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Posted: 18 years ago

Part-28

Recap-
Rayan Saima ko Kanaka lauta deta hai aur apna pyar ka izhaar bhi karta hai... Rishabh Saima ko apne saath kaam karne ka offer deta hai jise Saima accept karti hai...

Story further......
{badi tezi se barish hone lagi thi... aur saima utni hi tezi se drive kar rahi thi. Barish ki wajah se use kuch saaf saaf dikhayi nahi de raha tha, aur achanak wo car pe control kho baiththi hai aur side mein ek tree se takra jaati hai aur behosh ho jaati hai.... uske sar se khoon behene lagta hai... Waha kuch log aate hai aur tabhi peeche ek car aakar rukti hai, Saima ki gaadi dekhkar wo insaan bahar aata hai aur Saima ki taraf jaata hai aur Saima ko aisi halat mein dekhkar shock hota hai..... Wo Sahil hota hai}
Sahil: bhabhiiii...... oh my god...
{sahil saima ko apni car mein le jaata hai aur use hospital le jaata hai.... She was bleeding continously...uske haath mein kaanch lagne ki wajah se kaafi khoon beh raha tha....
Sahil use hospital admit karta hai aur immediately Rayan ko phone karta hai}
Sahil: hello sir... aap iss waqt City hospital aa jayiye
Rayan: per baat kya hai?
Sahil: bhabhi ka accident hua hai aur wo ....... wo..
Rayan: main bas abhi waha aa raha hu
{rayan hurriedly rushes to the hospital.... Sahil was waiting outside the room impatiently.... Rayan came running towards him}
Rayan: Saima kaisi hai?
Sahil: doctors unhe dekh rahe hai...
Rayan: per yeh sab hua kaise.....
Sahil: pata nahi sir.... main wahi se guzar raha tha bhabhi ki gaadi dekhi to ruk gaya aur jab dekha to bhabhi ki gadi ped se takrayi hui thi aur wo zakhmi the
{rayan kaafi bechain hota hai}
Rayan: mujhe Saima ko akele nahi chodna chahiye tha....
{just than the doctors come out of the room}
Rayan: doctor , how's she now?
Doctor: she's fine...,per aap?
Rayan: main unka husband hu
Doctor: ok, wo ab thik hai... khoon kaafi beh chua tha per she's fine now.. Kuch der mein unhe hosh aa jayega, per do take care of her... She needs complete rest atleast for a week
Rayan: ji doctor...
{doctor leaves}
Sahil: khuda ka shukar hai, bhabhi thik hai {tabhi nurse kuch dawayiya laane kehti hai to Sahil dawayiya laane jaata hai aur Rayan ander room mein jata hai...
Saima behosh hoti hai... Saima ko u dekh Rayan ke aankho mein aasu aate hai...
Wo uske kareeb jata hai aur uske haath apne haatho mein leta hai.... uski aankho se aasu saima ke haath per girta hai aur wo hosh mein aati hai... Rayan jhat se apne aasu pohochta hai... Saima aankhein kholti hai aur Rayan ko saamne paati hai... Uska haath Rayan ke haath mein hota hai.. Rayan apne aasu chupa nahi paata}
Rayan: kaisi ho?
Saima: hum thik hai...
Rayan: yeh sab kaise hua? agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota Adi ka kya hota....
{Saima bas uski taraf dekhti hai, Rayan ki aankho mein uske liye sivaye pyar ke kuch nahi hota....
Tabhi sahil waha aata hai aur in dono ko dekhta hai.... Use Rayan ko u dekhkar bilkul acha nahi lagta aur wo wahi se bahar chala jaata hai}
aur use Aryan ka phone aata hai}
Aryan: hey Sahil, kaise ho?
Sahil: aap? ab apko kya chahiye?
Aryan: baat kya hai aur yeh Rayan kaha hai? Naa to office mein hai aur na hi uska phone lag raha hai...
Sahil: yeh sab kuch aapke uss business partner ki badaulat hua hai... Acha hua jo aapne phone kiya warna main khud aapko phone karke yeh deal cancell karne wala tha...
business mien nuksaan hum seh sakte hai per rishto ko nuksaan pohochta dekh nahi sakte.... Waise kahi aap bhi iss sab shaamil nahi hai na? Ya uss Rai ne aapko bhi kharid liya hai?
Aryan: yeh tum kya keh rahe ho? Kaun Rai? aur hua kya hai waha?
Sahil: aap wakaye mein kuch nahi jaante?
Aryan: main sach mein kuch nahi jaanta Sahil, beleive me... Please batao ki aakhir baat kya hai?
Sahil: Rishabh Malhotra jo aapka dost hai wo yaha Rayan sir ke saath business karne nahi balki unhe aur unko rishto ko barbaad karne aaya hai... Aaj unhi ki wajah se bhabhi Rayan sir ko chodke chali gayi aur aaj unka accident hua hai... Un dono ki takleef mujhse dekhi nahi jaati isiliye main aapko pehle se hi
agaah kar raha hu ki Rishabh Malhotra ka ab jo bhi hoga uski zimmedari meri nahi hogi and i really mean it...
Aryan: ek minute Sahil, please meri baat suno... dekho main khud Rishabh se baat karta hu.... ho na ho kahi na kahi koi galat fehmi hui hai...
Sahil: are jab insaan hi galat ho to kaisi galat fehmi?
Aryan: please Sahil, bas ek baar mujhe usse baat karne do, uske baad main tumhe nahi rokunga
Sahil: thik hai..., per bas ek mauka
Aryan: main bas abhi usse baat karta hu....
{sahil disconnects the call and goes back to the room...
Here Aryan was very upset with Rishabh, he just coudnt understand Rishabh's behaviour. He calls him up}
Aryan: hello Rishabh
Rishabh: hey Aryan, my friend.... Kaise ho tum? Main bas tumhe hi phone karne wala tha....
Aryan: sach sach batao ki waha ho kya raha hai? Rayan ke saath tum kar kya rahe ho?
Rishabh: main ek business man hu to zaahir baat hai business hi kar raha hu
Aryan: yeh kaisa business hai Rishabh? Tumhari wajah se aaj uski wife use chodkar chali gayi..., aakhir yeh sab ho kya raha hai?
Rishabh: oh to tumhe pata chal gaya.... Khair Aryan yeh bahot lambi kahani hai, kisi din fursat mein bataunga
Aryan: nahi..., dekho Rishabh Rayan mera business partner hi nahi balki bahot acha dost bhi hai aur main nahi chahunga ki uski life mien tumhari wajah se koi problem ho
Rishabh: relax yaar.... aur waise bhi tum use jaante hi kitna ho?
Aryan: tumse to beheter jaanta hu..., aakhir kya dushmani hai tumhari uske saath?
{tabhi sahil rishabh ke ghar pohochta hai... Wo bahot gusse mein hota hai}
Rishabh: aryan tum kuch nahi jaante...., Rayan ki asliyat kuch aur hi hai...
Sahil: zara main bhi to sunu ki aise kya asliyat hai unki?
{Rishabh turns around and sees sahil standing rite in front of him}
Rishabh: Aryan main tumse kuch der baad baat karta hu
{saying this he disconnects the call}
Rishabh: oh aap? Kahiye aaj yaha ka raasta kaise yaad aa gaya?
Sahil: aakhri baar tumhe samjhane aaya hu.... jo hua so hua ab use badla nahi jaa sakta.... Jab sab apni zindagi mein khush hai to kyun tum unki zindagiya barbaad karne pe tule hue ho?
Rishabh: are abhi to bahot kuch karna baaki hai.... Itni jaldi hi darr gaye?
Sahil: aakhir tum chahte kya ho? Tumhari sir se koi dushmani nahi hai... Are wo Rai to bas tumhara istamaal kar raha hai... Peechli baar sir ne use jail bhej diya tha
bas usi ka badla lene ke liye wo tumhe unke khilaaf istamal kar raha hai....
Rishabh: istamaal to ab main in papers ka karunga...Rayan aur Saima ki duriyo ka badhane mein
{sahil laughs}
Sahil: kaash ki tum aisa kar paate... Darhesal mujhe to tumhara shukriya adaa karna chahiye... Kyunki tumhari hi wajah se wo alag hue aur tumhari hi wajah se iss waqt wo saath saath hai... Khair, mujhe tumse koi behes nahi karni... Tum har chez ko paiso mein tolte ho na? To kaho kya loge unka peecha chodne ki?
Rishabh: unka rishta... Rayan ki takleef, bas mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye
Sahil: waise to mujhe pura yakeen hai ki tum kuch nahi kar payego,phir bhi koshish karke dekh lena...
Rishabh: wo to waqt hi batayege.. Now will u please leave?
{sahil just gives hima hard look and leaves}

