yahi hai zindagi -new ff part 15 pg34

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Dammy

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

wow 👏 👏 👏
i jst read it now and 👏
it was great 😆 😆 😉

😭 i thought it was gonna be in english 😭 😕 but d parts dat were in english i absolutely luved it 😃 😃 😳

plz ctn soon 😛

hugz........
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daviashree

@davia389

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

thnks for all ur replies i will try to write in english and hindi..
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daviashree

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Posted: 18 years ago

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hii to all as per demand.. i am posting my next part hope u all enjoy and plss leave the comments...

2.. tulsi was standing there looking his going and think pata nahii kabb iski zindagii mein woo kushiyaan aayegii?????? Uskii mout ke baad iskii zindagii too and goes.. and she cmes to the living room and the preparation for haven is going on… and she was now instructing the work too the servants and others..
it was karan virani's birthday and tulsii ma was making preparation for havan and mihir comes..
tulsi:arre mihir abb aayehoo tumhaien pata haiin na aaj havan hai aur tumm hoo kii
mihir:ohh tulsiii muje pata haii aur waise bhii bahut time haii itnii tension mat hoo ,aur vaise bhii ulook very beautifull when u smile.. and she blushess as mihir saaid itin a romantic way..
lakya staniding in steps;waaaw kt dekhoo unkaa romance the best..
ky:stop it lakshyaa tum nahii sudorikii woo dono pati-patni haii aur mihir dadu koo aaj bhii ba se uthna hii pyar haii aur isliyee too romance kar rahe haiii tum jaise nahii haii.. huuuh and movess.. kt arre sunoo thooo jab tumharii bari aayegii meinn tumhara patii koo saarii intructionn mihir daduu se dilwadoongii
and mihir and tulsii were busy and mihir was pulling tulsi's cheekkk and was making some more comments making her blush more… tumhein nahi lagta hai tulsiii hameinn ekk aurr bachha mruoongii tuje…. And he goes.. dekoo sarita mere beta kaise apnee baap ke raaste pe chall raha haiii and he kisses her and she sayss apppp too baaa…
and the house is full of fun..

lets have some fun in office with karan after it ihis birthday….common..

he was busy returning from his meeing going back too hom and one girl enters…wearing a jeans and a 3/4th kurta pink in colourr and her hair was free no clips coolers on the top of the head and file in one hand and she was looking her watch to check the time.. and she was walking litlle fast and the the person was cleaning the floor and suddenly leavee too his urgent loo leaving the things like that and she slips and kran was coming he was also busyy in walking and was in his phone and she gooes slipping and directly falls over himm landing her lips overs his and both fell down and roll and roll and trying to release each other kissed eachother more(hoppe u will all enjoy it on reading it…) and at last they stop and she gets ups her face covered up with hair and tkes it out to put it in other side and she is nandhini……. And she tries to get upp and she fall slipping all over again and his face is full of her lipstickkk pink one…
and slowly both gets upps she shout at himm cant u see and walk whoo me?he askkss both getiing up and driving awayt the dirts over them…u shd have seen and walk… and because of u my dress is spoiled.. u look mr kaddos..(it is nadhini calling himm) ur dress may be expensive but that doesn't mean u can hurt anyone and because of u I have lost my job and because of uu huunn how rude u r…. and better u stay away from mee yes u shd stay away from me and my office thnk god I dint make any oppointment u for any job girls lie uu will do anything for money( that ;s not fair karann … ) and just move away from my office ur disgusting mr… kadoor rude… and I will not work in this ur soo called office and if u payy cores also I wont work like a person like u….. and she leaves… and he was in very bad mood and left ..(actually I wanted more in this part but just stopp as If I write more I will get chappall and shouts etc from u…) and he goes very angry storming out of the office and climbs in his car and moves fast… and he was driving scolding her samjthii kya haii apnea app koooi will make sure that she doesn't get job elsewhere(I know many must be reminded of the kutumb yaa because I miss a lot too that whyy a small fight ..) and he reaches shanthi niketann he enters with the same irritated face.. but on seeing karann first ,savita dadi and daddu who were fighting stoped their fight and seeing him they were shocked as ….
And he was like dai kya hua? Haann wooo hun and started laughing and kt and lakya whoo were busy in fightin and coming down ,for karan's cake got shockeddd and lakya said kt muje lakta haii unkii cake unhain mil gayiiii and laughs he was surprised kya hogaya sab kooo??????? And he leavvess lagta haii aaj sab pagal hogaye hain..and when he moves forward tulsi who was busyyy with mihir coming out of her room (their room is near his) and she was saying ohh hooo mihir tum bhii na.. ek kaam bhi teek tarahh nahi kar pate.. aurr ye kya haii comeing out with himm he was in his jeans and some funny shirt.. as they have all planned to do the party in beach house… and he sayss tulsii yahii aaj ka fashion haii.. meinn tumhare liye bhii and when he turns too karann on seeing him he starts too laugh crazily as mihir was ablt to see karan and inbetween them was tulsi facing mihir.. and tulsii sayss haas kyun rahe ho???????? Tulsii lagta haii bahwann tre baat sun liya haii wahan dekhoo and when she turns she also ,smiles and go too karan and ask beta tum kaabsee lipstick lagana shuru kiya arre acchi taraf nahii pata too tere bhabhiyoon too poochlete….????????maa meinn aur lipstickkk, ?//????????? Arre tulsii tumm samj nahii rahe hoo ye lipstickkk too uskiiii kyaa he says and sayss lagta haiin from bade to chote saab pagall hogaye haiiin and moves to his room tulsii follows himm and mihir goes to take his camera and come back of them he was shouting and blabbering and goes into his room and when he suddenly crosses his mirror he think meein kya sab koo pagall dikta hoon?// and slowly moves back to see the lipstick marks which were [resent in his face as if some one who is in deep love has kissed himm he was shock ye kaisee and remmbers……

