jo nahi karna tha.(a-k lov story)#2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi frnd...
im continuing my fan fic in new topic as "jo nahi karna tha # 2",as previous topic completes 150 pages n according to the rulez i have to start new topic for continuing


here is the link for all previous parts
"jo nahi karna tha.(a-k lov story):

www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=406568

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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 114

kripa sit in the car n angad take his seat n start driving...soon they reach kripa's home,kripa get off frm the car n took prateek in her arms n start walking toward the house...after taking few steps ,she turn around n said:"u dnt hav any right on me angad!u loose ur right on me when u threw out me frm ur house...."angad try to say something but kripa didnt give him a chance,she said:"that time i dnt wana leave u but u left me n now u want me to come bak but i dnt....so plz after completing this project ..just go away frm me n my life....


angad who just gathering some courage to tell her abt his tumour...he once again loose it...he felt hurt by kripa's behaviour though he has knew that how much he hurts her.....angad said to himself:"it was better for me to died 4 years ago rather then face her hate"...kripa who was expecting him to say smething...suddenly says:"wat did u just say??"(she get him),she found something suspicious..angad look at her n said:"i just said that wat u had listened"..kripa sadly smile n said:"u never waste a single chance to hurt me angad!u knw that wat i feel for u then y u r cursing urself"...then she run inside the house.


angad was get so frustrated....he dnt knw wat to do or wat not???if he tell her abt his tumour,she feel hurt..if he will not tell her she will never come bak in his life again....angad feel helpless n look at the sky with teary eyes n said:"plz god!do somthing".

it was the day of concert,n every one is ready to perform.prateek is playing n running around the stage.angad caught him n said:"hey junior!stop palying now we r going to perform after 15 mins....."prateek smile n said:"dad!im so exited",angad said:"me too son!"

n after a big round of aplouse angad apears on the stage n start performing on solo song then once again stage becomes dark n two spot light spots prateek n angad on the stage.n then angad n prateek starts performing on the song:

dil na liya,dil na diya
to bolo na bolo kya kiya

dil na liya,dil na diya
to bolo na bolo kya kiya

aakey dunya mia bhi agar
pyar na kiya to kya kiya

the performance was great,kripa also felt very happy,no daubt that she is happy frm inside to see father n son together..laksh comes near kripa n said:"life is unpridectable.....we never knw that when n how life change its path....trust me kripa!he is not unfaithful but it was only time who had been unfaithful"
kripa look at him n try to figure out laksh's word.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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isnt laksh the person that angad finds annoying? he is gonna tell her!!!!!!!!!!!!yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! finally she has to know but it is not going to be smooth ride!
good part, please continue more, often i await the updates with excitement!
love kamli
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome mind blowing pls tell her already yaar i feel so sad i think angad has suffered enough 😆 pls amazing as always 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww wow 👏 btw why are most stories about love 😳 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome parts.... kool i think laksh will tell her the truth n den angad wont h8 laksh sooo much loll 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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laksh tell her the truth ulti seedhe bathe nahi kero
:@
lol
i louv u babys(ak)
hehe
cont soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ricky2006

awwwwwwwwww wow 👏 btw why are most stories about love 😳 😆

coz love rocks😳

i dont think laksh should tell kripa i think angad should tell her himself!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 great part 👏
plzzzzzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part!! aww i hope laksh tells her though i really want angad to do it!! lol!! continue soon 👏

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