Fanfic Abt Manthan - Back - Note (Pg 98) - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Ppl Part 4 and 5 will be up today. Just like 2 let u know that I've thought a name for it finally. Safar Pyar Ka and thats what the topic is going to be called so don't think it disappeared. And if u all take a look at my first post on Page 1 u can see an index of all my parts as well.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
awesome love it ofcourse manthan ke bare main hai haha 😳 😆
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Back with Part 4.

Part 4


He came out and noticed she had gone. Soon even he made his way downstairs. With everyone giving him weird looks he began to feel a bit uncofortable. Manthan took a seat next to his "Wife" and whispered something to her.

Manthan: Wait nahi kar sakti thi

Sneha: Main, aur tumhara wait karon. Tum ho kaun mere jo main tumhara wait karti?

Manthan: I'm your husband

Sneha was about to reply when Tulsi interrupted their little conversation

Tulsi: Kya baatein hori hain. Humai bhi to batao.

Sneha: Ji, kuch nahi dadi main to manthan ko kehri thi ke ab office join karle.

Tulsi: Are Sneha tumne to mere man ki baat kardi.

Throughout this conversation Manthan kept giving Sneha "I'm gonna get u looks". But she payed no attention to his baseless threats. Well thats what she thinks but everyone knows that Manthan Virani always gets revenge. Always.

Tulsi paired up with Karan who forced Manthan to join the office asap as he was now a married man and it didn't look good that he sits at home doing nothing. He tried to argue back but it was pointless as his "Tulsi Dadi's" decision was always final.

Sneha felt she'd accomplished something when Archita suddenly interrupted the heated conversation that was going on.

Archita: Dadi, bhaiyya office to join karlenge lekin inke honeymoon ka kya hoga?

Tulsi: Are haan, main to bhool gayi

Pari: Bhabhi, where do you want to go?

Sneha: Pari, honeymoon pe to hum chale jayenge par abhi to Manthan ko office join karne do.

Karan: Bilkul nahi. Maa, hum ye bhool hi gaye bechare ki abhi to shaadi hoyi hai. Hume pehle inko Honeymoon pe bhejna chahiye. Itne chup kyun ho Manthan?

Manthan: Ji Dad, jo sneha ne kaha sayi hai hum baad me chale jayenge.

Tulsi: Waa, ab to sneha ki har baat sahi lage gi.

They all teased the two of them and the outcome was Honeymoon for the two lovebirds in London. Well not lovebirds but thats what everyone thought they were. Tanya thought Sneha was a wonderful daughter-in-law. Everyone thought Manthan was madly in love with her but the truth was he passionatley hated her. Yes, hated her.

Coming up: Manthan-Sneha confrontation in the bedroom and Honeymoon!

Edited by shafaq92 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Awesome once again... Fantastic.. I can't wait till the next Part yaar... Plzzzz conttt sooon.. I am addicted to this ff now❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was really great. I am a biiiigggggg fan og manthan. and this is the first FF about him that i am reading. Do continue with your next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
Dat was so gud...cant wait 4 da rest.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
HURRY UP WRITE THE NEXT ONE I JUST CANT WAIT U R REALLY GOOD 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
that was great 👏
please continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
Aww thanks for all ur lovely comments guys. Will continue soon. The nxt part will be up tomorrow afternoon. As soon as I come back from school. Thanks again. Glad u all liked it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
i luved it....i read all your parts....i jus luved it...plzz continue...

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