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Posted: 18 years ago

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continue soon yaar...

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vandana 😉

Ok dear...😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
sara gret part lo yeh sujal bichara luuth gaya larki ke chakar mein 😆 continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

sara gret part lo yeh sujal bichara luuth gaya larki ke chakar mein 😆 continue soon

hehehe..😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Recap: Sujal tells abt the incident which took place in the farm house. The doc told Savita to take some rest.


Part 9.

Kashish was in her room, getting up dressed.
Muskaan: kahiin jarahee ho?
Kashish: haan wohh… Preeti ne bulaya hai… ussii se milne jarahee huun..
Muskaan: theek hai…
Kashish: Jijii… maine kitchen mein Maa ka soup bana diya hai… abhi toh wohh so rahee hain… lekin jab utheingii toh unhein zaroor pila dena.. shayad mujhe aaney mein der hojaye
Muskaan: tu fikar mat ker… main dekh loongii…
Kashish: theek hai… (carries her purse) main chaltii hoon…
Muskaan nods.

Kashish goes to the hill point where Preeti was waiting for her. Preeti was Surveen Chawla, thought of reminding u again….

Preeti: hiiiii!!
Kashish: (waved her)
Preeti: ab Maa ki tabiyat kaisee hai?
Kashish: pehle se kuch behtar hain…
Preeti: chal… beth jaa…
Kashish: (sits) lekin tuney mujhe yaahan kyun bulaya? Koi zaroori kaam?
Preeti: array nahi… aisa waisa kuch nahi…. Yeh dekh… aaj main ghar se aaluu k parathey bana ker layee hoon… khud banayein hain… zara taste ker k batana k kaise baney hain?
Kashish: acha… (takes a bite)
Preeti: haan… kaise bane?
Kashish: theek hain… lekin namak thora kum haii…
Preeti: huh? Dafa hojaa.. main tujhse baat nahi kertii
Kashish laughs
Preeti: jab bhi tu ghar se kuch bana ker laatii hai… main humesha uski tareef kertii hoon… aur jab bhi main kuch laoon.. tu us mein zaroor koi khaami dhoondhtii hai
Kashish: arey merii jaan…..(puts her arms around her neck) main jaan boojh ker thodi na kehtii hoon… main toh sirf is liye tujhe batattiii hoon take dobara tu aisee galatii na kere…. Insaan apni galatiyon hee se toh sab kuch seekhta haii…
Preeti: rehney de!
Kashish: (smiles) acha tu jaanti hai na k kal wohh log jijii ko dekhne arahe hain…?
Preeti: haan.. mujhe maloom haii..
Kashish: kal subah subah aajana… bohat kaam kerna haii…
Preeti: theek hai..ajaoongii…
Kashish: acha…. Ab main chaltii hoon…. Der horahee hai..
Preeti: array abhi toh ayee thii?
Kashish: haan wohh Maa ko soup dena thaa aur unki dawa ka waqt bhi hogaya hai….. Mujhe pura yaqeen hai k Jijii bhuul gayein hongii…
Preeti: hmm…tu unka itna khayaal rakhti hai.. phir bhi wohh tujhse pyaar nahi kertiin…?
Kashish: kisne kaha k wohh mujhse pyaar nahi kertii?
Preeti looks on
Kashish: wohh mujhse bohat pyaar kerti hain… bass… dikhana nahi chahtiin…
Preeti: tuu yeh sab kaise kehsakti hai?
Kashish: Mujhe unke pyaar per purra yakeen hai… unke ghussey k peeche unka pyaar chupa hai….
Preeti: hmm..
Kashish: ohh… main ab chalti hoon.. warna der hojayegi… kal waqt per aajana….
Preeti: haan theek hai…
Kashish: bye!
Preeti: haan bye shye!

Cut to Sujal n Pratham.

Pratham: what?? Are you serious??
Sujal: (nods)
Pratham: tuu kal Sundernagar jaraha hai… aur mujhe ab bataya?
Sujal: waise bhi tuu jaan ker kya kerega?
Pratham: c'mon yaar… Shiv bhaiiya k liye larkii dekhne jarahe hain… koi aam baat nahi… aur waise bhi… shiv Bhaiyya mere bhi toh bhaiiya hainaa…?
Sujal: haan… yeh baat toh hai… sach kahoon toh mera jaaney ko zara mann nahi hai…
Pratham: chal koi baatt nahii… tere hise ka main chala jaata hoon…kaisa rahega?
Sujal: jee nahi…. Iski koi zaroorat nahi hai…
Pratham: yaar… main bhi kal tum logon ko accompany ker raha hoon… tu toh jaanta hee haina,.. k mera tum logon k ilawaa aur koi nahi haii…. Aur waise bhi Mumbai mein bohatt garmi haii… Sundernagar mein jaa ker thodii sii sardee khaa loon! What ssay?
Sujal: tu nahi sudhrega…. Theek hai toh phir kal subah 9 baje pohanch jaana….
Pratham: 9 baje? Itni jaldii..
Sujal: haan… hum subah subah hee nikal rahe hain. . .
Pratham: itni jaldii kaise uthoonga yaar…
Sujal: chal ab dramey na ker.. main tujhe phone ker k jaga looongaa…
Pratham: all right dude.. aakhir dosti kis din kaam ayegii…
Sujal moves his head.