Next day.....
Saima ki tabiyat ab thik hoti hai to doctors use ghar jaane ki permission dete hai... Rayan saari formalities karke aata hai... ab wo samajh nahi paata ki saima se kya kahe...
wo use wapas ghar le jaana chahta tha per usse keh nahi paa raha tha... Saima bed se uthti hai, per kyunki uski right hand pe bandage thi aur kaafi pain ho raha tha wo thik se uth nahi paati... Rayan use help karta hai...
Rayan: wo main..... tumhari tabiyat thik nahi hai, to beheter hoga ki tum dubara... mera matlab hai ki ghar..... apne ghar chalte hai....
{saima just looks at him... she feels even after being so rude to him he was still the same... had the respect and love for her till the very moment}
Rayan: darhesal mama papa, dadi ko chodne shimla gaye hai.... Adi ko saath le gaye hai aur do din baad lautenge...
Saima: dadi chale gaye?
Rayan: ha.... apni beti se milna chahte the... anyways chale?
Saima: Rayannn.....
{rayan looks at her...,saima couldnt say a word... she just looked in those intense eyes}
Rayan: kya hua? Kuch kehna chahti ho?
Saima: nahi wo....hum ghar chale?
Rayan: hmm.....
{ Rayan Saima ko ghar le jata hai.... Raaste mein waisi hi tez barish ho rahi thi...
after a while they reach garewal mansion..., aaj pehli baar wo dono saath hokar bhi saath nahi the....
Rayan saima ko kamre mein le jaata hi....}
Rayan; tum aaram karo..., kisi cheez zaroorat ho to bula lena
{and he goes out of the room.... Saima khamosh baithi rehti hai.. Na chahte hue bhi use phir Rayan ke saath aana padta hai...
Rayan juice ka glass lekar kamrei mein aata hai..}
Rayan: juice le lena....
{saima rayan ki taraf dekhti bhi nahi... per rayan ki nazrein bas usiper hoti hai... Wo dono ek dusre ke kareeb hokar bhi
dur the. Saima Rayan se kuch kehna chahti thi per phir bhi khamosh thi... Un dono ke beech ajib si khamoshi thi.. phir
achanak Rayan ka phone bajta hai..}
Rayan: hello
Sidharth: beta hum bol rahe hai
Rayan: ji papa kahiye
Sidharth: beta, jitna jaldi ho sake tum aur saima yaha aa jao... Adi ki tabiyat thik nahi hai, aur wo baar baar Saima aur tumhara naam le raha hai...
Rayan; what??? per kya hua use? aur yeh achanak?
Sidharth: relax beta, bas bukhaar hai... per doctor chahte hai ki tum dono uske saath rahoge to thik hoga...aur aisi halat mein hum Adi ko waha
bhi nahi laa sakte
Rayan: main bas abhi nikal raha hu...
{he disconnects the call and immediately calls up Sahil and tells him everything about Adi and also informs him that he's leaving for Shimla now... Saima was shocked to hear that, but Rayan said her nothing and was about to leave, just than Saima tries to gets up..}
Rayan: kuch chahiye?
Saima: hum bhi aapke saath chalenge..
Rayan: per tumhari tabiyat thik nahi hai.. Main Adi ko samjha dunga
Saima: Adi ko hamari zaroorat hai... Bhale hi aaj hamara rishta pehle jaisa nahi raha per Adi keliye hum hamesha rahenge....
{saying this she gets up, while Rayan stood there looking at her}
Rayan: kaash tumhari aankhein tumhari zubaan ka saath deti...... khair main tumhe aane se nahi rokunga... chalo
{saima chalti hai per uske pair mein chot ki wajah se thik se chal nahi paati isiliye rayan use support deta hai, aur phir
dono shimla ke liye nikalte hai}