Tulsi and mihir enters and watches it and tulsi calls karan and when he says maa mihir click his photos and on other hand asha whoo was busy with her handy camm comes in with recorgin on and sayss chachu smiles and when she him like that ask chachuuuu u don't like lipstick how come u?????? and all laugh.. he was totally embarrassed… and sayss uss ladkii meiin chodungii nahii usee meinn dekloongii koun ladki karan with excitement tulsiii sayss nahii tum use bilkul bhii maat chodnaa balkii is ghar mein bahuu banakar lana….bahuu maa plss nahii and moves quickly to bathroom
(sorry muje kuch jyaada comedy likna nahii aata ) totally embarrassed and he goes and starts washing his face and was scolding her saying paata nahii kya lipstick lagathii haii nikalta hii nahiiinnn and was onnnnn and outside all were laughing as by all have come…. And tulsii sayss abb bahut hogaya jagar saab havan keliye taiyaar hojayiye.. and everyone starts to move and tulsii start to pray that hope karan finds someone in his life… and prays to her takoor jiii… and she goes to his cupport thinking kashh wahii hii ladkii merii bahuu banker merii karan kii zindagii meinn kushiyaan layyee.. and she chooses him the pink kurta and with pyjama and a pink duppata for his neck as means were it with their traditional dresses..
and places it on the bed ..for the havan he comes out washing his face and she sayss dress nikal diya pehnlena.. and he sayss thnkss ma.. and when he turns too see it was the pink colour he remembered her wearing the same colour and how while trying to lift her from over him he accidently touched her waist which was slightly shown and how he felt touching her soft skinn with was like soft milk… and he jolts out of thoughts and says maa meiin aaj woo blue kurta pehnongii tulsi was like aj se pehlee karan ne pehle kabhii merii pasand ko inkaar nahii kiya aaj kya hoga hai..tekk nikaalthii hoon she was surprised and felt his life is going to change sooon something made her felt…like tat and she leaves smiling saying jaldiii aana.. and while climbing down the steps she was lost in thoughts… and she was come back by the call of dadi saying panditjii has arrived… and she comes and dos the pranam and take ashirwaad from the panditjii and sits next to maa.. and the panditjii sayss beta tune aaj havan rakkar aacha kiyaa kyunkii ye havan karan bete keliye zarrori haii kyunkii uske graham badalne wale haiin accha y aura ye too havan kee baad pata chal jayaga…. And karan comes down…

he comes and because of tulsi saying he takes the ashirwaad of panditjii and dadi say pandit jii karan kaa hat dekiye na… and he was forced to show.. and the panditjii ge surprised..

preview:why panditjii got surprised?
Promoo nandhini is crying in the mandir and someone comes…

davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago

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.noone.

@.noone.

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

gr8 ff
just read 2 prts
plz continue soon

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neha

@esha44

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

wow its great yaar!!continue soon 😃

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daviashree

@davia389

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

promo:when karan will fall fro nadhini he will not confess becausee of feeling guilty thinking he is betraying tanya but when he finds the truth... wait for it... 😉
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daviashree

@davia389

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

one more promo:karan and nadhini kisses again..
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h&g ki deewani

@h&g ki deewani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

wow,KARAN&NANDINI kisses again..............hey yaar plz post the next part,can't wait for ur next part......................so post it soon re!

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STUD_99

@STUD_99

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

Fantastic once again.....
Yaar davia plzz write some funny nok jhoks and fighting between them before the love takes place.......
I absolutely loved the kissing and lipstick scene.......
Keep up the good work!!!!!!!

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daviashree

@davia389

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Posted: 18 years ago

#20

i need some favour from u all if more karan nadhini/hiten-gauri fanss askk themm to read thiss as i dont know many as it may be liked by them alsoo thats whyy..
plss helppp too increase my viewer..it is a request...as i dont know many fans..
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