Cut to Sundernagar.
Kashish comes to see Savita… she was asleep.
Kashish: Maa…
Savita opens her eyes slowly..
Savita: hmm..?
Kashish: aapki dawaa…
Savita: rakh doo… main leloongii…
Kashish: mujhe pata hai… aap humesha dawa lena bhool jaati hain…. Chaliye.. uthiye… aaj main aapko dawa pila ker hee bahar jaoongii…
Savita: ohoo! (she manages to get up ) Laoo.. doo…
Kashish: yeh lijiye… (puts the tablet into her mouth) … paanii….( she takes the water in )
Savita: hmm…
Kashish: Maa… kal wohh log arahe hain… aur kal tak aap ko theek hona hai… is liye aaj jee bhar k rest kijiye… theek hai?
Savita: haan………………..
Kashish: main chaltii hoon… ( she leaves )
Mihir: Chotii…
Kashish: jee Baujii..
Mihir: beta…. Savita k liye tumhara pyaar dekh ker meri aankh bhar ayee…
Kashish: baujii… yeh kya? Aap ro rahe hain??
Mihir: nahi beta… main toh bass…. Kabhi kabhi sochta hoon k ek din tu bhi humein chor ker chalii jayegeii… shayad tab hee Savita ko terii kammi mehsoos hogii…
Kashish: Nahi Baujii… aap maanein ya maanein… lekin Maa mujhse bohat pyaar kertii hain…
Mihir looks on..
Kashish: unka pyaar unke zubaan per nahi aata… lekin usii pyaar ki jhalak main har baar unki ankhon mein dekhtii hoon…
Mihir: (smiles)
Kashish: acha wohh… kal subah jaldi uthna hai… aur itne kaam kerne hain… main sone jarahee hoon… theek hai…? Aap bhi sojaoo…
Mihir: haan beta……..

Cut to the Garewals.
Shiv was in his room… getting really nervous.!
Sujal: (walks in and looks at his condition)
Shiv was in a deep thought.
Sujal: (began to hum a song) " Haal kaisa hai janaab kaa?? Kya khayaal hai aapka?? Hum toh machal gaye ho ho ho… yun hee phisal gaye ha ha ha…" ( hope the lyrics are correct.. hehee)
Shiv: shut up… yeh ajeeb ajeeb gaaney kyun garaha hai…
Sujal: wohh kya haina.. yeh gaana is waqt aapki condition per bohat fitt suit ker raha haii…
Shiv: hmm..
Sujal: tohh.. finally wohh din aa hee gaya.. jis ka aapko barson se intezaar thaa…
Shiv: barson se?
Sujal: haan… Muskaan Bhabhi wohee haina? Joh aapki childhood dreams mein aatii thiin…
Shiv: haa! Kya bak raha hai…
Sujal: sach hee toh kehraha hoon….(lays on the bed)
Shiv: I don't know…
Sujal: mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aati…
Shiv: wohh kya??
Sujal: aapne abhi us larkii ki sirf ek photo hee dekhii hai… aur saath hee rishte k liye done bhi kerdiya? Wohh kaise?
Shiv: kyunke mujhe uska chehra dekh ker hee maloom hogaya k wohh kaisee larkii hogi…
Sujal: hmm.. not bad Shiv Bhaiya.. lekin main aapki tarah nai keroonga..
Shiv: toh tu kya keregaa?
Sujal: jis larki se meri shaadi hogii…wohh mere saamne hogii…. Ek jeetii jaagtii larkii… jis se main baatein keroonga… aur jo mujh se baatein keregii…
Shiv: toh tera matlab hai k Muskaan jeeti jaagti larki nahi hai??
Sujal: maine kab kaha??? Waise aapki toh arranged marriage haii.. par main love marriage keroonga… wohh bhi love at first sight!
Shiv: ahaan..not bad dude!
Sujal feels proud!
Shiv: ab yahan se dafa hojaa.. kal subah jaldi uthna hai mere bhaaii!
Sujal: theek hai… toh phir kal miltey hain… Good night!
Shiv: good night!!


End of part 9.

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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part.........uff ye savita kab sudhregi pata nahi...............waiting 4 sujal-kashish to meet........

luv,
vandana 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 hehehe 👏 exceelllentt.....love at first sight ....yani next part mein ho jayega na love 👏

great going..continue soooooon..waise pratham is played by hiten tejwani???
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part sara cntinue sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev1

😳 hehehe 👏 exceelllentt.....love at first sight ....yani next part mein ho jayega na love 👏

great going..continue soooooon..waise pratham is played by hiten tejwani???

😆Hehehe..

Acha toh aap bhi forum visit kertiin hain Farah?😆 lagta toh nahi.....l0l

and...aap jaisa koi merii ff parhe toh LIFE ban jaye! hehe...

and...zyada khush mat ho... love at first sight agar na hua toh?😃

aur haan.. Pratham is Hiten! agar aapne first page mein characters dhyaaaaaaaan se parhe hotey toh aaj yeh NOBAT naa aatii...lol

thanksss.. luv yaa..😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

nice part.........uff ye savita kab sudhregi pata nahi...............waiting 4 sujal-kashish to meet........

luv,
vandana 😉

Thanks Vandana... im also waiting for them to meet.. Next part...hopefullyy .. they will meet in the next part!😉 tc!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

great part sara cntinue sooon 👏

thanks Honii!😛

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