her emotions…but a period in his life will come when he will know what true love is.

Simran kapoor…sister of Aryan kapoor and the only daughter of Priyanka and Raj kapoor..she is very much liked by everyone and is a scholar .She is known for her intelligence and good-nature. She is an ideal daughter and a very ambitious person by nature…She has always dreamt of being a doctor and is giving her best to fulfill her dream…..her policy in life is "where there is a will there is a way" she will let no one come in between her dreams but she doesn't know that a time will come in her life where she will meet

her soul mate and will be stuck in between her dreams and him.😉

Priyanka kapoor an ever-smiling lady ..who always wins people's heart with her smile.…She loves her daughter for what she is but sometimes is worried when she sees simran all the time with books n no rest. She loves to hear Aryan singing and playing music.. She was known for her friendship with Aashka khanna but who knew that time would turn everything topsy-turvy. She always tries to keep everyone together and has even spoke to her husband to stop all this hatred and again shake hands with Aniket khanna but has unfortunately never succeeded so far....

Raj kapoor..the head of Kapoor family and the owner of kapoor industries. He is a very serious person …he awaits for that big day when his son would join him in his business…he is ambitious by nature and is keen on destroying the khannas at their business..😡

He has always prepared his children to face any adverse situation in life.

INTRO OVER....STORY POSTED😛..plz go thru the following pages to read the story..The story begins frm the 2nd page😃

Edited by RAINA_8 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! 👏 lovely characters 👏 ...very nice...will be waiting for the continuation 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOWO!!!! sounds REALLY interesting!!!! 👏 continue soon!!!! 😛
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👏 👏 👏 Can't really wait for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!!! 😃 it seems so interesting 👏 ..plz do continue.. 😃 .what will happen next..how will they meet?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wat a lovely intro! 👏 👏 well done dipti 😛 ..can't wait for the story 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice 👏 👏 👏 ..cant wait to read the story 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks ..all of u 😛 hopefully u'll find it interesting further as we go on with the story 😛 😃 ..and do have an eye here for new posts 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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At the khanna house everyone is busy eating breakfast.


Aashka :- Hey bhagvan ! yeh ladki kahaan hai?...where is this girl? 😡

Nikhil:- Mama ..chill…u know she will be the last one to reach the table for breakfast. 😉

Aashka:- Ya!..thanks for reminding…in the past 20 yrs she is the one who has always been late for everything. 😕 .it will probably rain that day when she would come on time for anything!

Aniket:- Arey Aashka…now...stop frowning …..Nikhil go up and see beta …what is she doing…hopefully she should not be sleeping as its already eight..and our flight is at 10.30. And we cant afford to miss this flight as I promised your dadi that this time we'll surely come to nanital to visit her.

Nikhil:- Not to worry dad…aapki beti is waqt naha rahi hogi….and then and then 15 seconds from now she'll come out of the bathroom

And after 15 seconds…

Nikhil:- Aur ab..she mite be choosing what to wear….

After 5 mins:-

Nikhil:- By now she wud have worn her dress and and might be combing her hair…

After 5 mins

Nikhil:- Now she would look at herself in the mirror for the last time… and 5 seconds from now the door would open you will see her all ready…

Aaskha n Aniket give a confused look to each other and then Nikhil starts to count 5…4…3…2…1..and Nikhil says "here opens the door".…but he was wrong ..and had a confused look at his face…He smiles sarcastically at his parents and says..oh ..probably my counting would have gone wrong somewhere… 😳


