A bundle of mysteries Fantasy SS AbhiGya PraRish AshLok RaIna ArJen - Page 3

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Pratha is being challenged to learn how to shoot. Will she?

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Pragya thinks Abhi should remember her. Do they have a past?

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What happened to Aastha before? Did she suffer due to someone?

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#24

What dark secret is Aastha hiding? She suffered due to that?

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The killer is not showing up on camera. If it is a real person, how is he/she doing that?

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Sure.what do you think about the twist in the abhigya tale?


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Thank u very much Surilikoyal,coderlady,silverbell,taahir,khwaishfan,glitter_goldie.




A bundle of mysteries Part 3

Thank u Rehana Siraj for the beautiful ArJen edits.

The girls arranged Janmastami celebration at the villa surprising the boys.

Pragya:We need some fun also.Right?

Abhi:You are right.The current case is snatching our peace of mind.So a celebration is needed for relaxation.

Pratha:Will you guys dance with us?

Rishab and Shlok:Sure.

The girls smiled.

Pragya:But we need to practise dance.If you guys are ok with it please come to the hall for practice.

Abhi:Ok.In the free time I will come.

Pragya smiled.

Raghav was silent.

Naina:Raghav,why are you silent?Won't you dance?

Raghav looked at Naina.He saw Akasha in her place and smiled.

Raghav:Yes.I will dance with you.

Naina smiled.

But in Raghav's eyes it was Akasha who was smiling at him.




Abhi entered a room in the villa.Pragya:I am glad that you came here as I requested.

Abhi:Why should I not come when you call me here?

Pragya:You are a police officer.So I doubted whether you will be ready to come here for janmashtami dance practice.

Abhi:I am a police officer.But I am an ordinary person who loves to celebrate.For janmashtami celebration,all are practicing dance.So just because of my profession,why should I stay away from all this?

Pragya smiled.

Pragya:Shall we start practicing?

Abhi:Yes sure.

Pragya put some steps and Abhi started aping her.

Suddenly Abhi got some blurred images of a couple dancing.Abhi got distracted and stopped dancing.

Pragya:What happened?

Abhi:I don't know why.Suddenly I was reminded of a couple dancing.But it was not clear.

Pragya thought:Is Abhi remembering our past?

Pragya:It's ok.Let's continue practicing.

Abhi:Yes.Sorry for the distraction.

Pragya:It's ok.

Abhi and Pragya continued rehearsing the dance.




When Rishab came for practice,Pratha was surprised.

Pratha:Finally you came.I doubted whether you will come.

Rishab:Why such a doubt?

Pratha:I thought you use your body parts only to hold weapons.

Rishab felt embarrassed.

Rishab:Hello...I can dance too.For such celebrations I do dance.I take the gun only when it is necessary.I use the gun when I am with my enemies.But I dance when I am with someone who is close to me.

Pratha was stunned.

Pratha:What did you say?You dance when you are with someone who is close to you?

Rishab realized what he said.

He thought:What did I say?Why did I say so?Is Pratha really close to me?Is that why I came here to dance with Pratha?

Rishab:I said i dance when I am with someone who can dance well,not with someone close.

Pratha:But how do you know that I can dance well?I can be a terrible dancer also.

Rishab:Since I am an army officer I have observed different types of people.So I can understand whether a person is a good dancer or not.

Pratha smiled sarcastically:O really?

Rishab:Ya.

Pratha:Ok.Let's start our dance practice.

They started dancing.Unknowingly both were lost in each other.

Raghav and Naina were rehearsing dance at the lawn.Naina was looking at Raghav deeply.

Raghav:Akasha...do you remember our ballroom dance party?

Naina kept silent.



Flash back...

Akasha was dressed in a beautiful gown.Raghav was mesmerized by her beauty.

Akasha:Raghav...if you stare at me like me,you will forget the dance steps.

Raghav:So what?

He pulled her closer and said:When I am with you,I will sway to music automatically.Our dance will be beautuful for sure.Because our chemistry is great.

Akasha smiled at him sweetly.

Raghav and Akasha forgot everything and did the ballroom dance romantically.


Present....

Raghav:Did you forget it Akasha?

Naina:Raghav...let us focus on our Janmashtami dance practice.

Raghav smiled:Ok.

She smiled.

Raghav and Naina were dancing.Suddenly it started raining.

They both got lost in each other.




Shlok Aastha were dancing.

Aastha's duppatta got blown in the air fell over them.

Shlok-Aastha shared a romantic eye lock.

Aastha-Shlok came back to senses and removed the duppatta from them.

Aastha:Don't you think that we recreated TV serial duppatta moment?

Shlok laughed.

He pulled her cheek and said:You look so cute.

She smiled.



Janmashtami celebration....

Abhi Pragya and Shlok Aastha got lost in each other seeing each other well dressed.

Pragya remembered their past...




Flash back...

It was Janmashtami celebration..

Abhi-Pragya and another couple danced to Krishna Radha song.