.......end of part 28.....
Comments Awaited... 😛


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ruksaar

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Posted: 18 years ago
Im coming to kill rishabh......uski problem kya hai.....uff chala kyun nahi jaata kahi......ullu!!!

Poor adi.....usse kya hua??

Nice part!!!! 👏 Continue soon!!!


luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part yaar!!! 👏 👏 👏 but really sad abt rayan... 😭 😭 😭 he's such a sweetheart still caresfor saima n loves her so much... 😊 😊 😊 plz continue soon......cant wait more to read next part...
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ruksaar awesome part 👏 plz clear the misunderstandings b/w them don't like to see rayan like this 😭 plz is baar jaldi post karna waiting eagerly to know what happens next
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow dear awesome part loved it tooo tooo gooood just awesome 👏 uss rishabh keh bache ko nahin chodungi...i hate him...continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
wwooowowwwww so they are together now though not with love but because of her accident 😳 . lekin unn dono ko saath rehene ke liye valid reason ki thodi na zarurat hai 😆 .hmmm.... so first saima's accident and now adi's health 😉 .well these all will help saima and rayan to come closer to each other 😳 . jaise wo abh ayye hai aur aayenge 😳 . like they r going together to simla na .that's rocking ruksaar ⭐️ . the part was awesome 👏 . and this rishab malhotra, it's better if her stay away form them otherwise i won't spare him at all 😡 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
HEy
hmm...great part..toh saima is ready to do whtever for adi...rayan might b feeling bad cuz she is still naraz with him...cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
ye rishab ki problem kya hai??

loved the part...!!

cont soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice part.........hopefully rayan aur saima ke beech sab kuch thik ho jaye.......ple continue soon.....thanks

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Posted: 18 years ago
that was a rocking part ruku..!! 👏 Saima's back with Rayan..dats good.. But that evil rishabh.. 😡 😡 why cant he just get out of their way..
i hope nw saima understands rayan n dont believe dat evil weirdo...
extremely very well written part..!! U rock n so does ur ff... 👏 👏 👏
continue soon.. 😛

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