Aashka laughs and says..see I told u nah..it will rain that day when she'll be on time for anything. 😆 .and there was a sudden BANG!!!...and the door opened ..And preethi came out completely soaked in blood and could not move and fell down…Everyone was shocked… 😲 🤢 ..Nikhil immediately pushed his chair got up and shouted PREETHI !!!..and started to run towards her and so did Aniket…Aashka came in between and stopped them…and tightly caught hold of them and silenty told them to wait….Nikhil started asking mama aap yeh kya kar rahi hai!!!...Aashka still was catching him tightly and told him to wait….both Aniket and Nikhil were stunned at aaskha's behavior…and suddenly the silence broke out by Preethi getting up and saying…kya bhayia?....i was lying dead there and u did'nt even bother to come..and see me ..aur papa aap?...aap bhi?......everything was so silent everyone was stunned…and silence breaker was:-


Aashka:- Dekhliya!....She has not yet given up all her mischiefs…and Preethi…is waqt bhi!..when we have to be there at the airport in another hour!.....well…why am I telling u all this?...what else can I expect from u?


Preethi scratches her head laughing…woh mama ..its long time since I played my pranks with u ppl…my latest prank was played on mr.Khurana. yesterday ….remember?...our neighbour?


Aashka:- tumhey yeh sab karke kya hasil hoga?...i still don't understand what fun u get from doing all this….

Preethi:- Mama aap nahi janthi ho…what fun it is to fool ppl….

Aashka:- really?...then this time I stopped ur bhayia n papa from getting fooled!

Preethi:-..Oh Mom…meri saari mehnat gaayi baad mein!. 😕 .u know how difficult it was for me to pour red ink on this white kurtha of mine…but ..why am I telling u this?...kyon?..aap tho samajthi hi nahi ki yeh sab karnay ke liye kya kya karna padtha hai !anyway…look at them…still standing with their mouths open!. 😆 .Im atleast enjoying this look on their face.

After an hour the khanna family go to the airport..board the flight and reach Nainital in an hours time…..

The kapoors stay in Nainital.

The khannas are now in the Nainital airport….

Aryan and Simran kapoor have also come to the airport to recieve one of their cousins who have come in the same flight in which the khannas have come. Aniket khanna does'nt know who are his enemy Raj kapoor's children nor does Raj kapoor know who r Aniket's children..as they have parted ways long before..and have never met again as well as never forgotten each other...Both Aniket and Raj had never told their children anything about this enemity.

In Nainital airport:-

Inside the airport…Aniket ,Aaskha and Nikhil are walking quickly to get their bags and suitcases whereas Preethi is dreaming about her dream man ..and whether she'll meet him in this beautiful n romantic place or not...…..During all this..she did'nt notice that she had walked off in a different direction and her parents n brother had walked off in a different direction….at that point of time

Aryan:- look there Simran!..does'nt that girl there look like our cousin priya?....or is priya herself!


Simran:- kaun?...where?

Aryan:- Arey there!..right in front of us!...see in purple salwaar..

Simran:- haan par …im not able to see her face…she is not looking towards us

Aryan:- So what?...i know its her!

Simran:- and how do u know that?

Aryan :- Her hairstyle looks like priya's..and see she is searching for someone…and ofcourse she will…..for us!..who else?...now im going to go and scare her ..i'll go n hug her from behind..and she'll be shocked!

Simran:- what ..par bhayia first confirm if its priya or else u'll go hug someone else.

Aryan:- Arey nahi yaar!..i know its her!...now im going off to her.

Simran:- Arey par bhayia..suno tho!



Aryan does'nt know that its Preethi whom he was talking of… and not priya …...Preethi is searching..here n there..very tensed…and Aryan still not knowing goes to her and .... and Preethi still searching and Aryan goes closer ..and more closer… ..and catches and hugs her tightly from behind…and Preethi is shocked!. Preethi screams.. 😲..she pushes him n gets away from him....and she turns and looks at him...and Aryan screams..and out of all Simran seeing all this sighs and hits her fore head with her hand😆


~ FREEZE ~
Edited by RAINA_8 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow...WOW !!!WOW! 👏 👏 .. 👏 its too good 👏 too good dipti..plz continue..plz plz plz..do continue 😛 ..i cant wait for the next part...and the intro of Khanna and Kapoor family was lovely 👏

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