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Posted: 18 years ago
great part but i cannot believe wayam is back kust to seek revenge (is it swayam as in Vikas cuz The new Abir is Vikas to aint he or it the old one in this ff 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part!!!!! I wonder wat will happen?
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part
hope prithvi's dad helps them up...
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely... 👏 ..gr8 gng.. 👏 ..do cont soon.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
thnx 4 the comments 😊 gunna continue now
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~*~Previously~*~

A - Prithvi.....agar tu aunty se kehdo tho shahid voh uncle se baat kar sakte hai

P - mom se?

A - yeah.....koshish tho karlo.....tab tak main apne record label se baat karta hoon

~*~Part 21~*~

Prithvi gets out of his car and walks to the watchman.

P - kya Mr Bose ghar par hai?

W - ji nahin

P - Mrs Bose?

W - ji haan voh ghar par hai

Prithvi thanks him and knocks on the main door, a servant who Prithvi doesn't recognise opens the door

Ser - how may i help you sir?

P - can you call Mrs Bose please

Ser - aur aap kaun hai?

P - main unka beta hoon

The servant looks at him weirdly as he has never seen him before. He tells Prithvi to come in and wait in the hall. Prithvi waits in the hall until Shefali comes inside. She sees Prithvi's back and calls out to him

Sh - Prithvi!

Prithvi turns around and faces her and sees that she's happy to see him

P - hi mom

Sh - kaise ho beta?

P - teek hoon mom, aap?

Sh - tumhe dekhliya ab main teek hoon, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

P - kya ek beta apni mom se milne ke liye nahin ah sakta?

Sh - kaisi baatein kar rahe ho? of course you can, aao beto

P - main betne ke liye nahin aaya

Sh - tho?

P - aapse kuch maangne aaya

Sh - bolo beta

P - humhari jo company hai....APS Industries, ek aadmi hai jo usse barbad karna chahta hai

Sh - what!

P - aur voh koi aur nahin balki dad ka business partner hai Swayam Shergill

Sh - Swayam....

P - aur jab main dad ke paas gaya tha madat ke liye dad ne inkaar kar diya

Sh - mana kar diya?

P - haan aur main chahta hoon ke aap unse baat ki jiyie....mom please agar Swayam ke irade kamiyaab hue tho hum sab barbad ho jayenge, mere bache sarak par aa jayenge

Sh - nahin main aisa hone nahin doongi, tum befikar raho

P - thanks mom

Prithvi hugs his mom, then turns to leave

Sh - abhi ja rahe ho?

P - haan mom, agar ruka tho dad aa jayenge, aap sab kuch samal lijiye

Prithvi smiles and leaves, Shefali frowns

Sh (thinks) - Rohit tum aisa kyun kar rahe ho? she (6) saal baad humhara beta ghar aaya voh bhi madat maangne aur tumne inkaar kar diya.....main apne bete ko barbaad hone se bachaoon gi chahe kuch bhi ho

Meanwhile Rohit is in his office, he thinks about the time when Prithvi refused to call him dad, Rohit had fallen apart and then 3 years ago Swayam entered his life......

**flashback**

It is Prithvi's birthday, Rohit drives to the Khanna house and stands outside the house, he sees Prithvi smiling with everyone, he frowns and gets into his car and drives recklessly, Rohit begins to speed up and loses control of his car and crashes into a tree, he becomes unconcious. When he wakes up he finds himself in an hospital with a doctor hovering over him

Doc - Mr Bose, kaise ho aap?

R - I'm ok.....main yahan kaise aaya?

Doc - jab aapka accident hua tha tho aap bohat zakhmi ho gaye the tab ek aadmi ne aapko sahi waqt par yahan lekar aaya aur aapke ilaj ke saara karch utaya

R - acha? kaun hai voh?

Doc - main usse bulata hoon

The doctor goes outside, after a few minutes the door opens and Rohit sees a young man enter

??? - Mr Bose kaise ho aap?

R - main teek hoon, tum kaun ho?

??? - ji mera naam Swayam hai.....Swayam Shergill

R - well Swayam, thank you for bringing me to the hospital

Sw - its ok sir

Over the next few weeks Swayam helps Rohit to fully recover, Rohit likes Swayam and feels he has sort of filled the void that Prithvi left when he disowned them, after getting to know Rohit a lot Swayam asks Rohit to finance his company and Rohit agrees.

**Reality**

Rohit goes home to find Shefali waiting for him

R - tum soyi nahin?

Sh - nahin

R - kya hua tum pareshan....

Sh - pareshan kaise na hoon? jante ho, aaj mera beta ghar aaya tha, poore she (6) saal baad

R - Prithvi ghar aaya tha....

