Aradhana & Reyaansh SS : Na Jaane Kyun (last chp + epilogue pg 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 1 months ago
#11

I like how you arranged the roles and the way you communicated. A bit of a humorous tone but a very dangerous and complex story. I can't wait for the sequel.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Originally posted by: zajedno

I like how you arranged the roles and the way you communicated. A bit of a humorous tone but a very dangerous and complex story. I can't wait for the sequel.

Thankyou dear but the story is written by me

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Most of the people have a misconception that orphanage people know everything about the child's real family.but actually they don't have any details about the child's real parents as they won't give their real name and address to them.you showed that in this story realistically.

Politics....truth.

I liked this dialogue of mehul.

Sadly Susanne is the result of school love.When the boy was taken away the girl coming there and the hand touching scene....it was very emotional. I feel that if the parents hadn't separated them that time they would have had a future together.i liked the porter telling that she didn't abandon Susanne but gave her a chance.

It's sad that mehul told sarika to go by her parents choice as he can't keep her wait anymore because of his commitments.mehul saying that he is not giving up but doing the right thing for them was a nice dialogue.sarika saying that she hopes for his come back was painful.I feel bad for her.I am surprised to see aneri as his gf.

Unfortunately Ashwin who could have led susanne to her destination is no more.but they met a woman there.I think she will bring twist in the story.perfect pics.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Originally posted by: dellzcreationz

Thankyou dear but the story is written by me

I assume you wrote it and I really like it. The way Suzana goes through life and her courage to go to another country to search for her roots is commendable.
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Posted: 1 months ago
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Posted: 1 months ago
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Couples' therapy? Now that will be interesting. They will have to keep lying through the whole thing.

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Posted: 1 months ago
#17

Asha has something in her past that haunts her. We don't know what at this point.

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Posted: 1 months ago
#18

Meeting with Asha was sweet.ha ha.She thinks that mehul Susanne came for couple therapy. I didn't expect her to ask them to stay at her place.Asha is right.Depending upon the states Christians too wear nuptial chain and vermilion.Nice to see her husband and sons.Her youngest son addressing Susanne as Di was lovely.That time I guess Asha's expression changed.maybe she knows that her sons have an elder sister.Mehul is right.Its not easy to ask directly to Asha.I am surprised that asha brought a mangalsuthra to them and made mehul place it around Susanne's neck.Mehul not letting her remove it saying that there have to act as a couple for more days and saying that it really suits her was sweet.fake husband with real compliments is nice.i wonder whether they both felt special during the mangalsuthra moment..perfect pics.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Asha has something in her past that haunts her. We don't know what at this point.

Thank you dear for commenting and liking this chapter,

dear when you get time pls do read In Your Memories Book 2 and the book is completed dear you can now binge read it since you missed out after Chap 2 I guess

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Posted: 1 months ago
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I will catch up on "In Your Memories Book 2" also. It will just take some time.

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