Together We Stand(LRL)...Curtains Down! - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!! plz update soon! im loving it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome 👏 great iwish same chemistry humein LRL mein bhi dekhne ko ile same masti majak

next part jaldi ka intejar hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Jus read da last few parts... they were absolutely amazin.... naina n rajveer r soooooooooooooooooooo cute n adorable!!!!!!!!
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awsome please continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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hey Jivora 😛

well done go story beautifully presented 👏 👏 👏

great job 😳 😃 😛

do continue fast 😳

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This was a usual scene at the 'The Bliss', New Delhi. It was a sprawling banglow, with a beautiful garden and a more beautiful drive on path. It was perfect....for the people who had united forever after fighting and grueling through changes and challenges and dealing with critical situations together! It was truly a bliss!

After breakfast Naina and Shalini sat chatting and Rajveer dressed for work....He was going to report late today, so he took the chance a some mischiefs with his pretty wife, early in the morning.

He was humming a song in the room....he was really happy....[he gt his pancakes at last....but only after he drank at least one egg with milk....with Naina looking at him like Breg.Chandog!>....Naina was on leave for a week....she had been for a family wedding, but now was back....it was Saturday, and she would resume duty on Monday.

"DING-DONG", the doorbell rang.

"Beta, Raj ki gaadi taiyaar hai....", Ishwarkak told Naina.

"Ji, Kaka.....RAAAAAAAAAJJJJJ......"

"Haan.....", he called out form their bedroom.

"Tumhara make-up set saath main lelo....warna late hojaoge!"

"Make-up....?"

"Haan.....mujhse zyaada time lete ho....."

"Ab, Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ko 'Major' dikhna bhi to chahiye.....", he said walking into the living room.

He was wearing his regular dignified formals....all set to leave....Naina looked at him....and he threw a kaise-lag-raha-hoon look at her.....she eyed him survayingly....made a face....

"Hmmmm....?", said Shalini, as if awaiting Naina's response.

Naina quietly walked to him....and put his collar in right position....and said....with the same unsatisfactory expression....

"Na!.....kuch gadbad hai...."

Shalini raised her brows....she knew it was coming.....again.....

Confused, Raj surveyed himself closely once again....

"Kya...."

"Ummmm......ek minute....", and she walked upto him.....she took his face, and as if checking something moved it right and left....and then suddenly smiled...and gave him a peck on his cheek....

"Hmmm....ab thik hai", said she.

Raj looked at her....eyes full of mischief....

"Zara woh side dekho....abhi kuch gadbad feel ho rahi hai...."

Naina did the same on his another cheek too....

"Theek se dekho na Naina.....ab bhi hai....."

Naina raised her brows...she knew she was fixed in her own game.....

.......she came still closer....Raj unable to understand what would she do....she caught hold of his collar...and pulled him close....Raj closed his eyes...and suddenly felt his cheeks pulled.....

.......Shalini at one and Naina at another side of his.....both firmly gripping his cheeks....and pulling them.....

"Sooooooooo.........Cuuuuuuuuttte!", bothe retorted tog....and then burst out laughing.....

...Raj left for work....laughing....

..........she was the reason.....he laughed always.....went off to work smiling and laughing....and came back home.....with the lightest heart!

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It was late morning...about 11.30AM....Naina was talking to her mom....all gily talk about her cousins wedding....cooking.......Raj.....Shalini........and everything else.....yes....quite unbelievable.....Naina....talking all girly stuff.....when her cell phone rang....

"T-R-I-N-G..."

"Helo...."

"Captain....", Shalini was on call.

"Oh hi, Doctor...."

"Hi vi mat karo....main bahot tension main hoon....vaise blu behtar hota hai ya red?"

"Ma'm"

"....haan...haan....bolo na....blue ya red?"

"Ma'm kya?"

"....are tumne decide kar liya....kya pehnogi?....haan....Raj bada choosie hai....usi ne kuch select karva ke rakha hoga.....hai madam....sab ki aise kismat kahan....."

"Ma'm kya....kahan...mujhe kuch nahin samaj main aa raha...."

"Kyun mazak kar rahi ho Naina?....Army Ball....yahan ka annual ball....aaj shaam ko....."

"W-H-A-T????"

"...Ab yeh mat kehna ki Raj....."

"Haan...bilkul....Rajveer sir ne kuch bhi nahin bataya mujhe....."

"RAAAAAAAAAAJ........."....both the girls yelled at the same time!

It was that precise moment that her landline rang....

"....Yeh Raj bhi na.....oh...eh....Docor main aapko 5 min main fon karti hoon....I think I am getting a call on the landline...."

"Sure Naina....wahi hoga...dekhna...."

"....haan choodingi nahin......urrgggh!...."

And she disconnected the call and took the landline call.

"Helo..."

Someone coughed slowly on the other end....

"Jee...."

"Woh main....."

"Jee....", Naina raised her voice...

"Woh Biwi...main...woh...tumhe....batana....uh....emmm...."

"Hmmmm....."

"Woh...main...bhool...gaya....ki....woh....aaj....shaam....h umein.....ball ....main...jana....hai......"

"AB bata rahe ho....RAAAJ......!!"

"I am sorry.....really.....it just slipped....woh main tumhe subah hi batane wala tha...par...."

"Par...."

