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Posted: 17 years ago
please post comments so i can kno how many of you like my ff
ppleaseeee naahhh
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Posted: 17 years ago
really nice ff..ka r sooo cute..love them n ur ff 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

DeeWane

At home ,

Bhoomi was in her room , nakul come in

he hug bhoomi from behind , bhoomi shut her eyes

nakul : hey darling

He start kissing her neck and bhoomi push him a litle with her shoulder

nakul : what the matter

Bhoomi :...voh...nakul mujhe lagta hai humain todha sa wait karna chayen , vaise bhi kuch hi dinon main to shaadi hai

Nakul : hooo come on bhoom...

cut by his sell phone , bhoomi was like "phewww"

on the sell "private call" was flashing

Nakul : hello

Girl voice : kyun nakul Kyun

Nakul : kiya kyun ???

Girl voice : tumne mere saath aisa kyun kiya??

Nakul : what did i do , kaun ho tum (he goes on the balcony a bit away from bhoomi)

Girl : Nakul , main hoon sanjana , kyun chor diya tumne mujhe , main tumari zindagi barbaad kar doun ghi or badla lun ghi , dekh lena

tumari zindagi key yeh akhri din hai...

bip bip

Nakul : Hello helllooo (worried)

bip bip

bhoomi come from behind and say

Bhoomi : nakul

nakul jerk

Bhoomi : hey...are you ok

Nakul : mmm yeah yeah

next room manthan was laughing like crazy

roshni : were do you learn to have a voice like girl

Kavya : roshni tum bhi na...tumain nahin pata ke yeh ladki hi hai

Manthan : ha ha ha...very funny

Joyedeep : acha i am going out of town for somedays , i am going to find Sanjana

Manthan : anyway ...maine to act kar liya hai abh tumari bari anjali call him

Kavya : hu...WHY??

manthan : to meet nakul

Anjali : your so confused man

Anjali dial Nakul number

Nakul : hu...

again "private call"

Nakul : Listen you i swear if you do anything like that i will kill you

Anjali : euuummm...nakul its me anjali

Nakul (shock) : anjali ...voh

Anjali : kiya huwa nakul you seem worried

Nakul : mmm no nothing ...what did you call for

Anjali : ho just to kno if you wanted to go in the garden with me for a walk

Nakul looking around to see if bhoomi was near or not

Nakul : mm yeah sure

In the garden,

Anjali waiting for nakul

Anjali : pata nahin is oulou ka sach kabh samne ahai gha ke main usse ek zohur ka chanta marun

Kavya who is hidding behind a tree gigle : mere taraf se usko ek punch marna

Nakul : hey anju

Anjali : anjali

Nakul : kiya?

Anjali : nothing , how r u nakul

Nakul : thik

Anjali : vaise tum phone par kisko kehe rahai the "i will kill you"

Nakul : (cough) voh...voh..pata nahin koi phone karke dhamkiyan de raha tha isliye

Anjali : ho acha

nakul coming a litle bit near to anjali

phone ring

Anjali : ho ek min its my friend sanjana

nakul look at her in shock

Anjali : hello

Kavya : hoye us langoor se todha sa dur hi rehna

Anjali : (sweet tone) kyun ji

Kavya : Bcose

Anjali : vaise tum bohot stupid , duffer

Kavya : i kno sweety u love me

Anjali : itna ziada ke tum soch bhi nahin saktIII

Kavya : awww akhir ke to diya

Anjali : jab milenge to samne kehe dun ghi thik hai chalo by SAnjana

she hang off the phone

Nakul : Sanjana??

anjali : aww she is my friend , ider hi pass rehti hai

Nakul : ho ..ok , i will leave see ya tomorow

he smile at her , same for anjali

Nakul (thinking) : she is dam hot , and sweet...i will get her yeah(oulou da patha)

Anjali going to her room , when kavya call her

Kavya : so sweety tumain mujhse kuch kehna hai na

Anjali : hoo haan

smile to him come close to him , smile even sweetly and suddenly

kavya : haaaaaaaaa

anjali give him a kick

Anjali : bachu agar tumnai phir se mera picha kiya na to dekh lena teri mai mahaduri kar dun ghi

Kavya : ...u loozer ...

Anjali : good night duffer

Kavya : isko to main dekh lun gha

Anjali coming out of her room

Anjali : dekh lo

Next day ,

Market ,

Roshni : yaar hurry na ,

Kripa : yaar kashish ek toothpaste ke liye 100 saal laga rahi ho

Kashish : Yaar , we have to take good care of our teeth soo time to lagana chayen na

Anjali : kashuuu , vaise bhi tum radiostation main kaam karti ho na , so who will look at you sirf bolna hai na tumko

Kashish : Anjuuuuu

Anjali : yesss

Kashu : Shut up

Anjali return and pose herself on the conter

when she look in front of her , a man coming fast toward her with a knife andddd paammm in her stomach

Anjali so shocked , someone as just knife in her stomach she look with a tear at the man and its none other than kavya

Kavya look at her with anger

The girls are so shocked

Kavya seing anjali expression start laughing like crazy and shaw her the knif ,

anjali than feel nothing one her stomach no blood nothing

Kavya shaw the knif , it a false knife where the false lame come inside

http://youtube.com/watch?v=uuPwoItOX-M >>>>> look at the video its the exact scene with amir and juhi

Kavyaa : din chu din chu

Anjali : teriiiii toooo

kashish : haan yeh wala tooth paste

Anjali take the tooth paste and go to put on kavya , but kavya escape and the toothpast fall on Sujal

