Kidnap

NOTE FOR UNDER 12s:

The following Fan Fiction contains mild violence and may contain refernces to guns and other weapons.

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Hey Peeps!

After my recently new FF Nightfall, my mind is overloading with lots of ideas! So here is another FF: (Note: The starting will be a bit boring, so if you get tired of reading it, just skip ahead if you want to the interesting bit.)

Main Characters:

Riya - Karishma Tanna

Blane - Zac Efron

KIDNAP

The corridor was noisy with the sound of about 50 people trying to push past each other and get to class. Outside a classroom, a girl called Riya leant against the wall, waiting for her Psychology class session. Someone tapped her shoulder and she turned around. It was Blane. He smiled in a way that would make anyone melt...

"Hey, how are you?"he asked.

"I'm alright, what about you?" she replied

"Just had Chemistry...and frankly...our new teacher is a bit..."

"Strict? Scary? Stupid?"

"Let's just say...a bit eccentric..."

"He's a bit crazy? At least he won't blow up the lab like my teacher did!"

"I'm telling you Riya, a guy who eats chocolate and cheese sandwhiches is nowhere NEAR sane!"

They both giggled, just as Mr Logan stepped outside into the corridor. "Right, class!" he said in a scottish accent.[Hint hint: David Tennant] "Could everyone quieten down so that we could get some Psychology done! Alright, please lead in and keep the volume low!" The sixth form class ambled into the room, as Riya heard faintly in the background, Mr Logan telling Lauren Cooper off [Hint hint: Catherine Tate].

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The bell for lunch break rang, and the bored class at once jumped up from their chairs ready to get some food as soon as possible.

"Are you going to the canteen?" asked Blane, as he slumped his bag over his shoulder.

"Nope," Riya answered. "Got my own lunch today."

"Oh right, 'cuz I was wondering if you could come with me to give in my coursework to Miss Tate, she said I needed to give it in around the first 5 minutes of lunch break."

"Yeah, sure." How could she refuse?

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INTERESTING BIT!

Blane and Riya walked along the corridor towards Miss Tate's office, when suddenly:

"Oh no! I need to hand in my Drama coursework! Or Mr Jameson will probably give me a D! I'll be right back!"

Ruya was gutted that she had to leave Blane, but she was even more worried that now Mr Jameson would have an excuse to give her a detention. She hurried down to the corridor to the drama teachers' office. She quickly took out her drama file and knocked on the office. No answer. She opened the door and stepped in. No one. She put the folder quietly onto Mr Jameson's desk, and turned around. Then it all happened so fast. She felt the searing pain of something heavy hit the back of her head, and everything went black...

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So what do you guys think? It's moving along a little slow, but I'm gonna add more dramatic parts!

Gauri xXx

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Coming up:

Riya finds herself somewhere dangerous...
We find out Blane's dangerous secret...
Things take a dangerous turn, and we find another character come into the story...

Keep checking back...I'm gonna type up the next bit now!

Gauri xXx 😊

EDIT: Here's Part 2

PART 2

Riya woke up to see a white ceiling above. Her head throbbed with pain. She groaned and clenching her head with one hand, propped herself to sit up beside the wall. She looked around herself, and noticed she was in a walk in clothes cupboard. It was fairly large enough to stand up in and walk a few steps about in. After a few minutes, she managed to stand up, using the wall as support, and edged towards the door. She looked through the keyhole to see a room with white walls, a white desk, floorboards, two white sofas and several black and white framed photos hung up on the walls. She double checked to make sure there was no one in the room, and then opened the door. She walked out into the room. "That was easy." she thought. "Too easy..."

She used the wall for support again, and crept to the door, opened it slightly ajar, and checked the passage was clear. She rested against the bannister of the stairs for a few minutes, to gain her bearing. The head injury wasn't hurting as much, and she managed to creep down the stairs without being heard or seen. She heard a shout and froze. She moved to the room where she thought she had heard it...

She looked through the gap of the hinge of the door. She saw a man talking to an unknown person. He looked around in his 30s. He had dark brown hair and was wearing a black suit with matching polished shoes that looked clean enough to eat off. He looked quite rich with a watch on around his wrist that looked quite expensive and a watch hanging from his pocket. That, and the fact that he was in this enourmous house, probably meant he was a millionaire! She listened intently to their conversation. The man spoke. "What has the girl gotta to do with the operation? If you don't tell me then I swear that I'll-" She heard the muffled voice of the person he was talking to: "Don't hurt her! She doesn't know anything..." She felt the voice was familiar, and could sense the pain in his voice. The rich man slapped him, and the sound echoed up to the high ceiling of the room, bouncing of the walls. "Unless, you speak up sonny boy...you might not see her again..."