Madhuban mein jo kanhaiya, kisi gopi se mile
Kabhi muskaye, kabhi chhede, kabhi baat kare
Radha kaise na jale, Radha kaise na jale

Aag tann mann mein lage
Radha kaise na jale, Radha kaise na
jale




Madhuban
mein bhale kaanha, kisi gopi se mile
Mann
mein to Radha ke hi
Prem ke hai phool khile
Kis liye Radha jale, kis liye Radha jale
Bina soche samjhe
Kis liye Radha jale, kis liye Radha jale

O gopiyan taarein hai, chaand hai Radha
Phir kyun hai usko biswaas aadha
O gopiyan taarein hai, chaand hai Radha
Phir kyun hai usko biswaas aadha

Kaanhaji ka jo sadaa
Idhar udhar dhyaan rahe
Radha bechari ko phir
Apne pe kya maan rahе




Gopiyan aani jaani hai
Radha toh mann ki rani hai
Gopiyan aani jaani hai
Radha toh mann ki rani hai
Saanjh sakhare, jamuna kinare
Radha radha hi kaanha pukare



Oyе hoye, oye hoye
Baahon ke haar jo daale
Koi kaanha ke gale
Radha kaise na jale, Radha kaise na jale
Aag tann mann mein lage
Radha kaise na jale, Radha kaise na jale

Na din din, na din din, na din dina ho
Na din din, na din din, na din dina ho
Na din din, na din din, na din dina ho
Na din din, na din din, na din dina ho(Lagaan).



Present....

Pragya smiled thinking:I miss those beautiful days.

Abhi Pragya,Shlok Aastha and Rishab Pratha started dancing.

Woh hai Rangeela

Chail chabeela

Woh hai natkhat

woh jamunatat

phere lagaye murli bajaye

Gopiyon ke sang raas rachaaye

Murli bajaiyaa raas rachaiyaa

shyam salona hai



jo hai albela madnainowala

jiski deewani brij ki har bala

woh kisna hai,woh kisna hai

woh kisna hai,woh kisna hai

kisna hai



jo hai albela madnainowala

jiski deewani brij ki har bala

woh kisna hai,woh kisna hai

woh kisna hai,woh kisna hai



pyar mein doobi,pyar mein khoyi

pyar ki dhun mein jaagi na soyi

pyar mein doobi,pyar mein khoyi

pyar ki dhun mein jaagi na soyi

duniya se hai woh anjaani

sab kehte hai prem deewani

kisna se milti hai bhool ke har bandhan

kisna ki hi mala japti hai woh jogan









Nainon mein sanson mein mann mein kisna

har pal hai jeevan mein jiske kisna

woh radha hai

woh radha hai, woh radha hai

Radha hai



Madhur madhur sa roop hai jiska

shwet shwet rang jiska

sundar tan man sundar chitwan

sundar hai ang jiska

pyar hai sgar se bhi gehra

kisna ke sang jiska



woh radha hai

woh radha hai, woh radha hai

Radha hai



Raghav saw Akasha in Naina and started dancing with her.

jo hai albela madnainowala

jiski deewani brij ki har bala

woh kisna hai,woh kisna hai

woh kisna hai,woh kisna ha





Nainon mein sanson mein mann mein kisna

har pal hai jeevan mein jiske kisna

woh radha hai

woh radha hai, woh radha hai

Radha hai(Kisna).

After the dance,Raghav embraced Naina.

Raghav:Thank you Akasha for returning to my life.I really missed you.

Naina became emotional.

Abhi,Pragya,Pratha,Shlok and Aastha smiled with surprise seeing Raghav happily embracing Naina.

Abhi:You are right Pragya.Love is healing Raghav.Maybe Naina is Raghav's love.

Pragya smiled.

Rishab thought:Raghav called Naina as Akasha.Nobody else noticed it.But I heard it.Why Raghav considers Naina as Akasha?Why Raghav sees Akasha in Naina's place when Naina has no resemblance with Akasha?Why I find it so strange?

Raghav noticed everyone staring at him with surprise.

Raghav:Why are you all staring at me like this?

Shlok:You look very happy.So we feel happy.

Raghav smiled:Yes.I really enjoyed a lot with her.

Naina smiled at him hearing that Raghav enjoyed with her.




Pragya,Aastha,Naina and Pratha were playing badminton.Rishab was watching Pratha.

Rishab:Pratha looks so angelic.How can she be beautiful like a fairy?

Pratha noticed Rishab staring at her and went near him.

Rishab was lost in her.She tapped her hand.

Pratha:Why are you staring at me?

Rishab was embarrassed.

Rishab:I am not staring at you.I was watching you all play.

Pratha:But I felt that your eyes were fixed on me.

He felt embarrassed again.

Rishab:I am an army officer.My eyes are on our country's enemies,not on girls.

She just smiled.

Rishab turned off his face to change the attention.





Rishab was playing guitar thinking of his dance moments with Pratha.Pratha came near him.He stopped playing guitar seeing Pratha.

Pratha:Don't stop it.It's beautiful.

He smiled.

He played guitar and Pratha was lost in it.

Pratha:You are a good musician.

Rishab:Thanks.To be frank I was not getting enough inspiration to sing or compose music.But you are inspiring me to sing and compose music.

Pratha smiled:Why?

Rishab:I don't know.I just know that you have become my inspiration.

Pratha blushed.




Abhi went to the forest at night to catch the killer red handed. Suddenly he heard a voice:ACP Abhishek Mehra!

He turned back and looked at that person.That person had worn a hoodie.

Abhi:Who are you?

That person unveiled her face.

He was shocked to see that person.

Abhi:You?You are the killer?So I was right.The killer is not a ghost,but an ordinary human being.

That person:Yes.I am a human being.But I will kill you brutally like a ghost kills people.

Abhi was shocked.


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#28

Part 3

Excellent update... nicely written

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Posted: 2 years ago
#29

Loved it dear

Awesome and interesting part

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
#30

Raghav keeps seeing Akasha when he looks at Naina. But she will want to be seen for herself.

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