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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice part! 👏 👏 manthan is cute..kavya is notty 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

very nice part! 👏 👏 manthan is cute..kavya is notty 😆

thanks

thanks to comment on each part of my ff , nice of u

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Posted: 17 years ago
ur absolutely welcome
besides ur ff rocks 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

ur absolutely welcome
besides ur ff rocks 👏

Thankssssss....

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Posted: 17 years ago

DeeWane

It was night Time , the guest have started to come ...
Today was The Sangeet

Bhoomi was in her room trying to call Joyedeep

Bhoomi : pick up the phone joydeep , pick up the phone...

Anjali come in the room and see bhoomi worried face ,

Anjali : kiya huwa anju ...

Bhoomi had tears in her eyes

Kavya who was passing see bhoomi and anjali in the room...

he enter...

Kavya : HellOo kiya ho raha hai ider

kavya see bhoomi is crying

Kavya : kiya huwa bhoomi ...

Kavya than look at anjali and ask her what happen ...anjali say i don't kno (first time they didn't argue and were serious)

Anju : Bhoo ...tell na what happen

Bhoomi : Wo...Joye...joyedeep...

Kavya : kiya huwa joydeep ko

Bhoomi : voh ..phone nahin utha raha

Anjali : bass itni si baat

Bhoomi : i am worried ... kahin usko...

Kavya : hey don't worry bhoomsi ...vaisse bhi joyedeep ne manthan ko call kiya tha today...lekin vo nakul tumare pass tha to nahin de sake

Bhoomi: bhaya joyedeep shaadi se phele a to jahaiga na

Anju : Bhoomi ...don't worry voh a jahai ...or jahan tak rahi shaadi ka sawal ... bhoomi tumain lagta hai ki hum tumain us oulou ...
Kavya : heyyy i though you call me only oulou

Anju: no ur duffer...whatever ... kiya tumain lagta hai ki hum tumain uss oulou se shaadi karne dege

Bhoomi said no with her head

Kavya : now smile

bhomi smile

Kavya : that like a good girl...waisse mujhe laga tha ki tum anjali ki shakal dekar ro rahi thi

bhoo laugh and anjali hit him

Kavya : ouchhh

Anjali : shut up and go change party will start

(anjali smile from inside she was thinking that this big monckey have a big heart inside ... but he will still remain a duffer)

On the other hand ...

manthan on his laptop

Manthan : i think time as come for us to meet

Roshni : yeah ... i want to meet you the same day when we talked for the time

Manthan : whish is in 5 day

Roshni : abh tum hi batao kider milenge

Manthan : jahan sirf tum or main ho...

Roshni : agar jaga ka naam batao ge to ziada asan nahin hoga...

Manthan : tum bhi na...vaise naam to batado

Roshni : itni jaldi bhi kiya hai

Manthan : jaldi ??? let me remenber how many years had pass

Roshni : lol...Chalo ... mujhe tayar hona hai

Manthan : itni jaldi abhi 5 day hai

Roshni : stupid ... iske liye nahin... vaisse Mulakat ke din white kapre pehena

Manthan : White ??? kyun mujhe widwa banana chati ho

ROshni : ley...pffff maine yeh is liye kaha , kyunki mujhe lagta hai ki tum white main bohut handsome lago ge

Manthan : acha ... bina dekhe pata chal gaya ki main handsome hoon ... vaisse agar main badshakal nikla to

Roshni : maine tumse pyaar kiya hai ... tumari suraat se nahin

Manthan : and i love you for that

Roshni : chalo romance band karo ... main ja rahi hoon

Manthan : phir kabhi jaa rahin hoon na kehna ... jakar aha rahin hoon kehna

Roshni : vah vah ...to mister main ja kar aha rahin hoon

they both close their laptop and smile

Ok so the saangeet had started and everyone comes downstair

Roshni saw manthan he was dressed in white...

Roshni : hey u look handsome in white

Manthan : thanks its on someone orders ...anyway ur not less

Roshni : thank u ji

both smile and start to talk

On the other hand kripa was standing alone

Angad comes and says

Angad : ho ji ...main kiya tussi bari soni lag rahi ho ji

Kripa : ji mainu pata hai ji

Angad : te hum kaisse lag rahai hai ji

Kripa : mmmmmm ...

