Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 12

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too cute ruksaar ji ur story is mind blowing bas rayan aur saima ko kareeb aane ka intezar hai
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wow ruku dear awesome promo loved it sis u r'e fic is going on great jaldi continue karna plzzz pllzzz aur intzar maath karwana ... 😳
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wow ruku! dat was such a sweet promo 👏
nw pls post the next part soon without any delay. Cnt wait now!
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hey great story.....i read ur whole story and i must say that ur r a great writer.......i hope u write again and again we can be entertained......
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i loved ur story and i love the names of all character especially siama....so cute name...

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too cute ruksaar ji ur story is mind blowing bas rayan aur saima ko kareeb aane ka intezar hai

i'm glad u liked the story 😊, thanks for ur comments.

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wow ruku dear awesome promo loved it sis u r'e fic is going on great jaldi continue karna plzzz pllzzz aur intzar maath karwana ... 😳

thank you so much sis, i'll be updating soon.

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wow ruku! dat was such a sweet promo 👏
nw pls post the next part soon without any delay. Cnt wait now!

thank you so much faru dii. Sorry for the delay. I'll be posting the next part soon.

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hey great story.....i read ur whole story and i must say that ur r a great writer.......i hope u write again and again we can be entertained......
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i loved ur story and i love the names of all character especially siama....so cute name...

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thank you so much. I'm glad that u liked the story. Thx for ur comments too, it really helps me to get better n better each time i write.

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Part- 11

Recap-
Akhir Saima Rayan se shaadi ke liye maan hi jaati hai, aur undono ki sagaai ho jaati hai.

Story further..........
Sagaai ho jaati hai aur har koi iss rishte se khush hota hai, per koi khush nahi hota to wo hai Saima. Uss raat wo apne kamre mein baithi uss anguthi ko dekhti rehti hai, aur uske aankho se aasu girta hai.
Kahi na kahi use lagta hai ki wo Rayan se sachchayi chupakar use dhoka de rahi hai. Use lagta hai ki jab Rayan ne apne bare mein use sab kuch bata diya hai, to yeh uska bhi farz banta hai ki wo bhi apne ateet ke bare mein Rayan ko sab kuch bata de. Phir dusre hi pal use Dadima ki wo baat yaad aati hai, ki jis rishte ka koi wajood hi nahi tha, uske bare mein kisi ko kya batana. Aur wo Rayan se kehti bhi to kya.
Yehi sochkar wo apne iss rishte ko apna ne ka faisla kar leti hai.

