Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 38

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Im coming to kill rishabh......uski problem kya hai.....uff chala kyun nahi jaata kahi......ullu!!!

Poor adi.....usse kya hua??

Nice part!!!! 👏 Continue soon!!!


luv,
vandu 😉

😆 😆 chill...!!! ho sakta hai zaroorat na pade... Per agar zaroorat pade to i'll definately ask u to do the honours..😉

Originally posted by: naazbrar

nice part yaar!!! 👏 👏 👏 but really sad abt rayan... 😭 😭 😭 he's such a sweetheart still caresfor saima n loves her so much... 😊 😊 😊 plz continue soon......cant wait more to read next part...

aww.... those were such sweet comments huny..!!😳 😳 thnk u... n yes Rayan's a real sweetheart...

Originally posted by: aishwaria

hey ruksaar awesome part 👏 plz clear the misunderstandings b/w them don't like to see rayan like this 😭 plz is baar jaldi post karna waiting eagerly to know what happens next

yes huny.., will be updating it very soon....!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

wow dear awesome part loved it tooo tooo gooood just awesome 👏 uss rishabh keh bache ko nahin chodungi...i hate him...continue sooon

god save rishabh now..😆 😆 Sabhi use maarna chahte hai...!!

Originally posted by: fravashi

wwooowowwwww so they are together now though not with love but because of her accident 😳 . lekin unn dono ko saath rehene ke liye valid reason ki thodi na zarurat hai 😆 .hmmm.... so first saima's accident and now adi's health 😉 .well these all will help saima and rayan to come closer to each other 😳 . jaise wo abh ayye hai aur aayenge 😳 . like they r going together to simla na .that's rocking ruksaar ⭐️ . the part was awesome 👏 . and this rishab malhotra, it's better if her stay away form them otherwise i won't spare him at all 😡 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

thx a ton for all those sweet comments..!! well.., without revealing much just wud say that u're gusses are quite close ones..😉

Originally posted by: dhvanisoni

HEy
hmm...great part..toh saima is ready to do whtever for adi...rayan might b feeling bad cuz she is still naraz with him...cont soon

Rayan Saima se kaise naraaz reh sakta hai bhala 😉 😆 😆 thnx for the comments, will update soon....

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

ye rishab ki problem kya hai??

loved the part...!!

cont soon!!

rishabh ki problem....hmmm 🤔 , well...wo aisa hi hai...!!

Originally posted by: goodkashish

very nice part.........hopefully rayan aur saima ke beech sab kuch thik ho jaye.......ple continue soon.....thanks

love

kashish

yes dear..!! thnks for ur comments.. 😛

thanks a lot...!!

Originally posted by: starbellz_21

that was a rocking part ruku..!! 👏 Saima's back with Rayan..dats good.. But that evil rishabh.. 😡 😡 why cant he just get out of their way..
i hope nw saima understands rayan n dont believe dat evil weirdo...
extremely very well written part..!! U rock n so does ur ff... 👏 👏 👏
continue soon.. 😛

😆 😆 awsome adjectives for rishabh..!! thx a ton for those sweeto comments dii... Will be updating soon...

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Posted: 18 years ago
really good.... hopefully she's back 4ever 😛 i don't knw what's wrong wid rishab 😡can't wait when rayan's gonna straighten him out 😛 cont soon plz
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

really good.... hopefully she's back 4ever 😛 i don't knw what's wrong wid rishab 😡can't wait when rayan's gonna straighten him out 😛 cont soon plz

thnkz for ur comments dear.. n i too think its time now for rayan to do so 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part-29

Recap-
Saima ka accident hota hai.. Rayan use Garewal mansion le jaata hai. Sahil aur Rishabh mein phir behes hoti hai. Sidharth Rayan se shimla aane ko kehta hai kyunki Adi ki tabiyat bahot kharab hoti hai...