Angad : speechless

Kripa : nahin word mil gaya

ANgad smik and say : acha batao ...handsome haina

Kripa : nahin bilkullllll bandar ki taran

Kripa gigle

ANgad : so not funny...tumse to main acha hi lag raha hoon

Kripa : ho ho ... kuch hi der phele to tum meri tarif kar rahai the ji ...jahan tak mujhe maloom hai ji

Angad : kabhi kabhi jhoot bolna parta hai

Kripa : isliye to main bhi bola hai

Angad look at her : to tum...

kripa leave and smile

Sujal was standing there alone Kashish see him and goes toward him ...

Kashish : waou colgate paste to bohut faide dar raha .... chera bilkul khil raha hai

Sujal laugh : dekha ... tum bhi try karna

Kashish : kiya matlab mera chera nahin khil raha

Sujal : Mmmmm .... nahin main party ke baath main , main tumain apna toothpaste pass karon ga

Kashish mouth drop

Sujal leave while gigling

Kashish close her mouth and says

Kashish : acha mister ... jock karne ke moodh main ho

Nandini : may i have you intension please

everyone look at nandini

Nandini : yaar kiya batain kar rahai hai abh saab ... yeh sangeet hai kuch gana shana ho jahai ...

everyone : yeahhhh

Nandini : what about antakshri

Karan takes the mike from her wife

Karan : chalo antakshari ho jahai...ajj ladkyin kuch harne (lose) ka bara hi shauk hai

every boy chear up for karan

Nandini : Hoye ... kiya samja ... hum ladkyan harne walon main se nahin hai

Karan : to ho jahai

Nandini : intezaar kiss baath ka

give an i am the best look to Karan

Nandini : so girls who start

Anjali : ofcouse me ... special song for kavya

Everyone look surprise and shocked

Kavya was surprise but than happy and smirk

Anjali : hoye ziada khush na ho...

Angad : start to karo

Anjali : Bhatke Panchi (point toward kavya , kavya is like "who me?" and than smirk)

Bhatke Panchi Bhool Na Jana

Yeh Jag Tera Nahin Thikana (she make her way to strugle him but nandini comes and take her back while gigle)

Na Na Na Bhatke Panchi

Bhool Na Jana Yeh Jag

Tera Nahin Thikana (she makes him stand)

Bhool Se Tu Yahan Pe Aaya (she kick on his feet , he is like ouchhhhhhhh)

Tere Liye Yeh Des Paraya

Ek Din Waapas Padega Jana (she guide him toward the door)

Jana Jana Jana Jana (she make sign with her hand)

Bhatke Panchi Bhool Na Jana

Yeh Jag Tera Nahin Thikana

see the video you will imagine her better : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kHpT7GwgQao

Everyone laugh and aplause behind

Kavya : hoye meri kareena abh wapas a sakta hoon

anjali : nevermind

Nandini : so boyssss

Kashish : abhi gane ka josh hai yeah bhi se hi haar maan gahai

Sujal : Anjana dil kiya jane (he up his eyesbrow)

Begana dil kia jane (kashish impress that he sings , and its one of her favourite)

Dar jaata hai kyun paake khushiyan

Yeh jo main Beekarar hoon

har lambha ishq to nahin

yes jo bekhudi si hai

tu jaise mujhme hai kahin

song : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n0tuX3HUCEQ

Angad : vah mere sheir

Manthan : to ladkyo ... apni har ke liye koi ghana

Nandini : chup manthan ... in ladkyon main tumari mom bhi hai

MAnthan is like "oops"

Karan : vah vah ... to ladki ji app hi koi ghana suna di jiya or vo bhi N se

Nandini : Neele neele ambar par

chaand jab aaye

Pyaar barsaaye humko tarsaaye (She smile at karan)

Aisa koi saathi ho aisa koi premi ho (She makes face to karan)

Pyaas dil ki bujha jaaye

Neele neele ambar par

chaand jab aaye

Pyaar barsaaye humko tarsaaye

Aisa koi saathi ho aisa koi

premi ho Pyaas dil ki bujha jaaye

song : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I8Ab_vIuaMs&feature=relat ed

Girls cheer

Karan: haan haan yeh bhi pucho ki jawani main kaun gata tha inke liye (nandini shy)