Sujal shocked

Anjali still angry : Sorry

and she run after kavya

roshni and kripa run after them not to have any death

Kashish laughing at Sujal

Sujal is lost in her laugh than come back into sense and come near kashish so close

kashish looking deep into is eyes with fear ,

kashish : (thinking) maine apna bara mum kyun khola , yeh itna pass kyun a raha hai , hai raba

Sujal : Acha hai , mera chera tumare dent ki tara chamke gha ,

he gigle and leave ,

kashish look at him leaving , and smile

kashish tough that he was so serious but no , he is nice

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
really nice prt!! nakulz cunning..and the kavyanjali scene was soo cute..esp wen he asks hher to stay away form nakul..aww dey mmake such a cute couple 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
kool part..was wondering wat the caption toothpaste meant 😆 tht was funny 😆 aw kavya is jealous..
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi i read the ff i loved it continue soon
aisha1 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
glad that there is more and more reader , feel good that u all like it and thXXXX for the comments i will post next part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part. i really liked that part cz tht scene is my fave frm ishq. please continue soon. lots of love zoya xxx 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

DeeWane

Angad was walking ... looking stuff ... Than his eyes stop on a girl ...angad smile looking at what the girl was doing

The girl was none other than Kripa

She was surrender by kids , she gives ballon to them ... than she put herself on a kid size and ask him for a sweet kiss on her cheek

he gives her and take the ballon...

she enjoy with the kids

Angad was so much impressioned by kripa ... he than place bubli at kripas place , flash of litle krip than the kripa...

kripa than come toward angad and snaps her finger in front of him , angad come back in sens

Angad : (thinking) yeah mujhe kiya ho raha hai

Kripa : angad???thik to ho na

Angad : nahin

Kripa : Hu??... kiya Huwa

Angad : abh ek bandri samne khari hai to chale ga nahin na

Kripa : ho acha (then realise what he said) fitey mum ...ANGADDD

angad laugh and run , kripa run after him

angad turn and kripa continue to run , angad hold her and make her swim and they had fun

but than they realise and feell awkoad and strange at the same time , they smile at eachother and takes differents way

thinking

Angad : yeh mujhe kiya ho raha hai

Kripa : ...kyun mujhe angad ka saath acha lagne laga hai...

Angad: ...kyun mujhe kripa main bibli nazar a rahi hai...

Kripa : ...kahin main angad se...

Angad : nahin nahin mai kaisse pyaar kar sakta hoon

Kripa : ...angad se??min sirf or sirf bunty ko chahati hoon

than anagd return to see kripa leaving , and he retake his way , same on kripa side she look behind to see angad leaving

while angad and kripa where confused , others where in the mall for the last shoping for the sangeet which takes place tonight

Kashish and bhoomi and sujal were doing their shoping and manthan was in a videogames shop

He was playing gamecube alone ... when someone talk

Girl : akele khelna bohut asan hai ...

Manthan return and see roshni

Manthan smile : koi mere level ka mile is game main to khelon na ...

Roshni : hoho ghuroor

Manthan : only truth

Roshni : acha to zaara humse to competition karo

Manthan : chalo agar harne ka itna shauk hai....

Roshni : hum harne walon se nahin hai , jitne walon main se hai...

They start to play race game

Manthan was leading ,

Manthan : haha

Roshni : ziada mat aso ...abhi jeete nahin ho duffer

Manthan looked at roshni suprisly

Manthan (thinking) : hey only cutie pie have the right to call me duffer

he smile

and they continue the game

roshni was so concentrated on the game she put her zuban (chin) outside without knowing

manthan find her so cute , he takes his mobile and takes her photo

She was looking so cute that he let her win

She jump with joy and give an HI5 to a child who was near her

Roshni : to mister attitude whoes the best

Manthan : Miss Googoor , i kno that I AM THE BEST

ROshni : Manthaaaaaaan

both laughed

While they continute to play anjali and kavya and priya (kavya s sister that i didn't mantion a lot lol i forgot like ekta)

where at the home decorating it

Nandini : anjali kiya tumne ras gule commend kiye hai??

Anjali : oops

Kavya : is oulou se pucha hai to obviously nahin milenge

Anjali : U GORILLA

kavya : CHIPKALI ...and stop insulting me ok...maine upar se tumara kaam kiya hai or...

Anjali : kaam , whats work???

Kavya : RASGULE COMMEND kiya hai

Anjali role her eyes

Karan comes : normal hei commend kiya ade se ziada tumne hi khane hai , ur favorite...dear nandini ne tumare liye hi to mangvahe hai

Nandini : haan to ...Kavya hai hi rasgule jaisse

Anjali : auty app rasgula ki insult kar rahi hai , is sand se compare karke

Kavya : UUUUUU ur just jealouse

while they were argumenting priya said

Priya : awwwww thay loookkkk so cute ,

Nandini : haina

Karan : bilkul hamare taran

Priya : aunty , uncle ji riomance ke mood main hai

nandini : (red) chal badmash

priya run

a while later

ANjali was on the stool she was putting garland , she takes the garlland from the maid without looking ...then the made leave without

saying to her...

Anjali without looking search for the garland and while searching she fall from the stool put a handsome man hold her , she looked into the bleu grey eyes

which weres kavyas

than priya comes

Priya : urm urm

Kavya leave anjali

Kavya : kiya chipkali ...jab dekho mujhe choone ke bahane banati ho

Anjali : what , i don't want to...

Kavya : be away from me i kno i kno

Anjali take and garland and trough it on kavya put it fall into is neck

Kavya : dekho abh shaadi karne pe tuli hiwi hai

Anjali : ARGHHHH

Kavya : ho bhago ...kha jahai gi

Anjali : NEVER MING

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice part! 👏 👏 manthan is cute..kavya is notty 😆

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