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Posted: 18 years ago
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THE BASH...

Everyone had slowly started to arrive… And Naina, God! Now we pity her, don't we? So helpless, so, so, so…disappointed! A slave in her own party! She felt as if she was someone in the 1947 Freedom Struggle of India, just somehow hoping to get free from THIS futile slavery of THAT idiotic fellow, Alekh. Gosh Naina! How I just hope you were less pessimistic… After all, Life isn't that bad, naa? Anyway, all that was so very disgusting and was a total time-waste for Naina… Naina was just pondering over that one point, how Alekh would mock at her when he will see her drowned with all this work and on top of it, work for him! NAHIN! She just couldn't tolerate this! But she had to do this in order to meet her friends… Kya yaar! SUCH A BIG PROBLEM NA, ISN'T IT??? HUH?!!!?!!!?.....
"Pooja!" exclaimed a very happy and over-whelmed Naina, on seeing her bestest friend. "Kaisi hai?" "Main toh bilkul theek hun, aur tu?" " Hmmm… Tu aa gayi hai, toh kaisi hongi?" "Haan yaar, sachi… Tujhse agar thodi der bhi na milun na, toh pata nahin meri Life toh jaise strawberry ice-cream ki tarah lagti hai. And yes, tu toh jaanti hee hai, I hate strawberry!" "By-the-way, kuch problem hai kya?" "Abhi tak hua toh kuch nahin, par bahut jaldi hone waala hai... I was just about to tell you, but stopped… I thought ki main jab tujhse milungi, tab bata doongi…" "Haan, haan… Par hua kya…" "Yahaan nahin… Do minute ke liye bhaar chal sakti hai kya?" "Haan, haan… Bilkul… chal…" And they went out, into the magnificent garden, which beautifully surrounded Naina's house. "Hmmm… Speak…" "Hm… Toh main keh rahi thi, ki…" BUT! How could that fellow Alekh keep Naina away from doing the work? HUH?! "Aey hello, 'Ms. GRANNY', can you please do a favor for me… My car's outside, and I think it's not been parked properly. I'm busy with my things, so you HAVE TO do something with it. Get it?", said a very proud Alekh, thinking as if he had climbed Mt. Everest. He ordered Naina, and that too for his own work, was something really imperative. Wah! What an opportunity for him. Great indeed! And Naina, this was too much for her… As it is she was doing so much, and on top of it this silly work from Alekh. She was totally horrified! "Listen Mr…" "Alekh… I think you know my name very well… I'm quite famous here, maybe, more famous than what you are… And if you're thinking that you'll refuse to do my work, well… I think your mom's very much at home… Ain't she?" "I'm warning you… I'll…I'll… Okay… I'll do that work for you... But now, GET LOST!!!" "Hey listen, I want that work to be done instantly, alright? So… GO!!!" "Yes sir!!!" Naina went away, apparently horrified by this 'LITTLE', yet horrendous conversation! Pooja followed her… Alekh stood behind, certainly mocking at Naina's furious face… And yeah, Pooja too hated this… She couldn't tolerate it anymore… Thoughts were pondering in her tiny brain… She was intelligent, yet, quite, no, VERY FUNNY… Thoughts like stabbing Alekh, mixing poison in his drink, pushing him down from the terrace, etc., etc., were going on in her mind… I think she had gone crazy… Yeah, I AM skeptical about this fact… Hmmm… Ya, maybe… And when Naina went outside… Just have a look at what happened…

