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Posted: 18 years ago
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Neev has come he is my fav new comer he is anyways great part 😃

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aww.. such a sentii!! lolz

nice dialogue.. at the end.. about forgiving bache and ma baap.. lolz

great aprtt.. bt cant believe suryesh.(spelling)
continue sooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
thnx 4 all the comments...lol brainychild u joker 😆 😆 neways next parts coming up 😛
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~*~Previously~*~

Ne - jab beta galti karta hai tho maa baap unhe hazar baar maaf kar dete hai, lekin jab maa baap se galti hoti hai, tho bete kyun nahin maaf karte? main jaanta hoon ke aap bhi papa se bohat pyaar karte ho isliye naraz ho...lekin jab aapki narazagi door ho jaaye tho papa se baat karlena

Neev leaves a bewildered Angad in the room

~*~Part 19~*~

Angad is lying in bed with Karan and Kunal sleeping on either side of him, he strokes their heads and calls out to Kripa

K - kya hua?

A - inhe apne kamre mein le jao

K - sone do na yahan

A - agar yeh dono yahan hai tho main tumhare saath romance kaise karoonga?

Kripa blushes and picks up Karan and takes him outside then comes back and picks up Kunal and takes him outside, she comes back and gets into bed and Angad hugs her

K - kis baare mein soch rahe ho?

A - Neev

K - kyun?

A - jaanti ho....usne mujhe bhaiya bulaya, bohat ajeeb laga

K - he's a sweet boy

A - hmm aur nadaan bhi, acha ladka hai aur bohat badi badi baatein karta hai

K - aakhir bhai kiska hai

Angad smiles and kisses her forehead

A - jab main usse dhekta hoon tho aisa lagta hai ke main apne aap ko dhek raha hoon, voh bilkul vaisa hai jaisa main tha shaadi se pehle

K - well....tum dono mein papa ki jhalak hai isliye tumhe lagta hai ke voh tumhare jaisa hai

A - shahid.....

K - tho kya keh raha tha?

A - ke main dad ko maaf kardoon....

K - hmmm

A - dad jaise bhi ho......Neev ki parvarish achi hui hai, bohat acha ladka hai

K - haan

A - soch raha hoon ke usse yahin par bula loon......ek saal hogaya hai sachai jaane ke baad lekin maine kabhi usse apne bhai ka darja diya hi nahin

K - Angad, tum vaake mein bohat ache ho

Kripa kisses his cheek

A - well in sab mein uski kya galti hai?

K - that's true......aur shahid thodi dher mein tum papa ko bhi maaf kardo

A - nahin Kripa...dad ko maaf karna meri bas ki baat nahin, agar mom unhe maaf na kar sakhi tho main kaise karoon?

K - jo bhi ho.....chordo yeh baatein aur so jao

Angad holds Kripa in his arms and falls asleep. The next day Suyesh comes to the Garewal house with Neev

S - arre uncle aayiye....yeh....Neev right?

Suy - haan

Sujal shakes Neev's hand, they sit down and Kashish brings them some tea, she's pouring it when Suyesh speaks

Suy - Sujal mera ek kaam karoge?

S - boliye uncle

Suy - Angad se baat karo.....voh meri baat maan ne ko tayar nahin

S - voh naraz hai uncle, kuch hi dino mein teek hojayega

Suy - ek saal hogaya hai Sujal....is ek saal mein maine apne bete ko dheka hi nahin, voh kya jaane meri halat? ek beta tho kho chuka hoon ab dusra bhi kho raha hoon

Ka - uncle yeh kaisi baatein kar rahe ho? Angad bacha hai

Suy - kaise bacha hai? voh kudh do bachon ka baap hai

Ka - uske bache kitne bhi bade ho rahega tho aapka beta aur mera devar? us hak se voh ab bhi bacha hai

Suyesh smiles then looks at Sujal

Suy - tho kya kayal hai?

S - uncle....

Ne - papa

Suy - haan?