Story further....
Rayan aur Saima Shimla pohochte hai... Per Saima ko dekhkar ghar wale kuch hairaan hote hai
Raina: are Saima, beta yeh bandage kaisa? kya hua?
Saima: kuch nahi mama, bas ek chotasa accident hua tha
Raina: uff ho..... per yeh sab hua kaise aur Rayan tum kya kar rahe the? tum dono bhi na...
Saima: mama, hum bilkul thik hai... Adi kaha hai?
Raina: uper maa ke kamre mein hai.
{saima aur rayan adi se milne jaate hai.. Adi ko kaafi tez bukhaar hota hai, aur wo bas mama papa hi kehte jaa raha tha,
Saima uske paas baithi hai aur uske sar pe haath rakhti hai}
Saima: Adi... Adi beta, dekho mama hai yaha....... Adii...
{she looks at Rayan}
Saima: ise to kaafi bukhar hai
{aur rayan bas jhat se uska bukhar dekhne uske sar pe haath rakhta hai per wo saima ke haath per haath rakhta hai...
Saima apna haath hata deti hai... Tabhi dadi waha aate hai}
Dadi: fikar mat karo, use dawayi de di hai..., kuch der mein bukhaar uter jayega
Rayan: per Dadi ise achanak bukhaar kaise hua?
Dadi: ise to kal hi se bukhaar tha..., Saima ghar mien thi nahi aur tum bhi kaam mien lage hote ho.. Saima ka to main samajh sakti hu per Rayan tum.. tumse maine aisi ummed nahi ki thi.. Tum to Adi ke liye kabhi itne la parwah nahi the.. Aaj savere jab wo yaha aane ki zid karne laga to main use le aayi.. per uska bukhaar kuch jyada hi badh gaya..... Khair, tum dono ab yehi raho main uski dawayi le aati hu...
{dadi chale jaate hai... Pata nahi kyun rayan ke aankho mien aasu aate hai aur wo dusri taraf dekhke aapne aasu pohochta hai... Per Saima use dekh leti hai. Phir Rayan wahi Adi ke paas akar baithta hai... Saima kuch der ke liye kamre se jaati hai..
use laga ki iss waqt Rayan ko Adi ke saath akela chodna thik hoga...
Rayan Adi ki taraf dekhta hai}
Rayan: i'm sorry beta.. papa ko maaf kardo... Main tumhe waqt hi nahi de paya.... Bhool gaya tha ki meri duniya to bas tumse aur tumhi tak hai...
apne aap mein shayad kho gaya tha...Uss cheez ke peech daud raha tha jo shayad meri thi hi nahi.... I'm sorry beta, mujhe maaf kar dena...
{saima darwaze pe khadi yeh sab sun rahi thi... Use rayan ka yeh kehna bilkul acha nahi lagta.. Inn sabka kasoorwar wo apne aapko maanti hai...}
Saima: {to herself} jo hua so hua.... In sab mein Adi ki koi galati nahi thi..., shayad hamari wajah se yeh sab ho raha hai.... hum bas sabhi ko takleef pohocha
rahe hai... Per nahi ab aur nahi.. {she wipes off her tears and comes to back to the room and sits besides Adi}
Rayan: tum thoda aram karlo, main hu yaha
Saima: nahi hum thik hai...
{Rayan waha se uthta hai aur seedhe apne kamre mein jaata hai.... wo itna frustrate pehle kabhi nahi tha... bahot bechain tha wo... use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare... Saima ki duri usse bardasht nahi ho rahi thi,
Adi ki halat usse dekhi nahi jaa rahi thi.... Phir bas wo saamne mirror pe aapna haath bang karta hai}
Raina: Rayannn......
{Rayan ke haath mein kaanch lagti hai aur khoon behene lagta hai... Raina uske paas aati hai}
Raina: yeh pagalpan hai? Kitna khoon beh raha hai... Rayaann...tum... dekho kaanch haath mein lagi hai...
{tabhi Saima waha aati hai... Rayan ko dekhke hairaan hoti hai...Uske haath se khoon baha jaa raha tha}
Saima: Rayann... ye.... yeh sab..... {she was chocked for a minute}
Raina: main abhi first aid box le aati hu... {and she rushes out hurriedly... Saima goes closer to Rayan...
Rayan just turns the other way, as he had tears in his eyes...}
Saima: kaise hua yeh?
{rayan says nothing... Saima goes closer to him and holds his hand and sees that the glass peice was stuck in his hand....}
Saima: Rayan ye.... {she slowly removes that glass peice, and than his hand was bleeding even more.. The blood was just dripping down and Rayan was in pain but didnt utter a word... just than Raina entered in with the box and handed to Saima...}
Raina: beta tum isi dekho main Adi ko dekhti hu, wo uth chuka hai....
{and before saima could say anything raina left the room... Saima's hand too was paining becoz of her accident but looking at Rayan, she forgot about her pain...}