Sh - haan aur jante usne kya kaha? ke voh tumhare paas gaya tha madat ke liye aur tumne usse mana kar diya! kyun Rohit! aaj itne saalon baad humhara beta humhe mila aur tumne fhir se usse door kar diya

R - maine jaan bhooj kar aisa nahin kiya! tumhe kya lagta? ke main apne bete se milkar khush nahin tha? of course khush tha....lekin agar maine uski madat ki tho main Swayam ke khilaf jaoonga, aur main yeh kaise bhool sakta hoon ke yeh vahi Swayam hai jisne humhari bohat madat ki hai........yahan tak ke voh humhara beta jaisa tha

Sh - beta jaisa tha lekin beta nahin......beta tho sirf ek hi hai aur voh Prithvi hai, tum hi socho tumhe kya chahiye? Swayam ya Prithvi!

Shefali storms off leaving Rohit to think about everything, he is disturbed when Swayam shows up

Sw - uncle....kya hua?

R - kuch nahin Swayam

Sw - kuch baat tho hai? batayie? ya fhir main yeh samjoon ke aap mujhe is liye nahin batana chahte kyunki aap mujhe apna nahin maante?

R - kya keh rahe ho Swayam of course tum apne ho.....bas tum meri fikar mat karo

Sw - teek hai uncle

Meanwhile Prithvi has informed everyone that his mom will talk to his dad, Angad is sure that Rohit will agree but Suhana is sceptical

Suh - mujhe nahin lagta ke mama unhe mana legi

A - kyun nahin? jahan tak main janta hoon Rohit uncle ke har faisale mein Shefali aunty ka haath hai

Suh - janti hoon lekin agar Swayam ne papa ko barkaya hai tho papa uski baat manege mama ki nahin

P - shahid Suhana teek keh rahi hai lekin maine mom ki aankhon mein dheka tha.....voh kabhi nahin chahe gi ke humhe nuksaan paunche

K - Angad tumne papa se baat ki?

A - haan ki thi, dad ne kaha ke voh apne kuch doston se baat karlenge aur CG uncle ne yehi kaha hai, lekin agar Swayam ko Rohit uncle ki backing hai....tho humse kuch nahin hoga, industry mein Rohit uncle ka bohat naam hai, log unki baat manege humhari nahin

Everyone is depressed fearing the worst, even the children sense something is wrong and haven't been making any fuss so that their parents do not get more problems, Angad's phone rings, he answers and it's his dad on the other end

A - dad koi baat bani?

Suy - beta maine poori koshish ki lekin koi Rohit ke khilaf jaane vala nahin hai, i'm sorry

A - its ok dad, erm Neev kahan hai?

Angad looks and notices Naina's disapproving expression on the mention on Neev's name

Suy - voh bahar kahin gaya hai

A - teek hai us se kehna ke mujhe phone karna ok bye dad

Angad hangs up and sits by his mom

A - kya hua mom? aap ab bhi uspe naraz hai

N - main uske baare mein koi baat nahin krna chahti

A - teek hai mat karo.....lekin agar aap apne zid par atak rahe ho tho main bhi aapka beta hoon

Angad goes off, Naina frowns that her son is fighting with her that too because of an outsider, meanwhile in a nightclub Neev is having fun with his friends

guy - I can't believe you know Angad Khanna

Ne - know? voh mera bhai hai

guy2 - tu tho set hai yaar, itna bada rockstar tera bhai...that's awesome

Neev grins and goes to get a drink, on the way he spots Swayam having fun with his friends, he goes closer and hears him boasting

Sw - bas! kuch hi dinon mein Sujal-Prithvi aur Angad....kahin ke nahin rahege! main unhe tabah kardoon ga

Neev gets shocked hearing this and decides to listen further

Sw - jab mujhe pehle pata lag gaya tha ke Sujal mujhe barbad karne ke liye mujhse dosti ka natak kar raha tha tab maine faisala kar liya tha ke main usse tabah kardoon ga. Maine Sujal ke baare mein sab kuch pata kiya aur pata laga ke uski jaan do logon mein bas thi hai....Angad aur Prithvi, Angad ka main kuch nahin kar saka kyunki voh bohat hi bada rockstar ban gaya tha lekin Prithvi.....

Swayam sits down at a table and hate is seen in his eyes

Sw - Prithvi aur Sujal ne ek naya business khol liya....tab jaake maine faisala kiya ke main intezar karoonga....unhe taraki karne diya aur jab sahi waqt aaya tho sab kuch katam karloon ga....Prithvi Bose....Rohit Bose ka beta, suna tha ke unki banti nahin......isliye maine is baat ka faida utaya.....Rohit Bose ke kareeb jaane laga yahan tak ke voh mujhe apne beta maante hai......lekin voh kya jaane ke main unke bete ko katam karne vala hoon......aur meri shuruat hogi Rohit Bose se......

Friend - kya karne vale ho?

Sw - unka accident....aur poora ilzaam jayega Prithvi par

Swayam laughs manically but Neev gets worried, he tries calling Angad's phone, it rings but Naina picks up

Ne - mom....mom Angad bhaiya kahan hai?

N - kitni baar kaha ke mujhe mom mat kehna!