Ne - aap kyun zor daal rahe ho? agar bhaiya aapse naraz hai, tho usse hak hai papa, aapne kitne saalon se us se sach chupaya, thoda naraz tho hoga na, aur jahan se main bhaiya ko jaanta hoon voh aapse naraz isliye hai kyunki voh aapko bohat pyaar karta hai, bas usse apne hal par chordo, voh kudh teek hojayenge

Ka - wow, tho Angad ko apna bhai maan liya? very good Neev, i'm very impressed

Neev smiles

S - ek taraf se tum teek keh rahe ho Neev, lekin tum apne dad ki halat ko bhi samjo.....uncle aap fikar mat ki jiyie, main us se baat karoonga

Suy - thank you Sujal

S - its ok.....vaise main abhi vahan ja raha tha tho ab us se baat karta hoon

Ne - aap Khanna house ja rahe ho?

S - haan

Ne - papa kya main inke saath ja sakta hoon? please?

Suy - erm.....

S - haan aaja, don't worry uncle main isse ghar chordoon ga

Suy - teek hai

Neev smiles and leaves with Sujal, they arrive at the Khanna mansion, Kripa opens the door

K - aao bhaiya

S - Angad kahan hai?

K - upar, main bulaoon?

S - nahin main chale joon ga, tum Neev ke saath raho

K - ok, chalo Neev

Sujal goes upstairs while Kripa takes Neev into the living room, he meets Prithvi and sees Naina

N - yeh kaun hai?

P - mom yeh.......

Ne (thinks) - bhaiya ki mom.....

Neev bends down and takes her blessings, she smiles at his manners and asks him to sit down

N - Kripa tum isse kaise jaanti ho? Angad ka dost hai?

K - mama yeh.....voh....

Ne - main Neev hoon maaji....Neev Khanna, Suyesh Khanna ka sabse chota beta

Naina realises who he is and stands up, she looks at Prithvi sternly

N - isse kaho ke yeh yahan se chale jaaye.....yeh is ghar mein nahin aa sakta

P - but mom

Ne - maaji.....

N - mat bulao mujhe maa...

Naina looks at him disgustingly and leaves the room, Neev smiles lightly but is disheartened meanwhile upstairs

S - kyun Angad? voh tere dad hai, tu kyun usse maaf nahin kar sakta?

A - unho ne mujhse jhoot bhola....sachai chupayi

S - maanta hoon lekin naraz hone se kya hoga? sachai badal jaayegi? kya tere mom aur dad ek hojayenge?

Angad is silent, Sujal puts his hand on his shoulder

S - dhek main jaanta hoon ke baap na hone se kya hota hai, zindagi bar main apne dad se door raha hoon isliye meri baat maan, uncle se naraz mat raho, varna bohat dher hojayegi aur tu apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahin kar payega

Angad mulls over his talks

A - tu teek keh raha hai Sujal, shahid mujhe dad ko maaf karna chaiye

S - that's like my friend....chalo neeche Neev aaya hai

Angad hugs Sujal and follows him outside, they are going downstairs when Angad sees Neev is about to leave, Angad puts his hand on Neev's shoulder to stop him

A - kahan jaa raha hai?

Ne - bhaiya main voh.....ghar, papa aate honge.....

A - kya yeh ghar tera nahin hai?

Ne - haan lekin.....

A - lekin kya? kisine kuch kaha tujhse?

Neev is silent, Angad tells from his expression that something has happened

A - Kripa!

K - haan

A - Neev ko kya hua?

K - voh mama se mila tha......mama ne poocha yeh kaun tha aur isne bata diya ke yeh kaun hai....mama ne kaha ke.....he's not welcome here

A - what? mom kahan hai?

K - andhar

A - Neev chalo mere saath

Ne - but bhaiya

A - maine kaha chalo

Neev follows Angad inside where Naina is playing with Karan and Kunal

A - Karan, Kunal upar jao

Kar - but papa hum dadi ke saath khel rahe hai

A - meri baat nahin sunhi...upar jao!

Karan and Kunal go upstairs, Naina looks at Angad

N - bachon par kyun chilaya?

A - main nahin chahta ke voh humhari baatein sunhe

N - kaunsi baatein?

A - aapne Neev ko kya kaha?

N - tum Neev ko jaante ho?

A - haan mom...mujhe sachai ek saal pehle pata lag gayi...isliye main dad se itna naraz tha....apne bataya kyun nahin?