Priya : lo phir shuru ho gahai romance ke saath

everyone gigle

Angad : ya ali reham ali
ya ali yaar pe qurbaan hai sabhi
ya ali madad ali
ya ali yeh meri jaan yeh meri zindagi

mujhe kuchh pal de purvat ke
faki hampe chahat ke
rahe bechain dil kab tak
milen kuchh pal toh raahat ke (he think when he will find Bubly)
chahat pe ishq pe haa mita doon luta doon
main apani khudi

bina tere na ek pal ho na bin tere kabhi kal ho
yeh dil ban jaaye pathhar ka na ismein koi hulchul ho
yaar pe ha luta doon mita doon
main yeh hasti
ya ali reham ali
ya ali yaar pe qurbaan hai sabhi
ya ali madad ali
ya ali yeh meri jaan yeh meri zindagi

Karan : vah vah dil khush kar diya

Nandini : vaise angad ...yeh kiss yaar par qurban hai sabhi

Kavya : vah aunty kiya sawal ... chal jawab de ...

Angad : haseen sa chehra
kamal khi baathein
Voh kahin au nahin

mere samne hai bethi

Kripa was just near Nandini , everyone where shocked

Manthan : H1 kripaaa

Angad : hoye nahinnnn Nandini aunty

Everyone laugh

Karan : hoye meri biwi par line mar raha hai

Nandini was gigling

Karan : koi baath nahin mar le ...baad main tu hi pachtahai ga

Nandini drop her mouth and pick up a pilaw and trow it on karan

Karan : haye nishana sida dil par laga

Nandini : continu please

ROshni : Ishq hua, kaise hua (think the first time she talk with her sweet love)

Achha hua jaise hua

Na main jaanoon, na tu jaane (she think how he should be in real)

Kyoon ho gaye hum deewane
Arre re re re re

Jhuki jhuki nazarein hai
Ruki ruki saansein hai
Dhak dhak karta hai dil

Jaage jaage armaan hai
Soya soya yeh jahan hai
Chori chori aake mujhe mil (she think when they will meet)

Anjali in roshni hears : Itni betabh na ho ... vaisse kuch dinon ka intezaar hai na

anjali gigle and rshni shy

Manthan : lakadi ki kaathi kaathi pe ghoda
ghode ki dum pe jo maara hathauda
dauda dauda dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda

ghoda pahuncha chauk mein chauk mein tha naai
ghodeji ki naai ne hazaamat jo banaai
chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag
ghoda pahuncha chauk ...
dauda dauda dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda

youtube : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IutoDZNm0ow

Everyone mans look at manthan

Manthan : whats ...dude its a song...yeah harna prefer karo ge

Everyboy start to sing : ghoda tha ghamandi pahuncha sabji mandi
sabji mandi baraf padi thi baraf mein lag gai thandi
chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag
ghoda tha ghamandi ...
dauda dauda dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda

They had a good laugh

Kripa : aaja aaja aaja aaja ho
aaja aaja piya ab toh aaja - 2 (refering to her bunty)
dekh to kaisi haalat hui hain
aake humko gale se laga ja (she think of them hugging when they were young)
tujhse milne ki chahat hui hain
aaja aaja piya ab toh aaja - 2
dekh to kaisi haalat hui hain
bekaraari mein raahat hui hain
aaja aaja aaja aaja ho
aaja aaja piya ab toh aaja

Karan : hoye jo bhi iska piya fata fath aja ... vaisse bhi abhi kuch hi der yeh sari ladkyan rone wali hongi apni har ke wajah se

Nandini : vah vah vah (mocking tone) Dekho zara mister ke nakhre ... Haro ge na to pure 2 month ke liye tum khana or ghar saaf karna...vaisse bhi bolti band ho jahai gi or karo ge (imiting an olf man) haye meri kamar (ho my back) budhe

Karan : abhi toh main jawaan hoon - 2
abhi toh main - 2 jawaan hoon

husn laajawab hoon shabab hi shabab hoon - 2
mohabbaton ki shaan hoon aashiqon ki jaan hoon
abhi toh main - 2 jawaan hoon
abhi toh main jawaan hoon -

Everyboys : mWAAAA kiya bath hai

Kavya : Kyun nandini aunty ...is ke age apka koi jawab hai itna handsomne or young patidev mila hai

Nandini : kavya bete ...agar rasgule or kal sahi salamat hutna hai na to chup chap behtho

Karan : varna meri jaissi halat kar degi tumari yeh so called young lady

Everyone laugh

It was time know for kashish to sing she had to sing with a "N"

nandini : go kashish go

Boys : 10 9 8 7

Kashish find a song and was going to sing when she looked at sujal who winked at her , her mouth drop

