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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Parts Wonderful Story so far cont soon

thnkkss hun' will continue soon😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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imp:when i put 2 😆 that means the character is laughing wen i put one 😆 that means im just laughing.
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5th epii;;
...Same scene as last epi, Kajjal and Anita watching the little kids play.
Anita:Kajjal! Arent they cute?
Kajjal: Aneet, can we please leave? these kids are annoying!
Anita: omg, Sach mein, what kind of mom will you turn out to me, hahaha(Anita laughng) 😆
Kajjal: Who said I want kids? And im going to go watch those guys play basketball, cum if ur not or im going!
Anita: Acha baba, lets goo.

At the game...well well well...who do they see? Aaryan!! Aaryan's playing bball with all his consentration, so doesnt see them. But they stand there watching him.
Kajjal: wow! Look at his bball moves!
Anita:phhhtt i could beat him anytime.
Kajjal: Oh sureeee...waisa look at what he's wearing not his usual cool looking clothe but gym clothe!

Anita: so what? He look's nice 😳 *blush*
Kajjal:OoooOooo haan haan voh to bohat acha hein!
Anita:Acha chup! game dekho.

They quietly watch the game. Finally when the game was over it was 25-22, Aaryan had won! They were just about leaving when sumone tapped them on the shoulder. It was Aaryan.
Aaryan: Excuse me?
Anita: uhmm hi
Aaryan: Anita, Kajjal! u guys?
Anita: yeah, we came and we say you playing and we thought we could watch and. . .
Aaryan: 😆 thats why i came here, I saw sumone watching us but in the distance couldnt see who it was!
Kajjal: It was us. waisa where's Arjun?
Aaryan: Oh he's in the kids area watching the kids. He jus simply adores kids!
Kajjal: Oh....acha. (all shocked) waisa, all your friends are gone of the court, mind if i suggest you play versing Anita, she's not too bad herself!
Aaryan: Oh really? hmmm. . .
Anita: Nahien, im not too good. Kajjal's just bluffing!
Kajjal: Oh no I aint! she beat this guy named Abdul in our "basti" and he's the best!
Aaryan: well then, how bout sum one on one?
Anita: uhmm, sure!

Anita and Aaryan play while Kajjal goes to the kids area, to visit Arjun!
Aaryan: Anita you'll lose.
Anita:not a chance.


They start playing, "accidently" Aaryan brushes his shoulder against Anita's 😳 😳 😳
But this didnt make Anita back off, in the end Anita won!!! 19-22.
Anita: Dekha tumne? you play like this!
Aaryan: Acha jee. tumko Math, Science, singing, aur basketball ati hein? wow, im impressed. Hey, why dont we meet in the cafe, the one on the right side of the park, I'm going to the bathroom, until then why dont you go get a seat?
Anita: Okay, lekin Arjun aur Kajjal?
Aaryan: Anita, Arjun is the worlds biggest flirt, and I think Kajjal isnt no less. So lets just leave them where they are. and we go eat?
Anita: hehehe teek. Okay hurry though.

Anita skips along the way thinking, "yeh Aaryan itna ameer (riich) aur mujhse dosti kyu kar raha hein? Itna acha, sweet, nice, honest and handsome larka, ive never seen before. He's just too good! 😳
Anita sits down and the waiter comes...
Waiter: Maam, anything for you yet?
Anita: no not right now.

After a while Aaryan comes, wearing a sweatshirt, looking very very hawtt.
<<<tht one.
Anita: you changed?
Aaryan: yeah, those were my gym clothe, these are the clothe I wore here i just wore those to play.
Anita: Oh. 😆 😆 yeah i sort of noticed you werent in ur "cool clothe" that time. 😆 😆
Aaryan: you know me pretty well ehh?
Anita: Nahien vohh uhmm.. 😳 😳
Aaryan: you sound very cute wen u say nahien...vohh..uhmm and then blush. 😆
Anita: 😆 😆
Aaryan: anyways, want sum food? How bout sum butter-chicken, raita, and naan?
Anita: Aaryan! that's my favorite lunch, butterchicken, raita, and naan!!!
Aaryan: Saach mei? look's like we're made for each other!
Anita: 😳 what do you mean?
Aaryan: Exactly what you heard!
Anita: Nahien..voh...umm 😳 😳
Aaryan: 😆 😆 Again vohi nahien voh umm then blushing 😆 😆
Anita: acha kaana order karo.
Aaryan: Waiter!!
waiter: yes
Aaryan: we'd like butterchiken raita and naan and sum coke.
waiter: will bring it right away

After the waiter left Anita & Aaryan talked about general things like whose in there familes, whos there teachers. . .but awhile later music starts playing, many couples get up and dance, but Anita and Aaryan dont. But when the song Jeene ke Ishaare from Phir milenge started playing Aaryan couldnt resist.
Aaryan: Anita, if you don't mind can you dance to this song?
Anita: Aaryan...sure.