N - kitni baar socha ke bata doon lekin himat nahin thi....Kunal tho apne dad ke khilaf kuch nahin sunta tha aur tum....tumhari nazar mein tumhare dad sabse ache the, voh braam main nahin thodna chahti thi

Naina sits on the sofa

A - magar yeh sab ispe kyun nikal rahe ho? in sab mein iski kya galti hai mom? yehi ke yeh dad ka beta hai?

N - iski maa ki vajah se mera ghar toot gaya

A - exactly mom......iski maa ki vajah se...iski vajah se nahin, agar main isse apna bhai maan sakta hoon tho aap isse beta maan sakti hai

N - nahin....

A - kyun nahin mom? yeh aapke ex-husband ka beta hai......agar aap Prithvi aur Sujal ko beta maan sakti ho tho isse kyun nahin?

N - Prithvi aur Sujal tumhare dost hai.....bachpan se paala hai unhe isliye voh mere bete hai

Angad is about to argue further when Neev stops him

Ne - bhaiya please, main nahin chahti ke aap aur maa ji jagra kare...aapne papa ko maaf kar diya mere liye itna khafi hai

A - lekin Neev

Ne - nahin....jaisa maaji chahti hai vaisa hoga, agar voh yeh chahti hai ke main yahan na aaoon tho yeh sahi

Neev folds his hands and leaves the room, Angad looks at his mom then walks out

coming up - blast from the past for Sujal as Swayam returns seeking revenge

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Posted: 18 years ago
Gr8 part.... poor neev, but im glad dat angad has accepted him!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
fab part!! swyam is coming back to take revenge?? ooo... that was sad about naina not accepting neev, poor neev continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg only two comments? i know this ffxz going no where really but pplz come on comment, at least until i end it....which wont b long
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Posted: 18 years ago
grrr yeh swyam kaha se a tapka! lol continue soon! great part! neev is sooo cute!
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okies....gunna continue now....need 2 wrap this up so i can start my new one 😛
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~*~Previously~*~

Ne - bhaiya please, main nahin chahti ke aap aur maa ji jagra kare...aapne papa ko maaf kar diya mere liye itna khafi hai

A - lekin Neev

Ne - nahin....jaisa maaji chahti hai vaisa hoga, agar voh yeh chahti hai ke main yahan na aaoon tho yeh sahi

Neev folds his hands and leaves the room, Angad looks at his mom then walks out

~*~Part 20~*~

Angad forgives Suyesh and frequently visits his house to see Neev as Naina despises him, he always makes sure to give Neev extra tickets for his concerts so that Neev can bring his close friends with him, Angad spoils him and treats Neev the same way that Kunal would treat Angad, all is well....eslewhere Prithvi and Sujal are attending a very important business get together regarding an important contract

P - yeh contract humhe zaroor milega

S - yeah of course, chalo dhekte hai Mr Saxena kya kehta hai

Prithvi and Sujal listen to Mr Saxea talking

Mr S - yeh contract jisko bhi milega usse bohat faida ho jayega......aur contract jaata hai.....Shergill Industries ko!

Sujal and Prithvi are shocked as heck, everyone claps

Mr S - ab main chaoon ga ke Shergill Industires ke malik Mr Shergill yahan aajaayen

Sujal and Prithvi look towards the front as a man comes onto the stage, Sujal is shocked to see Swayam (Vikas Sethi)

S - Swayam....

P - tu isse janta hai?

S - yeh vohi hai jiske dad ne mere dad ko barbad karne ki koshish ki

P - what!

S - yeh contract isse kaise mila?

Sw - thank you Mr Saxea, mujhe bohat khushi hui hai ke yeh contract mujhe mil gaya, thank you everyone

Everyone congratulates Swayam, he maes his way thorough the crowd, Sujal and Prithvi turn to leave

Sw - Mr Garewal, Mr Bose

They turn around

Sw - kya hua Sujal? tumhe laga ke tumhe yeh contract milega? (laughs) avsoos, itna over confidence acha nahin hai

S - main tumhe achi tara se janta hoon.....tumne yeh contract jeeta nahin kareeda hai

Sw - you're absolutely.....correct, lekin sabit kaise karoge Sujal?

P - chal Sujal...

Prithvi and Sujal leave, Swayam is amused and grins as they leave.....in Sujal's office

S - kaun ho sakta hai jisne humhara tender Swayam ko bataya!

