Crossroads-Part 16 page 43!!! - Page 12

SMASHINGLY AWESUM prt!!! 👏
👏 trying to use different
adjectives!!! 😆 wow... Kripa gets scared easily!!! hehe... she's even
scared to sit next to him... well i wud be too if the gunman was the
person sitting next to me's friend... tht made no sense... but whtever...
anywazzz... rock music can b annoying... only SUMTIME... well running
away from home is MUCH more better than killing ue father-in-law, in my
opinion, coz if u DO end up killing him u wud go to jail... soo... Kripa is
HILARIOUS!!! "You need to stop again?" the funniest thing EVER... i was
cracking up... lmao... he was just kidding??? how do u kid abt sumthing
like tht... although it was kinda funny.... poor Kripa she got all worked up
for nothing!!! hehehe!!! the prt abt being cursed with bad sense of humor
was funny too.... sumthing TOALLY random & funny!!! lmao... nd i REALLY
dunt get the last prt... "Nice to meet u Kripa Sharma"... wht is up with
tht... mayb it's just me... i was born confused... hehe... anywazzz... the
preview sounds AMAZINGLY intriguing... 😉 wonder wht will happen
then... continue soon!!! 👏
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p.s. try nd continue KPKS too... IF u have time!!! 😳

omg! he was joking!!! oh my god!!! haha!! i wouldve had the SAME outburst as kripa.. but that was a cute explenation of the curse if u no wat i mean.. it was kinda random with the book but.. haha

loved this part!!!

continue soooonn

that was a great part continue soon cant wait to know what happens between angad and kripa at the hotle 😛

great part
Kripa's slow like me 😆
I love angad i mean the way he has no expressions if i was kripa i would have been staring at him the whole time 😆
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amazingg part...kripa is soo slow!!! 😆 cont soon!!! 👏

amazing loved angads sense of humour 😆 shesz too innocent

great part!! loved how angad explains about the bad humour! 😆 😆 😆

its soo funny to see kripa being so uncomfortable in front of him! 😆

great update! cant wait to see hwat happenes next!

Gr8 part... awwww his friend died, dat is sooo sad, i wonder how hes gunna handle it!!!

Awesome part continue soon 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice angad is simply hard to understand.poor kripa!!!!!!!!!!

yes he is a confusing child😆lolz thanxxx for readin hun.

loved it hon..ur good..thank good angad is talking now..heheh
cont soon yaar...
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thanx for commenting, three times😆lolz yeah he n kripa both decided to open their mouths.

Originally posted by: sna004

Awwwwww I just looooooooooved your part!! thankooHahaha, he does have a wicked sense of humor! u think so? And OMG Kripa is slooooooooooooooooow.. (just like me 😆 ) lolz
Awwww, Angad's friend was a victim.. yeah
And earlier I had said poor Angad if his friend was the gunman because I can imagine what the gunman's family is going through and what his friends would have been going through.. Your best friend or son does that *shudder* yeah i kinda wanted that to do dat but then i didnt want to somehow give off the wrong impression that im trying to justify somehting soo horrible so i jus gave it up.
Overall excellect brilliant part!! 😃 thankx so much!

awesome update yaar..thank youuuloved the whole thing..im gladpoor kripss how is she supposed to understand angad if he hides his feelingswell angad wasnt rly hiding his feelings...he jus has a bad sense of humor..oh so angads friend died in the massacre..sad..thn dnt let it b joshi dun think josh is in the story.. 😕..great work..luvd it..update soon sry it'll take a while

Originally posted by: Chotii

1stly... I remember readin Holes quite a long while bak aswel!!yeah like in 4th grade 😆 nyway, i reeeeeeeely liked the way u sorta managed 2 link that in, it woz cutely funny... n angads humour stuf... 😆 very nicely written.thank u so much! the start 2 the part especially, woz jus awesome!!! thanxxthought it woz reeeel good!! mmmmmm, looks like there's stil alot of time til the 2 get closer, but i stil fink its real good how things r turnin out, i mean they'r talkin mor 4 a start yup..poco a poco se va lejos😆
gr8 part!! keep writin, ur brilliant!! thank you!!!!!!!!!
xx!MWAH!xx
xx Saz xx

SMASHINGLY AWESUM prt!!!thanxxx 👏
👏 trying to use different
adjectives!!! 😆 wow... Kripa gets scared easily!!! hehe... she's even
scared to sit next to him... well i wud be too if the gunman was the
person sitting next to me's friend... its okay i got u. same here.tht made no sense... but whtever...
anywazzz... rock music can b annoying... only SUMTIMEim rly into alternative rock. but gothic sum punk n metallica makes my head hurt... well running
away from home is MUCH more better than killing ue father-in-law, in my
opinion, coz if u DO end up killing him u wud go to jail..lolz i guess but atleast she'd be away from sunny😆. soo... Kripa is
HILARIOUS!!! "You need to stop again?" the funniest thing EVER... i was
cracking uplolz yeah... lmao... he was just kidding??? how do u kid abt sumthing
like tht... although it was kinda funny....i told u bad sense of humor n i guess he was being sarcastic poor Kripa she got all worked up
for nothing!!! hehehe!!! the prt abt being cursed with bad sense of humor
was funny too.... sumthing TOALLY random & funny!!!thanxxxx lmao... nd i REALLY
dunt get the last prt... "Nice to meet u Kripa Sharma".well...think bout it, i'll explain before i update😉.. wht is up with
tht... mayb it's just me... i was born confused..yeah me too. hehe... anywazzz... the
preview sounds AMAZINGLY intriguing... 😉 wonder wht will happen
then... continue soon!!! 👏
👏 thanxxxxxxx luv ya buddy

p.s. try nd continue KPKS too... IF u have time!!! 😳maybe on thurs

omg! he was joking!!! oh my god!!! yup haha!! i wouldve had the SAME outburst as kripa..me too but that was a cute explenation of the curse if u no wat i mean.. it was kinda random with the book butangads jus a random confusing nice mean hot guy😆.. haha

loved this part!!! thankooooo

continue soooonn

Originally posted by: Rejected

that was a great part thanxxx!!!continue soon cant wait to know what happens between angad and kripa at the hotle dun think too hard😆😛

great part thanxxx im happy u say more den "gr8 part" dis time
Kripa's slow like me 😆 word
I love angad i mean the way he has no expressions if i was kripa i would have been staring at him the whole time 😆 i think all the girls wud. lolz
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