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Sara

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Posted: 18 years ago

#91

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Hahaha.. Farah itni jaldii kaise maar sakti hoon Main Savita koo.. lol.. thnxx for commenting..!!

Guriya hope u liked tht part when Savita got hurt.. i was also veryy happy.. hehehe... tcz.. 😆

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golu_1677

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Posted: 18 years ago

#92

wonderful part. 👏

Sujal My God he is so naughty and badmash. Loving his charchter just waiting to see what happens wen he meets kash. She is so simple and he totally opposite.

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Sara

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Posted: 18 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: golu_1677
wonderful part. 👏

Sujal My God he is so naughty and badmash. Loving his charchter just waiting to see what happens wen he meets kash. She is so simple and he totally opposite.

Yeaah Golu.. they both are completely different!! U have heard the phrase " Opposites attract.." isnt it? hehe😆

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Daebak

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Posted: 18 years ago

#94

post next part sooon

luv,
vandu 😉

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Sara

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Posted: 18 years ago

#95

I'll post soon... have patience! 😃

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Sara Bukhari

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Posted: 18 years ago

#96

but i cant wait sara!!!I like ure ff too much

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Sara

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Posted: 18 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: iloveroses95
but i cant wait sara!!!I like ure ff too much

Hehehe..thanks yaar.. Im gonna post it right now! For u.. hehe😉

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Sara

@sara_naveed00

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Posted: 18 years ago

#98

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Recap: Sujal was successful in convincing his Dad as well. Sujal n Pratham were in a restaurant whr Sujal saw a girl and planned to take her out on a date. On the other side, Savita slipped on the ground while doing shopping.

Part 8.

Kashish brings Savita home.
Mihir is worried.
Mihir: yeh sab kaise hogaya?
Kashish: Baujii kuch nahi huaa… bass… thodi sii chot ayee hai.. main abhi doctor uncle to phone kertii hoon..
Mihir: haan…
Savita: (groans) Haye!
Mihir: tumhein kisne kaha tha aankh bandh ker k chalne ko?
Savita: merii aankhein khulii thiinn… pata nahi kaise girr gayee…
After a while Muskaan comes..
Muskaan: Kashish… Maa kaisee hai ab?
Kashish: Maine doctor uncle to phone kerdiya hai… bass wohh thodii der mein aatey hee hongey
Muskaan: hmm…
Doctor comes..
Doc: haan jii… kya huaa?
Muskaan: Doctor uncle.. Maa ko chot ayee haii… wohh bazaar mein keecharr ki waja se slip hogayeein
Doctor: main dekhta hoon…

After examining her..
Kashish: Doctor uncle? Ab maa kaisee hai?
Doctor: maine unhein pain killer de dii haii.. aur injection bhi laga diya hai… wohh kal tak behtar mehsoos kereingee…
Kashish: ohh..
Doc: yeh kuch dawaiyaan hain… inhein jald se jald mangwaaloo… theek hai?
Kashish: jii…
Muskaan: aaiyee.. main aapko bahar tak chor ker aaati hoon..
Doc: haan beta…( they leave )
Mihir: Chotii…
Kashish: jii Baujii…
Mihir: tum jaa ker yeh dawaaiyaan le aaoo..
Kashish: theek hai Baujii… main abhi aati hoon..
Mihir: beta.. bahar baarish horahee haii… ek kaam keroo apne saath chaata bhi le jaoo… aur sambhal ker jaana…
Kashish: jii Baujii… (she leaves)

Cut to the Garewals.
It was night…
Pratham came to meet Sujal..
Veena: array Pratham… tum?
Pratham: Namaste Aunty! Kaisee hain aap?
Veena: main theek hoon.. tum sunao?
Pratham: bass… theek…
Veena: achaaa..
Pratham: waise Aunty… Sujal kahan hai? Subah se dikhayee nahi de raha.. aur uska cell bhi off hai..
Veena: haan beta… wohh bass.. shaam ko hee lota thaa.. pata nahi… bohat udaas sa lagraha hai… jab se aaya hai apne kamre mein hee bethaa haii…
Pratham: what?
Veena: haan… zara dekh ker toh aana…
Pratham: main dekhta hoon…( thinks to himself ) Aaj toh Sujal ki date thii naa… tohh phir yeh ghar per kya ker raha haii?
Pratham moves to Sujal's room…

Wahan jaa ker pata chalta hai k Sujal was lying on his bed… without even changing his clothes.. he was in a deeeeeeep thought! Lol
Pratham: heyy Sujal!
Sujal didn't respond.
Pratham: abbey.. tujhse baat ker raha hoon…. Kahaann gum hai??
Sujal: (closes his eyes)
Pratham: (sits on the bed..) Kya huaa?? Aaj toh tuney date per jaana thaa naa? Toh kya bana uskaa?
Sujal: (sits up) Uska naam bhi mat lenaa.. ( in a most serious tone )
Pratham: what?!!? Lekin kyuunn?
Sujal: (didn't speaks..)
Pratham: kyaa huaa?? Bata bhii … tuu mujhse kuch nahi chupa sakta!
Sujal: (looks at him) pehle vaada ker k tuu hanse ga nahi… promise me!
Pratham: (smiles) okay… promise! Ab bata k kya huaa…?
Sujal: (narrates him the story.. and the scene is shown as well..)

