Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 34

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Posted: 18 years ago
😕 omigosh !!! rishabh is soo useless......ab kya hoga........aur ye aryan wapis kyun aaraha hai??? 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
yeh rishabh ki problem kya hai 😡 😡 n this rai's at it again.. i hpe iss baar rayan teaches him a good lesson... both rishabh n rai are sick
i like sahil.. he's so supportive..
waise very well written part.. i loved the way u've potrayed each character n their emotions...
grt job ruku 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ruksaar that part was fantastic 👏 . i really liked it 😉 . but this rishabh malhotra god 😡 !!! what he is up to now 😡 . kyun rayan aur saima ke beech aaraha hai .i hate him for this 😡 . aur yeh saima she doesn't even listen to what rayan says and not even sahil 😡 . baas woh stupid phone calls pe yakeen kar bethi hai . and now aryan is going to come 😕 .nooo way if he comes as a friend it's good 😉 but if as a lover saima shouldn't accept him 😭 . hey ruksaar i loved the way aryan talked with that rishab today about his love ❤️ , the relation between him and saima will never end 😳 . now he looks kinda obssesed lover 😳 . i love him being like this 😉 .i wish ki woh abb apne aap ko nirdosh sabit kare,saima ko sachbataye and his love will win i am sure about it 😉 . the part was nice ⭐️ .continue soon yaar plzzzz....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
these malhotra's are frns of rais... 😡 ...he shud be shot dead fr his act... 🤢 🤢 ..gosh wt these guys are upto...huh??

ab bas aryan ki kami thi wo bhi usne poori kardi... 😡 😡 ...he never called saima...but this time out of the blue he popped up 😡 😡 ....i wonder if aryan also is involved in the plan????

nice update 👏 👏
cont soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
its been so many days plz updt soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ruku whr are u? pls update soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey
no yaar...aryan is back....at least he ll support her untill rayan isn't there...or untill she is angry with him...but don let her fall for him again...plz don separate saima rayan....their love had just started bruing... cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
im extremely sorry frnz.. was busy wid my studies so cudnt update.. I'll be updating very soon...


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Posted: 18 years ago

Part-27

Recap-
Rayan ko Rishabh ke baare mein sab kuch pata chalta hai... Rishabh rayan se kehta hai ki wo uske aur saima ke rishte ko todne mein koi kasar nahi chodega per Rayan usse apne pyar per aur Saima
per bharosa hone ka dawaa karta hai.....