Slowly they both get up and dance to the slow dance to Jeene Ke ishaare and the to Tere Bin from Bas Ek Paal and slowly then to Ya rabba from Salaam-E-Ishq they just couldnt stop
<<(Imagine them in the othr clothe) Slowly all the other couples notice how beautiful they looked and left the whole dance floor for them and went to there seats to watch 'em. Finally wen the ended they hear clapping 👏 👏 👏
They blush and go sit down and eat there food.
***********End of Epi***********
Was it too boring?
Did you like it?
Do you think Arjun and Kajjal are.... 😉
Whats going to happen next?
please leave comments 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
loved the part it wasn't boring
do continue soon
kajjal and arjun must be flirting with each other since both of them are flirts
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Mrs.SalmanKhan


Was it too boring?

NOPE!!! I loved it!
Did you like it?

Liked it? 😕I LOVED IT!
Do you think Arjun and Kajjal are.... 😉

They are maybe having some romantic moments! I guess.
Whats going to happen next?

I can't guess! You are just too amazing. I want to read more!!!
please leave comments 😃

You are an amazing writer! Doc continue soon!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

You are an amazing writer! Do continue soon!!!

🤗🤗🤗 awhhh thnkss hun'! u made my day😆 Will definitly continue soon😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#36

First of all, I'd just like to say thnksssss sooo much for the lovely comments u guys have been sending me! Luv you all 😳 and starting from 2day im going to start doing a small recap thing.
6th epi;;
recap: Last epi, Anita and Aaryan had danced and everyone started clapping for them at the resturant.
Aaryan and Anita were eating there butterchicken and chatting about what had just happened.
Anita: I never noticed all those ppl were watching us.
Aaryan: Me neither, it's hard to keep up with this world when all I can see is u.

Anita was about to say something but before she could
another girl nd boy comes out of no where and says
Gurl:Wowee, butterchikken without us?
Anita: 😆 😆 Nahien Nahien, Kajjal theres enough for you and Arjun. (It was Kajjal and Arjun!)

Aaryan: Arjun Kajjal pull up sum seats, theres enof food but I'll order some more drinks.
Kajjal and Arjun: Arrite.

Everyone starts eating, while Anita's eating she starts thinking about wht she just saw, Arjun with his hands around Kajjal, Kajjal and Arjun smiling all goofyly. Aaryan notices too. Thats why he asked Anita to come with him, over to the side.
Aaryan: Did you see that?
Anita: Arjun and Kajjal? yup I noticed that! Hand in hand 😆 😆
Aaryan: Saach mei, they look nice together ehh?
Anita: 😆 😆 suree. Lets head back b4 they cum looking for us

Anita and Aaryan were walking when Anita slipped and for balance without thinking she grabbed Aaryan. Aaryan fell and Anita fell on top of here. 😳
For a moment they couldnt stop looking at each other
After a moment of gazing into each others eyes. Anita got up.
Anita: Sorry, I was going to fall and I just grapped you-
Aaryan didnt let her finish
Aaryan: No need for sorry, especially since I enjoyed it. It was a beautiful moment.
Anita shyly runs away.
Anita runs to her table smiling and sits dow.
Arjun:Oii hoii, why u smiling so much? Kya kia Aaryan nei?
Anita: ummm...nothing.

Aaryan also smiling comes and starts eating.
Arjun mischieviously starts singing "Humko Deewana Karge" Kajjal starts blushing, alot.
Kaajjal:Anita, I think we should start walking home now. Aunti-Ji had said to not be late.
Anita:Oh yes!!! Aaryan Arjun, this was a lovely afternoon (or evening, whatever 6:30-7:30 is ) But now we gotta rush.
Aaryan: We'll drop you guys off.
Anita: No no, its alrite you guys finish eating, we'll go.
Aaryan: Are you sure?
Anita: yes.

Anita and Kajjal say bye and head home. . .
******************End of Epi*********************
Did you like todays epi?
Was it long enough?
Do you think Anita likes Aaryan now too?
How long will it take Aaryan to confess his love?
....Keep reading Anita and Aaryan's "Pyaar Ki Kayamat"...
Please leave comments 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
nice part actually loved it
do continue soon
aaryan bhi koi kam flirt nahi hai
aaryan ki confession tou app hi karwa sakti hain since you are the writer
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Mrs.SalmanKhan


Did you like todays epi?

I liked this one! I think you are improving every part.
Was it long enough?

Yah for my need I liked it.
Do you think Anita likes Aaryan now too?

Obviously, She blushed and if she hates him, then why would she keep on blushing.
How long will it take Aaryan to confess his love?

Depends on you! Depends on your thinking. But don't make it too late. Till he gets married to that wierdo aayesha.
....Keep reading Anita and Aaryan's "Pyaar Ki Kayamat"...
Please leave comments 👏

Your part was great! as always. Can't wait till the next part!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
aww I love you guys 😆 😆 😆 thnkss for the lovely comments. will continue soon. and I dont think Aaryan will ever marry Ayesha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
Important
Not many people are reading my fanfic, so I've decided not to continue it unless I got sum reply's bakk. Sorry to all the ppl tht wanted me to continue. I might continue if i get sum replies bakk 😭

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