"Par....tum itni cute lag rahi thi sote hue....ki...mujhe....mujhe....mazak sujhi....."

"HMMM...."

"Sorry na...."

"Ab Raj main pehno kya....saare formals to shaadi ke baad dry clean ke liye gaye hain....mere aur tumhare dono ke....are army uniform main....to nahin aa sakti na...."

"...Fikar kyu karti ho....woh tum army uniform main hi bahot khubsoorat lagti ho....woh main KMA main....tumhe usmain hi to dekh...dekh ke.....aur unpar jab kichad lagta hai na....to...to....ahhhhhaaa...."

"...Fir se mazak....."

"KYA?? Main mazak.....okay...I am sorry....par tum aise hi mat aa jana....Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ko loog jaante hain...."

"...Aur Captain Singh Ah..Shekhawat ko bhi....."

"....haan....thoda sa....."

"Theek hai....theek hai....I will be there.....aur tumhare formals ka kuch karti hoon....send the car...."

"....Par ekdam se kuch bhi mat pahenna....nahin to main doosri date dhoond loonga...."

"Achha...ekbar firse try kar lo....mere alawa aapke sath koi aur timewaste nahin karne wala...."

".....theek hai....toh aaj alag alag dates...."

"Hmmm....par mujhe invite bhej dena....time aur venu pata hona chahiye....main pahonch jaungi....."

"Arre nahin kiddo.....I will be there to escort my lady...."

"Escort...?? nahin.....alag alag...dates....?? yaad hai?"

"Theek hai...tum bhi dekh lo...mujhse behtar koi dikhe to tumhe...."

"Done Major!"

"Love You Captain......"
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey People,

Thanks for the wonderful response.....keep tagging the thread....i love it...i see a lot of people scrapping here and i feel like sending an update!!!!

Well, hows this one? I want to make this fic a really light hearted one! No serious stuff....to hard core romance...as their giggling, mischiefs, and small cute fights speak for their love! and no serious....deaths....no painful separation......no crying.....just fun...just the way our usual LRL feels!

Tell me how did u like it!!

Cheers,
JIV
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Let me tell u in brief the happenings of that day in brief....Raj sent the car home...and Naina managed to send him his formals....simple black blazer and white shirt and trouser! Thats the best available pair in the closet.....

....but both knew....that the war was on.....alag alag.....who looked better....and who was more popular....both smiling at themselves and each other.....started thinking of new ways to outwit each other.....

Naina sent a note with the clothes....


Major,
I am sending the best pair available....try grabbing a date with these on...and forget about me....as I enter balls with only exquisitely dressed men!!!!....so Major, hurry up....or all the good one's will be taken.....
Wish you all the best for your mission,
Naina.


Rajveer grinned as he read the note....

"...Captain.....we will see...."

And he worked on for the day. The Ball was to commence by 2030hrs. Raj left the headquarters at 1900hrs and drove straight to the best mall in the town...and bought himself a cool attire....and then gt into one of the dressing rooms and gt dressed.....he looked...as usual good and dignifiried & impressive!!

So, now Raj was all set to hook the prettiest girl at the ball.....Too happy with himself, he drove to the venue....

The venue was perfectly decorated.....pinks, whites and light green leaves of flowers poked out here and there....Balloons...confetti es....sparklies.....were spread on the floor....they had created a feel of snow-fall.....perfect!!

Well, the lounge succeeded the ballroom. The lounge was classic....now....the enterance of the lounge was above and every entrant had to climb down a staircase to reach the lounge....only couples were allowed into the ballroom....so people met in the lounge....and walked into the ballroom...from where sound of loud cheers and clapping came....now and then...as every couple entered!

Now Raj was with other fellow officers chatting...and waiting....for Naina and a lady who he could take in as his date! All the women around were looking at him.....waiting for him to ask them in.....hoping that their respective dates do not turn up!

.....he waited for half an hour...he was determined to ask a lady in front of Naina....and amply flirt with her....to make her jealous.....

....he got restless....Captain, u r late!!, he thought!

..fifteen more minutes.......Naina....where are you??

........Fifteen more minutes....and more and more couples started walking in....why isn't she coming?
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A gleaming black Merc pulled at the main enterance.....

....and caught everyone's attention.....who was it?

....The chauffeur got off the car and opened the back door....and all the officers went weak in knees.....

....A women descended from the car, draped in a exquisite black designer saari.....and perfect jewellery....

............she entered the gate all alone.....evidently being without a partner...everyone in the surrounding seemed keenly interested....

...that woman was better than anything the Annual Army Ball, New Delhi had ever seen.....long hair....perfectly straightened...and ends in perfect curls....some streaks of her shiny black hair rested on her front-side of shoulder....

....dangling crystals sparkled behind them.....and perfectly, glamorous...yet simple......

.....she stood at the enterence of the lounge!



Hey.....

Suspense unfolds.....who is that new women.....

....tell me friends....how do u like it?

Cheers,
JIV
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😃 😃 😃 tis is weet...............
i came frm orkut 2 here 2 see wethr u wud rite th next part............. 😃 😃 m jicksy there.... 😃 😃 lready m dieying f th suspense.plz update fast my jivdi...plz........... 😃 😃 😃
dont bring devil Ritu bac 😡 😡
i feel its a new girl 4 Naina........but it sud b Naina... 😳 😳 thn Raj wil feel jealois... 😳 😳

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