Ne - teek hai lekin bhaiya kahan hai? mujhe unse bohat zaroori kaam hai

N - tumhara koi bhai yahan nahin

Naina hangs up, Neev runs outside but Swayam sees him and recognises him as Angad's brother as he had seen them together

Sw (thinks) - Neev.....yahan? kahin usne meri baatein sun liya?

Swayam goes after Neev, both are driving in their cars, Neev tries calling his dad but no answer

Ne (thinks) - kya karoon....kisko phone karoon? Sujal ya Prithvi ka number mere paas nahin hai....aur vahan mom mujhe bhaiya se baat nahin karva rahi

Neev looks in his mirror and sees Swayam's car following him, he decides to try and lose the car and drives faster but Swayam also speeds up, Neev tries Angad's phone again and this time Kripa picks up

K - haan Neev bolo?

Ne - bhabhi bhaiya kahan hai?

K - voh....yahan nahin hai kyun?

Ne - bhabhi.....Prithvi ke dad ki jaan katre mein hai

K - kya?

Ne - voh Swayam...unhe marna chahta hai aur poora ilzam Prithvi par lagana chahta hai....

K - tum kahan ho?

Ne - gaadi mein...Swayam mera peecha kar raha hai

K - tum apna kayal rakho, mein Angad se baat karti hoon

Kripa hangs up and goes to look for Angad, she bumps into Prithvi and tells him everything, Prithvi leaves to warn his dad, he goes to their house

P - dad!! dad!!

Shefali comes down

Sh - voh ghar par nahin hai....kya hua Prithvi?

P - kahan hai voh?

Sh - office mein.....kya hua?

P - mere paas waqt nahin hai

Prithvi runs outside and gets into his car and drives to Rohit's office, he goes inside, Rohit is happy to see him but senses he is worried

R - kya hua Prithvi?

P - aap mere saath chaliye

R - kyun?

P - Swayam...aapko marna chahta hai

R - what? kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum!

P - main bakwas nahin, sach keh raha hoon! aap mere saath aah rahe ho ya nahin?

Although Rohit didn't believe Prithvi he still went with him, while driving Prithvi calls Neev and finds out he is being chased by Swayam, Neev informs him of his wherabouts, Prithvi fears that something might happen to him and goes to help him, on the way he tells his dad what Neev heard

R - main nahin manta!

P - mat maaniye.....lekin agar aaj Neev ko kuch hua tho yeh aapki galti hogi dad......bohat saal pehle aapki vaja se Tilak (Suhana's dad) papa ki jaan gayi thi aur agar aaj Neev ko kuch hua......

Prithvi sees Neev's car and points out to Rohit that the car chasing behind Neev is Swayam's. Prithvi chases after Swayam, and crashes his car into the side of Swayam's car but it doesn't do much damage, Swayam sees Prithvi but doesn't see Rohit and crashes his car into theirs, Neev stops his car when he sees Prithvi's car is being smashed by Swayam's, he turns the car around and smashes into the front of Swayam's causing Swayam to lose control and crash into a tree, Prithvi stops his car and so does Neev, Prithvi runs over to him while Rohit stays in the car

P - tum teek tho ho?

Ne - haan main teek hoon

Prithvi then sees Swayam getting out of his car, Prithvi goes over to him and pulls him out of the car and punches him, Swayam gets angry and punches Prithvi

Sw - tumhe kya laga? mujhe yahan par rokh kar tum apne dad ko bacha loge? never....tumhare dad tho gaye Prithvi aur poora ilzaam jayega tum par! fhir main tumhare business ko barbad kardoon ga!

P - acha?

Prithvi points behind Swayam, he turns around to see a very angry Rohit

Sw - uncle main....

R - bas!

Rohit slaps Swayam and holds him by the collar

R - tumhari vaja se main apne bete ke khilaf gaya, tumhe bachane ke liye maine usse madat karne se mana kiya!

Rohit slaps him again, Swayam gets angry and is about to hit Rohit but Prithvi holds his arm and pushes him onto the floor

R - agar maine tumhe yahan tak paunchaya tho maine tumhe vapas us mod par la sakta hoon jahan tum the theen saal pehle

P - dad.....lets go

Rohit and Prithvi go into their car and Neev follows in his car, they get to the Khanna Mansion where Prithvi informs everyone about what happened, everyone is happy, Angad inquires about Neev, Prithvi tells him that he is outside, Angad goes to see him, when he gets outside he sees Naina standing next to Neev

coming up - the finale

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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww i hope naina accepts neev, he saved the day! my hero lol! continue soon! i hope neev has a girlfriend who happens to be prachi!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part !!!!!!!!!! 👏 it was more about swayan revenge, neev and Prithvi.......not much about the sujal or angad 😭 ......but it was aweseome........continue soon plzzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part but y r u ending this fic so soon???
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aweesome part... glad to know neev saved da day!!!! Oh is it da nxt part da last part

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