Rayan: its ok, mian kar lunga...tum jao
Saima: bahot khoon beh raha hai, aap nahi kar payenge
Rayan: main thik hu, tum jao...
Saima: humne kaha na, hum kar rahe hai...
{Very carefully she cleans the blood from his hand and then ties the bandage}
Saima: aapko takleef mein dekhkar yaha baaki logo ko bhi takleef hoti hai...
{rayan just looked at her with those affectionate eyes..., he just wanted to hug her and cry bitterly, wanted to tell her that he loves her... a love that was just pure,a love that was unconditional... But he coudnt say anything to her.... And she left the room... Saima went to Adi's room.. Dadi was sitting besides Adi}
Saima: Adi...
Dadi: so raha hai..
Saima; per mama ne kaha ki uth gaya hai
Dadi: nahi wo bas neend mein tumhara naam le raha tha
Saima: acha..
Dadi: kya baat hai beta? tum itni udaas kyun ho?
Saima; nahi to... bas Adi ki wajah se
Dadi: zaroor kuch aur baat hai... tumhari aankhein saaf bata rahi hai ki tum kuch chupa rahi ho... Kya baat hai, mujhe bhi nahi bataogi?
{saima just comes closer to dadi and hugs her}
Dadi: are kya baat hai bachha...tu ro kyun rahi hai?
Saima: Dadi...hum kuch samajh nahi paa rahe kya kare... har koi hamari wajah se takleef mein hai.. Pehle Dadima, phir Adi aur ab..... {she cries}
Dadi: ab... acha to Rayan ne kuch keh diya kya? acha dekho chup ho jao... bilkul chup..... aur yaha aaram se baitho... {dadi wipes off her tears} Dekho beta, tum to achi tarahse jaanti ho ki Adi Rayan ke liye kya hai... Phir galati meri bhi hai,
maine tum dono ko daantna nahi chaiye tha... Khair, dekho beta Rayan ki baato ko dil se mat lagana.... Gusse mien bhale hi
usne tumse kuch keh diya hoga, per beta wo tumse behad pyar karta hai. Aur phir hum naraaz bhi to unhise hote hai jinse hum pyar karte hai..jinper hum apna haq maante hai...
Saima: nahi Dadi,baat wo nahi hai.... Aaj agar wo hume daant bhi dete to itna bura nahi lagta hai jitna ki unhe takleef mien dekh kar ho raha hai
Dadi; kya matlab?
{saima dadi ko kanaka aur un phone calls ke baare mein sab kuch batati hai}
Dadi: kya? to tum uss baat ko lekar Rayan per shak kar rahi thi?
Saima: per Dadi, humne Rayan se bhi pucha tha per....
Dadi: nahi beta... are Rayan to Kanaka ko bacha raha tha... tumhari company koi aur kharid leta agar waqt rehte Rayan
company ko kharid nahi leta.... Us din Rayan bahot preshan tha, jab maine use phone ki thi... Puchne per usne mujhe sab kuch bataya...
Are usne to teen guna paisa dekar logo se tumhari company ke shares kharide the.... Aur phir shayad usi waqt tumhari dadima
ko hospital bhi admit kiya gaya tha
Saima: hospital?
Dadi: ha..., kaam ki wajah se unki tabiyat bahot kharaab hui thi to Sahil aur Rayan unhe hospital bhi le gaye the....
Saima:kyaa......
Dadi: ha beta..., per tumne Rayan ke baare mein aisa socha bhi kaise? wo to tumse beinteha pyar karta hai... Aur phir zara socho ki Rayan tumhari company kyun lega? kis cheez ki kami hai use? Meri baat ka bura mat manna beta per jab baat Rayan ki hai to mujhse saha nahi jayega... Uss bachche ne bahot kuch sahaa hai.... Wo tumse bahot pyar karta hai...
Saima: Rayan ne hamari madat ki aur hum ne unhe kitna kuch kaha...., yaha tak hum unhe chodkar............
{she just runs to rayan's room....where rayan was standing facing the window.... Saima opens the door and Rayan turns around....
Saima had tears in her eyes.....}
Rayan: saimaaaa.... kya hua? tum ro kyun rahi ho?
{Saima comes closer to him}
Saima: i'm sorry Rayan hume maaf karde..... hum shayad aapki maafi ke layak bhi nahi hai.... Hum aap per ilzaam pe ilzaam lagate rahe, aapko bhala bura kehte rahe... per aapne uff tak nahi ki,kyun Rayan kyun humse kaha nahi ki aap bas hamari madat kar rahe the.... Kyun Rayan? Ek baar palatkar humse kaha nahi ki Saima tum galat ho....
{rayan bas saima ki taraf dekhta hai... kuch keh nahi pata... per uske aasu thamte nahi}
Saima: hume maaf karde Rayan..... please hume maaf karde... Na to hum aapke maafi ke layak hai aur naa hi uss izzat ke....phir bhi apse maafi mangte hai....
{rayan gets closer to her....holds her and looks at her, wipes off her tears}