Boy : anddd 0 ...YEAHHHHH WE WON

nandini : kashish beta

Anju : kiya kahu ...yaar in dufferon ke samne hara diya na

Kashish : hey nhin cheating

Sujal : kiya cheating Kiyaa kiya humne bolo bolo bolo bolo

Kashish couldn't say anything

Manthan goes near sujal and whispear to him

manthan : kiya ankh mari

Sujal shy

Kavya : chalo saza do

Sujal : mmmmmm kashish ke liye ek song or performance or baki sabh ladkyon ke liye mmmm

KAvya : uthak bethak 20 baar yeh ke kar "we are big looser"

Anjali : NEVER

Kavya : dekho to sabse bari looser yehi to hai ....Bandri

Anjali : arghhhh

while later all the girls where doing uthak bethak , kavya passes near anjali and push her a litle and she falll

Anjali : tumain to main dekh lun gi

Sujal : so kashish you know

Kashish didn't say anything , sujal gigle and look away

Girl :ankhiya na maar mere - 2

Sujal return and see kashish songing


Kashish : ankhiya na maar mere yaar mundiya
tenu nai karna pyar mundiya
mere dil se o deewane nahi khel na
jaave jaave jaave mere dholna nahi bolna
jaave jaave jaave mere dholna (she oush him with her hips , sujal fall )
(ankhiya na maar mere yaar mundiya
tenu nai karna pyar mundiya) - 2
mere dil se o deewane nahi khel na
jaave jaave jaave mere dholna nahi bolna
jaave jaave jaave mere dholna

teriya sharartane hai mainu lutiya (kashish goes near kavya and point at anjali ...anjali see this and run after kashish with her chapal)
dil si deewana tere ud maar mitiya) - 2
dil sheeshe ka hain mera na uchalna (looking at sujal)
jaave jaave jaave mere dholna nahi bolna
jaave jaave jaave mere dholna

(bada harjaai hain tu neendra churaiya (goes near kripa and dance with her)
nazra ladake maite bada pachtaiya) - 2
bedarda dard mushkil hain ab jhelna(near roshni)
jaave jaave jaave mere dholna nahi bolna ( nandini and kashish perform and tease karan)
jaave jaave jaave mere dholna

ankhiya na maar mere
(ankhiya na maar mere yaar mundiya
tenu nai karna pyar mundiya) - 2
mere dil se o deewane nahi khel na
(jaave jaave jaave mere dholna nahi bolna
jaave jaave jaave mere dholna) - 2

While everyone was having fun on the other hand joyedeep was in front of a dor ...he take a deep breath and knock...

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice prt..cute one! 👏 cotninue asap 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

DeeWane...

Anjali was trying to call Joyedeep

ANjali : yeh joyedeep ka phone off kyun hai...agar joyedeep kaal nahin puncha to...mujhe kuch karna parega

Manthan : kiya huwa anjali

Anjali : kuch nahin...aise hi

Manthan : anjali u can tell

Anjali : voh joyedeep phone nahin utha raha mujhe daar hai ki kahin voh waqt par na punche to...

Manthan : i see...mujhe lagta hai plan B ...par todha ziada zor dena chayen

Anjali : matlab?

Manthan : waqt a gaya hai ki nakul ko pata chale ki tum usse kitna pyaar karti ho

Anjali : are you crazy, mujhe lagta hai uss kavya ke saat rehe kar tumare dimak ka bhi falooda bana diya , main or...

anjali don't let manthan speak

manthan : ANJALII

Anjali look at him

Manthan : main bavrha nahin ho gaya , jo main sochon ke tum us lafange se pyaar karti ho ...main acting ki baat kar raha hoon

Anjali : phewww haan to aise bolo na

Manthan : yaar ek to bolne bhi nahin deti ...kavya is right

Anjali : uss bandar ki to main...

Manthan : ufff ...

