A bundle of mysteries Fantasy SS AbhiGya PraRish AshLok RaIna ArJen - Page 16

Nice Ending Loved It I Like Abhi And Pragya's Story And Rishabh And Pratha's

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Part 10

Interesting and Fabulous Update

Awesome update Jasmine👍🏼🤗

Oh God Rani Pari has decided to send Pratha to fairy land. But Rishab says he won't let Pratha go. He is always by her side no matter what. Oh police dept. suspended Abhi & Shlok as they could not solve the forest murder case. Mahek is here as fairy. Rishab is ready to give his heart to Pratha. OMG! Rani Pari ordered Mahek to remove Rishab's heart.She removed it how cruel. It's terrible to imagine also. Rani Pari became weak. Pratha removed her heart and placed in Rishab's chest.That's really painful. PraRish go to any extent to prove their true love for each other. At last Rani Pari understood her mistake. Mahek was happy for them. Rani Pari blessed them happy married. Loved Akasha - Raghav scenes. So Rahul & Naina got married. PraRish has a daughter Anmol. Raghav-Akasha has Prerna as daughter. AbhiGya have rebirth. Shlok meets Aastha by the name Sapna after rebirth. AbhiGya met and married. Wow Anmol married to Rudra. Most of the pairs having children now and their children getting married. It's basically a complete family story. You have written beautifully. I really adore your way of writing. You always give required twists and turns for your story with apt pics. 👏This is the first horror story which i enjoyed reading. 😆😉Fav scene is when Rishab decided to give his heart to Pratha. Fav jodi PraRish.❤️ Fav character is Shlok.❤️ Shlok because he was ready to accept Aastha even when her life was spoiled.❤️That's the greatest thing to do. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Sshesha

Amazing cover pic.

Thank you so much 😳

Part 1

Amazing start. Shlok and Abhishek's entry and how they saved the girls is very heroic. Pragya, Aastha, Pratha and Naina as friends is cool. Shlok asking Aastha's name only. Haha! Surprising that the girls gang lost their villa in the last minute as the boys gang offered a better money. I liked Shlok and Abhishek's gesture towards the girls' gang and it's sweet that they decided to compensate for their loss. Pratha talking supersitious was hilarious. Surprising that the forest is very dangerous in nights and people got murdered. Pratha exclaiming the fakeness of the story said by Shlok is funny and cute. So boys gang has four members as Raghav and Rishabh are added into it. What is Raghav's profession? Surprising that Akasha is Raghav's ex-girlfriend and sadly she died in an accident. It took a toll on Raghav's mental health. Poor Raghav misunderstood that Naina is Akasha. The girls encouraging Shlok and Abhishek to cure Raghav was lovely. Pratha and Rishabh's first encounter is very hilarious. I loved it. So Rishabh is an army man who is passionate in singing. Cool. Glad that Prarish didn't end up hating each other. The climax is scary. Edits of ArJen is very beautiful.

Part 2

Lovely cover page again.

Pragya cooking for the boys and her conversation with Abhishek is nice. Pragya's dream was romantic. Aastha and Shlok's rose scene is cute. I am shocked that Aastha has a dark past and due to which, Shlok might not like her. Akasha and Raghav scene is cute. Poor Akasha is dead just like her parents. I'm surprised that Naina already knew Raghav and she came there for Raghav. Prarish scene is funny. Rishabh is very alert. Rishabh helping Pratha to shoot is funny. Pratha making Raghav smile is cute. Their scene is nice. Surprising that constables fall asleep as soon as they came to duty. Things are getting more scary and mysterious.