Sujal drove his car to that gurl's house..
Sujal: (narrating) Main usse pick kerne uske bataye huye address per gaya…kuch der car mein uska wait kiyaa… jab wohh nahi ayee.. toh do chaar horron maarey!

The girl came outside in a red hot saree...and our Sujal was in a black suit.. 😉
Sujal: (narrating) usse dekhtey hee sab kuch bhool gaya main.. aisa lagraha tha jaise main kisi parii se milne jaraha hoon…

The girl sat in his car.
Sujal: (narrating) phir.. wohh merii gaarree mei beth gayee… hum donon k beech mein baat huyee..

Girl: im so sorry… Meri waja se aapko itna wait kerna para…
Sujal: that's allright… mujhe koi farak nahi partha…
Girl: (smiles.. and blushes)
Sujal: soo chalein??
Girl: (nods)

Sujal: (narrating) Phir mein usse seedhaa Palanpur waale farm house mein le gaya… wahan ek dum khamoshi sii thii… koi bhi nahi thaa.. siwaye mere.. aurr… Riya k…
Pratham: Riyaa?
Sujal: haan.. uskaa naam Riya tha..
Pratham: okay.. phir kya huaa??

( Guys.. Riya is Shweta Salve.. hehehe)

Sujal stopped his car… and then got out of the car. He opened the door for her. She came out , watched him affectionately and then stepped ahead.
They both went inside the farm house. It was too quite and everything seemed to be very pleasant.

Sujal: (narrating) Uske baad.. maine farm house ki saarii candles jalayee..aur thodi der baad humne dinner kiya…

Sujal: soo.. kaisa laga khana?
Riya: it was really great.. I luved it.
Sujal: soo kyun na ab dance kiya jaye?
Riya: ahaan.. not bad…
Sujal: great… main abhi aaya ….
The music started.. and they both began to dance. They both were lost into each other for a moment..
It was dark and only the candles illuminated the light.

Riya: umm.. excuse me.. main abhi aayee…
Sujal : sure!

Sujal: (narrating) Uske baad.. wohh kuch der k liye andar chalii gayee.. main uska wait kerne laga…. Aur phir achanak… wohh mere saamne aagayee… Main usse dekhta hee reh gaya… uske baal khulley the… wohh mujhe pyaar bharee nazron mein dekh rahi thii… wohh chal ker mere paas arahee thii…. Usne ahista se merii aankhein band kii.. aur meri aankhon per patii baandh dii… Phir mujhe ehsaas hua k wohh mujhe kahiin andar le kar jarahee thii… shayad bedroom mein… mujhe dil hee dil mein bohatt khushi horahee thii…. Phir usne mujhe bed per bithaa diyaa.. aur mere saath ajeeb o gareeb harketein ker rahee thii… usne mere donon haath pakre.. aur peeche se unhein bhi baandh diyaa…. Aur phirrrr…

Pratham: phirr??
Sujal: phirrr…phir wohh hua.. jiski mujhe umeed bhi na thii.. joh kabhi main apne sapne mein bhi soch nahi sakta tha. . .
A scene is shown where Sujal is laying on the ground. .. with his both hands tied together.. and there was a tape around his mouth.. he cudnt utter a word. He saw…the same girl along with a guy picking up the things and putting them in a bag.. Ofcourse they were stealing everything.. Sujal was helpless.. couldn't do anything…

The girl took his wallet.. and the car keys.. and then kissed on his cheek and ran away along with her bf..lol
Pratham: HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH! (burst out into a laugh.. and then kept laughin for a moment)
Sujal: haan haan.. hansloo hansloo.. jitna hanssna hai hansloo…
Pratham: (he had knots in his stomach now) Oh my God! Sujal…. I don't believe it yaar… wohh hott larkii chorr niklee… aurr tera sab kuch churaa ker bhaaaag gayeee!! Hahahahaha….. kasam se..! that's relly funyy…
Sujal: maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha k mere saath aisa hogaa…
Pratham: even maine bhi nahi socha thaaa!! Hahahahahaha
Sujal: (hits him with a cusion) Shut up.. and get lost!!
Pratham: hahahhaha….acha hua joh main uske saath nahi gayaa..hahahaa..
Sujal: ab bas bhi kerde… kitna hanse gaa…
Pratham: kya keroon yaar.. baat hee aisee haii.. (he kept laughin while sujal was in a state of shock)

Cut to Sundernagar..
Kashish was taking care of Savita..
She was giving her food n medicines n all…
Savita: itna sab kuch kerne ki kya zaroorat haii?
Kashish: zaroorat hai Maa… parsoo wohh log Jijii ko dekhne arahe hain… tab tak aapko fitt faat honaa hai…(smiles)
Savita: haan… mujhe maaloom hai.. (in a rude tone)
Muskaan: chaloo maa… ab aap rest keroo…
Savita: hmm…
Kashish: hum bahar chaltey hain… ( they both leave )
Mihir comes
Mihir: ab kaisee tabiyat hai tumharii?
Savita: pehle se behtar hoon…
Mihir: kyun na hoo.. Kashish joh tumhara itna khayaal rakh rahee haii…
Savita remains quite.
Mihir: dekhoo Savita… Kashish bhi tumharii betii hai.. apni maa se badh ker maantii hai wohh tumhein… agar tumhein koi takleef hoti hai toh dard Kashish ko bhi hota hai….
Savita: mujhe neend arahee haii… araam kerne dijiye…
Mihir was stunned..
Savita turned off the light and went to sleep.

End of Part 8.