Next day......
Garewal office...
{Rayan hamesha ki tarah apne kaam mein busy hota hai, aur tabhi Saima waha kuch files lekar aati hai}
Saima: ex-cuse me
Rayan: yes
Saima: yeh... {hands him the files}
Rayan: kya hai yeh?
Saima: jis project ke liye hum saath kaam kar rahe the wo ab pura ho chuka hai, yeh sab usi ke details aur baki kuch legal papers hai.
{iss baar Rayan yeh notice karta hai ki Saima ab bhi usse nazrein nahi milati}
Saima: humne soche ki ab jabki yeh project pura ho chuka hai to yeh ab hamara yaha kaam bhi khatm ho
chuka hai, to..
Rayan: to... to kya?
{Saima khamosh rehti hai}
Rayan: mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki tum kisi wajah se pareshan ho? Kya tumhe hamare rishte se aitraaz hai Saima?
Saima: nahi to, aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Actually Dadima chahte the ki kuch din ab hum unke saath hi bitaye,to bas hum soche ki ab jabki project bhi khatm ho chuka hai to aapko yeh files dede aur aapse baat bhi karle. Hamara yakeen kijiye iske alawa aur koi baat nahi hai.
Rayan: hmm, i.. i'm sorry. Mujhe laga kuch aur baat hai jiski wajah se tum u... anyways, mujhe aaj Adi ki school jana hai,
aaj uski school mein open day hai, kaho to tumhe ghar chod du?
Saima: Adi ki school? kya main aapke saath aa sakti hu?
{Rayan yeh sunkar bahot khush hota hai}
Rayan: ha, thik hai. Bas yeh sab files zara thik se rakh du, phir chalte hai...
{Rayan ke table per saare files aise hi pade hote hai, wo jaldi jaldi unhe sametni ki koshish karta hai, per he messes it all}
Saima: hum kar dete hai...
{Saima saare files seedhe karke ache se rakh deti hai, aur Rayan bas wahi khada hota hai, aur apni iss silly si harkat pe man hi man hasta hai}
Saima: lijiye sab ho gaya, ab chale?
Rayan: ha chalo
{Saima aur Rayan Adi ki school jaate hai. Adi Saima ko waha dekhke bahot khush hota hai. Wo daudkar aata hai aur Saima se lipat jata hai, aur phir uska haath pakadkar apni teacher ke paas le jaata hai}
Adi: mam, yeh meri mama hai
Saima: {smiles} hello mam.
Mam: oh to aap hai Adi ki mama. Bahot khushi hui aapse milkar. And Mr.Garewal, congratulations, Adi has topped again. He's stood first in the class.
Rayan: {adi ko gale lagata hai} congrats beta. I'm proud of u
Adi: thank you papa.
Saima: congratulations... {and adi huggs her}
Mam: waise aajkal Adi bahot khush rehta hai, & it's really good, waise Adi aapki mama bahot beautiful hai.
{Rayan and Saima were just amazed to hear this}
Rayan: Adi Saima se bahot attach ho chuka hai
Mam: yes, i can see that.
Rayan: {smiles} ji, acha hum chale hai
Mam: ji, bye Adi, take care
Adi: bye mam
{Adi, Saima aur Rayan school se nikalte hai, per Adi Rayan se ice-cream ke liye zid karta hai}
Adi: Papa please, bas ek ice-cream aur bas ek hi chocolate
Rayan: {laughs} oh to ab chocolate bhi ha? U naughty boy
Adi: papa please
Rayan: Adiii, dekho beta abhi papa ko office jana hai, hum shaam mein jayenge.
Adi: nahi papa, hume abhi hi chahiye, mama aap kahiyena papa se
Saima: thik hai, hum aisa karte hai ki aap aur hum chale jaate hai, Papa ko aap office jane do
Adi: nahi, Papa bhi saath chalenge. Papa please chaliyena
Saima: kuch der ke liye hi chaliye
Rayan: {smiles} thik hai chalte hai. Pehle papa sirf Adi ki sunte the ab se to Adi ki mama ki bhi sunni padegi
Adi: ha...
{Rayan aur Saima Adi ki maasumiyat per has padte hai. Rayan unhe ice-cream parlour le chalta hai, aur waha use
uski favourate ice-cream dilata hai. Aur kuch der baad wo waha se nikalte hai. Rayan parking se car nikalta hai
aur Adi aur Saima wahi bahar uska intezar kar rahe hote hai ki tabhi barish hone lagti hai}
Adi: wow, mama barish ho rahi hai
Saima: oh ho, Adi ander rukte haim warna hum bheeg jayenge
Adi: nahi mama, chaliye na thoda bheegte hai {smiles naughtyly}
Saima: per Adi
Adi: aapko bheegna acha nahi lagta kya?
Saima: mmm..., lagta to hai per agar hum bheeg gaye to beemar pad jayenge,phir dadima hume daatenge
Adi: oh please mama chaliye na...
{aur Adi Saima ka haath kheechkar bahar lee ata hai, aur dono bhi barish mein bheegne lagte hai, Saima bhi
bilkul bachchi bann jati hai Adi ke saath, tabhi Rayan car lekar waha aata hai to dekhta hai ki yeh dono barish mein bheeg rahe hai. Wo daudkar aata hai}
Rayan: Adi chalo, dekho aap puri tarha se bheeg chuke ho, beemar pad jaoge
Adi: {laughs} bheeg to aap bhi chuke ho papa
Rayan: {laughs} dekho, papa bhi bheeg gaye, {and he looks at Saima. Saima kuch uncomfortable feel karti hai, to
Rayan use apna coat de deta hai, aur phir wo jakar car mein baithti hai. Phir Rayan Saima ko ghar chodta hai aur phir
Garewal house chala jata hai}
Raina: are yeh kya? tum dono to puri tarha se bheeg chuke ho. Chalo Adi apne kamre mein chalo