Riya shuffled to the right and strained to see who the person was that the familiar voice belonged to. He was bound to a chair, with a wound on his head and a cut on his lip. '...And a smile that would melt anyone...'

It was Blane.

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Sooo....

What do you think of it?

Gauri xXx

novel "KIDNAPPED"is my favourite ur story also sounds great .....looking forward to read more

best of luck 😃

Originally posted by: cute_face86

novel "KIDNAPPED"is my favourite ur story also sounds great .....looking forward to read more

best of luck 😃

Thank-you!

I've updated so now it's more interesting and I guarantee you will LOVE the end of Part 2...

I'll try get part three up as soon as possible. 😃

Gauri xXx

awesome! 😃

cant wait 4 da next part - gotta find out more about this! 😳

gud job! 👏

omg dat was also really nice..... u have greattt writing skillss.. keep it up 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: babiilovexox3

omg dat was also really nice..... u have greattt writing skillss.. keep it up 👏 👏 👏

😳 Thank-you! 😃

PS. I luv your avatar...sooo sweet!

I'm gonna try my best to write up part 3 today!

Part Three:

Blane doesn't seem to be who we think he is...
There will be a lot of action! And there may be some violence.
Riya is about to find out that the whole thing is complicated...VERY complicated...

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PART 3

Riya stared on in shock. It was so hard to take everything in...it was happening so fast...she had just been handing in her drama coursework and then some unknown person knocked her out...she woke up in this house...and now she saw that Blane had been kidnapped by this rich guy...and they were talking about a girl and an operation...

A thousand questions spun around in her mind: Who had knocked her out? Why was she here? Who was the rich guy? Why was Blane involved? What was this operation? And why was Blane wearing that outfit? He was dressed with a black shirt, black jacket and black trousers...hopefully fake leather (She's a vegetarian)...Then she noticed he had something in his ear...it looked like a black Bluetooth system...it reminded her of what the agents in the movie 'Dus' wore...then it struck her...but he couldn't be...

She stopped contemplating for a moment to eavesdrop again:

Blane looked at the rich guy: "I'm not gonna tell you anything, Hudson...I'm trained not to blurt things out..."

The rich guy, Mr Hudson, grabbed his hair: "Yeah? Well I'm trained to get what I can out of you...and I think you will..."

"Really? What makes you so sure?" Riya saw the look in Blane's eyes...he looked at Hudson with hate and a feeling of detest.

"Well, because you see...that broad that's upstairs-"

Blane interupted him immediately through gritted teeth: "Her name is Riya, and she is NOT some broad!"

"Whatever she is..." Hudson waved his hand vaguely and Riya felt rather insulted. "The matter is...if you don't speak up...then we might have to it the hard way...and she might...let's say...have to be disposed of..." At this point, Hudson reached into his trouser pocket and pulled out a black gun. Riya's eyes widened with fear and she saw the feeling in Blane's eyes turn at once from hate to fear.

"You wouldn't..."

"Wouldn't I? Do you want to take the risk?" Hudson spun the gun around his fingers as if it was his car keys...as if it was just a toy...

You know what Hudson? There's two reasons why that won't work. Number one - because if you touch a hair on her head then you certainly won't get anything out of me...and number two - you're just a sad, old *******!"

Hudson snarled and used the gun barrel to hit Blane across the head. Riya couldn't stand it anymore. She threw open the door, trying to run to Blane. But then someone grabbed her arms from behind and pinning her against the door so that she couldn't move. A security guard which she hadn't seen.

Hudson smirked. "Riya...how nice of you to join us..."

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I'll try to do Part 4 today too!

Gauri xXx 😊

wow gauri....i love it!!! 😃 😃 😃 trust me frm now on i m #1 fan of ur FF.. 😳 😳 ...it sounds so real and very interesting.... 😉 😉

Originally posted by: FrEnDs8

wow gauri....i love it!!! 😃 😃 😃 trust me frm now on i m #1 fan of ur FF.. 😳 😳 ...it sounds so real and very interesting.... 😉 😉

Whoop! My FF has a fan!

Thanks FrEnDs8!

Hopefully I'll get Part 4 up soon!