Story further.........
Rayan aur Sahil, Garewal office laut aate hai... dono kaafi pareshan hote hai....
Sahil: sir, waise to mera koi haq nahi banta ki main aapki personal life mein dakhal du per phir bhi ek baat kehna chahunga
Rayan: tum mere liye kabhi gair nahi ho Sahil.... kya kehna chahte ho?
Sahil: aap please bhabhi ko sab kuch bata dijiye... Wo sach nahi jaante isiliye aapse naraaz hai per jab unhe sab kuch pata chal jayega to saari problems hi khatm ho jayenge
Rayan: abhi Saima se kuch bhi kehna thik nahi.... per mujhe usper pura yakeen hai. Maine kabhi usse apne pyar ka izhaar nahi kiya aur naa hi usne mujhse phir bhi ek ankahee ehsaas ne hume jode rakha hai....Saima aaj mujhse thodi naraaz hai, per mujhe pura yakeen hai wo mujhe kabhi galat nahi samjhegi
Sahil: jaanta hu sir, per kabhi kabhi insaan galat faisle kar baithta hai. Aaj bhabhi wahi dekh rahe hai jo unhe
dikhaya jaa raha hai.... isiliye mujhe darr hai kahi kuch galat na ho jayeee...
Rayan: main samajh raha hu... khair, yeh aaj jo kuch bhi hua yeh bas hum dono ke beech hi rehna chahiye... Gharwalo ko
pata nahi chalna chahiye
Sahil: per sir aap unhe batayenge kya ki bhabhi kaha hai? Aur Adi?
Rayan: maine unse keh diya hai ki Saima kuch din khanna house mein hi rahegi aur Adi ke bina to wo khud bhi nahi
reh sakti....
Sahil: thik hai.... per abhi hume kya karna hai? Uss Rishabh ko to u hi chod nahi sakte na...
Rayan: sabse pehle to mujhe kanaka Saima ko lautani hai...wo papers ready hai?
Sahil: ji, bas bhabhi ke signatures chahiye....
Rayan: inhe main khud saima ko dunga....
Sahil: thik hai sir...
{rayan goes to saima's house..... looking at him saima was a bit releived as he was safe}
Saima: aap?
Rayan: umeed hai kam se kam aaj mujhe kuch kehni ke ijazat hogi
{Saima just looked him, but said nothing}
Rayan: yeh rahi tumhari amanat.... Yeh kal bhi tumhari thi aur aaj bhi tumhari hi hai. Isper mera koi haq nahi hai {hands her the file}
Kanaka aaj bhi tumhari hi hai... Main nahi jaanta ki kya sahi hai kya galat hai...., jaanta to bas itna ki mujhe apni patni per
pura bharosa hai... Na to maine kisi ko dhoka diya hai aur naa hi main kisi ko kuch sabit karna chahta hu.... Ha agar mera kuch kasoor hai to wo bas itna ki main tumse beinteha pyar karta hu... per ab tak keh nahi paya..... Maine kabhi bhagwaan banne ki koshish nahi ki, per mera pyar mere liye meri ibaadat zaroor bann chuka hai... Isse aage main koi safaai nahi dunga. Tum jo faisla karogi mujhe manzoor hoga... main kal bhi tumhare saath tha aur aaj bhi tumhare saath hi hu. Dadima se kiya hua wadaa apni taraf se nibhani ki koshish karunga.... Per ek baat zaroor kahunga, gairo pe bharosa karne se pehle ek baar apno per bharosa karlo....
{saying this he goes away, while saima stood there..... she opned the file, and saw that rayan had transfered kanaka back to her... she didnt knew wat to do now..., to beleive rayan or not. She sat there, just than again her cell rang}
Saima: hello
Person: hello saimaji, kaisi hai aap? thik hi hogi..... waise ab tak to aapne rayan se alag hone ka faisla kar liya hoga
to main aapko ek offer dena chahunga
Saima: kaun hai aap?
Person: pehle offer to sun lijiye.... Ab jabki kanaka aapke paas hai to kyun na kanaka ko phir ek baar phir usi uchahiye pe la jaye jaha wo pehle thi..... iske liye mere paas 2 offer hai... ya to aap kanaka ko mujhe de dijiye ya to aap hamare saath merge kar lijiye
Saima: lekin aap hai kaun?
Person: aapka well wisher...
Saima: naa to hum apko jaante aur naa hi janna chahte hai.... Kanaka ko kisi ke sahaare ki zaroorat nahi hai... {she disconnects the phone,
just than there was a knock at the door.., she opened the door}
Saima: Rishabhji aap?
Rishabh: ji..., sorry agar aapko disturb kiya ho to
Saima: nahi.... aayiye ander aayiye
Rishabh: thanks..., to kya socha aapne hamari offer ke baare mein? Aap hamare saath kaam karenge?
Saima: ab tak humne iske baare mein kuch socha nahi hai.... waise bhi iss waqt agar hamari koi priority hai to wo hai Kanaka
Rishabh: its absoltely ok with me...,jaise ki maine pehle bhi kaha tha.... Decession will be yours... Per if my not wrong kanaka to garewals ki company hai na?
Saima: nahi...., kanaka kal bhi Khannas ki thi aur aaj bhi Khannas ki hi hai...
Rishabh: well than in that case i have another offer for you.... Main jaanta hu ki kanaka ka jab bhi koi collection aata hai to wo market mein top per hota hai,
so iss baar bhi aisa ho sakta hai...
Saima: kya matlab?
Rishabh: main abhi isi waqt aapko yeh contract deta hu... Paisa hamara aur kaam aapka.. Ek tarah se aap ise hamara pehla joint venture bhi keh sakti hai...
Ab please iske liye mana mat kijiyega..... I've been always wanting to work with Mrs.Khanna.... per ab jabki wo nahi rahe main chahta hu ki ab main aapke
saath kaam karu... Meri company nai nai hai
Saima: per ab...
Rishabh: please Saimaji... Agar Mrs.Khanna hote to jhat se haa keh dete hai
Saima: thik hai hai..., dadima ke liye hum yeh deal aapke saath karenge
Rishabh: thank you so much.... Aap nahi jaante aapne mujhe kitni badi khushi di hai.... Thanks a lot... Main jald se jald papers ready karvakakar
aapko inform kar dunga
Saima: ji...
Rishabh: acha to ab main chalta hu...
Saima: ok....
{rishabh leaves..., while saima was still a bit disturbed. Use rayan ke baatei ab tak pareshan kar rahi thi...}
Saima: {to herself} aakhir Rayan ne aisa kyun kaha...aur jab unhone company takeover kar hi li thi to phir use
lauta dene ka kya matlab banta hai.... Shayad unhe apni galati ka ehsaas ho gaya hoga....
{saima inhi sab baato mein uljhi hui rehti hai ki use phir kisi ka phone aata hai}
Saima: hello
Person: to aakhir kanaka aapko mil hi gayi hai? Bahot hi chaalak hai rayan..... Jab use laga ki tumhe uski asliyat pata chal
gayi to usne dubara se company lauta di... [laughs] aur kitne saboot chahiye aapko?
Saima; kaun hai aap aur kya chahte hai? Kyun hume pareshan kar rahe ho?
Person: pareshan nahi main to bas aapka bhala chahta hu... Aur iss baar phir agaah kar raha hu ki rayan per bharosa mat karna, warna tumhare paas pachtave ke alawa kuch nahi bachega... {saying this he disconnects the phone}
Saima: heloo..... hellloooo..aakhir kaun hai aap? {she just bangs the phone down....just than again the phone rings}
Saima: aap jo koi bhi hai, hume aapki bakwas sunne mein koi dilchaspi nahi hai...
Adi: mama, hum Adi baat kar rahe hai....
Saima: Adii... aap.., i'm sorry beta, hume laga koi aur hai
Adi: aap ghar kab aaoge mama? hum aapko bahot miss kar rahe hai...
Saima: beta wo.... hum...
Adi: kya hua mama...
Saima: mama bahot jald aayenge beta.... tab tak aap apna khyaal rakhna.
Adi: nahi mama, hume abhi aapke paas aana hai. Papa aate hi hum unse kahenge ki hume aapke paas le chale
Saima: dekho Adi, hum kuch kaam ke liye yaha aaye hai, jaise hi wo kaam khatm ho jayega hum laut aayenge. Tab tak aap apna
aur papa ka khyaal rakhna...unhe bilkul tang nahi karna....
Adi: ok mama.... hum papa ko bilkul bhi tang nahi karenge
{just than rayan comes to adi's room}
Rayan: kisse baatei ho rahi hai ha?
{saima rayan ki awaaz sunti hai}
Adi: mama se, ye lijiye aap baat kijiye....
{adi phone rayan ko de deta hai}
Rayan: {wo bas adi ko dekhta hai kuch kehta nahi}
Adi: are baat to kijiye na
Rayan: helloo.... Saima, main aur Adi tumhe bahot miss karte hai.....
{saima khamosh thi, per uski aankho mien aasu the...
yaha Adi ko Raina bulati hai aur wo kamre se chala jaata hai}
Rayan: wo.....emmm Adi ne zid ki thi isiliye..... agar ho sake to kam se kam Adi se milne aana, usse jhoot nahi keh paunga....
{and then there was a strange silence between them... Saima said nothing but Rayan could actually feel her and understood her}
Rayan: apna khyaal rakhna.....
{saying this he disconnects the phone..... Saima wanted to speak to Rayan and just tell him everything. But than there
was something that was stopping her}