{Raina Adi ko le jati hai, aur Rayan apne kamre mein chala jata hai. Yeh shayad kayi saalo baad Rayan u dilse muskura raha tha, shayad iski wajah Adi tha, ya Saima bhi. Wo uhi kahi khoya rehta hai tabhi use kisi ka phone aata hai}
Rayan: hello
person: is this Mr.Rayan Garewal?
Rayan: yes, speaking.
person: oh hi, kaise ho? Mujhe laga ki aaj bhi tumse baat nahi ho payegi.
Rayan: i'm sorry per maine aapko pehechana nahi
person: mujhe nahi pehechana? lagta hai ab mujhe wahi aakar tumse milna padega
Rayan: is this Aryan?
Aryan: ofcourse this is Aryan Kapoor. Kya hua itne jaldi hume bhool gaye?
Rayan: are nahi, hum apne dosto ko kaise bhool sakte hai?
Aryan: ha ha, dont i know you?
Rayan: {laughs} waise aaj apne dost ki yaad kaise aa gayi?
Aryan: well, ab kya batao tumhe. Papa ki death ho gayi
Rayan: oh, i'm sorry to hear that. Per yeh sab u achanak?
Aryan: ha, papa ki tabiyat kuch thik nahi rehti thi
Rayan: oh, to tum iss waqt kaha, New York mein ho?
Aryan: ha, filhaal yehi hu. Acha yeh batao hamare shopping complex Amazon kaha tak hua hai?
Rayan: bas thik, kaam chal raha hai, i think 2 months more & its done.
Aryan: that's good. Waise ek request karni thi.
Rayan: oh ho, dont be so formal , aur batao ki kya baat hai?
Aryan: ab inn halaat mein main to waha nahi aa sakta to bas tumse request thi ki tum khud personally wo Amazon wala project dekho, darhesal yeh papa ka sapna tha,to bas isiliye chahta tha ki tum khud ise handle karo
Rayan: dont worry at all, main sab dekh lunga.
Aryan: thankyou so much.
Rayan: oh ho, yeh kya tum itne formal ho gaye ho ha? Mana ki hum iss project ki wajah se saath aaye hai per hum
dost bhi to hai na, aur dosti ki pehla usool hai no thankyou & no sorry
Aryan: {laughs} yes Mr.Garewal, i take my words back.
Rayan: that's better.
Aryan: ok then, talk tu later, abhi office jana hai
Rayan: thik hai, u take care & be in touch
Aryan: u too, bye
Rayan: bye....
{Rayan office chala jata hai, waha Saima apne kamrein mein baithi bas apni beeti aur aane wali zindagi ke
bare mein soch rahi thi, tabhi use kisi ka phone aata hai}
Saima: hello...
Person: hey kaisi ho?
Saima: {she cudnt beleive on her ears, it was Aryan. Her eyes were filled with tears & she was completely chocked.
She just cudnt speak a word}
Aryan: hello.., hello Saima, u there? Hello.......
Saima: Ar... A...Aryann
Aryan: are kya hua? kisi bhoot ko dekh liya kya? Are main to saamne bhi nahi aaya to tumhari yeh halat hai agar aa gaya to?
{laughs} acha yeh batao kaisi ho? Kaam kaisa chal raha hai? tumhari dadima kaisi hai?
Saima: wo... hum.., hum thik hai, Aryan tum .....
Aryan: hello.., hello Saima, tumhari awaaz nahi aa rahi hai, line mien bahot disturbance hai
Saima: Aryan tum kaha se bol rahe ho? Kaha ho tum?
Aryan: hello.., Saima... tumhari awaaz nahi aa rahi hai, mujhe kuch sunayi nahi de raha hai
Saima: {shouts out loud} tum kaha ho Aryan
{Aryan kuch sun nahi pata aur wo call disconnect kar deta hai}
Saima: {still shouting} Aryan... hello Aryan....
{Saima ki awaaz sunkar Dadima uske kamre mein aa jate hai, aur dekhte hai ki Saima phone pe Aryan ka naam
cheekh rahi hai aur ro rahi hai. Aryan ka naam sunte hi Dadima gussa ho jate hai}
Dadima: yeh sab kya ho raha hai Saima?
Saima: dadima, abhi..., abhi Aryan ka phone tha... {and she's still crying}
Dadima: chup karo. Hosh mein to ho ki tum kya kahe jaa rahi ho? Tumhari sagaai Rayan se ho chuki hai, tum kisi aur ki
ho chuki ho ab
Saima: per dadima Aryan
Dadima: kitni baar samjhaye tumhe ki bhool jau use. Tumhare iss ektarfe rishte ka koi wajood nahi hai, aur aage se naa to tum usse baat karne ki koshish karogi aur naa hi milne ki.
{Dadima uske paas jate hai aur use gale lagate hai}
Dadima: beta, un yaado ko yaad karke kya fayda jo tumhe sivaye dukh aur takleef ke kuch nahi dete. Are wo ladka to yeh jaanta bhi nahi ki tumse usse pyar karti ho. Aur jab ek naya kal tumhare samne khada hai,to tum kyun apne beete hue kal mein jana chahti ho?
Main tumhara bhala hi chahti hu. Please beta, meri yeh baat maan lo, Aryan ko hamesha ke liye bhool jao. Kal tak yeh thik tha per aaj tum kisi aur ki ho chuki ho. Tumhara ek galat kadam, kayi zindagiya barbaad kar dega. Main jaantii hu ki meri bachchi bahot samajhdaar
hai, please apni dadima ki yeh baat maanle
Saima: ji dadima {crying bitterly} i'm sorry, humse galati ho gayi. Hum wada karte hai aayenda se aisa kuch nahi karenge. Hum apne hisse ki wafadari pure dil se nibhayenge.
Dadima: mujhe tumse yehi umeed thi. Ab tum aaram karo, hum abhi aate hai
Saima: ji
{dadima kamre se chale jaate hai, aur Saima bhi kisi tarah apne aapko sambhal leti hai. Aaj phir ek baar usne apni khushi ko apno ke liye qurbaan di}

