Crossroads-Part 16 page 43!!! - Page 16

ok, i just caught up with the last two prts... nd they r AWESUMLY
WICKED!!! 👏
👏 the laughing session prt was sooo cute nd
funny!!! nd Angad is FINALLY admiring her!!! awww!!! 😳 WOW... Angad
gets possesive when it comes to his car.. is there a special reason for it???
he like, TOTALLY flipped out... nd how cud he be sooo mean to her... he
left her in a deserted place, all by herself, nd goons!!! 😡 poor
Kripa, feel sooo bad for her, Thank God Angad reached there on time...
those jerks, have nothing better to do than harass innocent girls!!! 😡
🤢 sry, got carried away... lol... ok, i forgive Angad now, mayb coz he
is being nice to her, nd he slowly falling for her!!! 😳 nd Kripa needs to
stop drooling, but i guess she cant help it, i mean who can, after seeing
him shirtless 😍 lol... poor Angad, his lady love got ruined by those
jerks!!! 😡 they have no idea wht is in store for them!!! they r dead
meat, wasnt tht beating enuf??? anywazzz... i am gonna stop babbling, tht
was a pretty long prt, i hope all the prts r tht long!!! 😉 lol, jk... CANNOT
wait to read more... continue soon!!! 😛

omg. that was nice.thanxx just wonderful. aww

im going to laugh if angad is sunny. how can angad be sunny? lolz sunny is sunny n angad is angad.

sunny could be a pet name.😕😳

well done...this part was faboulus.👏

continue soon. 😉

lol. sucks for the gangsters.....😆....they gonna die/get thier azzes kick soooooon.....

Problem - Make up
Problem -? This time Angad won't get angry hopefully though Kripa told him to stop at a hotel. Seems like Angad has got a few enemies or may be they are random ppl..hm..I really really want to know who Angad really is, I mean what kind of a person he is....awesome part Karishma. Do continue soon

amazinggg prt...i completely loved it, angad got a little harsh over kripa on car thing but it was sweeet!!! actuall i love angad's charachter....
cont sooon!!!

really interesting just loved it pls con asap

Fantastic Part!! Like alwayss, I lovedd itt!! The title was very eye-catching, "You snooze, you lose" I was like OMG she updated… I swear it's the best thing that happened in like dayss!! Lol!!

Btw I agree with the ipod games thing, they are very absurd, pointless things, just there to kill time!! LOL!! It was funny when they bumped into each other like that! Angad is so mean!! Lice?!! Ew!! LOL!!

"Cant you ever is answer properly, without your little smart 2 bits?" I AGREEE!!

"Yeah, but what's the fun in that?" LOL, but he has got a point!!

I loved how you numbered the three mistakes. Mistake number one, pulling in front of that gas station, led to mistake number 2, Angad and Kripa falling asleep, and Kripa deciding to drive, and then there was mistake number 3, where the guy punched Angad!!

Wow man Angad really loves his car!! Dam*! He actually made her get off like that!! But I'm so glad that even though the real Batman didn't show up, "our" Batman did!! Stupid guy punched him, idiot, he should have known not to have hurt Angad! :P

The cute little scene in the hotel was adorable!! It was great! Aha, mistake number 4, falling asleep. Poor ANGAD!! His car is busted… but hey, they get to stay together in the same room for 2 dayss! Woot! ;)

"Angad pulled his arm away from Kripa's hands wish force and followed the officer without saying anything." Aww!! He was really pissed I guess!! Man those hoodlums are so busted!! They are gonna get it bad if Angad finds them!!

Thanks for taking time for the long update!! It was fabbb!! Continue Soon!!

yaar karishma great part!! i loved the last one especially(just caught up) so he thinks its the people who wanted to drop kripa at the bus stop 😆 😆 😆

now they have to stay for a day or two.. veryyy interestingggggg!!!! 😉

contineu sooooooooooooooooooonn

OMG's yeahhh!!! 😆
loved every bit of it and your dialoges (spelling) are totallt cool 👏 👏 👏
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keep it up will e looking forward to the next prt 😃

hi! so i read ur fanfic and its great!

man angad reallly loves his car! he is obsessed!

and finally he is admiring kripa!!

and hopefully he doesn't blame Kripa for what happpened to his car

great part
awww angad beat those guys up for kripa
i think those guys screwed angads car up and angad shouldn't have just pulled his hand away from kripa 😡 that was just rude