Next Day.....
Saima decided to go to Garewal house for Adi's sake, or may be she just needed a reason to go there, she didnt knew about that too..
She was on her way just than Rishabh called her and asked to come to Kanaka if she could to which Saima agreed and she turned towards
Kanaka where Rishabh was waiting for her....
Saima stepped in her cabin and there was Rishabh...
Rishabh: good morning
Saima: {smiles} aap itne savere yaha?
Rishabh: maine socha ache kaam mein deri nahi karni chahiye so here i am with the deal papers...
Saima: per abhi... i mean
Rishabh: kya hua? Any problem?
Saima: nahi,per ek baar hum apne family members se baat karna chahte the...aur phir Rayan bhi...{and she stops}
Rishabh: {smiles sarcastically} per yeh company to aapki hai, to iss naate saare faisle lene ka haq bhi aap hi ka banta hai.... I mean that is what i feel....
Saima:hmmm......
{saima papers sign karne hi wali hoti hai ki use rayan ki kahe wo baat yad aati hai... "gairo pe bharosa karne se pehle ek baar apno per bharosa karlo...."}
Rishabh: kya hua? kaha kho gaye?
Saima: emm..... nahi kuch nahi... Iss waqt hume kahi jana hai.., kuch der baad hum yeh papers sign karenge...
Rishabh: per abhi kya problem hai?
Saima: i have to rush somewhere..... please Mr.Malhotra.. I'll be back soon....
{badi tezi se barish hone lagi thi... aur saima utni hi tezi se drive kar rahi thi. Barish ki wajah se use kuch saaf saaf dikhayi nahi de raha tha, aur
achanak wo car pe control kho baiththi hai aur side mein ek tree se takra jaati hai aur behosh ho jaati hai.... uske sar se khoon behene lagta hai...
Waha kuch log aate hai aur tabhi peeche ek car aakar rukti hai, Saima ki gaadi dekhkar wo insaan bahar aata hai aur Saima ki taraf jaata hai aur Saima ko aisi halat mein dekhkar shock hota hai.....

End of Part-26
Comments awaited...


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Edited by ruksaar_khan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
agaya wo aryan.......y do i feel ki he is involved in this.....kuch to gadbad hai yaar.....something is amiss.......i hope the person is rayan n not aryan....i dont want aryan back!!! 😭 😭

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