Garewal office.......
{yaha Rayan kuch deligates ke saath meeting khatm karke ghr lautta hai, aur kuch files aur apni bag lekar nikalta hai.
Wo airport ki taraf jaa raha hota hai, phir use Saima ka khyaal aata hai to wo use phone karta hai}
Rayan: hello
Saima: ji aap, kahiye
Rayan: Saima, main kuch kaam ke silsile mein Delhi jaa raha hu, to socha ki tumhe batana thik hoga
Saima: oh, kab tak lautenge?
Rayan: parso tak. Waise ek tumse ek kaam tha
Saima: ji kahiye
Rayan: Maine tumhe wo Amazon shopping complex ke bare mein bataya tha na
Saima: ji
Rayan: main chahta tha ki tum kal ek baar waha ho aao, wo project kisi ka sapna hai, to main chahta tha ki meri absence mein
tum jakar dekh aao. Waha Mr.Malhotra honge, wo tumhe kuch papers denge. Wo papers tumhe New York bhejne hai
Saima: thik hai, per address?
Rayan: ha, meri cabin mein, table per Amazon Complex karke ke ek file rakhi hai, usi mein tumhe address milega. Unka naam hai
Mr. Vivek Kapoor
Saima: ji thik hai, hum kar denge
Rayan: thanks. Lo airport bhi pohoch gaya. Acha ab main rakhta hu, apna khyaal rakhna
Saima: aap bhi
Rayan: byeee
Saima: byee

End of Part-11
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nice part waiting for rayan and saima to come together forgetting aryan
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wow ruku dear masth part toooooo goooooooood loved adi and saima ka relationsip 😳 great part continue soooon

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