Edited by praks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
hey guys.....so dats d next part...i hope u like it...have fun..... and plz do comment na..... 😆 ..... and yeah, thanx for all d previous compliments, dey really encourage me a lot......thanx.... 😊 .......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 I as wondering...are u getting naina and alekh together???anyways you wont be able to write till the 13th????? 😭 😭 do try to write....and study well. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
......thanku....i will surely try 'n' write and yeah, thanx for dat lovely "BEST OF LUCK' thing.... 😉........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Haan, haan… Hello… Kaun? Mummyji ? Aap ho kya? Oh! Acha, sorry… Woh, aapki awaaz theek nahin aa rahi hai… Haan, haan… Main pahunch toh gaya hun… Par yahaan koi dikhe tab toh baat hai na! Koi hai hee nahin na, yahaan toh… Kya? Haan, haan… Main hun toh uski friend ke ghar par hee… Par yahaan par toh koi nahin dikh raha… Woh…" "Who's he?" asked a very perplexed Naina. "Arrey, yeh wohi toh hai, I think, jiske baare mein main tujhe bataane waali thi... Mr. HUDA!!!" "HUDA??? Yeh kaisa naam hai? GOD!!! It's so very peculiar… Na???" "Tujhe pata bhi hai, ki yeh hai kaun, phaaltu mein bolti jaa rahi hai…" "Kaun hai, nahin yeh hai kaun… Nahin, tu mujhe bas bata, yeh hai, hai kaun yeh? Yeh koi Bill Clinton ka beta nahin hai!!!" "Bill Clinton toh pata nahin, par yeh hai bahut…" "KYA??? Kyun bey, Mt. Everest hai kya??? Lagta toh nahin… Tujhe lagta hai kahin se yeh, Mt. Everest", and Naina, for the very first time, burst into a hearty laughter. Huda, the so-called Mt. Everest, could thankfully not here them as they were standing at a far away place from him… But yeah, Naina and Pooja could hear his conversation, because of his loud Punjabi accent and deafening, thunderous voice!Ufff!!! God, he surely sounded as if he was some DEVIL… But he surely wasn't… THOUGH HE CLEARLY LOOKED LIKE ONE… Just kidding! Tall, yup, about 6-ft, and actually quite fair, handsome, very... But anyway, what WAS this Huda man doing here… Now c'mon, Pooja knew it all too well… After all he had come to… See for yourself…" Tu isey jaanti bhi hai?" "Haan… Tabhi toh keh rahi hun, stupid! Ab bas, chup ho ja zara, ruk ja… Let me talk to him once…" " As you say, madam!" "Uhhh... Excuse me..." "Yes? Oh, aap kahin..." "Right, main Pooja hee hun… Aap Huda hee hain na?" "Haan, haan… Main Huda hee hun… Woh…" Huda's sight went over to Naina… "Aap?" "Woh... Woh meri friend hai, Naina... Usi ki party mein toh main aayi hun..." "Oh! Acha… Hi!" "Hmmm… Yaya… Whatever!" Naina was disgusted! Who WAS he? And what in heaven's name was he doing here, haan? And on top of it, Pooja was talking to him… How did she know him??? What WAS going on yaar?!?!? "Aap bas ek minute rukenge kya, main bas abhi aayi?" "Haan, haan, why not! Please… Go ahead…" "Thanks…" She went over to Naina and pulled her behind a nearby bush. "Yeh ho kya raha hai Pooja? Haan? What is going on here?" "Yaar, mat pooch… Yeh Huda hai… He's come to see me…" "Haan, toh theek hai, dekh toh liya, ab jaa kyun nahin raha… Tu bilkul theek-thaak toh hai… Waise, mujhe nahin pata tha, ki uncle-aunty ne tere liye ab bodyguards bhi rakhne shuru kar diye hain!!!" "Chup kar! Don't' talk nonsense! He's come to 'See Me'! "KYA? Woh waala SEE?" Naina was so shocked and maybe depressed… What? Pooja wasn't even 20! She'll get MARRIED! "Waise toh, isey aur jaldi aana tha, but he couldn't reach on time and I had to come to your party naa, toh main toh aa gayi aur mama-papa se maine keh diya tha, ki agar yeh aaye, toh isey yahaan bhejdein… Koi problem toh nahin hai naa?" "Nahin, agar problem khud hee aa jaaye, toh kya problem hogi… Chal, ab agar yeh laloo aa hee gaya hai, toh isey andar toh le chalein... Lekin tune mujhe bataaya kyun nahin, TU?" "What do you mean by 'TU'? Mujhe kaunsa abhi shaadi karni hai issey? Abhi toh bas dekhne aaya hai... Huff! Ab chalein?!" "Chal bhai, chal...", said Naina, sighing. "Any problem?" "Haan, nahin, bilkul nahin, not at all. Let's go inside." "Ya, let's go."

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Edited by praks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
okay guys....so d next part's here....temme how did you find it????plzzzzz do reply...plz.... 😳 .....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
Praks.. first of all can I request you to use a different colour next time.. its difficult reading this text.. but yeah, the story is awesome! Huda and Pooja??? This one's got to be interesting..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
arrey yaar..obviously, i mean, if u have any problem, just temme..yeah, i'll surely do this...and thanx for d lovely compliment!!!!! 😳 .....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
heyyy prakriti! 😃

im realli realli sry 4 not commentin on da previous parts yaar 😭 da thing is i wasnt in touch wid da ffs... bt now... me in touch wid them 😃

i read ur whole story jus now... ITS ROCKIN!! 👏 never thot naina n alekh cud b enemies 😉 n huda-pooja??!! awesome pairin yaar! 👏

can i ask ya one thing?? 😛 will da ali n ud 2 b shown in da story?? or is it jus naina,pooja,huda n alekh?? 😕 😉 😳

nyways... plzz do continu soooooon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
hey... thanx a lot for ur 'stimulating' compliment.... i was just thinking dat u always reply 2 every ff, but where were u dis time.... and yeah, well no, actually, just wait 'n' watch for d thrilling(i hope so) next part..... and den u'll get 2 know everything.... 😆 ... but d next part will be posted a little late, maybe ater 13th of march, because of my exams.... so maybe... till den, bye.. take care.... 😊 .....

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