P - tender ka quote sirf theen logon ko pata tha, tujhe, mujhe aur manager ko

S - manager ko bulao

Prithvi calls the manager Karthik inside

Kart - jee saab?

S - kitne paise diye usne?

Kart - jee?

S - sunai nahin deta! kitne paise diye us Swayam Shergill ne tumko humhara tender unhe batana ke liye!

Kart - jee saab main voh...

Prithvi holds him by the collar

P - sach sach bol varna hum tumhari aisi halat kar denge ke tum kahin ke nahin rahoge

Karthik gets scared and confesses

Kart - saab voh aaye the mere paas, mujhe 5 lakh ruppees dhek kar bola ke main voh tender unhe bata doon.....mujhe maaf kar do saab, mujhse galti hogayi

S - get out! Prithvi isse abhi issi waqt yahan se nikalo!

Prithvi drags Karthik outside and has the security guards throw him out, he comes back inside

P - ab kya hoga? voh contract paana bohat zaroori tha

S - janta hoon.....main Swayam ko achi tara se janta hoon, yeh uska pehla vaar hai, aage bohat kuch karne vala hai

P - iske pehle humhe usko rokhna chahiye

S - kaise?

P - tumne tab kya kiya?

S - tab tho voh mujhe apna dost maanta tha aur apne business mein mujhe partner bana diya tha, maine tab business tabah kiya tha lekin ab main aisa kaise kar sakta hoon?

P - kuch sochna hoga.....

S - mere kayal se.....humhe kisi ki madat ki zaroorat hai

P - madat, kiski?

S - ek aisa insaan jo humhare field ko jaanta hai aur jiski uchi paunch hai

P - tu kiski baat kar raha hai?

S - tumhare papa......Mr Rohit Bose

P - no

S - Prithvi come on

P - nahin Sujal, main kuch bhi kr sakta hoon lekin us aadmi ke saamne nahin jhookoon ga

S - Prithvi halat ko samaj, main yeh nahin keh raha ke tu uncle ko maaf karde...unho ne Suhana ke papa ke saath jo kiya voh maafi ka layak nahin lekin yeh humhare business ka sawal hai.....agar humne unki help nahn liya tho Swayam humhara business tabah kar dega

Prithvi sits on the sofa, Sujal sits next to him

S - main janta hoon ke yeh tere liye aahsaan nahin hai lekin humhare business ka sawal hai, faisala tera hai

P - teek hai Sujal.....business ki khatir.....chalo vahan chalte hai

S - thanks Prithvi, tune sahi faisala liya hai

P - sahi galat ka baad mein pata hoga

Prithvi and Sujal leave the office and head towards Bose Industires office, they go inside and go to the receptionist

R - yes sir?

S - hum Mr Bose se milna chahte hai

R - sorry sir lekin voh ek bohat hi important meeting mein hai

P - unhe batao ke.....unka beta aaya hai

R - lekin saab ne kaha hai ke unhe disturb mat karo

P - teek hai tho main unhe bata doon ga ke Miss.....Neha ne mujhe apne hi dad se milne se roka hai

R - nahin sir....main unhe phone karti hoon

The receptionist calls Rohit Bose's office

Ro - maine kaha ke mujhe disturb mat karo!

R - lekin sr...yahan....

Ro - main is waqt kisi se milna nahin chahta

R - but sir....yeh keh rahe hai ke yeh aapka beta hai

Ro - what? mera beta? unhe andhar bhejo abhi!

The receptionist hangs up

R - aap ja sakte hai

S - thank you

Sujal and Prithvi go to the office, Prithvi knocks on the door

Ro - come in

Prithvi opens the door, him and Sujal walk in, Rohit is sitting on his chair with the back facing them, Sujal whispers to Prithvi to speak, Prithvi nods his head

P - .......dad

Rohit stops what he is doing and turns the chair around, he puts his file down and stands up, he looks at Prithvi lovingly and walks towards him

Ro - Prithvi.....tum nahin jaante ke main kitni dher se yehi maang raha tha Bhagwan se ke tum yahan aao aur mujhe dad keh kar bulao, I'm very happy today....apne dad se gaale nahin lago ge?

