jo nahi karna tha.(a-k lov story)#2 - Page 23

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey. great part. n congrats. cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
waayyy too much kissing.. lolz

continue soooooonn

wonder who the anonymous person is...
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part 😊 plz don't seperate them 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was really cute and congrats on 5month but it gives a foreboding that something bads gonna happened anyways the parts are really pretty so amusing it always makes me smile and lighten my mood
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 134


it was an early morning,angad n kripa both r awake n romancing with eachother under single blanket when some one knock at the door.angad is kissing her on neck n below her neck n kripa's eyes were closed n she enjoying his love...when some one kncok again,this time kripa wishpers:"some one is knocking".angad asked laudly:"whoz thr".it was prateek,he said:"its me dady"...angad n kripa look at eachother in panic n start wearing clothes,with in 5 min kripa open the door,prateek walks inside n sleep on the bed,kripa lovingly shuffle his hairs n ask:"wat happen beta!".prakeet said:"i was got awake n feeling lonely...bhim n bali is also sleeping"...by hearing this kripa take prateek in her lap n kiss him.after a while prateek felt asleep again in kripa's lap.she slowly put him beside angad .angad who was silently watching all this.angad slowly wishpers:"hey kripa!he is sleeping now"kripa look at him with sharp eyes as she knw wat angad has to say now n she said:"so".angad said:"lets continue our love".kripa wishpers:"shut up angad"(sad madly).angad said:"this is not done kripa!".kripa said:"angad!hav u lost ur mind....prateek is sleeping here ".then she went to the wash room change her night dress n leave the room before angad get a chance of grab her.


it seems like a perfect life,kripa was smilling while looking at sur,prateek,bhim n bali playing together,when her cell phone rings,it was an anonymous call,kripa said:"hello",anonymous guy said:"zindagi itni bhi khubsurat nahi hai kripa khanna jitni tum mehsoos karti ho".kripa said:"who r u"(she is mad n curious).anonymous guy said:"mere baarey mai jaan ney se behtar hoga k tum apney husband k barey mai jaano".kripa said:"tum kya chahtey ho"...anonymous guy said:"yahi k tum angad ka wo ateet(past)jano jo tum nahi jaanti"....kripa said:"kon sa ateet??"anonymous guy said:"wo ateet jo ab kisi k liye bhi importance nahi rakhta ...tumharey ilawa" he said:"mana k ab angad tumhey kabhi nahi chorey ga lekin kya tum ye jaan na nahi chaho gi k us ney tumhey kyu chora tha 4 saal pehley".. nthen he disconnect the phone.


kripa was so frustrated by hearing anonymous phone calls...angad came at home with good mood n asking kripa for hang out if she want to come...but kripa was not in the mood....she refuse to come ...then angad ask to prateek n he is ready for hang out....


angad n prateek was roaming around the ciy in car ,angad ask prateek:"where wud u like to go".prateek frightningly wishper in angad ears:"disco".angad was shocked he said;"wat".prateek said:"plz dady!".angad said:"kidz r not allow in disco's".prateek said:"plz dady " angad:"but ur mumma will kill us ...if she will get to knw ".prateek get anoyed n he stop talking with angad....angad finally give up n then they went to disco.father n son r enjoying dancing together(how cute).n having good time together.after then they come bak home.

kripa was waiting for them when they enter in house...kripa casually ask them that where they hav been....angad n prateek give a glance to eachother ,angad said:"hmmm nowhere atcually just roaming around the city".kripa was frustrated but smile .just then phone rings(land line),kripa pick up the phone,on the other side a guy said;'is this angad khanna residence".kripa said:"yes!".then a guy said:"mam!angad khanna forgot his cell phone on our disco...."kripa stare angad with lots of anger n said on the phone:"is thr any kid with him??".a guy said:"yes mam!angad khanna was with his son".kripa put the phone down.


kripa walks toward angad n said:"u forgot ur cell pohne in the disco where were u n prateek had been".kripa was already frustrated n mad becoz of anonymous calls....in frustration she slap prateek for hiding things frm kripa,angad was shocked ,he squeeze prateek with him n yells at kripa:"how dare u kripa!how cud u slap prateek".kripa said:"n how cud he knw to hide every thing frm me..like u r hiding eveything to me".
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow so cute please don ko eak saath fight karao usss anjaan aadmi se 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part
kripa don't be so mad that you have to hit parteek
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMGGG!!! poor prateek, cnt wait to read wat happens nxt!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
grrrrrreat part!!! omg, she slapped prateek!! awwwwww poor kid!!! its all because of the stupid anonymous guy, wonder who it is??!!! and the disco part was cute n kinda funny 😆 ...i hope tehre isnt any misunderstandin between a-k when angad tells her the truth... continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww poor pratheek great part though continue soon 😊

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