While manthan and Anjali were aranging a plan ... Everyone in the party were leaving

Kashish was on the door saying bye to the guest ...Sujal comes near her

Sujal : kiya baat hai bara acha nach leti hai aap

Kashish : kiya baat hai bari achi ankh mar lete hai app

Sujal : tumain kaise pata ki maine ankh mari

Kashish : ley mujhe hi to mari thi

Sujal : ur mistake ... main peeche wali soni ladki ko mar raha tha

Kashish mouth drop

Sujal : mum to band karo ... guest kiya samje ge

Sujal leave with a smirk

A guest : bye

Kashish look at the guest angrily

Kashish : kiya samaj ta hai apne app ko (refering to sujal)

Guest was like "what did i do"

Manthan and anjali were in the room kavya roshni bhoomi came also

ROshni : kiya huwa loozer kyun bulaya

Manthan : yaar ek hi game hara hoon tumse ...or apne ap ko world ki best player samaj rahi ho

Roshni : awwwww (give a frindly hug to manthan) bura nahin mante

Nakul was passing and see them all in the room ...he se anjali so he came also

Nakul : main jaane wala tha ...lekin ider kiya ho raha hai

Manthan : bass game khelne wale the (looking at roshni) is game main koi harne wala nahin hota

Roshni : haan haan ... abh to aise hi game khelo ge na

Nakul : can i join

anjali : sure come na

manthan look at anjali and wink

kavya was like "yeh kiya ho raha hai"

Anjali : truth or dare khele ghe botle jispar rukhi usko jawab dena hoga

Kavya : Akal ki phity ....is game ko spring the botle kehte hai

Anjali : hoye gorilla mujhe pata hai lekin tum jaisse dufferon ko samjana parta hai na ... kabhi zindagi main nahin khela hoga

Kavya : kyunki main buzy or kaam karta hoon tumari tara wela nahin betha

anjali : you...

MANTHNA : game start kare

bhoomi spring the bottle its stop on roshni

Bhoomi : so roshni truth or dare

ROshni : truth

Bhoomi : mmmm ... kiya tum kissi se pyaar karti ho

Anjali : tell the truth

Roshni : (red) haan

Bhoomi : heyyy kaun hai woh

ROshni : no only one question alowed

Manthan : bachara jo bhi ho usko tumare is gooroor ko jelna parega

Roshni pick a pillow and trough him

Roshni : ok my time

she spring the botle its stops on manthan

Roshni : hoho!

Manthan : dare

Roshni : phir soch lo

Anjali : manthan i think u should change

Manthan : no! dare !

Roshni : ok ...

roshni goes to the bathroom she come back with a shave shuim

Roshni : you have to put this on your head and have to do a chicken while saying i am a loozer boak boack boack

Manthanmouth drop

Anjali : dare is dare mister

Kavya was laughing like crazy

Manthan do what she said to do and roshni picture him , but manthan didn't see

Manthan : tumain to main dekh lon ga

Roshni : dekh lo

Manthan spring the bottle and it stop on anjali

Manthan make a sign to anjali and anjali said ok

Anjali : i pick truth

Kavya : daar gayi

Anjali : hoye monckey agar majbur nahin hoti to dare kar ke dikhati

Kavya : maj...

Manthan : sooooo (cutting kavya before anjali say dare) agar tumain humse koi ladka chuna ho to kaun chunti

Anjali : hoooo ... ok ...mmmm

she stand goes behind kavya

Kavya smirk

Anjali : ofcourseeee tum nahin (refering to kavya)

kavya : phewww heartatack ane wala tha mujhe

Anjali make a face : anyway i would choose nakul ofcourse

Bhoomi who know what she is playing at : heyyy nakul is MY fianc

Anjali : agar tumari shaadi nahin hoti na nakul se ... to main zarooooorr karti ...he is just perfet(make a face)

manthan gigle because he knew how difficult it was for her to say that

nakul was so happy inside...

nakul (thinking) : don't worry babes...

While this drama was going joyedeep was with a girl

Joyedeep : listen go to book tickets i have to go polie station

Girl : why

Joyedeep : someone stole my batwa i have to stop all the credit cards...

Girl : ok

Police station

Police man : ok wait here

While joyedeep was waiting his eyes stop on the wanted boad , his eyes stop on a photo and he froze there shocked

Policeman : what happen

Joyedeep : whos that man

Policeman : ho he is wanted for a crime ... he had killed a man...why do you know him

joyedeep look at the inspector esytantly

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow..really nice..
turth dare poprt was so cute...
anjali nakul...
bechara kavya 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
eijaz anitah : don't worry yaar anjali to bani hai sirf kavya ke liye 😉

proud 2 be... : Nakul ..poor him lol...thanks for you comms
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Posted: 17 years ago
i just read the whole thing its awesome.man was it nakuls pic?? damn..ur too good

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