...~~~Song in the Background~~~...
Marke bhi na wadaa apna todenge,
Ek duje saath kabhi na chodenge,
Apna to sadiyo janmo ka naata hai,
Jaan se jaan ko kaun juda kar pata hai,
Tere Siva..
Tere Siva...
Tere siva iss dariya ka....
Nahi koi kinaara sanam...
Tere naam humne kiya hai, jeevan apna saara sanam.....
Jeevan apna saara sanam...
...~~~Song in the Background~~~...

Rayan gently kisses saima on her forehead and hugs her tightly...He was just lost in her, this was that one moment that he'd been living for...
Rayan: bahot pyar karta hu tumse...., nahi ji sakta tumare bina.. Maine bahot kuch khoya hai, per ab tumhe nahi kho sakta...
Tumhe khone ke ehsaas tak se dar lagta hai... Mujhe chodkar kabhi mat jana Saima...kabhi mat jana...
{saima couldnt say a word, but it was like a moment of lifetime for her...., she never felt like that before....so protected, so secured in his arms.. They remained
like that untill someone knocked the door... Saima immediately stepped behind...It was Raina at the door}
Raina: beta, doctor aaye ha...tumse milna chahte hai
Saima: ji mama....
{and all three of them goes to Adi's room.... Adi was fine now... Doctor asked Saima and Rayan to be with Adi for sometime, and as soon as he was fine,they
could leave for Delhi...
Saima was very happy....Dadi looked at her and understood everything..she than looked at Rayan and smiled and Rayan smiled back and came to her and huged her}
Rayan: thankyou
Dadi: per wadaa karo aage se ye {pointing towards his hand} pagalpan nahi karoge
Rayan: {holds her ears} nahi karunga...
{all the other members go their rooms and Rayan and Saima stays back with Adi}

Next Morning....
Rayan and Adi were still sleeping... Saima was busy making breakfast for all of them,after some time she came
to the room.... where she saw them both still sleeping... Adi was a complete reflection of Rayan..., they had the same
cute smile on their lips... Saima looked at them and smiled....
She came closer to them...looked at Rayan...
Saima: rayan.... uthiye.. Rayan....
Rayan: hmm...... {he wakes up, looked at saima and smiled} good morning
Saima: good morning... Aap fresh ho jayiye, neeche sabhi breakfast keliye wait rahe hai....
Rayan: hmm... {smiled again}
Saima: kya hua?
Rayan: kuch nahi....
{just than rayan's cell rings}
Rayan: hello.....
Sahil: sir, Sahil here! Yaha ek bahot badi problem ho gayi hai
Rayan: kya hua?
Sahil: sir wo..., pata nahi kaise per kuch officers achanak Kanaka aye the kisi inspection ke liye ur yaha unhe
kuch drugs mile hai
Rayan: {he was dead shock, but contolled himself some how in front of Saima} per yeh hua kaise?
Sahil: pata nahi sir, kal raat achanak... ab wo log Kanaka ke owner se milna chahte hai..... {pauses} mera matlab
hai Saima bhabhi ko custody mein liya jayega....
Rayan: what? per yeh.... {looks at saima} acha main tumhe kuch hi der mein phone karta hu.... {disconnects the call}
Rayan: Saima, tumne Kanaka ke papers kaha rakhe hai?
Saima: ghar pe hai
Rayan: sign kar diye hai?
Saima: nahi ab tak nahi..., aur ab shayad hum karna bhi nahi chahte hai... Hum chahte hai kanaka garewal empire ka hissa hi rahe
Rayan: {tries hard to smile} acha mujhe kuch urgent kaam ki wajah se delhi jana hoga...
Saima: to hum sab saath hi chalte hai na
Rayan: per Adi...
Saima: please Rayan... pleaseee...
Rayan: thik hai...
{rayan just goes out of the room..He was very much tensed.. he calls up Sahil}
Rayan: ha sahil, ek kaam karo
Sahil: ji sir....
Rayan: ek baat ka dhyaan rakhna ki kisi ko pata naa chale ki Kanaka ko humne dubara Saima ko diya hai... Kanaka ko owner main hu
Sahil: what??? Sir per isse aap musibat mein pad sakte hai.. Wo log aapko arrest karenge
Rayan: parwah nahi ,per saima per koi aanch nahi aani chahiye... Hum bas kuch hi der mein waha pohochne wale hai...
Sahil: ok sir....

........End of part-29..........


Comments awaited....!!! 😛


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Edited by ruksaar_khan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice part!!! 👏 👏 👏 wow!!!rayan n saima together again... 😛 😛 😛 oh god!!! now rayan ll get arrested... 😭 😭 😭 but i hope everything ll b fine soon.... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Rayan and Saima together again 🥳 [:D/] cool, awesome but plz dont get Rayan arrested he has already suffered alot 😭 😔
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was a very beautiful part ..........i totally enjoued it very much..........ple continue soon.........cant wait any more........thanks for clearing misundarstanding between them...........thanks

love

kashish
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Posted: 18 years ago
finally all misunderstandings between them are cleared.. thatz good..!! 😛
but ab ek nayi problem khadi ho gayi 😕 me sure ismein bhi uss evil rishabh ka hi haath hoga.. im gonna kill him now.. 😡 😡
but rayan's so sweet... he loves saima so much 😳 😳 😳
grt update ruku... 👏 👏 👏 continue soon.. 😉

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