Prithvi steps forward and embraces his dad, Prithvi has tears falling down his cheeks, although he has hated his dad he had also missed him very much, Rohit feels releived to see his son after so many years, after a long hug he pulls away

Ro - kaise ho?

P - teek hoon dad....Sujal tho yaad hai na

Rohit looks at Sujal and smiles

Ro - of course, pehle tho main isse ya Angad ko pasand nahin karta tha lekin....main badal chuka hoon, tumhare dost tumhare bhai hai....issi naate se mere bete bhi hai

Rohit hugs Sujal, they sit down, Rohit orders drinks for them

P - dad humhe aapki madat chahiye

Ro - kaisi madat?

S - uncle aap shahid jante hoge ke mera aur Prithvi ka business ek hi hai, aur humhara business Saxena saab ke contract se bohat faida milta hai lekin....

P - voh contract kisi aur ko chale gaya hai, aur voh insaan humhara nuksaan karna chahta hai

Ro - kaun hai voh?

S - Shergill Industries ka malik, Swayam Shergill

Ro - Swayam.......tum usse kaise jante ho?

Prithvi tells of how Swayam's dad destroyed Sujal's dad and how Sujal got revenge, Rohit nods his head

Ro - beta tum jante ho ke main tumhari madat zaroor karta lekin.....

P - lekin kya?

Ro - jis shaks ki tum baat kar rahe ho......voh..

Before Rohit can finish his sentance the door opens, Sujal and Prithvi are shocked to see Swayam

Ro - Swayam.....mera business partner hai, maine hi iske business ko funding diya tha

Sw - Mr Garewal...Mr Bose, tum yahan?

P - tho aap humhari madat nahin karenge?

Rohit is silent, Prithvi laughs slightly

P - janta tha....main hi galat tha jo Sujal ki baat maan kar yahan aapse milne chale aaya, mujhe maloom hona tha ke aap apno ki kam aur gheron ke baare mein soch the ho.....chal Sujal

Ro - Prithvi meri baat suno

P - I'm sorry humne aap ka waqt barbad kiya Mr Bose

Prithvi and Sujal leave, Rohit is upset, Swayam puts hia hand on his shoulder

Sw - uncle kya hua? aap usse kaise jante ho?

Ro - Prithvi...mera beta hai

Sw - what?

Later at the Khanna Mansion, Prithvi tells Angad what happened

A - tujhe vahan jaana hi nahin chahiye tha

P - main kya karta? humhare business ke liye mujhe vahan jaana hi para

A - ab kya hoga? tere business se paisa bohat aata hai

K - chill Angad, tum bhi kaam karte ho

A - main kaam nahin gaata hoon....aur aaj ka zamana DJ's ko zyada pasand karta hai, kaun jaane kab mujhe apne record labels se nikal de, tab kahan se aayenge paise? kaise chale ga yeh ghar? agar Swayam ne humhare business ko nuksaan paunchaya tho hum sab raaste pe aah jayenge

Sujal who was quiet all this time stood up

S - mere paas ek raasta hai

A - kya?

S - Swayam ki dhushmani mujhse hai

P - tho?

S - tho .......voh mujhe nuksaan paunchana chatha hai.....aur jaise Angad ne kaha ke agar usne aisa kiya tho hum sab barbad ho jayenge

P - haan

S - tho mere kayal se hum dono ko humhare business ko alag karna chahiye

P - what!

S - sahi keh raha hoon, agar tera business alag hoga tho nuksaan tujhe nahin hoga

A - vaah Sujal vaah, kya raasta socha hai? business alag karlo....kya hum tere se alag hai? bol!

S - Angad gussah mat ho

A - gussah kyun na hoon? Sujal tu apne bekaar ideas apne paas rakh....main dad se baat karta hoon, shahid voh kuch madat kar sakte hai

P - Sujal....Angad sahi keh raha hai, agar humne aaj business alag kar le, tho kuch hi dher mein hum alag ho jayenge, aur yeh hum anhin chahte

S - tho kya kar sakte hai?

A - Prithvi.....agar tu aunty se kehdo tho shahid voh uncle se baat kar sakte hai

P - mom se?

A - yeah.....koshish tho karlo.....tab tak main apne record label se baat karta hoon

coming up - will Swayam succeed in destorying the business? or will Rohit change his mind at the last minute?

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